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Daisy作品T雅思寫(xiě)作主體段論證3社會(huì)文化教育政府投資1社會(huì)文化2教育34雅思寫(xiě)作社會(huì)文化Some

people

think

museum

should

be

enjoyableplaces

to

attract

and

entertain

young

people.

Otherthink

the

purpose

of

museums

is

to

educate,

not

toentertain.

Discuss

both

views

and

give

yourownopinion.政府投資社會(huì)文化正：支持娛樂(lè)博物館娛樂(lè)化激發(fā)年輕人的興趣,加深印象增加對(duì)歷史的理解主體段一反：教育意義博物館教育化提供實(shí)物，追溯歷史人們知道保護(hù)文物，有認(rèn)同感個(gè)人：娛樂(lè)主體段二主體段三actaiocntionresrueltsulteffecfftect吸引年輕人，加深對(duì)展品意義理解娛樂(lè)更快速度傳播知識(shí)社會(huì)文化A

娛樂(lè)R激發(fā)年輕人的興趣（arouse/stimulate

interest

and

excitement）加深印象（leave

a

strong/

deep

impression）E

增加對(duì)歷史的理解（gain

an

insight

intos

/

have

a

better

graspof

historicevent）A

博物館教育化R

提供實(shí)物，追溯歷史（connect

to

the

past）E人們知道保護(hù)文物，有認(rèn)同感（asense

of

identity）A娛樂(lè)R吸引年輕人，加深對(duì)展品意義理解（

deepen

their

understanding

of

theimplications

of

those

exhibits）E更快速度傳播知識(shí)（

pass

on

knowledge

at

a

faster

pace）Entertainment

is

supported

by

some

peoplebecause they

think

it

is

likely

to

arouse

interestand

excitement.社會(huì)文化正：支持娛樂(lè)增加對(duì)歷史的理解主體段一actionresulteffect博物館娛樂(lè)化激發(fā)年輕人的興趣,加深印象Movies

and

interactive

games

can

presentinformation

about

historical

events

in

an

engagingway

and

leave

a

strong

impression.In

this

way,

these

games

provide

young

visitorswith

opportunities

to

gain

an

insight

into

thehistory.If

museums

give

priority

to

education,

the

tripcould e

dull

and

uninteresting

to

visitors.社會(huì)文化反：教育意義提供實(shí)物，追溯歷史人們知道保護(hù)文物，有認(rèn)同感主體段二actionresulteffectOn

the

other

hand,

some

people

argue

that

they

will

eknowledgeable

and

possible

more

conscious

of

theiridentity,

if

museums

lay

emphasis

on

education.博物館教育化Many

museums

put

important

objects(

e.g.,

antiques)on

display,

so

visitors

can

connect

to

the

past.

Thesemuseums

also

provide

enormous

information

about

howour

distant

ancestors

lived

their

lives

and

what

theyachieved

in

architecture

and

technology.They

will

have

a

strong

sense

of

identity

andrealize

how

important

it

is

to

protect

theirobjectsof

importance.

However,

it

would

be

difficult

for

visitorsto

focus

on

the

value

of

these

objects,

if

museumspaidattention

to

entertainment.社會(huì)文化娛樂(lè)個(gè)人：娛樂(lè)更快速度傳播知識(shí)主體段三actionresulteffectFrom

my

perspective,

entertainment

canmake

it

possible

for

museums

to

pass

onknowledge

at

a

faster

pace

becauseentertainment

is

likely

to

attract

youngervisitors,

and

they

spend

more

time

deepeningtheir

understanding

of

the

implications

of

those

exhibits.

This

is

particularly

important

forthose

people

who

intend

to

escape

pressuresof

modern

life,

and

entertainment

canmakemuseums

an

attractive

destination.吸引年輕人，加深對(duì)展品意義理解1社會(huì)文化2教育34雅思寫(xiě)作教育educationMore

and

more

students

choose

to

go

toanother

country

for

higher

education.

Do

youthinkthe

benefits

outweigh

theproblem?政府投資7777777actionresulteffectbenefit出國(guó)深造能同時(shí)更好地掌握一門(mén)語(yǔ)言；提升交流技能成為滿(mǎn)足全球化發(fā)展的全能型人才主體段一benefit外國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)有家長(zhǎng)的陪伴,獨(dú)立生活提高獨(dú)立解決問(wèn)題的能力problem主體段二主體段三容易受到不良行為的影響出國(guó)留學(xué)，缺乏父母管教對(duì)成長(zhǎng)產(chǎn)生壞的影響教育educationA

