【2023年】湖南省株洲市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)

【2023年】湖南省株洲市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.1.目前，中國(guó)高等教育不再是少數(shù)人享有的教育，擁有大學(xué)文憑的人數(shù)日益增加

2.大學(xué)生失業(yè)不再新鮮，因此有人認(rèn)為讀書(shū)無(wú)用

3.我對(duì)大學(xué)教育目的的認(rèn)識(shí)

ThePurposeofCollegeEducation

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展．網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個(gè)人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2．但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3．我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立—個(gè)健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

3.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledUrbanization.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.有人認(rèn)為城市化進(jìn)程是一件好事

2.有人卻認(rèn)為城市化進(jìn)程給我們帶來(lái)了很多負(fù)面影響

3.在我看來(lái)…

Urbanization

4.1.有人認(rèn)為考研是大學(xué)畢業(yè)生最好的出路

2.也有人持不同意見(jiàn)

3.我的看法

ShouldWePursueMaster'sDegree?

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnPrivateTutoring.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.為孩子聘請(qǐng)家教目前非常普遍

2．有人認(rèn)為這對(duì)孩子有幫助，有人則不以為然

3．我的看法

OnPrivateTutoring

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicItPaystoBeHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.當(dāng)前社會(huì)存在許多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象。

2.誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)。

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledRaisingDogsintheCity.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinesgivenbelow:

1.現(xiàn)在養(yǎng)狗的人越來(lái)越多；

2．不文明養(yǎng)狗給社會(huì)造成了危害；

3．我的看法。

RaisingDogsintheCity

8.1.食品安全事故屢有發(fā)生

2．人們對(duì)食品的安全越來(lái)越擔(dān)心

3．怎樣才能解決好食品的安全問(wèn)題

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledWillE-mailReplaceHandwrittenLetter?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.許多人認(rèn)為電子郵件將會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)書(shū)信

2．也有人對(duì)此持不同意見(jiàn)

3．你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)

WillE-mailReplaceHand-writtenLetter?

10.Forthispart，youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledAboutKeepingIndoorsYoushouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前很多年輕人大部分時(shí)間喜歡“宅”在家里，很少外出進(jìn)行戶(hù)外活動(dòng)

2.對(duì)這種做法有人表示支持，也有人并不贊成

3.我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

Inthe1700sSavannahbecameabusyportcityforexportingfarmproductsandacitywithlotofbanks.

A.YB.NC.NG

12.

LisaPerezwasalwaysoptimisticduringtheperiodofherunemployment.

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

AccordingtotheMontrealProtocol,theproductionofCFCsalmoststopped,andtherearealreadysignsthattheozonelayeris______.

14.

MakingsurethatBluetoothanditsconnecteddevicesdon'tinterferewithoneanothercanbedifficult.

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

Contaminatedtoothbrusheshavebeenalreadyshowntotransmitvirusesandbacteria.

A.YB.NC.NG

16.

WhathashappenedtotheBBCwiththechangesintechnologyandmediahabits?

A.TheBBCisnolongerthedominantsourceofin-depthnews.

B.TheBBCislosingitsaudience.

C.TheBBCprogrammingisrapidlydeterioratinginitsquality.

D.TheBBCisreplacedbythemulti-channelservices.

17.

Afterthemedicaltreatment,apatientmaybeadmittedtothehospital,discharged,ortransferredtoamoreappropriate______.

18.

Toholdanattitudeofchallengeandserf-confidencetowardstestsandexaminations,youmustfirst______oftests.

19.

Whyareapplicationsincreasing?Answer:______.

20.

ItispossibleforanearlywarningtoalertHawaiiabouttsunamisbecauseHawaii______.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeachpassage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽(tīng)力原文：Intheearliesttimes,theonlypowerthatmanhadformakingandmovingthingscamefromhismuscles.Thenhemadewheelsandsailswhichenabledhimtousethestrengthofanimalsandtheforceofthewindtoworkforhim.Laterheinventedsomemillsusingthewindandothermillsthatusedthepowerofrunningwatertoturntheirwheels.

