五講開頭結(jié)尾句型社會(huì)文化類

雅思寫作突破Lesson5Jack寫作過程審題：30seconds打腹稿：2minutes下筆如有神：17-37minutesTask2模板句拓展舉例(fromShaw’sprefacetoMajorBarbara,pages43-44)GeorgeBernardShawTask2思路和模板Iam,andhavealwaysbeen,andshallnowalwaysbe,arevolutionarywriter,becauseourlawsmakelawimpossible;ourlibertiesdestroyallfreedom;ourpropertyisorganizedrobbery;ourmoralityisanimpudenthypocrisy;ourwisdomisadministeredbyinexperiencedormalexperienceddupes,ourpowerwieldedbycowardsandweaklings,andourhonorfalseinallitspoints.Iamanenemyoftheexistingorderforgoodreasons.開頭段句型舉例EXPRESSINGTHOUGHTSADNOPINIONSIthasbeenaroundfifteenyearssincetheinternetwasintroducedintoBritishhouseholds/butpeoplestillhavemixedviewson/whetheritisapositiveornegativeinfluenceonsociety.犀利地表示個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)ItaketheviewthatIamoftheopinionthat...issue=problemcontentious/controversial/difficult/thornyissue有爭(zhēng)論的問題；難題；棘手的問題raiseandsettleanissueRaisinganissueisonething;settlingitisanotherone.address/consider/dealwith/examine/exploreanissue解決/考慮/處理/調(diào)查/探究issueabout/concerning/relatingto…有關(guān)/涉及…的問題適合discussion問題的開頭Theissue/discussion/topic/problemabout/ofsthisofgreatinterest/concern/importance/significanceamongthegeneralpublicrecently.1.Theissueof···isofgreatinterestto···e.g.Theissueofwhetherthepracticeofrequiringstudentstowearschooluniformswillaffecttheirpersonalityisofgreatinteresttomanypeople.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2.Thetopicof···isofgreatconcernfor···e.g.Thetopicofwhetheritisappropriateandeffectivetousecorporalpunishment(體罰)

onyoungchildrenisofgreatconcernformanypeople.CulturalpracticesAttitudetowardshowtoeducatetheirchildrenGooglecorporalpunishment3.Thediscussionabout···isofgreatsignificanceto···e.g.Thediscussionaboutthemosteffectivewaytoprovidefinancialandtechnologicalsupportstothird-worldcountriesisofgreatsignificancetobothindustrializedanddevelopingcountries.4.Theinquiryinto··hastriggered/sparkedanintensecontroversyintherealmof···e.g.Theinquiryintothemoralityofconductinganimalresearchhastriggeredanintensecontroversyintherealmofmedicalscience.適合agree/disagree的開頭句1.Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthat···,thisisactuallynotthecase.e.g.Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthatincreasingthenumberofsportsfacilitiesisthebestwaytoimprovepublichealth,thisisactuallynotthecase.2.Althoughthereceivedopinionisthat···,theharshrealityusuallyturnsouttobeacompletelydifferentpicture.e.g.Althoughthereceivedopinionisthatschoolchildrengenerallybenefitfromwatchingtelevisionandusingotherhigh-techmediaintheirlearningprocess,theharshrealityusuallyturnsouttobeacompletelydifferentpicture.3.Althoughmanypeoplesubscribeto(agreewith/believein)thebeliefthat···,thisisinfactacommonmisconceptionthatweneedtoclearup.e.g.Althoughmanypeoplesubscribetothebeliefthatprovidingpubliclibraryfacilitiesandservicesisawasteoftaxpayer’smoney,thisisinfactacommonmisconceptionthatweneedtoclearup.4.Althoughmostindividualsareconvincedthat···,thisisactuallyapopularmyth(idea/beliefwhichisuntrue)thatmustbeexploded.e.g.Althoughmostindividualsareconvincedthattheirhappinessiscloselylinkedwiththeleveloftheirfinancialsuccess,thisisactuallyapopularmyththatmustbeexploded.表示趨勢(shì)的開頭句Therehasbeen…

