專題15讀后續(xù)寫無靈主語仿寫訓(xùn)練五大類75例2（講義）-2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典

《2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典》專題15讀后續(xù)寫無靈主語仿寫訓(xùn)練五組75例2（講義）解析版第一類公式：主語(情感狀態(tài)的名詞)+有靈動詞+sb第二類公式：主語（身體部位/音容笑）+有靈動詞+sb第三類公式：主語（表示時間和地點的名詞）+有靈動詞+sb第四類公式：主語（表示自然現(xiàn)象的名詞）+有靈動詞+sb(一)常見此類名詞fog霧rain雨水snow大雪wind大風(fēng)earthquake地震sunshine陽光mist薄霧moonlight月光snowstorm暴雪(二)常見有靈動詞blanket覆蓋e到來bring帶來prevent阻止strike使突然想起hit擊中；使想到threaten威脅rule統(tǒng)治(三)句型常見含義風(fēng)雨……襲擊/籠罩/阻止……(四)經(jīng)典例句呈現(xiàn)1.濃霧籠罩著整個大地。Thethickfogblanketedthefield.2.午夜時分，天空變得更清晰，星星也變得更明亮。Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestarsgrewbrighter.3.一場暴風(fēng)雪今天襲擊西部地區(qū)，帶來了嚴(yán)寒低溫。（hit）AsnowstormhittheWesttoday,bringingwithitlowtemperatures.4.濃煙籠罩著整個小區(qū)。Thicksmokeblanketedthewholemunityfirmly.5.黑暗、陰雨的黃昏，風(fēng)和雷鳴的云把我完全控制在它們的力量之中。Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.即時訓(xùn)練一：完成下列各句1.突然下了一陣雨，風(fēng)停了。Asuddenshowerkilledthewind.2.大雨使游客無法欣賞滿月。Theheavyrainpreventedtouristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.3.夜安靜。除了我自己的心跳，什么聲音也聽不見。Thenightwasquiet.Notasinglesoundcouldbeheardexceptmyownheartbeat.4.涼爽的微風(fēng)吹過安靜的公園。Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.5.大雨傾盆，洪流暴漲，狂風(fēng)肆意沖擊房屋。Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.即時訓(xùn)練二：根據(jù)提示翻譯下列各句6.雪覆蓋了每一個屋頂，壓在老樹的樹枝上。(blanket)_______________________________________________________________________6.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.7.微風(fēng)輕撫著他的頭，仿佛撫慰了他所有的疲憊。(stroke)_______________________________________________________________________7.Thegentlebreezestrokedhishead,asiffortingallhistiredness.8.想到這個情景我心中充滿了恐懼。(fill)_______________________________________________________________________8.Thesightofthescenefilledmewithexcitement.9.友誼就像螢火蟲的光芒。顏色越暗，光線就越亮。(be)_______________________________________________________________________9.Friendshipislikethelightoffireflies.Thedarkeritis,thebrighterthelightwillbe.10.鵝毛般雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。(dance)_______________________________________________________________________10.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.第五類公式：主語（表示思考動作行為的名詞）+有靈動詞+sb(一)常見此類名詞thought想法absence缺乏presence出席到場glance瞥一眼look看一看idea主意feeling感覺sight看見visit訪問(二)常見有靈動詞remind使提醒make使得let讓drive促使send送走leave使得；離開overwhelm壓垮；淹沒arouse喚醒fill充滿change改變bring帶來occur使想起(三)句型常見含義……使人……(四)經(jīng)典例句呈現(xiàn)1.Abrilliantideasuddenlypoppedintomymind.我突然想到了一個絕妙的主意。2.Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothemuseum.步行十分鐘我們就走到了博物館。3.Theknockingsoundonthedoorputasuddenbraketoherthought.敲門聲突然打斷了她的思想。4.ThesightofthepictureremindsmeoftheunforgettabletriptoHangzhou.一看到這張照片我就想到了難忘的杭州之行。5.Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness.想到不久就要見到她的兒子，她心中感到十分快樂。即時訓(xùn)練一：完成下列各句1.仔細(xì)比較兩種方法就會發(fā)現(xiàn)其中的區(qū)別。Carefulparisonofthetwomethodswillshowyouthedifference.2.接觸不同文化可以促進創(chuàng)造性。Exposuretodiverseculturescanarousecreativity.3.好的習(xí)慣能提高效率，而壞的習(xí)慣恰恰相反。Goodhabitsleadtoefficiencywhilebadonesresultintheopposite.4.這個故事使我想起了一句諺語“不能以貌取人”。