Intheeighteenthcenturythesteamenginewasinvented.Thisgavemanakindofpowerthathecoulduseanywhereandatanytime.Thesteamenginewasreadytoworkassoonassteamwasraisedintheboiler.

JamesWatt'ssteamenginewasthefirstthatwasreallygood.However,itwasnotthefirststeamengine,forThomasNewcomenhadbuiltoneaboutsixtyyearsearlier.ManyofNewcomen'sengineshadbeeninuse,pumpingwateroutofmines.However,theywereclumsyandoftenbrokendown.

Wattwasrepairingoneoftheseenginesin1765whenhesawwhatwasneededtomakeitworkproperly.Heworkedfornineyearsonhisideasfortheenginebeforeitwasgoodenoughforhim.HisengineswerebuiltbyMathewBoultonandweresoldtominesandfactories.SoontheywerepumpingwaterandturningthewheelsofmillsinmanypartsofEngland.

(27)

A.BecauseitwasbuiltbyEnglishmen.

B.Becauseitcouldworkforman.

C.Becauseitcouldbeusedwheneverandwhereveritwasneeded.

D.Becauseitcouldturnwheel.

22.(35)

A.Jobopportunitiesarebetterthere.

B.Pricesarelowerindowntownstores.

C.Highwaycommutinghasbecomeunpleasant.

D.Thelivingconditionsarebetterthere.

23.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Excuseme,IboughtthiswatchlastSaturday.It'ssupposedtobewaterproof,butitdoesn'tworknow.I'dlikemymoneyback.

W:Icompletelyunderstand,sir.Butusuallywedon'tgivemoneybackonreduceditems.Maybeyoucanspeaktothemanager.

Q:Whatdowelearnfromtheconversation?

(17)

A.ThemanboughtthewatchlastSunday.

B.Themanagercangivemoneybacktotheman.

C.Thewomanwillspeaktothemanageraboutthematter.

D.Thewaterproofwatchwasboughtintheperiodofpromotion.

24.聽(tīng)力原文：HongKongisacityinclinedtowardred;inThailandthecolorisyellow;Indialeanstowardredsandoranges.ToanAsiancolorsareinfusedwithbeliefs,religiousandotherwise.TotheChinese,redisverylucky,buttoThaisyellowbringsgoodfortune.Thecombinationofblue,black,andwhiteis,totheChinese,suggestiveofafuneral.

ManyWesternbusinessmenbelievethatmostAsianshavebecomeWesternizedintheiroutlook,butWesternizationandeducationdonotusuallycompletelyreplacethecultureandbeliefsofanAsian'sforefathers.Theytendinsteadtomakeamoreintricatealliancebetweenhiscultureandreligiousbonds.TheapproachrequiredtosellanAsiananycommoditymustfollowthebasicformulaofcateringtonationalpride,acknowledgingequality,andunderstandingtheAsian'sbeliefs.

Colorisatouchything.Advertisersareadvisedtotakeintoconsiderationthereligiousandsuperstitiousbeliefsconnectedwithcolorsbeforeusingthem.ThecolorcombinationsofgreenandpurpleareacceptablethroughoutAsia,butusingoneorbothofthesecolorsisnoguaranteeofsales,asaprominentmanufacturerofwater-recreationproductslearnedinMalaysia.itshomeofficereceivedheatedrequestsfromitsMalaysiandistributorstostopshipmentsonallproductscoloredgreen.Thedistributorsreportedthatnumerouscustomersassociatedthecolorgreenwiththejungleandillness.

(30)

A.Thesymbolicsignificanceofaspecificcolor.

B.Thesubtleculturalconnotationofcolors.

C.TheinfluenceofWesternizationonAsianpeople'soutlook.

D.ExpensivelessonsWesternbusinessmenlearnedinAsia.

25.(18)

A.She'sneverbeentreatedbyDr.Joanna.

B.She'sbeensittinginthewaitingroomtoolong.

C.Dr.Joannaisn'ttheverygoodchoice.

