人教版（2019）必修 第一冊Unit 1 Teenage life Reading for Writing 建議信 講義

必修一unit1teenagelife如何寫建議信寫作指導建議信屬于應用文范疇,通過提供足夠的信息和理論依據(jù),讓對方采取一定的行動或接受你的建議,改變對方的想法或做法。寫作時注意建議信的語氣一定要委婉,而且一定要符合英語信件的基本格式。另外,還要注意所舉例子的力度,也就是例子的說服力和可信度。說服力是指要用邏輯和論據(jù)讓對方產(chǎn)生共鳴,從而贊同你的觀點;可信度是指要用具體的事實證明你的觀點或者建議是可靠的。常用表達You'dbetterdo...2.Youshoulddo...3.Youneedtodo...4.IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...5.Ifhewerehere,hewoulddo...6.Whynot/Whydon'tyou...?7.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...8.As/SofarasIamconcerned,Iplanto...9.Foronething...;foranother...10.Inconclusion,Isupportthestatementthat...11.Accordingtoallthereasons/conclusionsabove,itisclear/obviousthat...Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration/account,wemayreachtheconclusionthat...素材積累1.必備詞塊①征求某人的建議：askforsb’sadvice②在某方面給某人提建議:give/offersb.advice/tips/suggestionsonsth.③提出一些建議:makesomeadvice/suggestions④接受某人的建議:accept/take/followsb.’sadvice⑤在某方面有困難:havetrouble/difficultywithsth.⑥做某事有困難:havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.⑦在某方面有問題:haveproblemswithsth.⑧在我看來:inmyopinion;personally;asfarasI'mconcerned2.必備句型(1)表明寫信目的①Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein...NowI'dliketoofferyousomeadvice.②Hearingthatyouhavetroublein...,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice./I'mverypleasedtoknowthat...Herearesomeofmysuggestions.③Learningthat...,Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowtodoitwell.(2)闡述建議①Asforthesuggestionson...,firstofall,...Secondly,...Inaddition,...②FromwhereIstand,...Besides,...Lastbutnotleast,...③Foronething,...Foranother,...What'smore,...(3)表達希望①Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou./Ihopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpful.②Ihopethatmysuggestionsprovetobeusefulinsolvingyourproblems.③Iwillbehappyifmysuggestionsturnouttobepractical.④I'llbehappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.典例假定你是高一學生李華。班里有一名初中時一直很優(yōu)秀的學生王毅,但進入高中后考試成績不佳,他感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封信:1.幫他分析原因;2.給他提出建議;3.陳述你幫助他的具體打算。注意;1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearWangYi,I'mverysorrytolearnyourpresentcondition.Yours,LiHua審題1.體裁:應用文2.人稱:以第二人稱為主3.時態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時為主佳作展示DearWangYi,I'mverysorrytolearnyourpresentcondition.Inmyopinion[1],somethingmustbewrongwithyourmethodofstudies[2].Inaddition[3],youareexperiencingtoomuchpressure,whichdoesgreatharmtoyou[4]Therefore,youshouldchangeabit.First[5],youshouldfollowtheteachers,andunderstandalltheyhavetaughtinclass.Second[5],youshouldmakeyourownplan,andimproveyourselfbitbybit.Third[6],youshouldlearntorelax.Forexample[6],youcanwalk,chatafterclass,orplaytabletennissometimes.Ifyouarewillingtotalktome(7],youcancallmeorsendmeanemail.Hopeyouwillgetusedtothenewlifeandhaveyourgradesimproved[8]soon.Yours,LiHua點評 [1]用Inmyopinion加以過渡，顯得自然得體，很順暢地切入主題。[2]用somethingmustbewrongwith...鎖定其中的一個原因,恰到好處。[3]Inaddition這一銜接短語較and略顯高級，引出了另外一個導致成績不佳的原因。[4]which引導的非限制性定語從句,使語句之間銜接更緊密。 [5]采用First,Second和Third這三個銜接詞提出建議,使得行文層次分明。 3. [6]用Forexample引出可行性建議。[7]采用條件句配以bewillingtodosth.短語，使語氣顯得