讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)專(zhuān)題第8章如何進(jìn)行動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)講義-高三英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)1.動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)3種句式①動(dòng)作+五官:獨(dú)立主格句式②動(dòng)作+分解:非謂語(yǔ)句式③動(dòng)作+場(chǎng)景轉(zhuǎn)換:時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句2、動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)料庫(kù)①萬(wàn)能動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)(如何擴(kuò)寫(xiě)sbdosth)②常用動(dòng)詞(高分替換詞)③各部位動(dòng)作(動(dòng)作描寫(xiě),超全匯總,看這里夠了)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě):3種寫(xiě)法1.動(dòng)作+五官:獨(dú)立主格句式①獨(dú)立主格:身體部位+非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,sbdosth.(with+情緒名詞/聲線)Tearswellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepoliceinatremblingvoice.2、動(dòng)作+分解:非謂語(yǔ)句式①Ving,主句②主句，Ving③Havingdonesth,主句④Ved(情緒形容詞),主句,Ving⑤Todosth,主句(前加目的)3、動(dòng)作+場(chǎng)景轉(zhuǎn)換:時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句主賓.分離(加動(dòng)作/加地點(diǎn)):Sbdosth>改成:Whensth....sbdosth解析1、動(dòng)作+五官之獨(dú)立主格句式獨(dú)立主格:身體部位+非謂語(yǔ)v,sbdosth.(with+情緒名詞/聲線)◆眼淚Tearswellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.淚水在他的眼睛里涌出，他用顫抖的聲音向警察表示感謝。Myspiritssank,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.我的情緒低落，淚水順著我的臉頰流下來(lái)。Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,sbdosth.(眼里充滿遺憾的淚水,某人做某事)Eyesglitteringwithrelief/joy,sbdosth.(眼里閃著欣慰和喜悅，某人做某事)Eyeswideninginjoy/surprise/fear(情緒名詞),sbdosth(眼睛..地睜大)◆臉/心/肢體Faceblushingscarlet,heapologizedforwhathehaddone.臉紅著，他為自己的所作所為道歉。Heartburning/filledwithfrustration,sheloweredherhead.心在燃燒/充滿挫敗感,她低下了頭。Heartpounding/beatingwithhappiness,sheleaptintotheair.心因快樂(lè)而跳動(dòng)著,她跳了起來(lái)。Arms/legs/musclesachingandkneesshaking/trembling,Isatdown.胳膊/腿/肌肉疼痛,膝蓋顫抖/顫抖,我坐了下來(lái)。2、動(dòng)作+分解:非謂語(yǔ)句式◆動(dòng)作幾乎同時(shí)發(fā)生:①Ving,主句②主句,VingConsideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.考慮到熊的威脅，我們遠(yuǎn)離它。Feelingecstatic,shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.她欣喜若狂，像風(fēng)一樣沖出了房間?！魟?dòng)作前后發(fā)生:③Havingdonesth,主句Havingknownwhathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.在知道發(fā)生了什么之后，她開(kāi)始著手處理這個(gè)問(wèn)題。◆動(dòng)作前加情緒:④Ved(情緒形容詞),主句,Ving.Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.我們松了一口氣，欣喜若狂,對(duì)直升機(jī)大喊大叫，試圖引起它的注意?！魟?dòng)作前加目的:⑤Todosth,主句Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.為了分散熊的注意力，我們把一塊面包扔得很遠(yuǎn)?！魟?dòng)作分解:⑥V1,V2,andV3(可改成:Ving,sbdosth,Ving)Werosefromtheseat,walkedoutofthehall,andleftthecinema.我們從座位上站起來(lái)，走出大廳，離開(kāi)了電影院。Seeingthehelicopter,wecriedout“Help!",wavingourhandslikemad.看到直升機(jī)，我們大聲喊著“救命!”,并瘋狂地?fù)]舞著雙手?？偨Y(jié)①Ving,主句②主句,Ving③Havingdonesth,主句Consideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.Havingknownwhathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.④Ved(情緒形容詞),主句,Ving(前加情緒)Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.⑤Todosth,主句.(前加目的)Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.⑥V1,V2,andV3.(分解動(dòng)作)(可換成:Vding,sbdosth,Ving)Werosefromtheseat,walkedoutofthehall,andleftthecinema.(離開(kāi)電影院)Seeingthehelicopter,wecriedoutHelp!",wavingourhandslikemad.3、動(dòng)作+場(chǎng)景轉(zhuǎn)換:時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句動(dòng)作+場(chǎng)景轉(zhuǎn)換:時(shí)間狀從(while/when/as/themoment..)句式:Sbdosth>改成:Whensb/sth..,.sbdosth.(可加地點(diǎn),分離主賓畫(huà)面)◆句式擴(kuò)寫(xiě):Whensbwas+五感動(dòng)詞，sbdosth+造個(gè)地點(diǎn).[例句]構(gòu)思:Mary發(fā)現(xiàn)一一個(gè)信封。.普通版本:Suddenly,Maryfoundanenvelop.進(jìn)階版本:WhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanenvelope.瑪麗在思考時(shí)，突然看到桌子上有件物品。她走過(guò)去，找到一個(gè)信封。[練習(xí)]Shegotdowntotidyingupthesofawhenanenveloplyingonitcameintohereyes.她正準(zhǔn)備收拾沙發(fā)時(shí)，沙發(fā)上的一個(gè)信封映入了她的眼簾。