D.She'dliketorecommendamagazinetotheman.

26.(22)

A.Salaryinformation.

B.Lastyear'staxforms.

C.Stocksorbonds.

D.Familystate.

27.(24)

A.Hewassufferingfromahearttroublebecauseofthesuddenearthquake.

B.Hewenttobedsolatethepreviousnightthathewasn'twokenupbytheearthquake.

C.Hewashavingterribleflu.

D.Hewashavingspiritualdisease.

28.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Hello,thisisCad'sbookstore.WefoundMr.Wood'swalletandidentitycardhereafterhelefthiscarthismorning.

W:Hehasbeenwonderingwherehecouldhaveleftthem.He'llpickthemupthisafternoon.Hehastogoouttothebankandthepostoffice.Thankyouforcalling.

Q:WhatcanwelearnaboutMr.Woodfromthisconversation?

(18)

A.OnlyMr.Wood'swalletwaslost.

B.He'llpickuphiswalletandidentitycardatthebank.

C.He'llnotgotothebankandthepostoffice.

D.He'llpickuphiswalletandidentitycard.

29.(26)

A.Takeabreakfromstudying.

B.Goouttogetsomethingtoeat.

C.Dosomethingtocooloff.

D.Endtheirhike.

30.(28)

A.ItwasthelargestcityofAlaska.

B.Itwasacityof40,000people.

C.Therewerealotofwildanimalsaroundit.

D.Therewasnosignofhumanpresencearoundit.-

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.OnMother'Day,it'scustomarytospeakaboutthesacrificesourmothersmadetoimproveourlives.Butmothersalsodeservecreditforthepivotal(關(guān)鍵的)rolethey'veplayedinthehistoryofhumanevolution.Prehistoricmothersdidnothinglessthanseedthedevelopmentofourspecies'remarkableintelligence.

Thestorybeginsatleasttwomillionyearsago,whenourbrainsstartedtogrowlarger,eventuallymakinghumansthemostcognitivelyadvancedspeciesonearth.Thisevolutionwasnotwithoutitsdifficulties,particularlyformothers.That'sbecause,somefivemilliontosevenmillionyearsago,soonafterthehumanlineage(世系)branchedfromtheancestorsofchimpanzees(黑猩猩),anotherpeculiarityincreasinglycametomarkourancestors:walkinguprightontwolegs,orbipedalism.

Theevolutionofbipedalismgraduallyalteredourancestors'skeletons.Bythetimebrainsizebegantrendingupward,theshapeofthehumanpelvis(骨盆)hadchangedtoaccommodatethemuscleattachmentsthatfacilitatedwalking(andrunning)inamoreverticalposture.Asaresult,partsofthebirthcanalnarrowed,makingthepassageofbig-brainedinfantsincreasinglydifficult.

Thecombinationofbigbrainsandconstrictedbirthcanalswasanobstetricalproblemforearlymothersandnodoubtledtohighratesofmaternalandinfantmortality.Theinfantswhosurvivedweretheoneswhoseheadsweresmallenoughtosqueezethroughnarrowedbirthcanals,buttothriveoutsidethewomb,humandevelopmentfavoredbigbrains.Andsonaturalselectionencouragedtheearlybirthofhumanfetuses,beforetheyhadfinishedgestating(孕育).Forthatreason,ourbabiesareborninimmature,helplessstatescomparedwiththoseoftheapes.

Haditnotbeenforthenaturalselectionofenlargedbrains,ourspecieswouldhaveevolvedinacompletelydifferentdirection.Therewouldbenotheoryofrelativity,noknowledgeof"entangled"particlesorthehumangenome;we'dhavenogreatart,musicornovels.Theexcruciating(極痛苦的)painandtraumaofchildbirtharethecostourspecieshaspaidforitsfancycognition.Andmotherscontinuetopaythedebt.