Thisstoryremindsmeofasayingthat“Neverjudgeapersonbyhisappearance”.5.應(yīng)當(dāng)認(rèn)真考慮健康和安全問題。Carefulconsiderationshouldbegiventoissuesofhealthandsafety.即時訓(xùn)練二：根據(jù)提示翻譯下列各句6.他的名字我一時想不起來了。(escape)____________________________________________________________________________6.Hisnameescapedmeatthemoment.7.我突然想到一個可怕的想法。(strike)____________________________________________________________________________7.Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.8.看到這個情景我心中充滿了恐懼。(fill)____________________________________________________________________________8.Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.9.專注于讀書讓他忘記了時間。(make)____________________________________________________________________________9.Beingabsorbedinbooksmadehimforgetthetime.10.他重游故居，不禁回憶起許多美好的回憶。(bring)____________________________________________________________________________10.Avisittotheplaceswherehehadlivedbroughtbackmanyfondmemories.讀后續(xù)寫“無靈主語”多角度訓(xùn)練一、用“無靈主語”改寫下列句子。1.Inthepastfouryears,ourproductionhasincreased.（改為時間作主語）____________________________________________________________________________Thepastfouryearshaswitnessedanincreaseinproduction.2.Atdusk,hewaswanderingaboutinthestreet.（改為時間作主語）____________________________________________________________________________Duskfoundhimwanderingaboutinthestreet3.Wewalkedfortenminutesandgottothehotel.（改為距離作主語）____________________________________________________________________________Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.4.Manygreathistoriceventshappenedinthecity.（改為地點名詞作主語）____________________________________________________________________________Thecityhadwitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.5.Iforgothisnameatthemoment.（改為狀態(tài)行為名詞作主語）____________________________________________________________________________Hisnameescaped/failedmeatthemoment.二、用“無靈主語”翻譯下列句子。1.你早點出發(fā)的話，中午就能到。____________________________________________________________________________1.Anearlystartwillgetyouthereatnoon.

2.他從未想到做志愿者的經(jīng)歷會對他之后的生活產(chǎn)生如此深遠(yuǎn)的影響。____________________________________________________________________________2.Itneveroccurredtohimthattheexperienceofavolunteerwouldhavesuchaprofoundeffectonhislaterlife.3.當(dāng)她打開盒子時，她的手激動得發(fā)抖。____________________________________________________________________________3.Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedthebox.4.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了。____________________________________________________________________________4.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.5.中國共產(chǎn)黨在上海成立。____________________________________________________________________________5.ShanghaiwitnessedthebirthoftheChinesemunistParty.6.似乎過了兩個小時，保羅叔叔的農(nóng)舍就出現(xiàn)了。____________________________________________________________________________6.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousecameintosight.7.我沒有注意到這一錯誤。____________________________________________________________________________7.Themistakeslipsmyattention.

8.我沒有時間把這一話題說完。____________________________________________________________________________8.Timefailsmetofinishthetopic.

