初中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作公開(kāi)課九級(jí)教學(xué)課件

ALessonofWritingALessonofWriting1Howtowriteacomposition.Howtowriteacomposition.2Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主題）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(時(shí)態(tài)):pasttense&presenttense

一般過(guò)去時(shí)&一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)First,considerthetaskcarefully.Example:First,considerthetas3LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(頭腦風(fēng)暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools農(nóng)耕工具reasongovernmenteffortsLivingconditionCellphonesjob4liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationliveinalowhouseplantcrops5LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

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livingconditions.b.

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workingtools.C.

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education.LivingconditionWorkingtoolse6OutlineTitle題目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading開(kāi)頭：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

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livingconditionsb.

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workingtoolsC.

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educationConclusion結(jié)尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提綱OutlineNext,drawupanoutlin7Then,writethecomposition.Then,writethecomposition.8Finally,checkoverthecomposition.Finally,checkoverthecompos9ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading開(kāi)頭body正文conclusion結(jié)尾ChangesinLiMing’sHometownO10AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.AWritingPractice11以GreatchangesinmyHometown

為題，按下列提示要求寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化。1、過(guò)去生活貧困，房屋破舊陰暗；道路窄交通不便。2、現(xiàn)在住房寬敞、明亮；現(xiàn)代學(xué)校，孩子可接受良好的教育；馬路寬廣，許多人有小車(chē)，交通方便；人們生活大為改善。3、未來(lái)會(huì)更加富饒和美麗4、我的感受是希望記住過(guò)去，展望未來(lái)是很重要的。

可能會(huì)用到的詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；Thanksto多虧；thecountryandthegovernment國(guó)家和政府；takeplace發(fā)生；education教育；modern現(xiàn)代；dreamabout憧憬

以GreatchangesinmyHometo12Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense時(shí)態(tài):First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……Requirement:First,considerit13LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(頭腦風(fēng)暴)educationroadsbuildingLivingconditiontransportation14Example:Outline提綱Title題目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading開(kāi)頭：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion結(jié)尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportationExample:Next,drawupanoutli15nowUsedtobe…Once曾經(jīng)pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(時(shí)態(tài))nowUsedtobe…Once曾經(jīng)pastManyy16LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.LivingconditionCellphonestra17schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)schoolhouseBrainstormforthe18Then,writethecomposition.Then,writethecomposition.19以GreatchangesinmyHometown

為題，按下列提示要求寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化。1、過(guò)去生活貧困，房屋破舊陰暗；道路窄交通不便。2、現(xiàn)在住房寬敞、明亮；現(xiàn)代學(xué)校，孩子可接受良好的教育；馬路寬廣，許多人有小車(chē)，交通方便；人們生活大為改善。3、未來(lái)會(huì)更加富饒和美麗4、我的感受是希望記住過(guò)去，展望未來(lái)是很重要的。

可能會(huì)用到的詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后的；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便的；thanksto多虧；thecountryandthegovernment國(guó)家和政府；takeplace發(fā)生；education教育；modern現(xiàn)代；dreamabout憧憬

以GreatchangesinmyHometo20TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!TheChangesinMyHometown21ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideuswithoxygenandfightagainstthepollutions.Sotheskybecomescleanerandbrighter.W