Butthat'shardlyallprehistoricmothersgaveus.Theyalsomaywellhavetouchedofftheevolutionoflanguagefromthesoundstheymadetoreassuretheirhelplessinfants.Babychimpanzees,afterall,canclingtotheirmothers'hairychestsandcontentedlyridealong,nursingondemand.Buthumaninfants,bornimmature,lackthatdexterity.Beforetheadventofdeviceslikebabyslings,theburdenofcarryinghelplessinfantspresentedadilemmaforearlymothersastheyforagedforfoodandwater.

Thepurposeoftheauthorinwringthispassageis______.

A.tocelebrateMother'sDay

B.tocommendtheroleofthefemaleinthehistoryofhumanevolution

C.tohaveageneralreviewofhumanevolution

D.inhonorofmothersallovertheworld

32.Whydopeopleusuallysaythatbiggercompaniesarebettertotacklewithatightcredit?

33.

McLarenexpectedthat,intwentyyears,______.

A.thewreckwouldbecompletelydestroyedbyunapprovedtreasurehunters

B.onlysalvageoperationwiththepurposeofresearchwouldbeapproved

C.onlyaminorpartofthewreckwouldremainasitis

D.thewreckwouldbedeterioratingatafasterspeed

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.

【S5】

35.

【S10】

36.

【S6】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S5】

38.

【S4】

39.

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參考答案

1.ThePurposeofCollegeEducation①NowadayswiththepolicyofcollegeenrollmentexpansioninChinahighereducationisnolongertheprivilegeonlyenjoyedbyminorities.Anincreasingnumberofpeopleowncollegediplomawhichnodoubtbenefitstheminmorethanoneway.②Howeverasthesayinggoeseverycoinhastwosides.③Everyyearsomanygraduatespourintotheemploymentmarketandgreatlyintensifythecompetitioninjobbunting.Manyofthemremainunemployed.④Consequently"UselessnessofStudy"prevailsamongsomepeoplewhoadoptanegativeattitudetowardhighereducationandbelieveitfutiletopursueadegree.⑤personallycannotagreewiththisopinion.⑥ThepurposeofuniversityeducationasIseeitisnotonlytoequipstudentswithknowledgeandprofessionalskillsbuttocultivatequalifiedcitizenswhoareabletodealwithvariouschallengeswithfulldevelopedcharacterandtalent.⑦Thereforeascollegestudentsweshouldvaluethelearningopportunitytoperfectourselvesforthefuturecompetition.ThePurposeofCollegeEducation①Nowadays,withthepolicyofcollegeenrollmentexpansioninChina,highereducationisnolongertheprivilegeonlyenjoyedbyminorities.Anincreasingnumberofpeopleowncollegediploma,whichnodoubtbenefitstheminmorethanoneway.②However,asthesayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides.③Everyyearsomanygraduatespourintotheemploymentmarketandgreatlyintensifythecompetitioninjobbunting.Manyofthemremainunemployed.④Consequently,"UselessnessofStudy"prevailsamongsomepeoplewhoadoptanegativeattitudetowardhighereducationandbelieveitfutiletopursueadegree.⑤personallycannotagreewiththisopinion.⑥Thepurposeofuniversityeducation,asIseeit,isnotonlytoequipstudentswithknowledgeandprofessionalskills,buttocultivatequalifiedcitizenswhoareabletodealwithvariouschallengeswithfulldevelopedcharacterandtalent.⑦Therefore,ascollegestudents,weshouldvaluethelearningopportunitytoperfectourselvesforthefuturecompetition.解析：①審題及布局。這篇作文探討對(duì)我國(guó)高等教育目的的認(rèn)識(shí)。高等教育；的普及造成大學(xué)生失業(yè)人數(shù)增加，讀書(shū)無(wú)用論泛濫。本題要求在說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象的基礎(chǔ)上申明自己如何看待大學(xué)教育的目的。在布局上，根據(jù)題干中給出的提綱展開(kāi)即可。第一段介紹擁有大學(xué)文憑的人日益增多；第二段承接上文，說(shuō)明很多大學(xué)畢業(yè)生失業(yè)，有人持讀書(shū)無(wú)用論；第三段說(shuō)明本人對(duì)大學(xué)教育目的的認(rèn)識(shí)。②語(yǔ)言。本文涉及現(xiàn)象的描述及個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)的說(shuō)明，語(yǔ)言要客觀(guān)、準(zhǔn)確，富有表現(xiàn)力。注意要恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞銜接上下文，使行文連貫自然。可使用長(zhǎng)句或生動(dòng)靈巧的句子結(jié)構(gòu)為文章增色。