9.沿著草地走上幾步，我就來到一個豪華的大賓館前。____________________________________________________________________________9.Afewstepsacrossthelawnbroughtmetoalarge,splendidhotel.10.想到不久就要見到她的兒子，她心中感到十分快樂。____________________________________________________________________________10.Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness.三、“無靈主語”一句多譯。1.一想到他的母親便使他吃不下飯。(appetite)①Hethoughtofhismotheranddidn’twanttoeat.②Thethoughtofhismothermadehimlosehisappetite.③Thethoughtofhismotherledtohislossofappetite.2.看到直升飛機，Jane高興地笑了起來。①Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.②Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.③Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'sfacelitupwithdelight.3.當(dāng)她知道考試結(jié)果時，她興奮極了。①Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.②Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasoverewithexcitement.③Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltthrilled.④Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.⑤Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.⑥Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.4.Sam感到非常生氣。①Samfeltveryangry.②Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.③Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.④Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.⑤Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.四、劃出下列短文中的“無靈主語”。However,findingitwasn’tsoeasy.Thesickpetwasblackwithawhitespotonthenose,whichwasuniquelyunmon.Herattempttofindnearbyinvain,aflushofdisappointmentsweptoverApril.However,atthethoughtofthegirl’smistyeyes,Aprilcontinuouslywenttoextraordinarylengthstofindamatchingpig.Fortunately,herpersistenteffortspaidoff.Inastore8kilometersawayfromherclinic,shefoundanidenticalpig.Hardlyhadshereturnedtotheclinicwhenshecalledthegirl,“Honey,goodnewsforyou.Dorothyhaspulledthroughandyoucantakeherhome!”O(jiān)nhearingthenews,thegirlhurriedtothepetstorewithhergrandmother.However,findingitwasn’tsoeasy.Thesickpetwasblackwithawhitespotonthenose,whichwasuniquelyunmon.Herattempttofindnearbyinvain,aflushofdisappointmentsweptoverApril.However,atthethoughtofthegirl’smistyeyes,Aprilcontinuouslywenttoextraordinarylengthstofindamatchingpig.Fortunately,herpersistenteffortspaidoff.Inastore8kilometersawayfromherclinic,shefoundanidenticalpig.Hardlyhadshereturnedtotheclinicwhenshecalledthegirl,“Honey,goodnewsforyou.Dorothyhaspulledthroughandyoucantakeherhome!”O(jiān)nhearingthenews,thegirlhurriedtothepetstorewithhergrandmother.五、片段訓(xùn)練—把劃線句子改成無靈主語句式Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwithfullconfidence.(1)Shebegantotalklikeaflashflood."Howcouldshemakeit?We'veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech."(2)ThewholeclasswhisperedtoeachotherandevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.(3)ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,theclassclappedforher.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth...1.____________________________________________________________________________2.____________________________________________________________________________3.____________________________________________________________________________1.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.2.Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.3.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.五、最新模擬試題演練Test1（2023上·河南南陽·高三統(tǒng)考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Aprilhasbeenavet(獸醫(yī))formanyyears.Throughoutherpractice,therehavebeenmanyunusualcases.Somewerequitesadandsomewereevenfunny.Butmostofallsherememberedonetimeonarainydayalittlegirlcametoherwithherlittleguineapig(豚鼠).ShewasintearsandaskedApriltosaveherbelovedpet.