2023學(xué)年完整公開課版Writing A Trip to the Zoo

Writing:ATriptotheZooLearningobjectives1.掌握描寫物體的說明文的寫作方法。

2.學(xué)習(xí)讀寫結(jié)合型作文的寫作策略。

3.要懂得動物是我們的朋友，保護(hù)動物是我們的職責(zé)。CopenhagenZoo哥本哈根動物園allkindsofanimalsLionscomefromAfrica.AfricawheretoliveGiraffeslikeeatingleaves.Ilikekoalasbecausetheyarekindofcute.whattoeatwhattheylookMyfavoriteanimalsareelephants

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theycandraw.whattheycanIt's....Ithas....Itcan....Itlikes....Canyoudescribeakindofanimalsandletusguesswhatitis?WhoamI?I’mgrayandfromAustralia.Ilikeclimbingtrees.koalacolorwheretolive

whattheyliketigerWhoamI?I’mstrongandfromsouthAfrica.Ilikemeat.I’mthekingofforest.thesymbolofChinaPandaXingErPandaMaoErPandasXingErandMaoErcomefromChina.Thecolorofthemisblackandwhite.Theyareboth4yearsold.Pandaslikesleepingforalongtime,andtheyusuallysleepinthetree.Sotheyarekindoflazy.Besides(除了)sleep,pandasliketoeattoo.Theirfavoritefoodisbamboo(竹子).WhilePandaXingErisoutgoingandliketotakeabath,PandaMaoErisshyandliketoclimbtrees.Bothofthemlookverycute.Animalsareourfriends,andweshouldbefriendlytothem.Introduction介紹InformationCardWherearepandasfrom?What’stheageofPandasMaoErandXingEr?Whatcharacteristics(性格)doPandasMaoErandXingErhave?Whatfooddotheyliketoeat?Whatthingsdothetwopandasliketodo?China4yearsoldKindoflazy,outgoingandshyBambooSleeping,eating,takingabathandclimbingtreesHowtodescribeananimalnameagecolorwheretolivewhattoeatwhatcando/whatliketodo

隨著動物越來越少，人們對動物的關(guān)注越來越多。請你以“MyFavoriteAnimal”為題寫一篇英語短文來描述你最喜歡的動物。寫作內(nèi)容：1.最喜歡的動物的基本情況（至少3點）2.最喜歡的原因（至少2點）3.呼吁保護(hù)動物寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰2.70詞左右參考詞匯：Asia(亞洲),India(印度),kindof,strong,lovely,leaf(樹葉),bamboo（竹子)...ThinkandFill（想一想，填一填）審題體裁：_______________________人稱：_______________________時態(tài)：_______________________第一、三人稱一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時說明文以“MyFavoriteAnimal”為題1.最喜歡的動物的基本情況2.最喜歡的原因3.呼吁保護(hù)動物beginningEndingStructurize（列一列

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Animal:Name:

Age:

Place:

Appearance(外表)

Ability(能力)

Food:

用詞方面:代詞主格,賓格；名詞單復(fù)數(shù)；動詞搭配；副詞位置句子方面:篇章方面:細(xì)節(jié)方面:句子完整；主謂一致；動詞時態(tài)；連詞使用內(nèi)容完整；要點齊全；布局合理單詞拼寫；標(biāo)點符號；大小寫Check（查一查）Choose

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toshowandshare!項目標(biāo)準(zhǔn)自我評價同伴評價教師評價結(jié)構(gòu)（3分）段落合理（2分）銜接自然(1分)內(nèi)容（8分）要點1:最喜歡動物及特征（2分）要點2:最喜歡的原因（2分）要點3：呼吁保護(hù)動物（2分）拓展合理

(2分)語言（3分）詞匯豐富

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