出國(guó)深造R1

能同時(shí)更好地掌握一門(mén)語(yǔ)言（acquire

a

foreign

language）R2

提升交流技能（improve

communication

skills）E

成為滿(mǎn)足全球化發(fā)展的全能型人才（well-rounded

individuals）A

外國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)R

沒(méi)有家長(zhǎng)的陪伴（company

of

parents）,獨(dú)立生活（self-reliant）E

提高獨(dú)立解決問(wèn)題的能力（problem-solving

abilities）A

出國(guó)留學(xué)，缺乏父母管教（away

from

parenting/

parental

control）R

容易受到不良行為的影響（behavioral

problems/indecent

behaviorE對(duì)成長(zhǎng)產(chǎn)生壞的影響（

cast

a

long

shadow

over

the

future）教育educationbenefit出國(guó)深造能同時(shí)更好地掌握一門(mén)語(yǔ)言；豐富交流技能成為滿(mǎn)足全球化發(fā)展的全能型人才教育educationaactcitoionnreresusultlteefffefectctOne

obvious

benefit

of

finishing

a

degree

overseasThey

are

able

to

improve

communication

skillsis

that

the

younger

generation

can

acquire

a

foreignlanguage.because

the

student

life

in

another

countryprovides

them

with

opportunities

to

exchangeideas

with

professors

and

classmates

fromdifferent

countries.They

are

thus

likely

to

e

well-roundedindividuals

who

have

a

bright

job

outlook.主體段一actionresulteffectbenefit外國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)有家長(zhǎng)的陪伴,獨(dú)立生活提高獨(dú)立解決問(wèn)題的能力主體段二教育educationAnother

benefit

is

that

young

peoplecanacquire

basicskills,

if

they

pursue

qualifications

overseas.It

is

difficult

for

them

to

enjoy

the

company

ofparents,

so

they

have

to

give

importance

to

basiclifeskills

and

problem-solvingskills.They

are

expected

to

learn

how

to

rent

anapartment,

open

a

bank

account

and

buygrocery

items

themselves.These

skills

can

give

them

a

clearadvantagein

future.actionresulteffectproblem主體段三容易受到不良行為的影響出國(guó)留學(xué)，缺乏父母管教對(duì)成長(zhǎng)產(chǎn)生壞的影響教育educationOn

the

other

hand,

studying

overseascanhave

a

damaging

effect

on

some

students’development.

They

do

everything

away

fromparental

control，when

they

attend

courses

inanother

country.They

may

not

be

able

todiscriminate

between

right

and

wrong,

and

thismeans

they

are

vulnerable

by

theinfluence

of

behavioral

problems

of

others.If

they

imitate

anti-social

behaviors,

theirdecision

may

cast

a

long

shadow

overthefuture.信息提練法反駁法平衡融合法結(jié)尾段寫(xiě)法總結(jié)本方中心思想及段落大意反駁對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)指出其謬誤再次提出本方觀點(diǎn)融合對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)的合理之處結(jié)尾一：提煉法Many

people

believe

that

women

make

better

parents

than

men

and

that

is

why

they

have

thegreater

role

inraising

children

inmost

societies.

Othersclaimthat

men

are

just

as

good

as

women

at

parenting.

Write

an

essay

expressing

your

point

of

view.Main

idea：婦女已經(jīng)證明了他們是更好的家長(zhǎng)But

women

have

proven

themselves

as

superior

parents

as

a

result

oftheir

conditioning,

their

less

aggressive

nature

and

their

generally

bettercommunication

skills.結(jié)尾一：提煉法結(jié)尾一：提煉法superior

parents-

better

suited

to

the

parenting

roleparenting-raising

childrenThus,

while

it

is

all

very

well

to

suggest

a

greater

role

for

men

in

raisingchildren,

let

us

not

forget

that

women

are

generally

better

suited

to

theparenting

role.結(jié)尾二：駁論法Topic:最近調(diào)查顯示，世界上很多現(xiàn)存的語(yǔ)言都面臨著滅亡的危險(xiǎn)，一些人聲稱(chēng)沒(méi)有什么好擔(dān)心的，這樣一來(lái)國(guó)與國(guó)之間的交流障礙變少了，但我不同意這樣的話(huà)，這是因?yàn)檎Z(yǔ)言的多元化對(duì)人類(lèi)的生存發(fā)展至關(guān)重要。批判辯駁：顯然，這些認(rèn)為語(yǔ)言少生活簡(jiǎn)單的觀點(diǎn)過(guò)于短淺。Obviously,

the

opinion

that

life

will

be

simpler

with

fewer

languages

isfar

too

short-sighted.支持這種觀點(diǎn)的人沒(méi)有考慮到語(yǔ)言在文化多樣性中的重要性。Supporters

of

this

view/

People

who

hold

this

view

have

not

taken

intoconsideration

the

importance

of

language

in

cultural

diversity.結(jié)尾二：駁論法結(jié)尾三：平衡法Computers

are

widely

used

in

education,

and

some

peoplethink

teacher

will

not

play

an

important

role

in

the

classroom,agree?With

the

present

wide

use

of

computers,

in

the

course

of

teaching,more

and

more

teachers

are

in

favour

of

using

computers

as

an

aid

inteaching

their

students

or

in

appropriating

the

latest

information

fromthe

internet.

However,

I

am

not

a

believer

in

the

argument

thatcomputers

may

in

the

futur