下面這封郵件來(lái)自于鐵路雖然考試內(nèi)容不完全一樣但結(jié)構(gòu)用語(yǔ)都很恰六級(jí)lesson5 task1

2018-1-2書(shū)信寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容包括很寬的范圍：12018-1-2書(shū)信寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容包括很寬的范圍：1歉2謝3訴4議5請(qǐng)6請(qǐng)7紹8幫對(duì)于參加GeneralTraining(移民類(lèi))雅思考試的考生來(lái)說(shuō)，Task1的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是完成一1.編故事的能力要出色，能寫(xiě)出一個(gè)連貫合理的故事2.文字表達(dá)不需要過(guò)于學(xué)術(shù)，但是要偏向地道表達(dá)3.注意書(shū)信寫(xiě)作的時(shí)態(tài)，有可能在一篇文章里使用超過(guò)5種時(shí)態(tài)2018-1-3下面這封郵件來(lái)自于鐵路公司官方。雖然和考試的內(nèi)容不是完全一樣，但是結(jié)構(gòu)和用語(yǔ)都很恰當(dāng)。2018-1-3下面這封郵件來(lái)自于鐵路公司官方。雖然和考試的內(nèi)容不是完全一樣，但是結(jié)構(gòu)和用語(yǔ)都很恰當(dāng)。2018-1-4第一2018-1-4第一段通常簡(jiǎn)單開(kāi)頭—Iamwritingthisletterto介紹寫(xiě)信的目的。結(jié)尾部分一般需要表示感謝或者提出要IwouldbegratefulifyoucouldMyrequestisthatIwillbelookingforwardtoyour 最好是左邊對(duì)齊，每段之間空一整行；2稱(chēng)呼—Dear名字/頭銜/Siror3).結(jié)尾部分一定需要比較禮貌的收尾：kindregards-sincerely/faithfully-lotsof2018-1-5DearI2018-1-5DearIamwritingthislettertoapologizeforwhathavehappenedthesedays.Iamreallysorryaboutthenoisefrommydog.Lastweek,mysistersentherdog,Frank,tousaskingmetobeapuppy-sitterfortwoweeks.ShewenttoChinaforhoneymoon.IwastoldthatFrankhadbeendoingwellandbarelymadetroubleformysister.Unfortunately,itisclearthatthedogdoesnotlikehistemporaryhomepossiblybecauseitisthefirsttimethathelivesinaplacethatisunfamiliartohim.Ifthesituationwerereversed,Iwouldfeelthesame.Iknowthatyoumusthavebeenannoyedbythebarkingofthedogalldaylong,soIamgoingtofixit.SendingFranktothepethouseinthecommunitymaybeagoodsolution.There,hecandowhateverhewantswhileleavingothersinpeace.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.SincerelyyoursJeremy2018-1-6Dear2018-1-6DearIamwritingtoletyouknowthatatlastwehavemovedtoabiggerhouse!Wejustcouldn'tgoonlivinginthetwo-bedroombungalownowthatthetwinsaregrowingupandthenewbabyhasarrived.Sowestartedlooking—andonethingledtoanotherandfinallyhereweareinournewhome.Iamsureyouwilllikeit.Wehavethreebedroomsnow,andaverymodernbathroomandkitchen.Thekidsarehappybecausethereismuchmorespacewiththebiglivingroomandthegardenoutside.ButMichelisthehappiestofallbecausehedoesn'tneedtodomuchdecorating.Whydon'tyoucomeroundthisweekendandseewhatyouthinkofournewplace?Wewouldalllovetoseeyouandiftheweatherisgoodwecanhaveabarbecueinthegarden.Ournewaddressandphonenumberarebelow,sogiveusacallandletusknowwhentoexpectyou.Lotsoflove2018-1-7Task1-圖表2018-1-7Task1-圖表作文多樣化句123Therebe4.Itis……(圖表作文里很少用到圖表作文得高分來(lái)自于兩個(gè)能精準(zhǔn)的句子表達(dá)和詞匯選擇2018-1-8Task1-圖表作文(介詞短語(yǔ))主句Thereisa2018-1-8Task1-圖表作文(介詞短語(yǔ))主句ThereisasubstantialdifferencebetweentheUKandtheUSintermsoftheirconsumptionofAsforthesmokingrateoffemales,therewasasubstantialgrowthduringthe20-yearperiod,risingfrom8%in1990to20%in2010.Despitesomeinitialfluctuation,from1995therewasasteadyTheUSwillcontinuetorelyonfossilfuels,withsustainableandnuclearenergysourcesremainingrelativelyinsignificant.ThepopulationofSingaporeisabout4million,withChineseaccountingfor3quarters.Task1-圖表作文介詞短語(yǔ)+基礎(chǔ)句型狀語(yǔ)從句+基礎(chǔ)句型基礎(chǔ)句(名詞被修飾)基礎(chǔ)句+介詞短語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)句+狀語(yǔ)從句doing......2018-1-9Task1-圖表2018-1-9Task1-圖表作文基礎(chǔ)句型里的名詞被充分修TherewasasignificantincreaseintheamountofmoneyspentonbooksandThepercentageofmaleswhobuypopandrockmusicishigherthanthatofThosefamiliesconsistingofoneparentorasingleadultweremostlikelytoliveinThechartshowsthetimespentbyUKresidentsondifferenttypesoftelephonecallsbetween1995and2002.Task1-圖表作文句Althoughtheproportionofpeoplebuyingclassicalmusicreached17%,itwasjusthalfofthefiguresfortheothertwotypesofmusic.Nationalandinternationalfixedlinecallsgrewsteadilyfrom37to62,thoughthegrowthslowedoverthelasttwoyears.2018-1-The2018-1-Thepercentageofpopulationagedover60isconsiderablyhigherthanthatofpeopleunder20,with45%and15%respectively.WecanseethatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheconsumptionoftheseFrancespentmoremoneythanItalyontoys,whilethespendingofItalywashigherthanthatofFranceonfood.Thelargestproportionofmoneywasspentonshoppingat74%,comparedwithonly10%onfood.Task1-圖表作文主句, (分詞用來(lái)詳細(xì)說(shuō)明變化：Theproportionofpopulationagedover60sawadramaticincrease,risingfrom11%in1990to30%in2005.對(duì)比：Chinesetouristsspentthelargestamountofmoneyonshopping,takingup74%oftheirtotalspending.2018-1-Task1-圖表作文2018-1-Task1-圖表作文Therewasadramaticincreaseintheuseofmobilephones,risingfrom45millionto87Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Thisrisewasparticularlynoticeablebetween1997and2002,duringwhichtimetheuseofmobilephonestripled.Task1-圖表作文Whenitcomestotheproportionsofmenwhowerenotabletoreadandwrite,itisclearthatAfrica,ArabStatesandSouthAsiahadextremelysimilardataat30%.Theproportionofmusicbuyersaged25-34isthehighest(32%),followedbythatofpeoplebetween16and24(30%)andthatofbuyersaged35-44(26%).Whileotherworkers’salariessawafallfrom28%in1981toonly15%ofspendingin2001,teachers’payremainedthebiggestcost.2018-1-請(qǐng)不要按照?qǐng)D形分類(lèi)，因?yàn)閳D表之間是interchangeable2018-1-請(qǐng)不要按照?qǐng)D形分類(lèi)，因?yàn)閳D表之間是interchangeable1.100%完全對(duì)比圖(沒(méi)有時(shí)間變化)---按照宏觀+微觀的方法來(lái)寫(xiě)；2.80%變化圖(有時(shí)間變化)---主要描述每個(gè)元素的變化過(guò)程對(duì)于參加A類(lèi)考試的同學(xué)，你們被要求在Task1完成對(duì)一個(gè)圖表的描述。Linegraph線圖Piechart餅圖Table表格圖Diagram地圖或者流程2018-1-不2018-1-不靠分析，靠句型2018-1-Thetotal2018-1-ThetotalsalesofCokewas17.1billionbottlesin2000,withNorthAmericahavingthelargestproportionat34%,comparedtoonly7%inAfricaandMiddleEast.Intheotherthreeregions,LatinAmericahadarelativelyhigherpercentage(25.7%),followedbyEurope(20.5%)andAsia(16.4%).Coke的全球銷(xiāo)量達(dá)到了17.1billion,其中北美洲有最大的比率，是30.4%而非洲和中東地區(qū)只有7%在其他三個(gè)地區(qū)中，拉丁美洲有相對(duì)較高的銷(xiāo)售比率，達(dá)到15.7%20.5%和2018-1-很明顯，中國(guó)游客的錢(qián)主要花在了購(gòu)物上，占到12018-1-很明顯，中國(guó)游客的錢(qián)主要花在了購(gòu)物上，占到12，而食物的花費(fèi)才只有12?