專題19讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)緊張背誦與測試（詞-句-文）講義-2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典

《2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典》專題19讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)感動(dòng)背誦與測試（詞句文）講義解析版背誦積累區(qū)：背誦遷移舉一反三一、必背單詞1.緊張類形容詞：nervous

緊張的；uneasy

不安的；

tense

緊張的；anxious

焦慮的；restless

不安的；uptight

緊張的2.緊張類名詞：nervousness,unease,tension,anxiety,restlessness二、高頻語塊1.one’sheartsinks心頭一沉2.takeadeepbreath深呼吸3.holdone’sbreath屏住呼吸4.pacebackandforth來回踱步5.sitonpinsandneedles如坐針氈6.aflood/waveoftension一陣緊張7.tremblewithanxiety焦慮不安8.withbutterfliesinone'sstomach心里發(fā)慌9.hide/conceal/holdbackone'sanxiety掩飾緊張／焦慮10.withone’sheartinone’smouth提心吊膽地11.beburdened/beconsumed/seizedwithanxiety焦慮不安12.pound/beat/race/thump/hammerwildly/violently心怦怦直跳得厲害13.shiver/quiver/tremble/shakewithnervousness緊張得發(fā)抖14.murmurinatremblingvoice用顫抖的聲音小聲喃喃15.stammer/stutterunderone’sbreath結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地小聲說三、佳句賞析1.His

nervousness

depriveshimofthepowerofspeech.他緊張得說不出話來。feltso

nervous

thatI

couldn'tmoveaninch.

我很緊張，一步也挪不動(dòng)。3.Her

heartbeatwildly

andherlegstrembled.

她的心劇烈跳動(dòng)，腿打著顫。4.Fullofanxiety,

Ifeltlike

sittingonpinsandneedles.

我焦慮不安，坐立不安。5.Hecouldfeelthethunderousbeatofhisheart.他能感覺到心臟雷鳴般的跳動(dòng)。6.Hewas

pacingnervouslyupanddown

theroom.他緊張地在房間里踱來踱去。7.My

heartbegantorace

and

mymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，頭腦一片空白。8.He

nervouslymoistenedhislipswithhistongue.他緊張地用舌頭濕潤了一下嘴唇。9.Jerryhadhadaharddayand

hisnerveswereonedge.Jerry累了一天,神經(jīng)很緊張。10.His

faceturnedpale

andstoodtheretonguetied.

他的臉色蒼白，站在那里說不出話。11.Mylipsquivered,

bigtearsrollingdowncheeks.我的嘴唇顫抖著，眼淚順著臉頰滾落。12.Beforethefinalexam,Ialways

havebutterfliesinmystomach.期末考試前，我總是緊張不安。13.Hespokethrough

clenchedteeth,strugglingtokeephisvoicesteady.

他咬緊牙關(guān)說話，努力保持聲音穩(wěn)定。14.Whilewaiting,his

heartbeatwildly

and

hispalmsweresweaty.等待的時(shí)候,他的心跳得很厲害,手心出汗。15.WhenIfinallywentonthestage,

myheartwasinmymouth.當(dāng)我終于走上舞臺(tái)時(shí)，我的心都提到嗓子眼兒了。16.SoanxiousdidIfeelthatmyheart

almostjumpedoutofmythroat.我太著急了，以至于我的心都快跳出來了。17.Withthebusgettingcloserandcloser,

hissweatrandownhisforehead.隨著公交車越來越近，他的汗水順著額頭流下來。18.Standinginfrontoftheline,Emily

feltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.

站在隊(duì)伍的前面，艾米麗感到喉嚨緊繃，手心出汗。測試鞏固區(qū)：分級(jí)測試步步為贏一、高頻語塊漢譯英1.深呼吸2.屏住呼吸3.如坐針氈4.一陣緊張5.焦慮不安6.心里發(fā)慌7.掩飾緊張／焦慮8.提心吊膽地9.心怦怦直跳得厲害10.緊張得發(fā)抖【參考答案】1.takeadeepbreath深呼吸2.holdone’sbreath屏住呼吸3.sitonpinsandneedles如坐針氈4.aflood/waveoftension一陣緊張5.tremblewithanxiety焦慮不安6.withbutterfliesinone'sstomach心里發(fā)慌7.hide/conceal/holdbackone'sanxiety掩飾緊張／焦慮8.withone’sheartinone’smouth提心吊膽地9.pound/beat/race/thump/hammerwildly/violently心怦怦直跳得厲害10.shiver/quiver/tremble/shakewithnervousness緊張得發(fā)抖二、佳句賞析漢譯英1.我很緊張，一步也挪不動(dòng)。2.她的心劇烈跳動(dòng)，腿打著顫。3.我焦慮不安，坐立不安。4.他緊張地在房間里踱來踱去。5.我的心跳加速，頭腦一片空白。6.他的臉色蒼白，站在那里說不出話。7.期末考試前，我總是緊張不安。8.等待的時(shí)候,他的心跳得很厲害,手心出汗。9.我太著急了，以至于我的心都快跳出來了。10.站在隊(duì)伍的前面，艾米麗感到喉嚨緊繃，手心出汗。【參考答案】1.Ifeltso

nervous

thatI

couldn'tmoveaninch.

