英語(yǔ)高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)指導(dǎo)-“三個(gè)句式”搞定情感描寫(xiě)素材

英語(yǔ)高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)指導(dǎo)■〃三個(gè)句式”搞定情感描寫(xiě)人物的情感隨著故事的發(fā)展而變化，從而體現(xiàn)人物的性格。在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，需要關(guān)注并延續(xù)情感線索，進(jìn)而凸顯人物的性格、升華文章的主題。與此同時(shí)，情感描寫(xiě)也使得文章的細(xì)節(jié)更生動(dòng),充分實(shí)現(xiàn)”情節(jié)與細(xì)節(jié)〃并行推進(jìn)，體現(xiàn)出文章的精彩度。大部分學(xué)生對(duì)于情感描寫(xiě)詞語(yǔ)匱乏，詞不達(dá)意，手法單一，故此，特將其總結(jié)為三個(gè)句型，幫助更多的同學(xué)。萬(wàn)能句式一：adj1andadj2,主句,doing.../獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)句式來(lái)源：Tiredandhungry,hewenthome,notsayingaword.他回到家里，又累又餓，不想說(shuō)一句話。用法示例：.他站起身來(lái)領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)。Hestooduptoaccepttheprize.句式升級(jí)：Surprisedanddelighted,hestooduptoaccepttheprize,feelingproud.又意外又開(kāi)心,他站起身來(lái)去領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)，感到非常自豪。.他交了很多朋友。Hemadealotoffriends.句式升級(jí)：Modestandeasy-going,hesoonmadealotoffriends,gettingalongwellwiththem.因?yàn)橹t虛，隨和，他很快交到了很多朋友，并和他們相處地很融洽。.我們?cè)缭缭谛ｉT口集合。Wegatheredattheschoolgateearly.句式升級(jí)：Eagerandenthusiastic,wegatheredattheschoolgateearly,chattingandlaughingallthetime.滿懷熱情和渴望，我們?cè)缭缇驮谛ｉT口集合，又說(shuō)又笑。用法體驗(yàn)：.非常興奮，我們?nèi)褙炞⒌睾屯瑢W(xué)商討著并寫(xiě)下我們的建議，希望能幫助解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。Excitedandwhole-hearted,wewerediscussingwithourclassmatesandwritingdownoursuggestions,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem..極度驚訝和困惑，我一篇接一篇地看著日記，每一篇表現(xiàn)的主題都很相似。Greatlysurprisedandconfused,Ireaddiaryafterdiary,eachexpressingasimilartheme..Thrilledandenraptured,Janequickenedpaceandsprintedtothehelicopter,knowingthatshewouldberescuedeventually.簡(jiǎn)欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升機(jī)沖去，她知道自己終于獲救了。.Satisfiedandcontent,mysisterstaredattheflowers,regardingthemasthemostmarvelousworkintheworld.心滿意足的，姐姐看了看這些花，認(rèn)為它們是世界上最奇妙的作品。用法實(shí)戰(zhàn)：.既害怕又無(wú)助，他一動(dòng)不動(dòng)站在那好一會(huì)，不敢相信剛才發(fā)生的一切。Scaredandhelpless,hestoodstillforamoment,notbelievingwhathadjusthappened..又絕望又疲憊，Jane跪了下來(lái)，眼淚順著她的臉頰流了下來(lái)。Desperateandexhausted,Janekneltdown,withtearsrollingdownhercheeks..我們好奇而興奮，迫不及待地想要和外國(guó)學(xué)生交換禮物，以表達(dá)我們彼此真摯的友誼。Curiousandexcited,wecouldn'twaittoexchangegiftswiththeforeignstudents,conveyingoursincerefriendshiptoeachother..非常興奮，我們?nèi)褙炞⒌睾屯瑢W(xué)商討著并寫(xiě)下我們的建議，希望能幫助解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。Excitedandwhole-hearted,wewerediscussingwithourclassmatesandwritingdownoursuggestions,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem..句式改造Hewalkedintotheclassroom.（害怕）Cautiousandevenabitscared,heswiftlyslippedintothequietclassroom,bagonbackandsweatonforehead.萬(wàn)能句式二：量詞+表情感狀態(tài)的名詞+動(dòng)詞+sb常用量詞：aburst/wave/flood/surge/senseof...常用動(dòng)詞：seize,grasp,takeholdof,crawl/creep爬，swallow吞噬,wellup涌出，surge涌動(dòng)，sweepover?沖；卷，overwhelm充溢，壓倒用法示例：.當(dāng)她知道考試結(jié)果時(shí)，她興奮極了。Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited.句式升級(jí)：Theinstantshewasinformedoftheresultofthetest,asurgeofexcitementseizedher..她傷心不已。Shefeltextremelysad.句式升級(jí)：Shewasseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly..我感到很害怕。Ifeltveryscared.句式升級(jí)：Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorwithmypalmssweating.用法體驗(yàn)：.看著他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悅。Atthesightofhisconfidentsmile,asenseofjoysweptover/floodedoverme..聽(tīng)見(jiàn)他說(shuō)的話，Alice咧開(kāi)嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭。Hearingwhathesaid,Alicegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher..電話里，聽(tīng)見(jiàn)他的話，我羞愧得低下頭，一陣?yán)⒕蜗蛭乙u來(lái)，臉上發(fā)燙。Hearinghiswordsonthephone,Ihungmyheadshamefully,awaveofguiltsweepingovermewithmyfaceburning.