2023版高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)八短文改錯(cuò)習(xí)題

專題八短文改錯(cuò)

5年高考

Proofreading1（2021全國(guó)甲）話題:學(xué)校生活難度：中

Lastweekourteacheraskedustofillinaquestionnaire.Oneofthequestions

are:Whowillyougointimesoftrouble?Herearetheresults.Manystudentssaythey

willtalktotheirfriendorclassmatesbecausetheyreofthesameageandcan

understandeachother.Somewillturnouttotheirparentsorteachersforhelp.

Onlyalittlechoosetodealwiththeproblemsonourown.Theiranswersalsoshow

thattheydisliketalktoothers.Theykeptverymuchtothemselves.Inmyopinion,

whereintrouble,weshouldseekhelpfromthosewetrustmostly.

答案

1.第二句:are改為is

2.第二句:go后面加to

3.第四句：friend改為friends

4.第五句：刪除turn后面的out

5.第六句：little改為few

6.第六句:our改為their

7.第七句：talk改為talking

8.第八句:kept改為keep

9.第九句：where改為when

10.第九句:mostly改為most

Proofreading2（2021全國(guó)乙）話題：家庭生活難度：中

Ilovedoinghousework.Ialwaysassistmyparentsindoingthedishaftermeals.

Ialsowatertheflowersintheyardandtidyingupmyownbedroomwhatevernecessary.

Inmyopinion,studentscanbenefitalotdoingsomehousework.Firstly,doing

houseworkwashelpfulforustobearesponsibleperson.Also,itgivesourparents

moretimetodowhattheyarelikeanditimprovesthefamilyrelationship.Whats

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most,doinghouseworkcanbeaformofmentallyrelaxationfromstudy.Thatsour

viewonhousework.Andhopesthiscaninspiremorethinkingonthetopic!

答案

1.第二句：dish改為dishes

2.第三句：tidying改為tidy

3.第三句：whatever改為whenever

4.第四句：alot后面加from/by

5.第五句:was改為is

6.第六句:刪除like前面的are

7.第七句:most改為more

8.第七句：mentally改為mental

9.第八句:our改為my

10.第九句：hopes改為hope

Proofreading3（2020課標(biāo)全國(guó)I）話題：家庭生活難度：中

TodayItriedcookingasimplydishmyself.Ilikeeatingfryingtomatoeswith

eggs,andIthoughtitmusttobeeasytocook.Mymomtoldmehowtopreparingit.

FirstIcutthetomatoesintopiecesbutputthemaside.NextIbroketheeggsinto

abowlandbeatthemquicklywithchopstick.AfterthatIpouredoilintoapanand

turnedoffthestove.Iwaitedpatientlyunlesstheoilwashot.ThenIputthe

tomatoesandthebeateneggsintopantogether."Notthatway,“mymomtriedto

stopusbutfailed.Shewasright.ItdidntturnoutasIhadwished.

答案

1.第一句：simply改為simple

2.第二句：frying改為fried

3.第二句：刪除must后面的to

4.第三句：preparing改為prepare

5.第四句：but改為and

6.第五句：chopstick改為chopsticks

7.第六句:off改為on

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8.第七句：unless改為until/till

9.第八句:pan前面加the

10.第九句:us改為me

Proofreading4（2020課標(biāo)全國(guó)H）話題：學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)功夫難度：中

Thankyouforyourletter,whatreallymademehappy.Imgladtoknowthat

youvecomeChinatolearnkungfuinaschoolinmyhometown.Imsurelyyou11

haveagoodtime.Actually,IstarttolearnkungfuwhenIwassevenyearsold,

forIhavelongbeenoutofpractice.Luckily,Iwillgohomeintwoweeksforsummer

vacations.ThenIcansparesometimetolearnitagain,suchthatwecanpractice

togetheroneveryday.BestofluckwithyourslearningkungfuinChina.Seeyou

sooner.