2.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]WiththedevelopmentofoursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryonetoobtaininformation.[2]HowevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsintTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentofoursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryonetoobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsint解析：作文標(biāo)題是“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”，這已經(jīng)表明，寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)是說(shuō)明“為什么要?jiǎng)?chuàng)建健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境”。但所給出的outline沒(méi)有體現(xiàn)這一點(diǎn)。僅僅根據(jù)outline動(dòng)筆，恐怕寫(xiě)不出好作文來(lái)。

提綱的第1點(diǎn)和第2點(diǎn)都址說(shuō)背景，是為我們要論述的論點(diǎn)服務(wù)的；第3點(diǎn)指向“措施”，也與論點(diǎn)有關(guān)。但是，以這三點(diǎn)中的任何一條為中心，都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢?不僅要把提綱中的內(nèi)容納入，而且還要特別淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”。要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來(lái)，才能有話(huà)可說(shuō)，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要忭，培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫(xiě)好此類(lèi)作文的關(guān)鍵。

Analysis

[1]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第1條

[2]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英浯表達(dá)“炒作”(drumbeating)，不說(shuō)就是。反正僅僅是不良現(xiàn)象中的—個(gè)例子而已。

[3]主題句，對(duì)應(yīng)作文標(biāo)題。

[4][5][6]三條理由。健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以：預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪：保護(hù)兒童不受不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。(這部分可以八仙過(guò)海，各顯神通)

[7]總結(jié)全文．照應(yīng)outline的第3條。

3.Urbanization"Urbanization"hasbecomeincreasinglyaglobalphenomenon.Inotherwordsurbancentersaregrowinginsizeandpopulationandmoreandmoretownsarebecomingmetropolises.AndthereisnoagUrbanization"Urbanization"hasbecome,increasingly,aglobalphenomenon.Inotherwords,urbancentersaregrowinginsizeandpopulation,andmoreandmoretownsarebecomingmetropolises.Andthereisnoag