“Thisismyonlyfriend.IreallylovemyDorothy,”thegirlsaid.Aprilexaminedtheanimalandrealizedthatitwasveryill.Thepiglookedyoung.Probably,itwasalreadysickwhenitwassoldtothegirl.Thevetsawmanychildren’stears,andeachtimeshefeltawful.Butshealwaysfoundstrengthtosaythatshecouldn’tsavethepet.However,thistimeshelookedatthegirlandcouldn’tsayanything.Aprilsawhowsimplythegirlwasdressedandthoughtthatherfamilydidn’tmakealotofmoney.Therefore,thepigwasn'tjustapetforher,butarealtreasure.“Tellmeyourphonenumber,soIcancallyouaftertheoperation,”Aprilsaid.“I’llgiveyoumygrandmother’sphonenumber,becauseIlivewithher.Myparentsweregone.Grandmasaidthattheyhadgonesomewherefarandforalongtime.Bytheway,theygavemethepigbeforeleaving,”thegirlsaid.Aprilwrotedownthenumber,andwhenthegirllefttheclinic,sheburstintotears.Sherealizedherparentshaddiedandthegirldidn'tknowthetruthyet.Howcouldshetellherthatherguineapigwasgoingtodie?Aprillookedattheanimalhelplesslyandwonderedwhatshecoulddo.Suddenlyshecameupwithanidea.Butbeforedoingitsheputtheguineapigtosleep,andwenttothenearestpetstoreduringlunchtime.Shewantedtobuyexactlythesameguineapigandgiveittothegirl.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。However,findingitwasn'tsoeasy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn'tnoticetheswitch.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】However,findingitwasn’tsoeasy.Thesickpetwasblackwithawhitespotonthenose,whichwasuniquelyunmon.Herattempttofindnearbyinvain,aflushofdisappointmentsweptoverApril.However,atthethoughtofthegirl’smistyeyes,Aprilcontinuouslywenttoextraordinarylengthstofindamatchingpig.Fortunately,herpersistenteffortspaidoff.Inastore8kilometersawayfromherclinic,shefoundanidenticalpig.Hardlyhadshereturnedtotheclinicwhenshecalledthegirl,“Honey,goodnewsforyou.Dorothyhaspulledthroughandyoucantakeherhome!”O(jiān)nhearingthenews,thegirlhurriedtothepetstorewithhergrandmother.Hergrandmotherunderstoodeverything,butthegirldidn’tnoticetheswitch.Eyestwinklingwithexcitement,tearsofjoystreameddownhercheeks.Meanwhile,grandmadirectedameaningfullookatApril,agreatsenseofgratitudeflowinginheragedeyes,sayingtearfully,“Mydeardoctor,you’vereallysavedDorothyandalsoprotectedherowner’ssunshine.”Withherhandsheldtightlybygrandma,Apriltrulyrealizedatinygestureofkindnessmaybrightenupsomeone'slife.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.Withherheartlighteningupwithhappiness,Aprilwasdeterminedtokeepkindnessaliveinherclinicandguardeveryone’s“Dorothy”.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，主要講述了一位獸醫(yī)April多年來的一次特殊經(jīng)歷。在她的執(zhí)業(yè)生涯中，有許多不尋常的病例，有些令人傷心，有些甚至很有趣。但最讓她難忘的是在一個雨天，一個小女孩帶著她的小豚鼠來找她。April看到女孩樸素的穿著，想到她的家庭可能不富裕。因此，這只豚鼠對她來說不僅僅是寵物，而是真正的珍寶。她如何告訴她她的豚鼠即將死去呢？April無助地看著這只動物，想知道她能做些什么。突然，她想到了一個主意。但在這之前，她讓豚鼠入睡，并在午餐時間去了最近的寵物店。她想買一只完全一樣的豚鼠，并送給女孩的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然而，找到它并不容易?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫April經(jīng)過一番努力終于找到了一個一模一樣的豚鼠，并告訴了小女孩這個好消息。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“她的祖母什么都明白，但女孩沒有注意到這個換了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫小女孩非常開心，沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)那不是原來的豚鼠，她的祖母很感激April。2.續(xù)寫線索：不容易——白點——尋找——打——興奮——感激——緊握雙手——感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①尋找：find/search/pursue/seek②嘗試：attempt/endeavor/strive/explore③保護：protect/safeguard/defend情緒類①失望：disappointment/despair/discouragement/dismay②激動：excitement/thrill/ecstasy/euphoria【點睛】[高分句型1].Thesickpetwasblackwithawhitespotonthenose,whichwasuniquelyunmon.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2].Hardlyhadshereturnedtotheclinicwhenshecalledthegirl,“Honey,goodnewsforyou.