九年級(jí)寫(xiě)作課

WritingAfter-schoolClassesfreetimeactivities…Iusually…and…inmyfreetime.Thesefreetimeactivitiesareimportanttome.It’simportantfor…tohavefreetimeactivitieslike…Tip1:Trytomakesentencesdifferentandmorebeautiful.(句式多樣優(yōu)美）Iusually…and…inmyfreetime.Thesefreetimeactivitiesareimportanttome.It’simportantformetohavefreetimeactivitieslike…FreetalkIdon’t

havealotoffreetimetodowhatIlovebecause…dohomeworkEnglishdancingChineseIwanttosleep.IhavenofreetimetodowhatIlovebecause----FreetalkAfter-schoolclasses

parentsthink…Maybe/feel/believe/find/guess…

It’sgoodforchildrentostartlearningfromayoungage.

parentswanttheirkidstobesuccessfulpersonsinthefuture.Allinall,Perhapskidscould

after-schoolclassescould

…learnmanyskills…h(huán)elpkidscompeteandwinbehelpfulinfuturelifegetintoagooduniversitygetgoodgradesFreetalkmathcausealotofstressbetoobusyto…

notgetenoughsleepbetootiredbebadforhealthbebadfordevelopmentnotbehappy…artchessIamtootired.EnglishpianoIwanttosleep.dohomeworkEnglishdancingChineseAllinall,parentsshouldn’tpushtheirkidstoohard.Theyshouldlettheirkidsbekids.Inmyopinion,ifkidstaketoomanyafter-schoolclasses,…will…Although

Idon’treallyagreewiththeideaofsendingkidstoafter-schoolclasses.Becauseitcancausealotofproblems.______,Ithinkfreetimeactivitieslikedoingsportsandhangingoutwithfriendsarealsoimportanttokids.Theyshouldn’ttaketoomanyafter-schoolclasses_______theycanhavefreetimetodothingstheylike.__________,Ithinkafter-schoolclassescancausealotofstressforkids.Theyaretootired.Theyspendalotoftimeonstudy.Sotheydon’thaveenoughtimetosleepandrelax.That’sbadfortheirhealth.____________,Ithinkparentsshouldlettheirkidsbekids._________theywanttheirkidstobesuccessful,theyshouldn’tpushtheirkidstoohard.________,Ithinkit’smoreimportanttohavehappychildren.,,,,,sothat

SecondlyAllinallFirstlyWhat’smoreConclusion（總結(jié)）Opinion:agreeordisagreethinkthinkthinkthinkfindReasonsfeelbelieveTip2:Trytousesomelinkingwords.(使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞)Tip3:Payattentiontothestructure.（注意結(jié)構(gòu)）Tip4:Usedifferentwordstoshowyouropinions.

（用不同的詞表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)）Samplestructure(結(jié)構(gòu))ReasonsOpinionConclusion(總結(jié))總B.分C.總分總分總

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ConclusionP3skillgradesuniversityhelpfulcompeteandwinsuccessful…stressbusytiredunhappybebadfornoenoughsleep…2.Linkingwords(firstly,so,and,sothat,inmyopinion,allinall…)3.Differentwords(think,feel,find,believe,guess…)4.BeautifulsentencesTipsWriting1.structureWritingpracticeIagree/disagreewiththeideaofsendingkidstoafter-schoolclasses.Because…Inmyopinion,it’simportantforkids/parentsto…Ibelieveitisbetterifkids/parents…sothat…Perhapskids/parentsshould/could/shouldn’t…skillgradesuniversityhelpfulcompeteandwinsuccessful…stressbusytiredunhappybebadfornoenoughsleep…Classmates’assessment(互評(píng))(0-2)Self-assessment(自評(píng))(0-2)Teacher’sassessment