4.ShouldWePursueMaster'sDegree?RecentlythereismuchdiscussionaboutwhetheritisthebestchoiceforcollegestudentstopursueMaster'sdegree.Thosewhoadvocatethenecessityoffurtherstudymaintainthatinsuchacompetitivesocietyahigherdegreewillbringmanybenefitsforgraduatesmoresatisfyingsalariesforinstance.Butthosewhoopposethatopinionarguethatitisunnecessarytocompetewithsomanystudentsintheentranceexamination.Andwhatcollegegraduatesneedurgentlyistohuntforajobandgainworkingexperience.Tobefinanciallyindependentisofgreatimportanceforstudentsespeciallythosecomingfromruralareas.AsIseeitthefirststatementseemsmorereasonable.Firstlyfurtherstudywillequipstudentswithenrichedknowledgeimprovedprofessionalskillsandbroadenedhorizonwhichqualifythemfordemandingjobs.Secondlypostgraduatecanaccumulateworkingexperiencebyputtingwhattheyhavelearntintopracticeintheirsparetime.Finallyastothefeepostgraduatesaregrantedallowancetoloanmoneyfromthebankstofinancethemselves.Insummaryit'swiserforcollegestudentstopursueMaster'sdegree.ShouldWePursueMaster'sDegree?Recently,thereismuchdiscussionaboutwhetheritisthebestchoiceforcollegestudentstopursueMaster'sdegree.Thosewhoadvocatethenecessityoffurtherstudymaintainthat,insuchacompetitivesocietyahigherdegreewillbringmanybenefitsforgraduates,moresatisfyingsalaries,forinstance.Butthosewhoopposethatopinionarguethatitisunnecessarytocompetewithsomanystudentsintheentranceexamination.Andwhatcollegegraduatesneedurgentlyistohuntforajobandgainworkingexperience.Tobefinanciallyindependentisofgreatimportanceforstudents,especiallythosecomingfromruralareas.AsIseeit,thefirststatementseemsmorereasonable.Firstly,furtherstudywillequipstudentswithenrichedknowledge,improvedprofessionalskills,andbroadenedhorizon,whichqualifythemfordemandingjobs.Secondly,postgraduatecanaccumulateworkingexperiencebyputtingwhattheyhavelearntintopracticeintheirsparetime.Finally,astothefee,postgraduatesaregrantedallowancetoloanmoneyfromthebankstofinancethemselves.Insummary,it'swiserforcollegestudentstopursueMaster'sdegree.解析：①審題及布局。這篇作文主要探討大學(xué)畢業(yè)生是否應(yīng)該考研的問(wèn)題。題目要求闡明兩種對(duì)立的觀(guān)點(diǎn)后提出自己的看法及理由。在布局上，根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱展開(kāi)即可．第一段介紹“考研是畢業(yè)生最好的出路”這一觀(guān)點(diǎn)；第二段指出也有人持不同意見(jiàn)，列舉其理由；第三段在權(quán)衡上述觀(guān)點(diǎn)后明確表達(dá)自己選擇何種態(tài)度，并分條目列舉理由，注意層次清晰，論證有力。最后重申觀(guān)點(diǎn)，結(jié)束全文。②語(yǔ)言。本文涉及對(duì)立觀(guān)點(diǎn)的陳述與取舍，語(yǔ)言需概括、簡(jiǎn)潔地表明雙方立場(chǎng)，用詞要鮮明準(zhǔn)確，層次分明。作為議論文，本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可，談及考研對(duì)大學(xué)生未來(lái)發(fā)展的影響時(shí)可使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

5.[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudywhileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]AsfarasIamcon[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudy,whileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]AsfarasIamcon解析：這篇作文要求討論“請(qǐng)家教”的問(wèn)題。Outline足“現(xiàn)象—正反兩種觀(guān)點(diǎn)-自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)”模式。這種題目有兩種寫(xiě)作思路。

第一種思路，把重點(diǎn)放在“不同的看法”上，然后略寫(xiě)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)(支持其中一個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)，或者當(dāng)“和事佬”，說(shuō)具體問(wèn)題具體分析)。這時(shí)，要重點(diǎn)考慮：支持請(qǐng)家教的觀(guān)點(diǎn)有什么?(激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣、培養(yǎng)學(xué)生交際能力、提高成績(jī)、充分利用時(shí)間，等等。)反對(duì)請(qǐng)家教，有什么理由?(沒(méi)有必要，課堂上學(xué)好的話(huà)，不必請(qǐng)家教；作用不大，如果學(xué)生自己沒(méi)有主動(dòng)性，請(qǐng)廠(chǎng)家教也沒(méi)有用；占用過(guò)多學(xué)生自主學(xué)習(xí)、游玩的時(shí)間，不利于學(xué)生的健康發(fā)展；等等。)

第二種思路是把寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)放在“我”的看法上。就如范文那樣，先簡(jiǎn)要介紹存在的不同看法，然后著重論述自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。當(dāng)然，自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)可以是支持，也可以是反對(duì)，但總的說(shuō)來(lái)，要言之成理，要有邏輯性，沿言要銜接、連貫、自然。

Analysis

[1]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第1條，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象

[2]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第2條，說(shuō)明存在兩種不同的看法。

[3]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第3條，提出自己的看法。文章剩余部分就用來(lái)論證自己的看法。

