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Howtodescribeaplace地點描寫zxxk2021/5/91I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutourcity.You’vemadethewisechoicetotravelhere.Hangzhou,thecapitalofZhejiangProvince,liesinthesoutheastofChinacoveringanareaof16596

squarekilometers.Withapopulationofabout8.8million,thecityhasahistoryofmorethan2,200years,andenjoysareputationof

aparadiseonearth.Itisaverybeautifulcitywithalotofplacesofinterest,amongwhichtheWestLakeisthemostfamousone.Italsohasmanymodernfactoriesandhighbuildings.Besides,theniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimehere. Thankyou.賞析文章并找出好的句型:

2021/5/92locationpopulationareahistoryculturelivingconditionseducationeconomyaplacePossiblesubjects：2021/5/931.介紹地理位置（Location）belocatedin(on/to)

…besituatedin(on/to)

…

liein(on/to)

…坐落于……腳下/頂部…standsatthefootof/onthetopof…

常用詞組2021/5/94麗水中學位于麗水市北部，白云山腳下。LishuiHighSchoolislocatedintheNorthofLishuicityandstandsatthefootofBaiyunMountain.LihueHighSchoolissituatedintheNorthofLishuicityandstandsatthefootofBaiyunMountain.LihueHighSchoolliesintheNorthofLishuicityandstandsatthefootofBaiyunMountain.LocatedintheNorthofLishuicity,LishuiHighSchoolstands…2021/5/95學校的南邊有一條公路。Tothesouthoftheschoollies/runsahighway.山頂有一座廟。Onthetopofthemountainliesatemple.

2021/5/96毗鄰…border/bordering…;neighbor/neighboring……周圍是…besurroundedby…1.我的家鄉(xiāng)位于中國浙江，毗鄰福建。Myhometown,neighboringFujian,islocatedinZhejiangProvinceofChina.2.麗水四面環(huán)水，是個居住的好地方。Surroundedbythewater,Lishuiisaniceplacetolivein.

2021/5/972.介紹人口（Population）…h(huán)as/witha(large/small)populationof…Thepopulationof…is…,…isacitywitha(large/small)populationof百分之70的人口是…:Eightypercentofthepopulationhereare….中國是一個發(fā)展中國家，人口13億。1.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,withapopulationof130million.2.Asadevelopingcountry,Chinahasapopulationof130million.3.ThepopulationofChina,whichisadevelopingcountry,is130million.2021/5/98北京是中國的首都，是一個有1200多萬人口的大城市。（用一句話）Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.2021/5/993.介紹面積（Area）…h(huán)as/occupies/takesup/coversanareaof…squarekilometers/meters

…covering/withanareaof…squarekilometers2021/5/9103.介紹面積（Area）寫作指導：面積表達可用同位語、介詞短語、非謂語等做插入結構以復雜句型。如：天安門是世界上最大的廣場，它的面積是…1.TiananmenSquare,thelargestsquareintheworld,covers/hasanareaof…2.TiananmenSquare,with/coveringanareaof…,isthelargestsquareintheworld.3.TiananmenSquare,whichtakesup…squarekilometers,isthelargestsquareintheworld.2021/5/9114.介紹歷史（History）:…h(huán)asalonghistory(of…years)withalonghistory(of…years)歷史悠久麗水是一個現(xiàn)代化城市,歷史悠久。1.Lishui,amoderncity,hasalonghistory.2.Lishui,whichhasalonghistory,isamoderncity.3.Lishuiisamoderncitywithalonghistory.

2021/5/9124.介紹歷史（History）:見證歷史輪回：…h(huán)aswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory追溯到……：…dates/goesbackto…

1.建于16世紀的城堡見證了太多的歷史輪回。Builtinthe16thcentury,thecastlehaswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory.2.牛津大學追溯到13世紀。OxfordUniversitydatesbacktothethirteenthcentury.2021/5/913旅游景點aplaceofinterest

名勝afamoustouristresortatouristattractionatouristdestination旅游景點，旅游目的地ascenicspot

風景區(qū)atouristcity旅游城市2021/5/914Practice:1.中國位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大的國家之一。China,oneofthelargestcountriesintheworld,is

locatedintheeastofAsia.2.多倫多是加拿大東部的一個繁華的港口城市，總面積1,850平方千米，總人口261萬人。(coveratotalareaof)Toronto,abusyportcityontheeastcoastofCanada,coversatotalareaof1,850squarekilometerswithapopulationof2.61million.2021/5/915Practice:3.中國是一個古老的(ancient)國度，有將近五千年的歷史。(withahistoryof)China

isanancientcountrywithalonghistoryofalmost5000years.4.西藏有其獨特(unique)的文化，和眾多的名勝如布達拉宮(PotalaPalace)，深深地吸引各地游。(bewell-knownfor)Tibetiswell-knownforitsuniquecultureandanumberofplacesofinterest

suchasPotalaPalace,attractingtouristsfromallovertheworld.2021/5/916Let’shaveatry.根據以下內容,用5句話寫一篇短文：北京是中國首都，位于中國北部，人口達2114萬，面積是16410平方千米。擁有3000多年悠久歷史，在不同的朝代有不同的稱謂。作為文化名城，它擁有眾多名勝，如長城，故宮等，吸引八方來客。2008年成功舉辦了奧運會，給世界人民很好的機會了解北京。參考詞匯：朝代dynasty故宮theForbiddenCity寫作思路：1、審題-----文體：地點介紹人稱：第三人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時、過去式2、謀篇：要點重組位置、面積、人口、風景特色3、行文：運用不同的句型進行翻譯4潤色：(1)在文章中使用一些非謂語動詞。（2）巧用同位語（3）活用從句（4）巧用連接詞2021/5/917Beijing,thecapitalcityofChina,islocatedinthenorthofChina.//Itcoversanareaof16,410squarekilometerswithapopulationof21.14million.//Itwasanancientcitywithalonghistoryofmorethan3000yearsandhasdifferentnamesindifferentdynasties.//Asafamousculturalcity,Beijingisfamousformanyplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCityandsoon,attractingtouristsfrom

homeandabroadeveryyear.Itisin2008thatBeijingsucceededinholdingtheOlympicGames,whichoffersaverygoodchanceforpeoplearoundtheworldtokno