(運用了Hardly…when結(jié)構(gòu)的倒裝句)Test2（2023·江蘇南通·統(tǒng)考二模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasmyveryfirsttriptoAfrica.WeweredrivingalongatrackthatskirtedthesouthernbankoftheChobeRiver,whenmyfriendsuddenlynoticedsomethingupahead—alargeshapejammedinbetweenacoupleofbigtrees,rightbesidetheroad.Weedgedthecarcloserand,tooursurprise,foundourselveslookingatayoungcalfsnuggled(偎依)upagainstasizeableelephant(mostprobablyitsmother).Ourdilemmanowwasthis:WasitOKtojustdriveslowlypastthepairofelephantsonthatnarrowtrack?Orwouldthatcausethemothertobeeupsetandcharge,inwhichcaseweshouldeitherwaitforthemtomoveonorturnthecararound?Abitunnervedbythecloseencounter,wechosetoheadbackthewaywe’de.Inthefollowingdays,IhadanumberofconversationswithnationalparkstaffandfellowtravelersaboutwhattodowhenyousuddenlyeacrossanelephantwhiledrivingintheAfricanwilds.SometimespeopletoldmeitwouldbeOKtoslowlydrivepastthemotherandcalf,becausethewildanimalsofChobehavebeeprettyusedtohumansincars.Elephantsseldomposeathreattous.Sothere’snoneedtoadoptanattitudeofpermanentnearpaniccalmdecisivenessisyourtrueally(助手)insuchsituations.ButthensometimesIwastoldtoswitchoffthecarandwaituntiltheelephanthaddepartedthescene.Theideawasthattherumble(隆隆聲)ofanautomotiveenginecouldbeinterpretedbytheanimalasakindofchallenge.Keepingsilentwouldreassuretheelephantthatyouweren’tgoingtocauseanytrouble,andeventuallyitwouldgoonitsmerryway.OK,thatalsosoundedreasonableenough.Aweeklater,myfriendandIweredrivingbyariver,watchingelephantsmeetonthewaterforadrink,andweredrivingbacktoourlodge(度假小屋)whenwefoundourrouteblockedbyayoungmaleelephant.Assurprisedaswewere,theelephantplantedhisfeetinthedirtandseeminglypreparedtofightagainstourcar.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Thetrackwasnarrowandborderedbythickbush,sowecouldn’tgoaroundhim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theelephantwalkedrightuptothecar.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thetrackwasnarrowandborderedbythickbush,sowecouldn’tgoaroundhim.Reversingbackthewaywe’dedidn’tappealeither,aswe’dprobablyrunintootherelephantsmakingtheirwaybackuptheriverbank.So,takingadeepbreath,myfriendturnedofftheengineandwebothwentasstillaspossible.Thefollowing15minutesorsorankassomeofthemostnervousandthrillingminutesI’dexperiencedsofarinAfrica.Wesatinourcar,unmovingandsilent.Theelephantwalkedrightuptothecar.Itbeganwavinghistrunkoverthehood,asiftryingtomakesenseofusbysniffing.Then,aswewatched,heraisedonebigfootintheairinfrontofusandbeganmovingitforwardandbackward,givingmeamomentaryvisionofbeingstampedintoametallicpancake.Eventually,theelephantlostinterestinus,wanderingofftochewsomenearbybranches,whenwestartedthecarandslowlyrolledaway.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者去非洲旅游的時候，遇到一頭年輕的公象，大象把腳踩在泥土里，似乎準(zhǔn)備和我們的車打架。幸好他們冷靜對待，關(guān)掉了引擎，安靜下來，終于成功逃過一劫?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“這條小路很窄，兩邊都是茂密的灌木叢，所以我們無法繞過他”可知，第一段可描寫作者他們是如何應(yīng)對這種情況的。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“大象徑直走向汽車”可知，第二段可描寫大象走過來之后發(fā)生的事情。2.續(xù)寫線索：無法繞開——關(guān)閉引擎——冷靜應(yīng)對——大象靠近——失去興趣——慢慢開走3.詞匯激活行為類開始：begin/start遇到：runinto/meet抬起：raise/lift情緒類緊張：nervous/intense短暫：momentary/temporary【點睛】[高分句型1]Reversingbackthewaywe’dedidn’tappealeither,aswe’dprobablyrunintootherelephantsmakingtheirwaybackuptheriverbank.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Then,aswewatched,heraisedonebigfootintheairinfrontofusandbeganmovingitforwardandbackward,givingmeamomentaryvisionofbeingstampedintoametallicpancake.(運用了as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)Test3（2023上·江蘇·高三校聯(lián)考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OfficerJondawasdrivingonadangerousroadonecold,darkwinternight.Thestormmadeitdifficulttosee,butshecouldtellthecarinfrontofherwasswaying.Althoughitwasstillwithinitslane,Jondahadasixthsenseforaccidentsandlivedinterrorofthemeversincethatawfulnightsomanyyearsago.Shestillcouldn'tabolishtheterribleimageofthatteenagerscreamingforhelp,herhelp.Helpthatshehadbeenunabletogiveasshewasdrivenbackbytheintenseheatofthecarfire.ThesewerememoriesJondacouldneverreallyturnoff.Shecountedonhertrainingforsupport,andthesedayssheneverignoredanysignsofthenextaccident.Herpartner,David,tookthefirststep.