[4][6]是[3]的支持句。用first，second關(guān)聯(lián)。

[5][7]分別對(duì)兩個(gè)分論點(diǎn)予以展開(kāi)；

[8]用inoneword總結(jié)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。

6.ItPaystoBeHonestAsweallknowhonestyasavirtueofmankindhasbeenchallengedinthemodernsocietyasweencountermereandmoredishonestthingsandpeople.Manypeopleareasking"DoIneedtobehonest?Yesweshouldbehonest.Firsthonestyisessentiallyimportantinbuildinguptrustamongpeople.Ifwelosethismoralstandardtheworldwouldbeoutoforderbecausethereisnotrustamongpeople.Thereforeitiseveryperson'sresponsibilitytokeepthisvirtuesothatthesocietywillnotfallapart.Secondlytobehonestbringsbenefitstopeoplearoundyou.Yourhonestywillhelpyourco-workersandcompanyworksuccessfully.Yourspouseandyourchildrenwillbehappyandfeelsafe.Yourfriendswillalwayscometoyouwhentheyneedhelp.Finallyyouyourselfwillbenefitfrombeinghonest.Peoplewillrespecttrustandloveyou.Youwillbeblessedbyhavingastablemarriageaprosperouscareermanyfriendsandmoreimportantlyapeacefulheart.Itpaystobehonestbutitisdefinitelyworthwhilebecauseyouwillgetmorethanwhatyoupay.Yourllfewillbemeaningfulasyouwillbeappreciatedandrememberedasanhonestperson.ItPaystoBeHonestAsweallknow,honesty,asavirtueofmankind,hasbeenchallengedinthemodernsocietyasweencountermereandmoredishonestthingsandpeople.Manypeopleareasking,"DoIneedtobehonest?Yes,weshouldbehonest.First,honestyisessentiallyimportantinbuildinguptrustamongpeople.Ifwelosethismoralstandard,theworldwouldbeoutoforderbecausethereisnotrustamongpeople.Therefore,itiseveryperson'sresponsibilitytokeepthisvirtuesothatthesocietywillnotfallapart.Secondly,tobehonestbringsbenefitstopeoplearoundyou.Yourhonestywillhelpyourco-workersandcompanyworksuccessfully.Yourspouseandyourchildrenwillbehappyandfeelsafe.Yourfriendswillalwayscometoyouwhentheyneedhelp.Finally,youyourselfwillbenefitfrombeinghonest.Peoplewillrespect,trustandloveyou.Youwillbeblessedbyhavingastablemarriage,aprosperouscareer,manyfriendsandmoreimportantly,apeacefulheart.Itpaystobehonest,butitisdefinitelyworthwhilebecauseyouwillgetmorethanwhatyoupay.Yourllfewillbemeaningfulasyouwillbeappreciatedandrememberedasanhonestperson.

7.RaisingDogsintheCityRecentlymoreandmorepeoplebegintoraisedogsinthecity.Youmayfinddogshereandthereinpublicplacesorevenonbuses.Ithasmoreorlessbecomeoneofthelatestfashions.Yetthenegativeeffectsofraisingdogsinthecityareobvious.Tobeginwithitmaypollutetheenvironment.We'canoftenseedogsdroppingtheirwastearoundthecitywhentheyarewalkedoutdoors.Fewoftheirownerswouldpickitupafterthedogs.Inthesecondplacewithtoomanydogsinpublicplacescasesofdogsattackingpeoplearenotrarenow.Finallythebarkingofdogsmayalsodisturbthequietneighborhood.Inmyviewraisingdogsinthecitymustbeputunderstrictcontrol.Thosewhoraisedogsinthecitymustobserverespectiveregulationsandruleswhichmaykeepthedogsfrompollutingtheenvironmentandthreateningthesafetyofthepeople.Andifsomeonewantstokeepadoginthecityheisrequiredtogetapprovalfromtheneighbors.Onlyinthiswaycanweco-existhappilyandsafelywiththedogsinthecity.RaisingDogsintheCityRecentlymoreandmorepeoplebegintoraisedogsinthecity.Youmayfinddogshereandthereinpublicplacesorevenonbuses.Ithasmoreorlessbecomeoneofthelatestfashions.Yetthenegativeeffectsofraisingdogsinthecityareobvious.Tobeginwith,itmaypollutetheenvironment.We'canoftenseedogsdroppingtheirwastearoundthecitywhentheyarewalkedoutdoors.Fewoftheirownerswouldpickitupafterthedogs.Inthesecondplace,withtoomanydogsinpublicplaces,casesofdogsattackingpeoplearenotrarenow.Finally,thebarkingofdogsmayalsodisturbthequietneighborhood.Inmyview,raisingdogsinthecitymustbeputunderstrictcontrol.Thosewhoraisedogsinthecitymustobserverespectiveregulationsandrules,whichmaykeepthedogsfrompollutingtheenvironmentandthreateningthesafetyofthepeople.Andifsomeonewantstokeepadoginthecity,heisrequiredtogetapprovalfromtheneighbors.Onlyinthiswaycanweco-existhappilyandsafelywiththedogsinthecity.解析：[審題]這次考試的寫(xiě)作題屬于常見(jiàn)的三段式作文。要求考生就某一事物或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行深入的剖析，并闡述自己的看法和立場(chǎng)。