我很緊張，一步也挪不動(dòng)。2.Her

heartbeatwildlyandherlegstrembled.

她的心劇烈跳動(dòng)，腿打著顫。3.Fullofanxiety,

Ifeltlike

sittingonpinsandneedles.

我焦慮不安，坐立不安。4.Hewas

pacingnervouslyupanddown

theroom.他緊張地在房間里踱來踱去。5.My

heartbegantorace

and

mymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，頭腦一片空白。6.His

faceturnedpale

andstoodtheretonguetied.

他的臉色蒼白，站在那里說不出話。7.Beforethefinalexam,Ialways

havebutterfliesinmystomach.期末考試前，我總是緊張不安。8.Whilewaiting,his

heartbeatwildly

and

hispalmsweresweaty.等待的時(shí)候,他的心跳得很厲害,手心出汗。9.SoanxiousdidIfeelthatmyheart

almostjumpedoutofmythroat.我太著急了，以至于我的心都快跳出來了。10.Standinginfrontoftheline,Emily

feltherthroattightandherpalmssweating.

站在隊(duì)伍的前面，艾米麗感到喉嚨緊繃，手心出汗。三、情感表達(dá)片段運(yùn)用請(qǐng)運(yùn)用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補(bǔ)充完整。WhenIfinishedhertestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.1(我在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)了一整夜，無法入睡).Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschooland2（緊張地)glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,3(感覺好像我的心都提到嗓子眼兒了).There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmyname.Inspired,Ipracticedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.WhenIwasstandingbackstage,4(緊張感席卷全身).WhenmynamewascalledIcould5(心里忐忑不安).Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould6(我手心冒汗,心跳加速).Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore7（不安的).8(我的心撲通撲通地好像要跳出來了).Atthatmoment,myeyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,whichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,theauditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers.【參考答案】When

I

finishedhertestingperformance,

I

thankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.Icouldn’tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenight.

Bythenextmorning,I

hurriedtotheschooland

nervously

glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,feelingasif

myheart

were

inmymouth.

There,atthetopofthelistwasposted

my

name.Inspired,

I

practicedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.When

I

wasstandingbackstage,

nervousness/tensioncamefloodingover

me.

WhenmynamewascalledIcould

feelbutterfliesinmystomach.

Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould

feelmypalmssweatingandheartracing.Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore

uneasy.

Myheartwaspounding/thumpinghard,asifitwereabouttopop.