“Let’spullthatcaroverbeforesomeonegetshurt,”

hesaid.Thecaraheadsloweddown,butnotenoughtostop,andendedupslidingofftheroadintotheDaltonRiver.Jondaquicklystoppedherpolicecarandrushedtothewater'sedge,yellingatDavidtocallforbackup.Therainhadcausedtherivertoriseandthecarwashalfsubmerged(淹沒),trappedagainstatree,andthepassengerseatwasunderwater.Jondawasfilledwithasenseofdread.Intheheavyrain,shecouldbarelysee,butshecouldhearthetrappeddriverscreamingandbangingonthewindow.“Neveragain!”

Thisistoomuch,toofamiliar,Jondathought.Shecalledforthewindowhammer,rushingtowardsthecar.Thewaterwasrisingquickly,reachinguptoherwaistandchillinghertothebone.Shehadtoworkfastorriskedlosingfeelinginherlowerbody.Throughthewindow,shesawanoldwomannamedSandy,

chestdeepinwater,wearingaworkbadge.DavidcaughtupwithJondaandpassedherthewindowhammer.Jondayelledattheoldwomantoturnawayfromtheglass.Sheswungthehammer,butthethickglassbarelycracked.

Herheartsankassherealizedthatthecarwasslowlybeingfreedfromthetree.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Shestrucktheglassagain,andthistimeitbrokeintolittlepieces.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TearsstreameddownJonda'scheeksassheheldSandytightly.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shestrucktheglassagain,andthistimeitbrokeintolittlepieces.Waterrushedin,andthecarfinallybrokefreeandstartedtodriftdownstream.Sandysighed,herlipsshivering.JondaleanedinandwrappedherarmsaroundSandy,fortingherthatherfamilyweren’tgoingtoloseher.SheinstructedSandytoputherarmsaroundherneckandholdontightly.DavidgrabbedJonda’swaistandpulledwithallhisstrength.Theymanagedtopullthepoorwomanoutofthecarthroughthebrokenwindowjustbeforeitwasswallowedbythewater.TearsstreameddownJonda’scheeksassheheldSandytightly.“Wedidn’tloseyou!Wedidn’tloseyou!”shecriedwithrelief.Sandy,frozenandsore,thankedJondadeeplyforJonda’sbravery.ButtoSandy’ssurprise,Jondaalsoexpressedgratitude.ThenJondasharedthestorywithSandy.Sincetheaccidentmanyyearsago,theimageoftheteenagerwasalwaysflashingthroughhermind,whichhadbeehernightmare.ItwasSandywhogaveJondaachancetogetridofhersenseofguilt.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了在寒冷的冬夜，Jonda警官在路上發(fā)現(xiàn)前面的車落入水中，幫助車內(nèi)的人逃生的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她又敲了一下玻璃，這次玻璃碎成了小塊?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫Jonda怎樣把Sandy從車?yán)锞瘸鰜?。②由第二段首句?nèi)容“Jonda緊緊地抱著Sandy，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼慡andy獲救了，Sandy向Jonda表達感謝，可為什么Jonda流淚呢？Jonda給Sandy講述了另外一個故事，正是Sandy把Jonda從自責(zé)中解脫出來。2.續(xù)寫線索：寒冷的冬夜里行駛——預(yù)感前車出事故——聯(lián)想之前無能為力的事故——前車落水——想辦法救援——救助成功——消除內(nèi)疚3.詞匯激活