答案

1.第一句:what改為which

2.第二句:come后面加to

3.第三句:surely改為sure

4.第四句:start改為started

5.第四句：for改為but/yet

6.第五句：vacations改為vacation

7.第六句：such改為so

8.第六句：刪除eve。day前面的on

9.第七句：yours改為your/you

10.第八句：sooner改為soon

Proofreading5（2020課標(biāo)全國(guó)III）話題：健康飲食難度：中

Mymomisreallyconcerningwiththehealthofeveryoneinourfamilies.Inorder

tomakesurelyallofusareingoodhealth,andshemakesspecificplansforus.

Forexample,everymorning,mydadhastohavethebowlofeggsoupwhileIhadto

eatanapple.MydaddontlikethesoupandIdontenjoyapples.Itellmymom

thatifwereforcedeatthings,wemaybecomeill.Butheinsistsonuseating

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healthyfood.Understandinghergoodintentions,Ieatallthefoodwhatisprovided

byMomwithappreciation.

答案

1.第一句：concerning改為concerned

2.第一句：families改為family

3.第二句:surely改為sure

4.第二句：刪除she前面的and

5.第三句：the改為a

6.第三句：had改為have

7.第四句：like前的dont改為doesnt

8.第五句:forced后面加to

9.第六句:he改為she

10.第七句:what改為that

Proofreading6（2019課標(biāo)全國(guó)I）話題:體育運(yùn)動(dòng)難度：中

Ibecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.One

afternoonwhereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.

Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istoppedtheball

andkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryonessurprising,theball

wentintothenet.Allthefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,say

thatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwith

classmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.

答案

1.第一句:interesting改為interested

2.第二句：where改為when

3.第三句：football前面加a

4.第三句:but改為and

5.第四句：hardly改為hard

6.第五句：surprising改為surprise

7.第六句:player改為players

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8.第六句:say改為saying

9.第七句:now改為then

10.第七句:刪除play后面的my

Proofreading7（2019課標(biāo)全國(guó)H）話題：成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷難度：中

SinceIwasakid,IveconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,

Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthe

fivegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoomuch.

WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmygoalordecidedtobeadoctor.

Theyweretworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasamazingatthefactthat

asickpersoncouldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeingadoctor.Andtheotheris

thatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.

答案

1.第一句：job改為jobs

2.第二句:coolly改為cool

3.第三句：five改為fifth

4.第三句:too改為very/so

5.第四句:highschool前面加in/at

6.第四句:or改為and

7.第五句:They改為There

8.第六句：amazing改為amazed

9.第六句：刪除better前面的more

10.第七句:is改為was

Proofreading8（2019課標(biāo)全國(guó)III）話題:個(gè)人夢(mèng)想難度：中

IvehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Though

itmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnot

justanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialtheme

suchaslike“TangDynasty.Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthe

historicalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwill

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openmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafes

willhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.

答案

1.第二句：opens改為open

2.第三句：required改為requires

3.第四句:ordinarily改為ordinary

4.第五句:have前面加to

5.第五句:刪除as后面的like

6.第六句：yourselves改為themselves

7.第六句:what改為that/which

8.第七句：manage改為managing

9.第八句：city改為cities

10.第九句:an改為a

Proofreading9（2018課標(biāo)全國(guó)I）話題：鄉(xiāng)村變化難度：中

Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisit

mygrandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywere

livinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenI

wenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalso

hadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearned

quitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Atthe

endofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,but

heagreed.

答案

1.第一句：countryside前面加the

2.第二句：find改為found

3.第三句:another改為other

4.第四句：here改為there

5.第四句：chicken改為chickens

6.第五句：which前面加in/which改為where

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7.第六句：sell改為selling

8.第七句：happily改為happy

9.第八句:刪除return后面的for

10.第八句:but改為and

Proofreading10（2018課標(biāo)全國(guó)II）話題:家庭生活難度：中

When1waslittle,Fridaysnightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,we

wouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatch

cartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswould

nottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.

StillIunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididntrealizehowright

myparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.Thegamesmyparentstaughtmewhere

Iwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.

