高一英語作文講評課課件

高一英語寫作訓練（一）講評

高考筆試部分試卷結構和題型題序題型題量賦分時間/分I語言知識及運用第一節(jié)：完形填空153025第二節(jié)：語法填空101510II閱讀第一節(jié)：閱讀理解204040第二節(jié)：信息匹配5105III總計52135120寫作第一節(jié)：基礎寫作第二節(jié)：讀寫任務1151012530寫作要求：要求考生根題示進行書面表達?？忌鷳埽?)清楚，連貫地傳遞信息，表達意思2)有效運用所學語言知識第一節(jié)：基礎寫作命題規(guī)律：形式采用中文提綱/表格?？紤煤驼f明文內容要點完全給出：只能使用五個句子：三條評分標準：沒有設開放性要點，考生不可隨意發(fā)表個人意見或觀點。盡量用到并列句，復合句，非謂語動詞短語、介詞短語等來幫助表達全部內容。句子結構準確信息內容完整篇章結構連貫一、書寫潦草，卷面涂改。二、自由發(fā)揮自己的觀點，字數(shù)超出太多。三、審題不仔細，信息內容不完整，缺少要點。Problemsinyourwriting一、

句式錯誤。二、

單詞拼寫錯誤。Errorsinyourwriting四、詞性使用錯誤三、動詞形式錯誤五、主謂不一致六、代詞使用錯誤七、名詞單復數(shù)，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)八、標點符號與大小寫一、句式錯誤Idisagreewithyourthink.Friendsinourlifeaplayanimportantrole.Nomatterthedistance,wearewillingtowithourfriendssharejoys.youdisagreewithsb

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Friendsplayanimportantroleinourlife.Nomatterhowfarthedistanceis,wearewillingtosharejoyswithourfriends.一、句式錯誤Whenweencounterdifficultiesorfrustrated,ourfriendshelp.Youshouldtreatyourfriendslikeyouaretreatedbyyourfriends.Don’tbelievepersonwhoeasytoleaveyou.Don’tbelieveinthepersonwholeavesyoueasily.Whenweareintroubleorfeelfrustrated,ourfriendwillhelpus.inthewaywanttobetreated1.Friendisveryimportantinyourlift.

2.Whenwefeelsadorhavesomedifferences,....3.Don’tbeliveinpeoplewholeaveyoueasily,...

4.Thanyoushouldtreatfriendsthewayyouwanttobetreated.5.Theturefriendis…

lifedifficulties二、單詞拼寫錯誤。believeThentrue1.Welikesharehappinesswithourfriends.

2.Iamdisagreewithyou.3.Friendsarealwayshelpus.

4.Althoughmakefriendsisverydifficult,...5.Whenweupsetorbeintrouble,…

making三、動詞形式錯誤helpingaretoshare1.Wearewillingtosharehappyorsadwithourfriends.

2.Whenwemeetdifficult,…3.Don’tbelieveinthosewholeaveyoueasy.

happiness四、詞性錯誤sadnessdifficultieseasily1.Friendsisimportantinourlife.

2.Don’tbelievethepersonwholeaveyou.3.Ithinkfriendsplaysanimportantroleinourlife.

areleaves五、主謂不一致1.Nomatterhowfaryouandhim/herarefromeachother,...

2.Friendscanhelpour.3.IthinkIdon’tagreewithyour.4.Youfriendsalso…

us六、代詞錯誤he/sheyouYour1.Whenyouareintroubles,...

2.Youdon’twanttomakefriend.

troublefriends七、名詞單復數(shù)，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)八、標點符號與大小寫1.I’mgladtohearfromyou.ButIdisagreewithyou.2.Don’tbelieveinpeoplewholeaveyou.Becauseafriendinneedisafriendinneed.

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“A”1.Friendsplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.（黃奕東）2.Whenwemetdifficultiesorfeltsad,itisfriendwhohelpus.

（何松濤）3.Moreimportantly,whenwemeetdifficultiesandfeelupset,itisfriendsthathelpus.(曾森源）4.Youshouldtreatyourfriendsasyouwanttobetreated.(許文浩）5.Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetternottobelievethosewholeaveyoueasily.(紀株棋）6.Althoughourfriendsarefarfromus,westillwanttoshareourhappinessandsadnesswiththem.（羅曉宜）7.Youmustlearntotreatyourfriendsthewayyouwantyourfriendstotreatyou.(謝柯潼）寫作亮點meetfeelhelps

DearHenry，I’mgladtohearfromyou,butI’mafraidIdisagreewithyou.AsfarasI’mconcerned,friendsplayanimportantpart/roleinourdailylife.Whenweareintroubleorfeelupset,itisourfriendswholendusahand.Wearewillingtoshareoursorrowsaswellasourjoysnomatterhowfarawaywearefromeachother.Pleasetreatyourfriendsthewayyouwanttobetreated.Besides,don’tbelieveinthosewholeaveyoueasilybecause“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Bestwishes.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,XiaoWeidongonepossibleversion:Practicemakesperfect!Studyhardeverydayandimproveyourwritingstepbystep:加強基礎詞匯和基本句子結構學習提高綜合運用復合句的能力注意句子間的過渡與銜接仿寫、背誦、熟讀話題范文H