高三第一次質(zhì)量檢測讀后續(xù)寫-萬圣節(jié)的意義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

TheannualHalloweenarrived,duringwhichkidsdressedintraditionalclotheswenttoneighbor'shousesto

askforcandy.

Allisonlivedinasmalltown.Thatdayafterdinner,Allisonputonherdressherfatherhadjustboughtforher.Thedresswascheapandsecond-handbecauseherfamilywaspoor.ButAllisonstillthankedherdadandsaid,"Everyonewilllovemydress!"Then,sheleftfor

neighbors’

housestoaskforcandy.

Ontheway,shecameacrossAnnaandherfriendsandwantedtojointhem."No!Lookatyourdress!It'sugly!"Annasaid.Herfriendsalsolaughed."Lookatourdresses,especiallymine!It'snewandbeautiful,"Annaadded.Herfriendsnodded,andinsomewaytheywereright.Anna'sdresswasshinyandlookedexpensive.Shealwayshadthebestclothesbecause

herparentswererich.

Allisonwasshockedandsad.Thekidsnotonlydislikedherdressbutmadefunofit."Youcan'tcomewithus!"Annastressed.

“Wewouldneverhangoutwithyou!"Theotherkidsagreedandlaughed.TheyalllefttostartcollectingcandyforthenightwhileAllisonwas

leftalone,embarrassedinthemiddleofthe

street.

Anyway,sheknewalltheneighbors.Sheoftenhelpedaroundcarryingtheirgroceriesandhelpingthemwiththeirgardens.Peoplearoundthereknewher.Shedidn'tneedtohangoutwithAnnaorherfriends."I'llgojustalone,"thelittlegirlsaidtoherselfandstarted

walking.

SheaswellasAnnaandherfriendswalkedinthesamedirection:

towardstheirfirstneighborMrsVaughan'shouse.ButAllisonwalkedbehindandkeptherdistancefromthem.

AndshestoppedwhenAnnaandherfriendswerenearMrsVaughan'shouse.

Justthen,MrsVaughanlookedoutofherwindow.ShenoticedthatAllisonwasbeingexcludedbyAnnaandherfriends.SheknewitwasprobablybecauseofAllison'spoordress.

SheimmediatelyfeltpityforAllison,whooftenhelpedherandotherneighbors.Shedecided

togiveAllisonmuchmorecandyasarewardandteachAnnaandherfriendsalesson.參考答案:

WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.

Thegirlsgreetedher,showedofftheirbeautifulclothesandaskedforcandy.MrsVaughan,whoheldabagofsweets,askedthemtowaitforamoment.Then,shewavedtoAllison,callingout,

“Dear,comehere!”

WhenAllisoncame,MrsVaughansaid,“Oh,howbeautifulyouaretoday!”

Then,shegaveAllisonmostofhercandyalthoughthegirldeclined.WhenAllisonwalkedaway,MrsVaughandividedtherestofthecandyamongAnnaandherfriends,whowerealittleangryandconfused.

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Annalookedupandsaid,

“Ourclothesaremorebeautiful!ButyougaveAllisonmore

candy!Why?”MrsVaughanlookeddowncalmlyandexplainedthatAllisonwasalwaysfriendlytoneighbors.

“Shehasgreatinnerbeauty.Innerbeautyismoreimportant.Whynotbefriendswithher?”

MrsVaughanadded.Hearingthat,Annaandherfriends’

facesturnedredandtheyrealizedtheyhaddonesomethingwrong.TheysaidgoodbyetoMrsVaughan,caughtupwithAllison,andsincerelyinvitedAllisontojointhem.Allisonnoddedgladlyandhadnewfriends,whowouldnolongerjudgeherbyherclothes.

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下水作文1:

WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.“Trickortreat?!”amixtureofjoyouscriesandmischievousyellspoundedhereardrums.Annaandherfriendsstoppedherinthedoorway,eyesgluedtothecandybaginherhand.

Asdesigned,

MrsVaughan

gavethemeach5candiesonebyonewhilelookingaroundasifsearchingforsomeone.

“WhereisAllison?Isawherwalkingbehindyouthroughmywindow.”

SheelbowedherwaythroughthecrowdandnoticedAllisonstandingfarinthecorner.“Comehere,Allison！Hereisyourcandy.”

WhenAllisoncamenear,MrsVaughan

pouredtherestintohercuppedhands,leavingallthekidsconfused.(105)

Annalookedupandsaid,“Ourclothesaremorebeautiful!ButyougaveAllisonmore

candy!Why?”

StaringintoAnna’seyes,MrsVaughan

repliedsmilingly,

“IgaveAllisonmorecandynotbecauseofherpoordressbutbecauseofherkindacttoourcommunity.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanouterbeauty.”

Withshameinhereyes,AnaadmittedtheywerewrongtoexcludeAllison.ShekindlypulledAllisonoverandaskedhimtojointhem,promisingnevertoleavehimalone.Satisfiedatthescene,

MrsVaughan

smiled.Shefetchedanothercandybagandletthemshare.(82)

下水文2：WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit."Treatortrick!theyexclaimedwithplainthrill,anticipatingthattheywouldreceivealoadofcandles.Whereas,thereonlycameahandfulofcandiescandy,whichgrantedjustseveralcandyforeachone.ItwasatthattimethatAlisonpluckeduphercouragetopadcloser,holdingthebeliefthattheywouldleavewiththecandy.Noticingherapproaching.MrsVaughanextendedwarmwelcometothetimidgirl,distinctfromthewayshetreatedotherkids.Overpoweredbycuriosityandindigance,theystoodstill,evenmorevexedtofindthatAllisongainedmuchmorethanthem.Annalookedupandsaid,“Ourclothesaremorebeautiful!ButyougaveAllisonmorecandy!Why?”"Appearance,includingclothes,doesn'tmatteratall,"MrsVaughanexplainedpatientlybutstrictly.Thestatementpuzzledthekidsalot.butagleamofmovementandconfidenceglintedinAllisonseyes.MrsVaughanthencontinuedwithAllison'sdailyassistanceandhontheyexcludedherforherpoverty.whichsheobservedbefore.ThesewordsdroveAnna'sandherfriends'headsduckinshame.Itwas_notlongbeforeAnnaraisedherhead_andapologizedtoAllisongenuinelyforherprejudiceandrudebehavior,andAllson,hereyesmistingover,offeredtosharehercandy.RestingonthedoorMrsVaughanheavedasighofrelief.下水文3：WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.Shejusthandedoutonecandytoeachofthem.HardlyhadAnnabegantoshowoffherbrightdresstoaskformorecandy,MrsVanghanshookherhead,wavedtoAllisonwhopoppedherlittleheadaroundthegateandgaveherabigboxofcolorfulcandies.AstrongsenseofpuzzlementfloodedcrossedAnna..Withhervisionblurred,sheglaredatMrsVanghanandAllisonsweptpasthershockedfriendswhowerespottedtotheground,burstintotearsandstormedoutofthegarden.MrsVanghanimmediatelycaughtupwithhe