行為類①顫抖：shiver/shake②拉，拽：pull/drag/draw③閃現(xiàn)：flash/etoone'smind情緒類①放松：withrelief/toone'srelief②感激：gratitude/thank【點睛】[高分句型1]Sandysighed,herlipsshivering.（運用了獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）[高分句型2]ItwasSandywhogaveJondaachancetogetridofhersenseofguilt.（運用了強調(diào)句式）Test4（2023上·江蘇南通·高三如皋市搬經(jīng)中學(xué)校聯(lián)考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasawakenedbythesoundofheavybootshittingthefloorasmygrandfatherwalkedacrossthewoodenfloortothefireplace.Headdedwoodtothefire.Soon,thesmallwoodenhousefeltwarm.Itwas5:30onacoldJanuarymorning,deepinthemountainsofcentralPennsylvania.I,a12yearoldboy,washerewithmygrandfatherandfourothermenonanannualdeerhuntingtrip.Mygrandfatherwantedmetotaketheadventuretoincreasemycourageandfun.Lookingatme,hesmiled,“Couldyoumakesomecoffee?”ToprovethatIwasqualifiedtojointhismaleclub,Igotupandstartedthework.Afterbreakfast,weleftthewarmandsafehouseandheadedoutintothedark,snowymorning,walkingthroughdeepsnow.Whenweclimbedoveramountainandcrossedfrozenstreams,mygrandfathertoldmetobemindfulofwherewehadbeenandwherewewereheaded.Itriedtokeeptrackofourroute,butlaterhadnoidea.Aboutmidafternoon,wemadeourwaydownthesideofanewmountaintothestreambedbelow.Mygrandfathertoldmetoheadtothetopofthenextmountain,walkalongtheridge(山脊)forafewhundredfeet,andthenebackdown.Iftherewereanydeeronthatpartofthemountain,Iwouldneedtothreatenthemdowntothebottomwheremygrandfatherwaited.So,offIwentwithagun.Ittookme20minutestoclimbtothetop.Iwalkedalongtheridgeandthenheadedbackdown.Ididn’trealizeIhadcrossedoverthetopandhadstartedbackdowntheothersideofthemountain.Iheadedinthewrongdirection.Afterwalkingfor45minutes,IrealizedIwaslostinthewoods.Iwasshocked.Afterfinallycalmingmyself,Isatdownandworkedoutaplan.Iwouldfirstfirethegunandthenstartafire,hopingmygrandfatherwouldknowwhereIwasbythesoundsandsmoke.Ilookedatmywatch.Itwas4:00.Thesunwouldsetdownsoon.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iheldmygunandimmediatelyfiredthreeshots.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,Ifoundmygrandfatherandothermenwalkinginmydirectionhurriedly.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iheldmygunandimmediatelyfiredthreeshots.Theloudsoundsquicklyspread.Then,Icockedmyears.Immediately,Iheardthreeansweringshots,andIwasprettysurewhichdirectiontheyhadefrom.ButIdidn’tleave,thinking,“Stayput.It’seasiertofindalostpersonwhoissittingstill.”Ijuststayedthere,gatheringdryleavesandbranchesnearby,andsoonstartedafire.Later,Iaddedwetbranchesandleavestoit.Itcausedbigsmoke,whichflewintothesky.Isatbythefire,lookingaround.Finally,Ifoundmygrandfatherandothermenwalkinginmydirectionhurriedly.Excited,Irushedtothem.Seeingme,mygrandfathersighedwithreliefandhuggedme.Then,weheadedbacktowardsthehouse.Ontheway,mygrandfatherdidn’tblamemeforbeinglost.Instead,hepraisedmeforknowinghowtohandlesuchanemergency.Besides,heexplainedhowtoavoidbeinglostagain.Thenextmorning