；ㄔ趭蕵?lè)和觀光方面的錢(qián)很相近，分別占到129和116%其他方面的花費(fèi)占到31。2018-1-簡(jiǎn)單對(duì)比圖一般出現(xiàn)在混合圖表中。混合圖表里的兩個(gè)圖一般都是分開(kāi)描述，如果有一些內(nèi)在的聯(lián)系，只需要2018-1-簡(jiǎn)單對(duì)比圖一般出現(xiàn)在混合圖表中?；旌蠄D表里的兩個(gè)圖一般都是分開(kāi)描述，如果有一些內(nèi)在的聯(lián)系，只需要ItisobviousthatChinesetouristsspentmostoftheirmoneyonshoppingaccountingforasmuchas71.2%,comparedtoonly1.2%onfood.Theamountspentonentertainmentandsightseeingvariedslightly,with12.9%and11.6%respectively.Spendingonotheritemstookuptherest3.1%.2018-1-核2018-1-核心段的內(nèi)容以特點(diǎn)為主，滿足如下邏輯。Generalfeature+2018-1-改寫(xiě)2018-1-改寫(xiě)原文中的介紹句(below這個(gè)詞一定要去掉)。Thereare2/3mainfeaturesinthisFirstly,itisobviousthat….總結(jié)第一個(gè)宏觀特征…..Tobespecific,詳細(xì)羅列數(shù)(大小/相似/差距)Secondly,wecanseethat…..總結(jié)第二個(gè)宏觀特征….Specifically,詳細(xì)羅列數(shù)據(jù)Overall,重復(fù)/補(bǔ)充2018-1-Thetable2018-1-ThetablegivesinformationregardingconsumerspendingonthreecategoriesinfivecountriesinItisobviousthatthemoneyspentonFood/Drinks/Tobaccoaccountedforthehighestproportioninallthecountries,withTurkeyhavingthelargestdata(32.14%),closelyfollowedbyIreland(28.91%).Figuresfortheotherthreecountriesvariedslightlyrangingbetween15.77%inSwedenand18.8%inSpain.Bycontrast,thepercentageofmoneypaidforLeisure/Educationwasthelowestofallcountries,withTurkeyagainhavingthelargestdataat4.3%,comparedtoonly1.9%inSpain.ThedifferencebetweenItalyandSwedenwasbarelynoticeable,constituting3.2%and3.22%respectively.Atthesametime,thespendingonClothing/Footwearheldamiddleposition.Inallthelistedcountries,Italianconsumerswerethelargestspendersinthiscategorywhoused9%oftheirmoney,whileSwedishonlypaid5.4%oftheirincome.Therewasatinydifferencebetweenthefiguresfortheotherthreecountriesatapproximately6.5%.Overall,consumersofallthefivecountriestendtospendmostoftheirmoneyondailynecessities,withtheleastonspiritualneeds.2018-1-Thechart2018-1-Thechartgivesinformationaboutestimatedglobalilliteracyratesofmalesandfemalesintheyearof2000AsIcansee,therearetwomajorfeaturesinthischart.Itisobviousthatinalltheregionstheilliteracyrateoffemaleswashigherthanthatofmales.ThedifferenceswereminimalindevelopedcountriesandLatinAmericaat1%or2%,whilethereweremuchlargerdifferencesintheotherregionsbetween10%and20%.Wecanalsofindthatthefiguresforfemaleilliteracyratesinthreerelativelypoorregionsweremuchhigher,withSouthAsiahavingthelargestproportion(55%),followedbyArabStates(about52%)andAfrica(roughly48%).Thepercentagesintheotherthreeregionswerelessthan20%.Therewereonly2%ofwomenindevelopedcountriespoorlyeducated.Whenitcomestotheproportionsofmenwhowerenotabletoreadandwrite,itisclearthatAfrica,ArabStatesandSouthAsiahadextremelysimilardataapproaching30%.Bycontrast,theilliteracyratesintheotherthreeregionswerenohigherthan10%.Overall,inalltheregionsmenaremorelikelytogeteducatedthanwomen,andthericherpeopleare,thelessilliteratetheyseemtobe.2018-1-Thebar2018-1-ThebarchartcomparesfourcountrieswithregardtotheirspendingonsixkindsofItisobviousthattheBritishwerethelargestspendersonalltheproducts,withphotographicfilmscostingthelargestamountofmoney(172,000pounds),followedbytoys(168,000)andCDs(162,000).ThepopularityoftennisracquetsandpersonalstereoswasthesameandtheleastinBritain,costing153,000poundsrespectively.Comparedwithothercountries,bycontrast,Germanconsumergenerallyspenttheleastmoneyonphotographicfilms(147,000),toys(148,000)andCDs(147,000).Onperfumesandtennisracquets,theamountspentbyGermanswasonlymorethanthatbytheFrench.Meanwhile,FranceandItalygenerallymaintainmiddlepositions,averagingapproximatelysimilarspendingoverall.Specifically,FrancespendsmoreonCDsandphotographicfilmbutlessontennisracquetsthanItalydoes.Italy’sspendingonpersonalstereosisonlymarginallygreaterthanthatofFrance,whilespendingontoysisequalbetweenthetwo.Overall,itisclearfromthedatagiventhattherearesomesignificantdifferencesinspendinghabitswithinEurope.2018-1-Thesecharts2018-1-ThesechartsmakecomparisonsamongthreekindsofmusicabouttheirIntermsofthepreferenceofmaleandfemalebuyers,wecanseethattheproportionoftheformerishigherthanthatofthelatterinallkindsofmusic.Tobemorespecific,thefiguresforpopandrockmusicaresimilarwith28%ofmalesand18%offemales.Classicalmusicismuchlesspopularpurchasedbyonly9%ofmenand7%ofwomen.Whenitcomestothemusicpreferenceofdifferentagegroups,itcanbenoticedthatpopandrockmusicaremuchmorepopularandhavethesamepatternofmusicpurchasing.Theproportionofmusicbuyersaged25-34isthehighest(32%),followedbythatofpeoplebetween16and24(30%)andthatofbuyersaged35-44(26%).Bycontrast,classicalmusicisgenerallytheleastpopularchoice,mainlypurchasedbypeopleover45withapproximatelyOverall，malesaremorelikelytobuymusicthanfemalesandmoderntypesofmusicenjoyamuchgreaterpopularitythanclassicalmusic.2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-變化圖表相對(duì)2018-1-變化圖表相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單，整個(gè)過(guò)程的核心一定是變化的內(nèi)容。每個(gè)元素單獨(dú)描述或者按相似/相反的方法分組。元素 逐一描元素 分組描如果有可能，在第一段用一句話總結(jié)整體變化趨勢(shì)。2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-1.2018-1-1. 一方面，人們偏向于在早上聽(tīng)收音機(jī)。具體來(lái)看， 另一方面，更多的人選擇在下午和晚上看電視。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，4.總之，聽(tīng)收音機(jī)在早上更受歡迎，而人們?cè)谙挛绾屯砩细矚g看電2018-1-Expenditureon2018-1-Expenditureonresourcessuchasbookshadincreasedto20%by1991beforedecreasingtoonly9%bytheendoftheperiod.Incontrast,thecostoffurnitureandequipmentsawanoppositetrend.Thiscostdecreasedtoonly5%oftotalexpenditurein1991butrosedramaticallyin2001whenitrepresented23%oftheschoolbudget.Similarly,thecostofinsurancesawarisingtrend,growingfromonly2%to8%by2001.Overall,teachers’salariesconstitutedthelargestcosttotheschool,andwhilespendingincreaseddramaticallyforequipmentandinsurance,therewerecorrespondingdropsinexpenditureonthingssuchasbookandonotherworkers’salaries.ThechartsshowhowmuchaUKschoolspentondifferentrunningcostsinthreeseparateyears:1981,1991and2001.Inallthreeyears,thegreatestexpenditurewasonstaffsalaries.Butwhileotherworkers’salariessawafallfrom28%in1981toonly15%ofspendingin2001,teachers’payremainedthebiggestcost,reaching50%oftotalspendingin1991andendingat45%in2001.2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-Thenumbers2018-1-ThenumbersofAmericanandAustralianprisonersbothfluctuatedobviously,buttheformerwasapparentlylargerthanthelatter,respectivelyrangingfrom95,000to135,000andfrom45,000to70,000.WhenitcomestoNewZealand,wecanseethatitsfiguredramaticallydeclinedfrom100,000in1930to50,000in1950beforeclimbingbackto85,000attheendofthisperiod.Overall,exceptfortheUKandCanada,figuresfortheotherthreecountriesexperiencedunstablechangesthroughoutthe5decades.Thisbarchartshowsthechangesinthenumberofprisonersoffivedifferentcountriesfrom1930to2000.In1930,Canadahadthelargestnumberofprisonersat120,000,whilethefigureforGreatBritainwasthesmallestatonly30,000.Throughouttheperiodfrom1930to1980,thetwocountriessawoppositetrends.Tobespecific,thenumberofCanadagenerallyhaddecreasedto90,000by1980,despiteseveralslightincreasesduringthisperiod.Bycontrast,thenumberofprisonersintheUKsawanincreasingtrend,growingfrom30,000in1930to85,000in2018-1-2018-1-2018-1-6分的2018-1-6分的范2018-1-2018-1- 兩個(gè)圖表之間如果有關(guān)系，只需要在結(jié)尾段寫(xiě)出來(lái)；更好的思1.這些圖表提供了信息關(guān)于Yemen和Italy在2000年的人口結(jié)構(gòu)，并且對(duì)20502.在2000年，也門(mén)60歲以下的人口占到了96.4%，分別包括了50.1%的0-14歲人口和46.3%的總的來(lái)看，這兩個(gè)國(guó)家的老年人口都會(huì)增長(zhǎng)。意大利面對(duì)的老齡化壓力將會(huì)明顯大于也2018-1-Thebar2018-1-Thebarchartsshowdataaboutcomputerownership,withafurtherclassificationbylevelofeducation,from2002to2010.Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Justoverhalfthepopulationownedcomputersin2002,whereasby2010threeoutoffourpeoplehadahomecomputer.Ananalysisofthedatabylevelofeducationshowsthathigherlevelsofeducationcorrespondtohigherlevelsofcomputerownershipinbothofthoseyears.In2002,onlyaround15%ofthosewhodidnotfinishhighschoolhadacomputerbutthisfigurehadtrebledby2010.Therewerealsoconsiderableincreases,ofapproximately30percentagepoints,forthosewithahighschooldiplomaoranunfinishedcollegeeducation(reaching65%and85%respectivelyin2010).However,graduatesandpostgraduatesprovedtohavethegreatestlevelofownershipin2010,at90%and95%respectively,20percentagepointshigherthanin2002.Thelastdecadehasseenasubstantialgrowthincomputerownershipingeneral,andacrossalleducationallevels.Thebarchartsshowdataaboutcomputerownership,withafurtherclassificationbylevelofeducation,from2002to2010.Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Justoverhalfthepopulationownedcomputersin2002,whereasby2010threeoutoffourpeoplehadahomecomputer.Ananalysisofthedatabylevelofeducationshowsthathigherlevelsofeducationcorrespondtohigherlevelsofcomputerowner