2016改革后新專業(yè)四級英語寫作開頭技巧

2016改革后新專業(yè)四級英語寫作開頭技巧2021/5/91內(nèi)容摘要：寫作新題型考的是summary+comment。這種題型看似新穎，其實(shí)更加簡單,明顯不同的是開頭需要summarize。Comment部分不一定要寫考生自己的觀點(diǎn)，完全可以摘取閱讀材料中現(xiàn)成的觀點(diǎn)稍作展開。這樣考生至少從頭到尾不愁“無話可說”。2021/5/92“Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewontheissue.”新樣題中的“閱讀材料”由原來的一段話變成了對某個issue的正反雙方鮮明對立的幾段文字，并且題目明確要求考生先summarizebriefly。summary應(yīng)該用原文四分之一的文字表達(dá)原文的主要觀點(diǎn)。新專四的樣題閱讀材料原文一般200詞左右，這樣概述以后大概保留80字左右。對于一篇總共200字左右的考試作文，這樣的開頭會讓整體結(jié)構(gòu)不太勻稱，因此也可以稍微再做壓縮到50-60。2021/5/93Inrecentyears,traditionalprintednewspaperhasfacedaseriouschallenge.TheChristianScienceMonitor

becamethefirstnationalnewspapertoshutdownitsprintedition,andrecently,theworldfamousmagazineNewsweekannouncedthatitwouldsoonceasepublishingonpaperandshifttoanonline-onlyformat.Willtheprintednewspaperonedaybereplacedbyonlinenewspaper?Somebelievesowhilemanystillholdanoptimisticviewonthefutureoftraditionalnewspaper.Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandwriteyourresponseinabout200words,inwhichyoushouldfirstsummarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewsontheissue.EXERCISE12021/5/94Traditionalcharacters,whichdatebacktomorethan2000yearsago,haveamore

beautifulappearanceandamorereasonablestructure.Traditionalcharactersmakemoresenseconveytraditionalvaluesandcanthereforerepresenttraditionalculture.Fortwomillennia,Chinesehistoricalrecordsandclassicworkswerewrittenintraditionalcharacters.Tobeabletoreadthemand

inherittraditionalculture,weneedtobringtraditionalcharactersback.Politically,itisalsonecessarytorestoretraditionalChinesecharacters.Currently,traditionalcharactersarestillinuseinHongKong,TaiwanandmanyChinesecommunitiesaroundtheworld.Restoringthemcancontributetocross-straitsexchangesand

nationalreunification

anduniteChinesepeoplearoundtheworld.YES2021/5/95Intoday'sworld

efficiency

mattersmost.Traditionalcharacters,whichusuallyhavemorestrokesthansimplifiedones,aremoredifficulttolearn.Bycontrast,simplifiedcharactersaremucheasiertolearnanduse.

Overthepast50years,lotsofclassictextshavebeenturnedintosimplifiedcharacterversions,whichmeanssimplifiedcharacterscanalsopromoteand

preservetraditionalculture.ConstantsimplificationhasbeenatrendintheevolutionofChinesecharacters.Fromtheoraclebonesscriptof3000yearsagototraditionalcharacters,theChinesewritingsystemhasalwaysbeen

slimmingdownforbettercommunication.NO2021/5/96Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.2021/5/97找出對立雙方的主要論點(diǎn)

感覺有難度，簡單的辦法是用句子代替詞組（注意盡量不要照抄原文）；實(shí)在感覺個別觀點(diǎn)有難度還可以忽略Whenitcomesto

simplifiedChinesecharacters

(或Whenitcomesto

whetherweshouldrevivetraditionalChinesecharacters),people’sviewsvaryfromonetoanother.Someclaimthat

weshouldadoptthepolicyfor

aesthetical,culturalandpoliticalbenefits.Others,however,contendthatsimplifiedversionsarebetterchoicebecausetheyare

easiertolearn,slimmerforbettercommunicationandalsohelpfultopreservetraditionalculture.Frommyperspective,itiswisetochoosetraditional/simplifiedversionsforthefollowingreasons.2021/5/98YESThenewmedia,suchastheInternetandmobilephoneapplications,haveexertedagreatinfluenceonpeople’slife.Onlinenewspaperisfast,instant,andconvenient,whiletheprintednewspaperoftenrespondsslowlytothelatestnews.Peoplearenowusedtoreadingonlinenewspaperontheirsmartphones,andnoonehasthepatienceofwaitingfortheprintednewspaper.Onlinenewspaperisalsoenvironment-friendly,whichisinaccordwiththetrendofsavingenergyintoday’sworld.Theprintednewspaperconsumesalargenumberofnaturalresources,andwill,inthelongterm,begraduallyreplaced.Themultipleservices,suchaspostingcommentsandfindingrelatednewsthroughthelinksprovidedbyonlinenewspaperhavegreatlyenrichedpeople’sreadingexperiencesandknowledge.Traditionalnewspapercanhardlycompeteinthissense.EXERCISE22021/5/99NOTherearestillalargenumberofpeopleintheworldwhohavenoaccesstotheInternet.Forthesepeople,printednewspaperisanimportantwaytoknowaboutthelatesteventsathomeandabroad.Althoughtheprintednewspapercannotbeasfast-respondingastheonlinenewspaper,itstillcanprovidemanyin-depthreportsandanalyticalarticlesforreaders.Manycolumnwritersareinvitedtowritespecialfeaturereportsfortheprintednewspaper.Onlinenewspaper,ontheotherhand,isonlysuitableforfastreading.Manyreadersprefertoreadtheprintednewspaperfortheydonotlikestaringatthecomputerorcellphonescreen.Printednewspaperisalsopreferredbytheelderlypeople.2021/5/910