答案

1.第一句：Fridays改為Friday

2.第二句:sort改為sorts

3.第三句:the改為a

4.第三句：watching改為watch

5.第三句：刪除not后面的to

6.第四句:us改為me

7.第五句：1后面加was

8.第五句:for改為with

9.第六句：are改為were

10.第七句:where改為when

Proofreading11（2018課標(biāo)全國(guó)HI）話題：學(xué)校生活難度：中

ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,

waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someof

uswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervous

andanxious.Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeak

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infrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfather

oncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfrom

textbooks,andmistakeaswell."Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.

答案

1.第一句:begin改為begun

2.第二句:wait改為waiting

3.第二句:and改為or

4.第三句:eager后面加to

5.第四句：myself改為my/the

6.第五句:刪除afraid后面的that

7.第五句:larger改為large

8.第六句:include改為includes

9.第六句：mistake改為mistakes

10.第七句:Immediate改為Immediately

Proofreading12（2017課標(biāo)全國(guó)I）話題：學(xué)習(xí)駕駛難度：中

Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.

Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtI

hadlearnedtheinstructorsorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.

Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,

aSpeedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardly

tellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostop

thecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleonthe

road.

答案

1.第一句：eighteen改為eighteenth

2.第二句：first前面加the/my

3.第三句:so改為but/yet

4.第三句:goes改為went

5.第五句:word改為words

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6.第五句：Turning改為Turn

7.第六句：刪除so后面的much

8.第七句:late改為later

9.第八句：suddenly改為sudden

10.第八句:。n改為of

Proofreading13（2017課標(biāo)全國(guó)H）話題:周圍的人難度：中

Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,and

ittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,

theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftop

oftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.They

havealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeuseful

informationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudents

pickthefreshvegetables!

答案

1.第一句：all改為both/刪除all

2.第二句：about后的a改為an/one

3.第三句:interesting改為interested

4.第三句:that改為which

5.第四句：earlier改為early

6.第五句:刪除bought后面的for

7.第六句句eside改為Besides

8.第六句：informations改為information

9.第七句：came改為comes

10.第七句:students后面加to

Proofreading14（2017課標(biāo)全國(guó)HI）話題：回憶高中生活難度：中

WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihad

grownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonth

afterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanew

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memberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywerevery,

importantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyed

studyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthe

latemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyour

highschooldays.

答案

1.第一句：刪除realize后面的of

2.第二句：had改為have

3.第二句:and改為but

4.第三句:took改為taken

5.第三句:become改為became

6.第四句:picture前面加the/this

7.第四句：they改為that/which

8.第五句：difference改為different

9.第五句:late改為latest

10.第六句:your改為my

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Proofreading1（2022屆山西運(yùn)城測(cè)試）話題：瞻仰凡?高難度：易

July29,2021marksthe131stanniversaryofVanGoghsdie.Asabigfanof

VanGogh,IfulfillmylifelongdreamthissummerbytakingatriptoEurope.Ifirst

traveledtotheNetherlands,whereVanGoghbornandlivedformostofhislife.

InAmsterdamIwenttotheVanGoghMuseumbutviewedhundredsofhisworks,including

muchofhisgreatestpaintings.BeforevisitingAmsterdam,IdrovetoSaint-R6my.

ThereVanGogh,depressingandlonelyashewas,hemadeonemasterpieceafteranother.

MylastdestinationwasTheChurchatAuvers,wherecontinuestokeepthesubjects

ofVanGoghspaintingslookingjustastheydidwhenhepaintedthem.Atthatmoment

IhadneverfeltclosetoVanGogh.

答案

1.第一句:die改為death

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2.第二句：fulfill改為fulfilled

3.第三句:在born前加was

4.第四句：but改為and

5.第四句:much改為many

6.第五句：Before改為After

7.第六句:depressing改為depressed

8.第六句:把made前的he刪除

9.第七句：where改為which

10.第八句：close改為closer

Proofreading2（2022屆昆明一中摸底）話題:一位公交司機(jī)的壯舉難度：易

Theheroinmyheartisanordinarybusdriver,whodidwhathecouldsavethe

livesonthebus.