萬(wàn)用動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)◆某人做某事sbdosth”擴(kuò)寫(xiě):managetodo想方設(shè)法做某事achieve/acplishsth實(shí)現(xiàn)/完成某事原句:StevesavedMagaritto.擴(kuò)寫(xiě):StevemangedtosaveMagait.StevesucceededinsavingMagaritto.SteveachievedtherescueofMargaritto.◆“某人做某事sbdosth”擴(kuò)寫(xiě):Managetodo想方設(shè)法做某事succeedindoingsth成功地做了某事achievetacplishsth實(shí)現(xiàn)/完成某事struggletodosth努力做某事Makeeffortstodosth/努力做某事(makeanefforttodosth)makeeveryefforttodosth竭盡全力做某事>」endeavortodo努力做某事strivetodosth/striveforsth(過(guò)去式strove)努力/奮力做某事can'thelpdoingsth/feellikedoingsth忍不住做某事/想做某事takeactionstodo采取行動(dòng)去做getdowntodoingsth開(kāi)始做/著手做(尤指需花費(fèi)精力之事)keepdoingsth保持做某事goondoingsth繼續(xù)做某事carryondoingsth繼續(xù)做某事forcesbtodosth迫便某人做某事(sbwasforcedtodosth)persuadesbintodoingsth說(shuō)服某人做某事talksbintodoingsth說(shuō)服某人做某事allow/enablesbtodosth使某人能夠做某事Cannothelpdoingsth禁不住做某事imaginedoingsth想象做某事萬(wàn)用動(dòng)詞/形容詞短語(yǔ)：固定搭配castlighton闡明某事catchsightof看見(jiàn)catchaglimpseof瞥見(jiàn);窺見(jiàn)layemphasison強(qiáng)調(diào)makethemostof充分利用takeadvantageof利用sufferfromsth遭受...beinvolvedinsth參與/專(zhuān)心投入beexposedtosth暴露/面臨/接觸bedevotedtosth投身于/致力于becuriousabout...對(duì)..好奇bebusywith忙于...becoveredwith被..覆蓋be,ready/preparedfor為....作好準(zhǔn)備besurprised/amazed(at)對(duì)...感到驚訝beexcitedabout激動(dòng)于...beangrywith憤怒于...bemadat瘋狂于...besatisfiedwith對(duì)....滿意beregarded/treatedas被視為...高分替換詞◆替換“cannotdosth無(wú)法做某事”:failtodosthsb'sdoingsthwasafailurebeunableltodosthpreventsbfromdoingsth原句:Atthesightofthesnake,hewassoscaredthathecouldn'tmove.按需替換:Extremelyscared,hefailedtomoveatthesightofthesnake.Enormousscarepreventedhimfrommovingatthesightofthesnake.Hisattempttomovewasafailureatthesightofthesnake.◆替換“decidetodosth決定做某事”:bedeterminedtodosth下定決心做某事makeupone'smindtodosth下定決心做某事◆替換“wanttodo想做某事”intendtodosth/aimtodosth;feellikedoingsth想要做某事;plan/preparetodosth預(yù)備/準(zhǔn)備做某事◆替換“makesbwanttodosth使某人想..”:remindsbtodosth提醒某人做某事encouragesbtodosth鼓勵(lì)/使某人做某事motivate/drivesbtodosth激勵(lì)/推動(dòng)某人做某事urgesbtodosth促使某人做某事高級(jí)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)各部位描寫(xiě)heburiedhisfaceinhishandsherubbedhishandstogetherhefoldedhisarms/handsoverhischestSheraised/liftedherhead/chin/handsSheheldherbreath/heldsthinhandsmovedforward/backwards/towards/closertoheshivered/trembled/shookshesteppedaway/forwarddashto/rushto/sprinttograb/grasp/seize他把臉埋在手里他使勁揉/搓著雙手他把雙臂/雙手交叉在胸前抬頭/抬起下巴/舉手她屏住呼吸/手里拿著東西.前進(jìn)/后退/朝向/靠近他顫抖她走開(kāi)/向前沖向/沖向/沖刺抓住動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：肢體1heshivered/trembledhisbodyshooksheflinchedshestraightened/shestretchedsherosefromherseathepulledaway/hepushedawayheturnedawayheturnedaroundshesteppedawayshedrewnearer他顫抖著他的身體顫抖著她退縮了她挺直了/她伸展她從座位上站起來(lái)..他拉開(kāi)/他推開(kāi)他轉(zhuǎn)身離開(kāi)他轉(zhuǎn)身她走開(kāi)了她走近了動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：肢體2heleanedcloserhepacedshedraggedherfeetashepumpedafistshepunchedtheairsherestedherchinonherpalmheyawnedShescratchedhernose/headheleanedagainstthewallshebouncedonhertoes他靠得更近了他踱步她拖著腳.她揮了揮拳頭:她打了空氣她把下巴放在手掌上他打了個(gè)哈欠她撓了撓鼻子/撓頭他靠在墻上她踮起腳尖動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：肢體3heshook/noddedhisheadshewasbreathinghardshetookinadeepbreathshetookinasharpbreathsheheldherbreathheletoutaharshbreathhesighedsherubbedhershouldersheplayedwithherhairshetossedherhair他搖了搖頭/點(diǎn)頭她呼吸困難她深吸了一口氣她倒吸一口涼氣她屏住呼吸他重重地吐了一口氣他嘆了口氣她揉了揉肩膀她玩弄她的頭發(fā)她甩了甩頭發(fā)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：看glanceatstareatgazeatcatchsightof/catchaglimpseofheobservedshepeeredshegapedheglaredhegawkedheleered朝...看了一眼盯著...看盯著/注視/凝視瞥見(jiàn)他觀察她凝視著她目瞪口呆他瞪著他目瞪口呆他斜視動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：眼睛hiseyeswidenedhiseyeslitup.hiseyesnarrowedshewinked/blinkedhereyessparkledhereyestwinkledhiseyesgleamedhiseyesburnedwith...hereyesblazedw