agrowingtrendthat···

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acommonpracticethat···

awidespread/popular/prevalentphenomenonthat···e.g.Therehasbeenawidespreadphenomenonthatstudentsfromruralareasfinditincreasinglydifficulttohaveaccesstocollegeoruniversityeducation.時(shí)間做主的開頭句Recentdecadeshavewitnessedamajortransformationin···e.g.句子翻譯：過去的十年見證了人們交流方式的革命性的轉(zhuǎn)變Thepastdecadehaswitnessedarevolutionarychange/transformationinthewayofhumancommunication//inthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachotherinmoderncontext.另類開頭段舉例1IntheaftermathofthemassacreatSandyHookElementarySchool,lastDecember,therehasbeenmuchpublicdiscussionaboutthenecessityofgreatervigilanceregardingmental-healthissues.But,astheAmyBishopstorymakesclear,thiskindofearly-warningsystemisoftendifficulttoinstituteinpractice.另類開頭段舉例2Concernsabouttheairqualityonplanesarenothingnew,butarecentlawsuitreignitesadebateoverwhetheritcouldpotentiallybeharmful.BritishAirways(BA)defendeditssafetyprotocolsafteraposthumouscourtcasewasfiledonbehalfofoneoftwoformerpilotswhoclaimedthattheyhadbeenpoisonedbytoxiccabinfumes.ClichéHackneyedtopic/debate老生常談的話題/討論另類開頭段舉例3Aspoliticiansandpolicymakers/decisionmakersdigestterriblegrossdomesticdata,thedebateabouthowtoetheeurozonecrisishasbeenrekindled.當(dāng)大城市的市民遭受著極其糟糕的空氣污染之時(shí)，有關(guān)日益惡化的空氣質(zhì)量之潛在危害又成為公眾熱烈討論之話題。Whileresidentsinsomebigcitiesaresufferingfromterribleairpollution,thedebateaboutthepotentialharmofdeteriorating/aggravationofairqualityhasbeenrekindled/reignited.結(jié)尾段句型1.Giventheaboveargument,itisfairly

reasonabletoconcludethat…e.g.Giventheaboveargument,itisreasonabletoconcludethatifeverymemberofthesocietyisawareoftherelationshipbetweenhumansandnatureandstopstheirdestructivebehavior,itisgoingtoalleviate/mitigatethepressureofecosystem/biosphere.2.Basedontheaboveargument,Iconcedethat…However,…e.g.Basedontheaboveargument,Iconcedethatusingairfreightcomeswithsomeunpleasantside-effects.However,ithasbroughtpeopleunprecedentedconveniencewithavarietyofunseasonalfruitsandvegetables.3.Accordingtothediscussionabove,Iamconvincedthat…e.g.Accordingtothediscussionabove,Iamconvincedthataslongaspeopleturnthemassmediatogoodaccount(turn/putsthtogoodaccount),theycanconstantlybenefitfromitsfavorablefunctions.4.Inconclusion,Iwouldliketorestate/reiteratemyviewpointthat…e.g.Inconclusion,IwouldliketorestatemyviewpointthatreadingcanbetterdevelopourimaginationandlanguageskillsratherthanwatchingTV.ROI投資回報(bào)率；productmix產(chǎn)品結(jié)構(gòu)

G&Aexpense管理費(fèi)用(generalandadministrativeexpense)ReportThesedays,manypeoplelivinginbigcitiesdonotgotomuseumswithobjectsofhistorical,artisticandculturalvalue.Whatarethecauses?Howisitimportanttosociety?(2012.12.15)(社會(huì)文化類)詞匯multicuturalsociety多元文化社會(huì)corevalues核心價(jià)值觀詞匯assimilateintoanewculture融入新文化aclose-knitcommunity聯(lián)系緊密的社區(qū)asenseofalienation疏離感asenseofbelongingness歸屬感審題+打腹稿題型:report原因？1.distractions:toomany2.toobusy(workers&schoolchildren)3.government(notfree&publicawareness)重要性？1.education2.preservation/protection3.localtourism開頭段1.Thesedays,itseemsnotmonthatpeoplelivinginmanybigcitiesdonotpayavisittolocalmuseums.(versionA)1.Museum,onceapopulareducationalandentertainingtoolinhumansociety,seemstobelosingitsprevalenceinmanybigcities.(versionB)2.Inthefollowingessay,ananalysisofthepossiblecausesandthesignificanceofmuseumsinthesocietywillbegivenindetail.填空練習(xí)3.The_____forthis________aremany.4.The______oneisthat________,especiallyyoungpeople,are______bysomany______distractionslikesmartphonesoripadthattheyseldom______athoughtforpayingavisittolocalmuseums.主體段13.Thecausesforthisphenomenonaremany.4.Theprimaryoneisthatcitydwellers,especiallyyoungpeople,aresurroundedbysomanydigitaldistractionslikesmartphonesoripadthattheyseldomspareathoughtforpayingavisittolocalmuseums.4.Theprimaryoneisthatpeople’sentertainingactivitiesareingmorediversified/diversewithgallopingmoderntechnologysuchassmartphones,internet,socialmedia,etc.,whichexplainswhyanincreasingnumberofpeoplefindmuseumsnothingbutboringplaces.主體段15.Furthermore,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat

white-collarworkersinmodernsocietyarefacedwithenormousworkpressureinbigcities.Asaresult/consequently,theycanhardlysparesometimetoappreciatethewonderfuldisplays/exhibitsinthemuseum.主體段16.Anotherfactorcontributingtothisphenomenonisthatgovernmentauthoritiesfailtheirdutyinsomecasestoencouragecitizenstoenjoythosepublicfacilitiestothelargestextent.主體段17.Forexample,manymuseumsarenotfreeofcharge

