四級(jí)作文講解(漫畫)課件

writingwriting1.審題（1-2mins)2.構(gòu)思提綱(3-5mins，確定主題)3.寫文章(20mins)4.修改檢查(5mins)寫作概述

1.審題（1-2mins)寫作概述StepsPre-writing:仔細(xì)閱讀題干，確定寫作主題Para.1:describethepicture簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫（who,what,when,where…）開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山 TIPS:1.寫作的directions部分雖然給出了大致的 主題，但是也要求考生對(duì)漫畫進(jìn)行描述，切忌拋開(kāi)漫

畫內(nèi)容直接議論?。?！ TIPS:2.漫畫的內(nèi)容一定要符合圖片，切忌無(wú)中生

有?。?！StepsPre-writing:仔細(xì)閱讀題干，確定寫作主Para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message

揭示主題（觀點(diǎn)）并加以解釋和說(shuō)明論證;揭示現(xiàn)象(問(wèn)題)并闡述現(xiàn)象（問(wèn)題）產(chǎn)生的原因。 TIPS：可以從2-3個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述，也可以將這部分分為兩段。Para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionPara3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建議，重申觀點(diǎn)主題句(b)對(duì)如何解決漫畫中所反映的問(wèn)題提出合理建議或總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。TIPS：主題句的復(fù)述不是簡(jiǎn)單地重復(fù)，通常需符合如果在段末，用強(qiáng)調(diào)詞轉(zhuǎn)換方式連接。與主題句保持意思一致，更進(jìn)一層。轉(zhuǎn)換方式：詞對(duì)應(yīng)，同根，逆向Para3.：giveyourconclusion.實(shí)例一實(shí)例一看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”確定寫作主題：年輕人應(yīng)該做好人生規(guī)劃以及人生規(guī)劃的重要性的原因看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：確定寫作2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第一段：簡(jiǎn)要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…）:爺爺教導(dǎo)孫子：如果年老的時(shí)候?qū)懽詡?，你?huì)看到自己去過(guò)哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年輕時(shí)候?qū)?，你就?huì)知道你將去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第一段：簡(jiǎn)要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate.Thepicturedepictsayoungma第二段：解釋圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）并加以解釋和說(shuō)明論證。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第二段：解釋圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）并加以解釋和說(shuō)明論證。第三段：給出自己的看法（總結(jié)全文，強(qiáng)調(diào)正確的做法）。

Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearly

soastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,

canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.

第三段：給出自己的看法（總結(jié)全文，強(qiáng)調(diào)正確的做法）。ToDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.實(shí)例二Directions:Forthispart,you四級(jí)作文講解(漫畫)ppt課件看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫“expressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions”確定寫作主題：Totakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.(未雨綢繆)看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：確定寫作2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）

Thepicturefocusesonapersonwhoisstandinginfrontofthesea,watchingthetiderising.Abovethepicture,thereisathought-provokingsentencewhichtellsusthatweshouldtakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.第一段：簡(jiǎn)要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）。Thepicturefocusesonap第二段：針對(duì)圖畫所表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)（主題）進(jìn)行舉例論證

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithvisionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateifhehadbeenlaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第二段：針對(duì)圖畫所表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)（主題）進(jìn)行舉例論證WritingTechniques:

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Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateifhehadbeenlaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.WritingTechniques:第三段：總結(jié)全文。

Allinall,itisadvisableforanyonetomakeprecautionarypreparationsfortheunexpecteddifficultiesordisastersinlifeinadvance.第三段：總結(jié)全文。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshould

Youarerequiredtowriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

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Directions:Forthispart,yTheRoleofMobilePhoneinPeople'sCommunication

Thepopularityofsmartphoneshasexertedgreatinfluenceonthewaypeoplecommunicate,somuchsothatanincreasingnumberofindividualscontendthatface-to-facecommunicationisbeingreplacedbytextsandimagesonthemobilephone.

TheRoleofMobilePhoneinPeTherearemorethanoneangletoconsiderthisphenomenon.Ononehand,itispleasantlyacknowledgedthatsmartphonesshortenthedistancebetweenfamiliesandfriends.Evenpeoplefromdifferentsidesoftheglobecansharepictures,feelingsandthoughtsthroughvarioustypesofappsonthephone,thusbuildinga