難以抗拒的網(wǎng)絡(luò)報紙潮流審題思路:本題討論的是在網(wǎng)絡(luò)媒體的沖擊下，傳統(tǒng)報紙是否會被網(wǎng)絡(luò)報紙所取代。在具體行文方面，應(yīng)首先根據(jù)材料簡要概括正反兩方的觀點(diǎn)：正方認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)報紙優(yōu)勢明顯，反方則認(rèn)為紙質(zhì)報紙仍然有存在的理由。然后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)：紙質(zhì)報紙最終會消失，并給出論據(jù)。最后總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)。2021/5/911Withtheadventofinformationtechnology,thetraditionalmediaarepushedtothecornerandarestrugglingtosurvive.Surprisingly,notallpeoplearehailingthebirthofonlineversionnews.SomepeoplebelievethattraditionalprintednewspaperisirreplaceablesincealargenumberofpeoplestillhavenoaccesstotheInternet.However,othersbelievethatthedemiseofprintedversionisathand.Beingfasterandmoreconvenient,cellphonesandpersonalcomputershaveledustoapaper-freelifestyle.TheIrresistibleTrendofOnlineNewspaper2021/5/912AsfarasIamconcerned,itisirresistiblethattheprintednewspaperwilldemisewhiletheonlinenewspaperwillprosper.Asthemodernlifepicksupspeed,newsisreportedateveryturn(到處).Newsisnolongernewwhenprintedonpaper.Whiletheprintingprocessoftraditionalnewspapertakeshours,anditsdistributionmaytakeevenlongertime,theelectronictransmissionofnewsontheInternetmayonlytakeacoupleofseconds,evenincludingvideosandaudios.Besides,youngpeople,thelargestnumberofconsumers,prefertoreadnewsviacellphoneorlaptop.Bythesedevices,userscanshareandcommentonthenews,whichenablesthemtoenrichtheirknowledgeandmindinashorttime.2021/5/913Inconclusion,Ifirmlyholdtheideathattheonlinenewspaperwilldominatethemarketinthefutureandtheprintednewspaperwillbedisplayedinthemuseumrepresentingaperiodofhistory.

2021/5/914Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptonterm-timeholidayargumentsintheUK,andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerptandthencommentonwhetherparentsshouldtakechildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtemtimeinordertosavemoney.Youshouldsupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.EXERCISE32021/5/915TermtimeholidayswillbeBannedParentsaretobebannedbyMichaelGove,theEducationSecretary,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschooltosavemoneyonholidays.Heistoabolishtherightofheadteachersto“authoriseabsence”fromtheclassroom,whichhasbeenusedtoletfamiliestaketerm-timebreaks,andwillwarnthemtheyfacefinesfortheirchildrennotbeingatschool.“Anytimeoutofschoolhasthepotentialtodamageachild’seducation,”aseniorsourceattheDepartmentforEducationsaidthisweekend.“Thatiswhythegovernmentwillendthedistinctionbetweenauthorisedandunauthorisedabsence.”2021/5/916“Thisispartofthegovernment’swidercommitmenttobringdowntruancylevelsinourschools.Therewillalsobestricterpenaltiesforparentsandschools.”ThetoughmeasuresontruancyarepartofawiderattemptbyMr.Govetomakeeducationmoreacademicallyrigorousandtotackleacultureintheeducationalestablishmentwhichhebelieveshasaccepted“excusesforfailure.”RussellHobby,thegeneralsecretaryoftheNationalAssociationofHeadTeachers,saidthemeasurewoulddiscourageparentsfromtryingtoputpressureonheadstosanctiontermtimeholidays.“Thehighcostofholidaysoutsideoftermtimeisstillanissuebutultimatelyachild’seducationismoreimportantthanaholiday,”hesaid.

2021/5/917WhichIsMoreImportant,EducationoraCheaperHoliday?

sample1NewresearchhasshownthatalmostfouroutoftenparentsintheUKhavetakentheirchildrenoutofschooltogoonholidays.Costisthemainreasongivenbyparentsforsacrificingtheirchildren’seducation.Parentsaretobebanned,however,byUK’sEducationAuthority,fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschoolforholidayduring

term

time.2021/5/918Tobeginwith,takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess,oneofthekeyelementstoguaranteekid’sacademicperformance.Asweknow,currently,teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild,whichissupposedtobeforillnessandisnotsupposedtobegrantedforholidays.Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto“authorizeabsence”fromtheclassroom,thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosavemoney,whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess.What’smore,withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkid’splayingtruant,thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright.Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed,theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease.2021/5/919Accordingly,thegrowingtrendofterm-timeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay.Inthisway,teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkid’seducation.2021/5/920Sample2Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtaketheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm-time,viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson.Parentsclaimthatbydoingso,theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays.Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy,whichinturndamagesachild’seducation.Frommyperspective,themeritsofbanningterm-timeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits.2021/5/921Shouldlocalauthorit