Inacoldmorning,hewasdrivingonthefreewaywhilehehadasuddenheart

attack.Hebearsthegreatpainandbrakedthebuswithperseverance.Finally,he

waspulledupontheemergencylane,bring54passengersbackfromthedeathline.

Therefore,hewasunconsciousandlosthislife.

Heisacommonindividual,buthedidaawesomedeed.Itisduetohisstrong

senseofresponsibilitythathesavedlifeinthaturgentmoment.liesetagood

exampleformeandwhatinspiresmyselfinmylifeisthespiritofbeingdevoted

toothers.

答案

1.第一句:在could后加to

2.第二句：In改為On

3.第二句：while改為when

4.第三句：bears改為bore

5.第四句：去掉was

6.第四句：bring改為bringing

7.第五句：Therefore改為However

8.第六句：awesome前的a改為an

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9.第七句:life改為lives

10.第八句:myself改為me

Proofreading3（2022屆成都七中測(cè)試）話題:給東京奧運(yùn)健兒的一封信難度：易

Dearathletes,

Withyourexcellence,yourjoy,oryourtears,wecreatedthemagicoftheTokyo

2020OlympicGames.YouwerecompetingfiercewitheachotherforOlympicglory.

Youinspiredusbythepowerofsports.Thiswasevenmoreremarkablegiventhemany

challengesyouhadtofacebecauseofpandemic.Inthisdifficulttime,yougave

theworldthemostpreciousgifts-hope.Forthefirsttimesincethepandemicbegins,

theentireworldhascometogether.Sportsreturnedbacktothecentrestage.

Billionsofpeoplearoundtheglobewereunitedbyemotion,sharemomentsofjoy

andinspiration,whatgivesushopeandfaithinthefuture.

Yours,

LiHua

答案

1.第一句:or改為and

2.第一句:we改為you

3.第二句：fierce改為fiercely

4.第三句：by改為with

5.第四句：在pandemic前加the

6.第五句：gifts改為gift

7.第六句:begins改為began

8.第七句:刪除back

9.第八句：share改為sharing

10.第八句:what改為which

Proofreading4（2022屆河南天一大聯(lián)考階段性測(cè)試）話題:成為環(huán)保衛(wèi)士的建議難

度:中

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Wouldyouliketobeagreenerpersontoprotecttheenvironment?Herewassome

advice.Youshouldreducethewasteyouproducedaily.Youcanuseallsidesofthe

paperandcollectingthedrinkingbottles.Remembertosortthewastesothatit

canbewellrecycle.Itwouldbebetterforyouturnoffthepowerinyourhouse

whenyougoout.Insteadofdrivingyourcareverywhere,youcansaveenergybyeither

walkingnorridingabike.Beside,takeabagalongwhenshoppingtoavoidusing

toomanyplasticbag.Lastbutnotleast,neverspitinthepublic.Itisrealeasy

tobeaneco-friendlyperson.

答案

1.第二句:was改為is

2.第四句:all改為both

3.第四句:collecting改為collect

4.第五句:recycle改為recycled

5.第六句:在turnoff前加to

6.第七句：nor改為or

7.第八句：Beside改為Besides

8.第八句:bag改為bags

9.第九句:去掉the

10.第十句：real改為really

Proofreading5（2022屆河南許昌質(zhì)檢）話題：以“勞動(dòng)”為主題的班級(jí)活動(dòng)難度：

中

Lastweek,ourclasscarriedoutanactivity,whichthemeisaboutlabour.

Atfirst,theimportantoflabourwasemphasisedbyourteacher.Keepwhathe

saidinmind,Ipackedthesuitcaseallbymebeforesettingoff.Thencomethetwo-day

activity.Wewereaskedtohelpingthefruitfarmerpickanddeliverthewatermelons.