句式變化：doing...,sb.feltagreatsenseof+，情緒名詞+wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb,doing…"某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的……在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌?！ň涫卓梢约由蟙oingsth,表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生的原因；句尾可以加上doingsth或which,表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生后的結(jié)果。Seeinghishusbandchattingwithabeautifulgirl,Janefeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,throwingtheteacupatthegirl.Seeinghisdaughtersafeandsound,hefeltagreatsenseofreliefwellingupinhisheartandsurgingthroughhim.Swingtheirskirtsandimagingtheywerethemostattractivewomenattheball,thewivesfeltagreatsenseofpridewellingupintheirheartandsurgingthroughthem.萬(wàn)能句式三：(doing...),so+adj/adv+部分倒裝+that...,(doing...)用法示例：.Jane忍不住哭了。Janecouldn'tstopcrying.句式升級(jí)：Recallingthescene,soregretfulwasJanethatshecouldn'tstopcrying,tearssparkingouthereyes.回想起那一幕，簡(jiǎn)非常后悔，忍不住哭了起來(lái)，淚水奪眶而出。.小鹿很害怕。Spottingthis,sofrightenedwasthedeerthatsheshiveredandtrembledalloverlikealeaf.看到這兒，小鹿嚇得像一片葉子一樣渾身顫抖。.看到那頭狼，我很害怕。Catchingsightofthefrighteningwolf,soscareddidIfeelthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.看到那頭可怕的狼，我嚇得喉嚨發(fā)緊，兩腿發(fā)軟。用法體驗(yàn)：.保羅回想起這些傷人的字眼，氣得暴跳如雷，重重地摔門而去，頭也不回地大步走開(kāi)。Recallingthesehurtfulwords,soirritatedwasPaulthathestormedoutandslammedthedoorheavily,stridingawaywithoutlookingback..杰克激動(dòng)得走上舞臺(tái)，給了妻子一個(gè)溫暖的擁抱。SothrilledwasJackthathesteppedintothestage,givinghiswifeawarmhug.技法綜合體驗(yàn)：.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)好消息，他開(kāi)心地跳起來(lái)，眼睛像星星一樣閃爍。Hearingthisgoodnews,hejumpedupinhappiness,withhiseyessparklinglikeshiningstars..親眼看到他的榜樣,Jayce開(kāi)心到說(shuō)不出話來(lái)，只能站在那里，嘴巴張的很大。Seeinghisrolemodelintheflesh,Jaycewastoothrilledtosayasinglewordbutstandherewithhismouthopenwide..跟老師講出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉著，心跳得像打鼓一樣。Havingtoldtheteacherthetruth,shesatrestlesslyinherseatwithherfingerscrossedandherheartpoundinglikeadrum..用灼熱的目光怒視著我，他幾乎控制不住自己的怒火，聲音因憤怒而顫抖。Glaringatmewithburningeyes,hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage,hisvoicetremblingwithanger..覺(jué)得冷得無(wú)法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道該如何應(yīng)對(duì)這種可怕的情況。Feelingunbearablycoldandextremelyexhausted,Janewasquiteatalossastohowtocopewiththeterriblesituation..一瞬間，淚水涌上眼眶，我感動(dòng)的說(shuō)不出話。Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords..聽(tīng)到這話，Bob感到很尷尬，扭動(dòng)并使勁揉搓他的手，似乎是想在這刺骨的冬日里取暖。Onhearingthis,Bobbecameembarrassed,twistingandrubbinghishands（）overandoveragainseeminglytogetwarminthisfreezingwinter..從未想過(guò)我會(huì)陷入如此的兩難境地，我感到無(wú)比尷尬和恐慌。Standingfrozenasice,neverhadIthoughtaboutbeingtrappedinsuchadilemmathatIwasfloodedwithoverwhelmingawkwardnessandpanic.素材積累（轉(zhuǎn)）L開(kāi)心：Learningthechildren'sidea,Mrs.Meredithwasso1.overjoyed（高興的）thatshesmiledbrightly.Then,thechildrengotdowntopreparingpopcorn2.cheerfully（高興地）.Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftfortheBernard/s3.joyfully（高興地）tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernard4.dancedwithjoy（高興地雀躍）,withtearsfillinghiseyes.Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparentswerealso5.seizedwithjoy口F常高興）.Later,6.muchtohisdelight（另彳也IF常高;（的是），thepopcornwassotastythatitsoonsoldout.Hesoonreturned,hiswholeface7.beamingwithdelight（高興得滿臉通紅）.8.Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.（笑聲在房間里縈繞）.傷心Iwasselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.ButIwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Onthedayofthecontest,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyselfandsufferedfromstagefright.IntheendIwalkedoffthestage,1.myeyesfilledwithtears（眼里飽含淚7K）.Finally,resultswereannounceda代erthecontest.Ididnotwinanyprizes.Ibitmybottomlip2.withsadnessfillingherheart（心'里充滿悲傷）.Idraggedmyheavylegs3.withasinkingheart（心情沉重）andmovedoutofthelecturehall.4.Ihungmyheadinsadness,greatsorrowcloudingmyeyes（我傷心地垂著頭,巨大的悲傷籠罩著我的雙眼）.Onenteringtheclassroom,5.disappointmentandsadnesscameinwavesandtearsstreameddownmycheeks（悲傷如潮涌，淚水從臉頰滑落）.Thenextfollowingdays,Ifeltlikeshewas6.floatinginanoceanofsadness.