(i.e.theyshouldbeopenforfreetothepublicatleastforsometimeduringtheyear);authoritieshavenotlaunchedenoughpubliccampaigns

atalargerscale,especiallyinmanydevelopingcountriestoraisepeople’sawarenessoftheirreplaceableroleofmuseums.Launchpad火箭發(fā)射架主體段28.Withregardtohowimportantmuseumsaretosociety,theyplayanessential/crucialroleinthesphere/domainofpubliceducationandpreservationofhumancivilization.9.Tobeginwith,nowherecanwefindaplacelikeamuseuminwhichartsandhistoryarepresentedinsuchavividandentertainingwayforthepurposeofcultivatingamorecivilizedpublicattitudeinmodernsociety.主體段210.Moreimportantly,amuseumservesasaprotectorforpreservinghumanhistory,cultureandarts/humancivilization.BythisImeanthatwecanensureculturalinheritancewithinacityorentiresocietyforfuturegenerations/ouroffsprings/posterity.11.tourism>economyentity結(jié)尾段11.Allthingsconsidered(通盤考慮起來),thecausesdiscussedaboveareseeminglyunderstandableyet

mirroranegativeorevenpathetictrendconsideringthetwoimportantfunctionsofmuseumsinmoderntimes.12.Hopefully,“tovisitornottovisit”willnotbethequestionwithcollaborationofcityresidentsandgovernmentauthoritiesintheforeseeablefuture.2012.11.8社會(huì)生活類Todaymorecouplesdecidetohaveababyatanolderage.Whatarethepossiblecausesforthis?Isitapositiveornegativetrendforfamiliesandsocietyasawhole?開頭段Inrecentyears,thereseemstobeatrendthatanincreasingnumberofmenandwomenhavemadethechoiceofhavingababyatanolderage.Personally,Iregardthisasanegativetrendforbothfamiliesandsocietyatlarge.Thepossiblecausesofthisphenomenonwillbeprovidedinthefollowingessay.主體段1Therearethreemajorunderlyingcausesforthispopulartrend.Firstandforemost,thefinancialpressureofyoungcouplescontributesasthefundamentalfactorconsideringtheaverageeofyoungcouplesnowadays.Inadditiontothat,somewhite-collarworkersdevote/dedicatealltheirheartsandtimetotheircareer.Lastofall,theirresponsibilityofsomeyoungcouplestodayalsoexplainswhytheyhavemadethisdecision.主體段2Asfortheinfluenceofthistrend,peoplehavemixedviewsyetIamconvincedthatitisanegativeoneinthelongrun.Fromtheperspectiveofeugenics,itisnotphysiologicallysuitabletohaveababyatanolderageforbothparentsand

babyitself.Itisacommonlyacceptedfactthatitisbetterforcouplestohaveababybeforetheageofthirty.主體段2What'smore,itwillworsen/aggravatetheproblemofpopulationageing.Withdecliningfertilityandmortalityrate,theproportionofagedpeople//theold//seniorcitizenswillebiggercorrespondinglyataneverincreasingrate.This,inturn,givesmuchpressuretothelabourmarket(i.e.labourshortage)andthecreativityandvigorofsociety.Thegovernmentalsohasagreaterburdentobearinregardtopensionandhealthcare.結(jié)尾段Insummary,Iwouldliketorestatemyopinionthatthisphenomenonwillhavebothshort-termandlong-termnegativeinfluenceonfamiliesandthesocietyasawhole

thoughsomeofthecausesarequiteunderstandable.Thisissuecallsfor/demandsjointeffortsofgovernmentandyoungparentstogiveafeasiblesolutionconsideringthecurrentandunforeseeable/potentialhazardsintheyearstocome/ahead.GenderdiscriminationintheworkplaceSomepeoplebelieveeverykindofjobshouldhireequalnumberofmenandwomen.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?開頭段Inthebusinessworld,thereseemstobemoremalebusinessleadersandmaleemployees.Thussomecriticsofthisphenomenonsuggestthathiringanequalnumberofemployeesshouldbetakenintoconsiderationtoavert(避免)thistrend.Formypart,however,thisproposalislikesomewhatadaydream－thoughitiswell-intentioned.讓步段Supportersofhiringequalnumberofmaleandfemaleemployeeshavetheirownreasons.Itiswidelyknownthatgenderdiscriminationintheworkplaceisquiteprevalentnotonlyindevelopingcountries,butindevelopedworldaswell.Hencethisproposalisatleastabigstepforwardfortheendeavoroffightingforfeminism.