2023年高考英語全國乙卷應用文寫作講義 高三英語一輪復習

2023年高考全國乙卷作文適用地區(qū):河南、江西、甘肅、青海、內(nèi)蒙古、寧夏、新疆、陜西。假期所學到的新技能1.學的新技能是什么；2.分享心得感悟。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目和首句已為你寫好。下水作文1:①ThenewskillIlearnedduringthevacationiscooking.WhenIencounteredanAPPupdatescookingskillsregularlyin

June,Ifellinlovewithitatonce.IfollowedthestepswhileIworkedinthekitchenforafewtimesandsoonbecameexperienced.（①作文開頭快速入題，直接交代新技能是什么，在什么機緣下決定學習的）②Cookingshowedmeacompletelynewworld.③

NeverdidIknowthatthesecommoningredientsfromthemarketscouldbemadeintosuch

deliciousdishes.

Itseemedlikeamagic.

④Absorbedincooking,

⑤IfeltasifIwerecreatingamiraclelikeamagician.⑥NowonderthatIwasfascinatedbyit.

（②第二段就事論事，引出心得感悟，③倒裝句的應用，增強語勢④

過去分詞做狀語，高一下學期的語法點,

⑤嘗試一下虛擬語氣，豐富句式）⑥

直接套用nowonderthat

結(jié)構(gòu)即可）⑥What'smore,cookinghelpedmereducemypressureindailylife.⑦

HoweverdepressedIwas,

asIenteredintothekitchenandgotmyselfinvolvedincooking,Iforgotallthetroubleinlife.⑧As

the

result,Igotrefreshedagain.（⑥第三段比第二段再往深挖一下，從物質(zhì)上升到精神，深化主題

⑦此處的However=Nomatterhow結(jié)構(gòu)

⑧再加個學生肯定能想出來的As

the

result湊熱鬧）⑨Itwassoblessedto

have

learned

anewskilllikecooking,⑩

whichmakesmehappy,healthyandrefreshedeveryday.（⑨結(jié)尾要短促有力

⑩這句也可以改成whichmakesmehappyandhealthy嘗試一下押頭韻的修辭手法，）下水作文2:①Ilearnedwritingfrommybrotherlastwinterholiday.

whenIcameback

home,Ifoundmybrotherwritingsomethingonthecomputer.Whenhepresstheenterbutton,

fanscrowdedinandgavehim

likes

belowhisarticle.

Itwassocool.

Iwanted

toexperiencethisimpressivemoment

aswell,soI

askedhimtoteachmetheskillofwriting.（①作文開頭直接交代新技能是什么，為什么想學這項技能）②AtfirstIgotnoideaaboutwritingatall,whichleadtotheresultthatIwriteawfullinesandnobodyreadsit.Igotdiscouragedandalmostwantedtogiveup.Mybrotherencouragedmetokeepontryingandwriteafewlineseverydaytokeepsensitivetowriting.

Heshowedmesomereallyimpressiveexamplesfromclassicalwritingartworksandorderedmetoimitate.Ifollowedhisadviceandtrytoimitatetensentencesfromclassicalwritingartworkseachmorning.Meanwhile,Ireadtheexamplesagainandagaintoexplorethesecretofwriting.（②展示學習新技能過程中遇到的挫折，以及自己是如何應對，為后文主題不放棄做鋪墊）③Itisamazingthatafterafewweeks,Iwritebetter,Icouldevenwritesomeimpressivelinesallbymyself.

④It

wasnotuntilthenthatIstartedtowriteshortarticles.⑤surprisingly,Igotmyownfansandfollowers,whichis

a

greatencouragementtome,likeamiracle.⑥ImaginehowhappyIwas.

⑦Timepermitting,Iwouldwriteafewlineseachdaytohelpothers.（③不斷努力就會見到成效，給點正能量

④加一個notuntil結(jié)構(gòu)的強調(diào)句型，豐富句式

⑤副詞修飾整個句子，語法填空題中經(jīng)?？嫉囊粋€結(jié)構(gòu)

⑥感嘆句，抒發(fā)一下情感

⑦獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，來撐個場面）Frommywritingexperience,Ilearnedthatnobodyisbornperfect.⑧

Whenintrouble,weshouldtrytoaskforhelpandkeepontrying.⑨Anyway,Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.⑩Onlyifonenevergaveup,couldheachiev