（我感覺(jué)正漂浮在悲傷的海洋里）,notwantingtodoanything..生氣Thedooropenedandincameayoungman.Shockedtoseeuspackingthingsintooursuitcase,theyoungman1.letoutayellofanger,withhiseyesshiningwithannoyance（憤怒t也大叫了——聲，眼里閃爍著惱怒的光芒。）.2.Hewasinafuriouspassion,andwentstampingabout（他大發(fā)雷霆，跺著腳走來(lái)走去）.Heaccusedusofillegallyenteringhisroomandthreatenedtocallthepolice,whichscaredmychildrentodeath.Justatthatmoment,myhusbandreturnedafterhisgroceryshopping.Hearingtheman'srudewords,3.afireofrageburninginhisheart（一股怒火在心中燃燒）.Itseemedthatnosettlementwouldbepossible,andthesituationreachedaboilingpoint.4.Quarrelsfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano（爭(zhēng)吵如火上澆油，于是他的憤怒就像火山一樣爆發(fā)了）.Eventually,5.unabletocontainhisanger,myhusbandstormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim（無(wú)法控制心中的怒氣，我丈夫氣得沖出房間，狠狠地摔上門）..害怕Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.1.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch（恐懼噴薄而出,將我緊緊包圍,我已經(jīng)寸步難行了）.2.Extremelyfrightened/panicked,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating（驚恐不已，我覺(jué)得兩腿發(fā)抖,手心冒汗）.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,3.whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear（l下呆了）.Atthesightofthepolarbear'bloodymouth,4.shewasnearlydeadwithfright（嚇得要死）.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.5.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze（我們感覺(jué)渾身血;夜凝【司T）becauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair..緊張WhenIfinishedhertestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.l.Icouldn'tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenight（我在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)了一整夜,無(wú)法入睡）Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschooland2.nervously（緊張t也）glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,3.feelingasifmyheartwereinmymouth（感覺(jué)好像我的心都提到嗓子眼兒了）.There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmyname.Inspired,Ipracticedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.WhenIwasstandingbackstage,4.nervousness/tensioncamefloodingoverme（緊張感席卷全身）.WhenmynamewascalledIcould5.feelbutterfliesinmystomach（我感到心里忐忑不安）.Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould6.feelmypalmssweatingandheartracing（我手心冒汗，心跳加速。）.Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore7.uneasy（不安的）.8.Myheartwaspounding/thumpinghard,asifitwereabouttopop（我的心撲通撲通地好像要跳出來(lái)/）.Atthatmoment,myeyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,whichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,theauditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers..感動(dòng)Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1.awaveofexcitementtakingholdofMom（媽媽激動(dòng)彳：己）.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2.containherexcitement（抑制興奮），andwould3.cheerup（振奮起來(lái)）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround4.withexcitement（興奮力也）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5.lettingoutascreamofthrill（激動(dòng)得尖口”起來(lái)），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6.Witheyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement（眼里閃著激動(dòng)的光芒）,wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature..尷尬Bynowwewerestandinginthelongholidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming,“Iwantthattelephone/overandoveragain."Becky,you'dbettergetupatonce”,mymothersaidwithatremblingvoice,1.embarrassmentwritteninherredface（漲紅的臉上寫(xiě)滿了窘迫）.Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltantrum.2.feelingthebloodrushingtoherface（羞愧不己），mymotherstoodthere,3.feelingthebloodrushingtoherface（覺(jué)得血液涌上臉頰）.Shesu