ExhaustedthoughIwas,Iexperiencedgreatsenseofachievementfromhardwork.

WhenIcamebacktohome,Icouldntwaittosharewithmyparentsthe

forgettableexperience.Iharvestedverymuchfromtheactivitythattheywereboth

proudofme.

答案

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1.第一句：which改為whose

2.第二句:important改為importance

3.第三句:Keep改為Keeping

4.第三句：me改為myself

5.第四句：come改為came

6.第五句:helping改為help

7.第六句:在great前加a

8.第七句:去掉back后的to

9.第七句：forgettable改為unforgettable

10.第八句:very改為so

Proofreading6（2022屆云南師大附中測(cè)試）話題:旅游的好處難度：中

Travelinghadbecomeincreasinglypopularovertheyears.Perhapsoneofthe

bigreasonsisthatitmakespeoplefeelrefreshed.Otherreasonisthatitallows

ustoescapeourlives.Sometimes,whatourmindreallyneedisabreakfromthe

sameatmosphere.Whenwetravel,moreoftenthannot,wewillspendgreatdealof

timeoutdoors,thatisthebestmedicineforamindlockedindoorsformostofthe

time.Buttravelingallowsustoadopttonewperspectives.Strangeenough,its

whenwetakeabreakfromourproblemsthattheysometimesmanagetofindsolutions

tothem.

答案

1.第一句:had改為has

2.第二句:big改為biggest

3.第三句：Other改為Another

4.第四句：need改為needs

5.第五句：在great前加a

6.第五句:that改為which

7.第六句:But改為And

8.第六句:刪除adopt后的to

9.第七句：Strange改為Strangely

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10.第七句:they改為we

Proofreading7（2022屆南寧摸底）話題:畢業(yè)之際的心情和計(jì)劃難度：中

AsJuneiscoming,Iwi11leaveformyhighschoolsoon.Ifeelrealexcited

becausethatmeanImgoingtostartmycollegelife.Atsametime,Imalittle

sadbecauseIcanimaginesayinggoodbyetomyclassmatesandteacher.Iwantto

takesomephotoswithbothofthem.Wewillnotbetogethersowewillbefriends

forever.Wewillkeepintouchwitheachotherbysende-mailsontheInternet.In

thepastthreeyearsIhadlearnednotonlyhowtostudy,butalsohowtobeaman.

Iwillworkevenharderinthefuturetobecometheproudofmyschool.

答案

1.第一句:刪除for

2.第二句：real改為really

3.第二句:mean改為means

4.第三句:At后加the

5.第三句:teacher改為teachers

6.第四句：both改為all

7.第五句:so改為but

8.第六句:send改為sending

9.第七句：had改為have

10.第八句:proud改為pride

Proofreading8（2022屆西南四省名校大聯(lián)考）話題：回國(guó)后表示感激之情難度：中

Ihavereturnedbacktomycountrysafeandsound.Ireallywantedtoexpress

mygratitudetomyhostforthathehasdoneforme.Duringmystaywithhim,Iwas

goodlookedafterandheshowedmearoundmanyplaceofinterest,whichleftadeep

impressiononme.Inaddition,withherhelp,myoralEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.

Besides,1havebetterknowledgeofAmericanculture.Withitsatmosphereattracted

me,IhopeIcanhaveasecondchancetogothere.

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Asthewintervacationisatthecorner,Ihopehecansparesometimetovisit

China.Unlesshecomes,IwillaccompanyhimtoenjoythebeautyofChineseculture.

