寫作潤色和升級-Howtopolishandupgradesimplesentences教學設計-高考英語作文復習專項

主備教師黃曉彥上課教師備課時間第17周星期一課題Howtopolishandupgradesimplesentences?教學課時第1課時教學目標Bytheendoftheclass,thestudentsshouldbeableto:1.TolearnabouttheEnglishWritingScoringCriteriafortheCollegeEntranceExaminationandthefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting..2.Tolearnandsummarizethestrategiesofrevisingawritingbyusingthesefactors,especiallyabouthowtopolishandupgradesimplesentences.3.Toapplythestrategiestotheirwritingandmakestudentsrealizethatmasteringtherulesisthekeytosolvingproblems.教學重難點1.Tolearnabouttherequirementsonwritingandthefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting..2.Tolearnandsummarizethestrategiesofrevisingawritingbyusingthesefactors,especiallyabouthowtopolishandupgradesimplesentences.教學方法1.Interactiveteaching2.Taskbasedteaching3.Situationalteaching學情分析Duetothelackofvocabulary,unclearsentencestructureanddifficultiesintheuseofconjunctions,seniorthreestudentshavegreatdifficultiesinmakingsentences.Itisessentialforthemtolearnaboutsomefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting..Meanwhile,itisalsosignificantforthemtolearnandsummarizethestrategiesofrevisingawritingbyusingthesefactors,especiallyabouthowtopolishandupgradesimplesentences.Therefore,inthisclass,Iwillfollowthestudentsorientedprincipleandactasaroleofaguide,ahelper,andafacilitatorofstudents.教學過程時間TeachingproceduresStep1LeadinWhatdifficultieshaveyoumetinwriting?Step2IntroductionIntroductionofthetheEnglishWritingScoringCriteriafortheCollegeEntranceExaminationStep3PresentationShowapositionandguidethestudentstosummarizethefactorscontributingtoagoodwriting.Step4ExplorationLeadthestudentstoexplorethestrategiestogetahighscoreinwriting.Strategy1.Theuseoftransitionalwords.Strategy2.Variationofwordsandphrases(2tips)Tip1.Freshandnotoverusedwords1.ItisverydifficulttofindjobsinChinanowadays.2.Afteradayofpickingstrawberries，Ifeltverytired.FromthisexperienceIlearntthatweshouldloveourfood.(2020全國卷Ⅱ，書面表達)Tip2.Phrasesefirst3.IhavetostudyEnglishbetterthisterm.(同義詞decided)4.Wewillregardthematterasachallenge.(同義詞consider)5.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucouldus.(同義詞help)Strategy3.Variationofsentences(3tips)Tip1.Usephrasestoreplacesentences6.I＇mLiHua，aChinesestudent，whoistakingsomecoursesinLondonthissummerholiday.(2019全國卷I，書面表達)I'mLiHua,aChinesestudent(take)somecoursesinLondonthissummerholiday.7.IknowtherewillbeashowaboutChinesepaintingsinyourlocalartgallery.SoImwritingtoapplyforthepositionasavolunteer.(2019卷I，書面表達)(know)thattherewillbeashowaboutChinesepaintingsinyourlocalartgallery,I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionasavolunteer.Tip2.Usepoundandplexsentences8.Theactivityiswonderful.Wewerelookingforwardtovisitingthefarmonceagain.(2020全國卷Ⅱ，書面表達)Itisawonderfulactivitywewerelookingforwardtovisitingthefarmonceagain.Tip3.Useeyecatchingstructures9.Attheschool'sLostandFound,Iknewyouhadpickedupmyschoolbagandhandeditin.(emphaticsentence)Attheschool'sLostandFound,Iknew_you_hadpickedupmyschoolbagandhandeditin.Step5SummaryandfeedbackAskthestudentsworkinpairstochecktheirwritingsandtrytorevisethem.Step6AssignmentPolishandrevisetheirwritingafterclassandsubmititbeforethenextclass

板書設計Howtopolishandupgradesimplesentences?Strategy1.Theuseoftransiti