Atthatmoment,my

eyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewith

me,whichtimelyput

my

heartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,

I

began

my

singing.When

I

finished,theauditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers.四、情感表達(dá)語篇運(yùn)用1.（2023上·重慶·高三重慶巴蜀中學(xué)校考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癕um!Dad!MyCAIEresult’sout,”exclaimedHala,sittinginfrontofherlaptoponherstudytable.HermotherranfromthekitchenandmovedclosertoHala,andherfathersprangfromthesofa.Smilingeartoear,Halafinallybrokethedreadfulsilence,“IgotanAinbiology,physics,additionalmathematicsandchemistry.TherestareAs.”HerfatherkissedHala’sforeheadandhadstarsinhiseyeswhenhesaid,“Onceagain,mydaughterhasmademeimmenselyproud.”“A*inbiology?Thensettobeadoctorandwalkinourfootsteps,huh?”saidhermotherwhowasanexcellentcardiologist.Onhearingit,Haladidn’tseemascheeryasshehadbeenwhenshehadannouncedherresults.Soon,Hala’seldersistercamefromhermedicalcollegeandwasexcitedbythisnews.SherushedstraighttoHala’sroomandcongratulatedher.“Bajjo,doyouexpectmetobeadoctoraswell?”TherewasashortsilenceafterwhichBajjoreplied,“Well,don’tyouwanttobe?Whenyouwerelittle,allyoucouldthinkaboutwasbeingadoctor,likefather.”“Iwanttobeeapilot,Bajjo!Iwanttoseetheworldfromabove.Iwanttogooutintheworldandseehowit’slike,”Halarepliedwithpersistence.Halawentovertothewindowandwatchedthecloudsasthoughimaginingherselfflyingthroughthecloudsalready.“Girlscanbepilots.Someday,you’llseemeflyingoutsideintheaeroplane,dancingwiththeclouds.”Halapointedtothesky.“Okay,”Bajjosighedclearlyfromtheexhaustionoftheuniversity,butalsofromthethoughtoftheupingdramainthehouse.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thoughhesitant,Halafinallydecidedtovoicewhatshehadbeenthinking._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atherinsistence,Halaenteredaflyingacademytoprovethatgenderisnoobstacle._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文】Thoughhesitant,Halafinallydecidedtovoicewhatshehadbeenthinking.Herpalmswerecold,yetshivering,frozentoesandbutterfliesinstomach.“Dad,I…Idon’twanttopursuemedicalscience,”saidHalainadeterminedmannerandcontinued,“Iwanttostudyaviation.”Thoughshocked,DadexplainedtoHalathattheyhadalreadypavedherwaytowardsmedicinebybeingexcellentdoctorswiththeirownprivateclinicsetup,whichshewouldjoinsomeday.Besides,asawoman,shemightfindaviationstudiestobeverydemanding.Herparentstoldtheirconcernstoher,butastheyalwaysencouragedhertobefirminherdecisions,shedidnotwanttochangehermind.Halalookedatherparentsandflashedamilliondollarsmile,“Iwon’tletyoudown,Ipromise.”Atherinsistence,Halaenteredaflyingacademytoprovethatgenderisnoobstacle.Gradually,Halarealizedthatgettingthepermissionfromherparentswasonlythetipoftheiceberg.Thenextfouryears,aswarnedbyherfather,wereextremelytiresome.Shehadtostudyroundtheclock.Andherrelativesdidn’tmakeiteasiereither,alwayssaying“medicalwassaferforgirls”.Butshewasn’tgoingtogiveupbecauseplanesalwaystakeoffagainstthewind,notwithit.Itiswellsaidthatuntilyouspreadyourwings,youhavenoideahowfaryou’llfly.Shewasdeterminedtodemonstratethathergenderwouldneverbeahurdleinhercareerandthatshecouldearnrespectandadmirationasapilot.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Hala成績優(yōu)異，從醫(yī)的父母想讓她學(xué)醫(yī)，姐姐也上了醫(yī)學(xué)院，但是她沒有聽從父母的建議去學(xué)醫(yī)，Hala想成為飛行員。經(jīng)過考慮，Hala告訴了父母自己的夢(mèng)想，父母很擔(dān)憂，但是最終也表示了理解和支持。最后Hala進(jìn)入了飛行學(xué)院，但她不打算放棄。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“雖然猶豫，Hala終于決定說出她一直在想什么”可知，第一段可描寫Hala告訴父母自己想當(dāng)飛行員的想法以及父母的反應(yīng)。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“在她的堅(jiān)持下，Hala進(jìn)入了一所飛行學(xué)院，以證明性別不是障礙”可知，第二段可描寫Hala進(jìn)入飛行學(xué)院，努力學(xué)習(xí)，如何克服性別障礙贏得尊重和欽佩。2.續(xù)寫線索：告知父母想法——父母表示擔(dān)憂——Hala堅(jiān)持——進(jìn)入飛行學(xué)院——努力學(xué)習(xí)——Hala感悟3.詞匯激活行為類決定：decide/makeupone’smind從事：pursue/undertake/takeup解釋：explain/illustrate情緒類吃驚：shocked/surprised堅(jiān)定：firm/mitted【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thoughshocked,DadexplainedtoHalathattheyhadalreadypavedherwaytowardsmedicinebybeingexcellentdoctorswiththeirownprivateclinicsetup,whichshewouldjoinsomeday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Butshewasn’tgoingtogiveupbecauseplanesalwaystakeoffagainstthewind,notwithit.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)2.（2023上·浙江臺(tái)州·高二校聯(lián)考期中）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Adandelion(蒲公英)keptinmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpractisedmylines(臺(tái)詞)sohardwithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator’s(旁白)parttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.Ididn’ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmypain,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Itwasalovelyspringdayandtherosevine(藤蔓)wasturninggreen.Underthehugetrees,wecouldseeyellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithalittlebitofgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested(抗議).“Allflowersarebeautifulevendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowerhasitsownbeauty,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,feelingpleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess.Hence,thereisnoshameinthat.”Relievedthatshehadsensedmypain,IstartedtocrywhenItoldherwhathadhappened.Shelistenedandsmiled.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在以下位置作答。Paragraph1:“Youwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”sheforted._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Istillfeltnervous._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文】“Youwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”sheforted.Uponhearingherfortingwords,Iheldbackmybittertears,lostindeepthought.Hardlyhadshenoticedthesadnessonmyfacesoftenalittlewhenshecaressedmyhair,adding,“Nooneisborntobeaprincess.Whynottakeadvantageofnarrator’spart?”Withmother’sencouragement,Ibegantoacceptthatthenarrator’spartwasofvitalsignificance.Inthefollowingweeks,everylunchtimewithmymotherwitnessedmymightyefforttopracticemypartoflines.Sofastdidtimepassthattheperformancedayarrived.Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Istillfeltnervous.Sweatoozingfrommypalms,itwasatthatverymomentthatIfoundadandelioninmypocket.Inaflash,Irealizedmymotherhadpassedtheflowertome,whichmeanttobeinpanywithme.Consumedwithcourageandconfidence,Iconcentratedonmypartandtheperformanceturnedouttobeagreatsuccess,theaudiencestandingupandburstingintothunderousapplause.Aftertheplay,Iputthedandelionintomydictionary,whichwasareminderofourpreciouslunchtimes,bathedinthesoftmiddaylight.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者小時(shí)候參加學(xué)校的戲劇表演，因嚴(yán)重怯場不得不放棄主演的角色，換作幕后的旁白；母親看到了作者的失落，于是用院子里蒲公英的美麗這個(gè)道理來開導(dǎo)作者的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容““你會(huì)成為一個(gè)美麗的旁白”，她安慰到?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫母親成功說服作者接受成為旁白的過程，讓作者明白小角色也很重要，也可以綻放美麗。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“演出當(dāng)晚，我在后臺(tái)感到緊張?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者如何克服緊張及這朵蒲公英對(duì)作者產(chǎn)生了什么影響。2.續(xù)寫線索：母親鼓勵(lì)和安慰作者——母親說服作者成為旁白——演出那天作者發(fā)現(xiàn)了蒲公英——作者把蒲公英帶回家——作者和母親關(guān)于蒲公英的對(duì)話——蒲公英對(duì)作者產(chǎn)生了的影響3.詞匯激活行為類①注意到：notice/takenoticeof/spot②利用：takeadvantageof/makeuseof③來到：arrive/e情緒類①悲傷：sorrow/sadness②充滿勇氣和信心：consumedwithcourageandconfidence/filledwithcourageandconfidence/courageousandconfident【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Hardlyhadshenoticedthesadnessonmyfacesoftenalittlewhenshecaressedmyhair,adding,“Nooneisborntobeaprincess.Whynottakeadvantageofnarrator’spart?”(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝，和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Inaflash,Irealizedmymotherhadpassedtheflowertome,whichmeanttobeinpanywithme.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)3.（2023上·江蘇·高三校聯(lián)考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OfficerJondawasdrivingonadangerousroadonecold,darkwinternight.Thestormmadeitdifficulttosee,butshecouldtellthecarinfrontofherwasswaying.Althoughitwasstillwithinitslane,Jondahadasixthsenseforaccidentsandlivedinterrorofthemeversincethatawfulnightsomanyyearsago.Shestillcouldn'tabolishtheterribleimageofthatteenagerscreamingforhelp,herhelp.Helpthatshehadbeenunabletogiveasshewasdrivenbackbytheintenseheatofthecarfire.ThesewerememoriesJondacouldneverreallyturnoff.Shecountedonhertrainingforsupport,andthesedayssheneverignoredanysignsofthenextaccident.Herpartner,David,tookthefirststep.