第—段要介紹養(yǎng)狗已成為一種時(shí)髦。

第二段可以從兩個(gè)或三個(gè)層面來(lái)說(shuō)明其危害。例如破壞環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，威脅他人安全等。

第三段說(shuō)出自己的看法。例如要嚴(yán)格控制，養(yǎng)狗要遵循法規(guī)等。[提綱]

1.Raisingdogs,oneofthelatestfashions.

2.Thenegativeeffectsofraisingdogs.

pollutetheenvironment

bitepeople

disturbtheneighborhood

3.Myview:

putunderstrictcontrol

approvaloftheneighbors

8.FoodSafetyWiththeincreaseofthenumberofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorqualityproblemsremainseriousinthemarket．The2008ChinesemilkscandalbeginningwithrevelationsofcontaminationofSanlumilkproductswhichisnotonlyahotpotatonationwidebuthasaffectedcountriesonallcontinents.Thecasehasbroughtangerandresentmentatmilkproducersandhasshownuncertaintyandconfusionamongthepopulation.It'salsoatimelywarningtothepublicaboutfoodsafety.Thereforetheneedtoaddresstheproblemsisacute;otherwisewewillsoonfacebiggerandbiggercrisis.Tosolvetheproblemsinfoodsafetymeasuresshouldbetakencurrently.Firstthesupervisionoffoodproductionshouldbesteppeduptoreducetheincidenceandeconomicconsequencesoffoodbornediseases.What'smoreitisimportanttodrasticallyincreasepenaltiesonthosewhoneglectfoodsafetystatutesLastbutnotleastconsumersshouldbewelleducatedabouttheriskspresentedinfoodandthehandlingbehaviorsthatcanhelpminimizethoserisks.FoodSafetyWiththeincreaseofthenumberofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorquality,problemsremainseriousinthemarket．The2008Chinesemilkscandal,beginningwithrevelationsofcontaminationofSanlumilkproducts,whichisnotonlyahotpotatonationwide,buthasaffectedcountriesonallcontinents.Thecasehasbroughtangerandresentmentatmilkproducers,andhasshownuncertaintyandconfusionamongthepopulation.It'salsoatimelywarningtothepublicaboutfoodsafety.Therefore,theneedtoaddresstheproblemsisacute;otherwise,wewillsoonfacebiggerandbiggercrisis.Tosolvetheproblemsinfoodsafety,measuresshouldbetakencurrently.First，thesupervisionoffoodproductionshouldbesteppeduptoreducetheincidenceandeconomicconsequencesoffoodbornediseases.What'smore,itisimportanttodrasticallyincreasepenaltiesonthosewhoneglectfoodsafetystatutes,Lastbutnotleast,consumersshouldbewelleducatedabouttheriskspresentedinfoodandthehandlingbehaviorsthatcanhelpminimizethoserisks.解析：①審題及布局。從文章的要求上看，應(yīng)該首先對(duì)題目討論的現(xiàn)象作總述，即現(xiàn)在食