答案

1.第一句：去掉back

2.第二句：wanted改為want

3.第二句:that改為what

4.第三句：good改為well

5.第三句:place改為places

6.第四句:her改為his

7.第五句：have后加a

8.第六句：attracted改為attracting

9.第七句：at改為around

10.第八句：Unless改為If

Proofreading9（2022屆山西長(zhǎng)治質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)）話題:發(fā)生在日本的一次地震難度:難

March11,2011wasaholidayinJapan.Everythingwasgoingonlikeusual.Most

peoplewereathomewhiletherecameanextremeloudsoundlikethunder.Next,

peopleshousesbegantoshake.Buildingscrackedandwaterpipesbursting.Inthe

townofFukushima（福島），themainstreetwentupintotheairtenfeet,holesopened

upintheground,andbuildingsfellintoruins.Peoplewereshockingbythe

unexpectedquake.Someranupanddownthestreet,whileothersweretrappedinthe

buildingswerelookingouttheirwindowsforhelp.AnearthquakethathitJapanwas

oneofthestrongestdisasterintheworld.Manytownsweredestroyedinthe

earthquakeandagreatnumberofpeoplewaskilled.Mostseriously,theFukushima

nuclearaccidenthappened.

答案

1.第二句:like改為as

2.第三句：while改為when

3.第三句：extreme改為extremely

4.第五句：bursting改為burst

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5.第七句:shocking改為shocked

6.第八句：刪除trapped前的were

7.第八句:out后加of

8.第九句:An改為The

9.第九句：disaster改為disasters

10.第十句：was改為were

Proofreading10（2022屆哈爾濱六中期中）話題:散步時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)了生活中的美難度:難

Peoplealwayssaythatwelackoftheeyestorealizethebeautyinlife.Icant

agreecomplete.LastFriday,Iwakeupveryearlyanddecidedtotakeawalk.In

thesquaretheremanyseniorcitizensweredancing,Ifoundseveraleldersabsorb

infeedingbirds.Withoutmanycars,Irealizedthatthecitylookedsocleanbut

beautiful.Somecoffeeshop,whichusedtobeoldandshabby,weredecoratedpretty

wellandcaughtmyattention.Onbothsidesofthestreetwerebigtreescovering

thewholecity,makingagreencity.Atthatmoment,Ifoundacitywassointeresting.

HowIregretignoreitsbeautybefore!

答案

1.第一句:去掉of

2.第二句：complete改為completely

3.第三句:wake改為waked或woke

4.第四句:there改為where

5.第四句：absorb改為absorbed

6.第五句:but改為and

7.第六句:shop改為shops

8.第七句:making后加it

9.第八句：a改為the

10.第九句:ignore改為ignoring

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Doestheuniversityyouattendorthemajoryouchoosedetermineyoursuccess

inthefuture?AccordinguptoarecentsurveydonebyChinaYouthDaily,48.6percent

ofparticipantsbelievethattheuniversityonegoestoplaysaimportantrolein

shapingtheirfuture.Ontheotherhand,33.8percentofpeopleheldtheviewthat

itswhatyoudointheuniversitywhichmatters.Forsomestudents,theythink

thataprestigiousuniversitydoesbringmanybenefit.Withoutaccesstoacademic

trainingincollege,shewouldnthavesuccessfullygottheirinvaluableexperience.

However,othersbelievethatchoosetherightmajorhasmuchweightthanchoosing

agooduniversity.Boththeuniversityandonesmajorareimportant,andthey

dontnecessarydetermineyourlife.Itswhatonehaslearnedthatmatters.

答案

1.第二句:刪除According后面的up

2.第二句：plays后的a改為an

3.第三句:held改為hold

4.第三句:which改為that

5.第四句：benefit改為benefits

6.第五句：she改為they

7.第六句:choose改為choosing

8.第六句：much改為more/much后面加more

9.第七句:逗號(hào)后的and改為but

10.第七句：necessary改為necessarily

Proofreading12（2021鄭州示范性高中階段性考試）話題:健康家庭難度：中

Inyoure-mail,youaskmeforsomesuggestionsabouthowtohaveahealthyfamily.

Hereismyadvice.Generallyspoken,ahealthyfamilyneedseffortsofeveryfamily

member.First,itisobviouslythatparentsshouldtreattheirchildrenequally,

thatisimportantforthefamily.Whatsmore,childrenorparentsbothbenefit

fromhavingsomeday-to-dayroutines.Intheaddition,everymembershoul