“Let’spullthatcaroverbeforesomeonegetshurt,”

hesaid.Thecaraheadsloweddown,butnotenoughtostop,andendedupslidingofftheroadintotheDaltonRiver.Jondaquicklystoppedherpolicecarandrushedtothewater'sedge,yellingatDavidtocallforbackup.Therainhadcausedtherivertoriseandthecarwashalfsubmerged(淹沒),trappedagainstatree,andthepassengerseatwasunderwater.Jondawasfilledwithasenseofdread.Intheheavyrain,shecouldbarelysee,butshecouldhearthetrappeddriverscreamingandbangingonthewindow.“Neveragain!”

Thisistoomuch,toofamiliar,Jondathought.Shecalledforthewindowhammer,rushingtowardsthecar.Thewaterwasrisingquickly,reachinguptoherwaistandchillinghertothebone.Shehadtoworkfastorriskedlosingfeelinginherlowerbody.Throughthewindow,shesawanoldwomannamedSandy,

chestdeepinwater,wearingaworkbadge.DavidcaughtupwithJondaandpassedherthewindowhammer.Jondayelledattheoldwomantoturnawayfromtheglass.Sheswungthehammer,butthethickglassbarelycracked.

Herheartsankassherealizedthatthecarwasslowlybeingfreedfromthetree.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Shestrucktheglassagain,andthistimeitbrokeintolittlepieces.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TearsstreameddownJonda'scheeksassheheldSandytightly.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________