2022年高考全國(guó)1卷英語(yǔ)作文賞析

本文格式為Word版下載后可任意編輯和復(fù)制第第頁(yè)2022年高考全國(guó)1卷英語(yǔ)作文賞析20xx高考全國(guó)1卷假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)伴侶Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的方案。內(nèi)容包括：

(1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);

(2)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī);

(3)課前預(yù)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。

留意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

同學(xué)實(shí)例1分?jǐn)?shù)：23.5廣東湛江一中

DearIeslie,

Asscheduled,wewillhaveaChineselessonnextweekend.Consideringourstudentsarepreparingfortheirfinalexam,Isuggestwehavethelessonintheparknearourschool.

ThemainlycourseofourclassistolearnthepoemofTangDynasty.It'suniversallyacknowledgedthatthepoemofTangDynastyisoneofthesolidfoundationsofourculture.Alargenumberoftalentpoetsshowedtheirviewaboutthesocietyandexpressedtheirsatisfactionwiththebeautyofourmotherland.Youcanbroadenyourhorizonandhaveabetterunderstandingofourcolorfulculturethroughthisstudy.

KnowingthehistoryofTangDynastyisbetterforyoubeforehavingclass.It'sthesocietythatcreatesthebrilliantpoem.

Yours

LiHua.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)掩蓋較全面，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較少，長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)潔句同時(shí)運(yùn)用了較多的簡(jiǎn)單句式，如主語(yǔ)從句It’suniversallyacknowledgedthat…，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It'sthesocietythat…非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)Consideringourstudentsarepreparingfor…等等;同時(shí)恰當(dāng)使用了肯定的高級(jí)詞匯如solidfoundation，broadenone’shorizons等。

建議：1文章要點(diǎn)方面，建議時(shí)間更精確些，比如下周周幾幾點(diǎn)到幾點(diǎn);2語(yǔ)法方面，留意細(xì)節(jié)語(yǔ)法的錯(cuò)誤，比如mainly改成main，poem改成poems等。

同學(xué)實(shí)例2分?jǐn)?shù)：20河南光山二高

DearLesile

Howareyou?IhavelearntyourprogressinyourChinesewithmyhelpandyourhardwork.Iamwritingtotelltheplanthatwhatshouldyoudoinadvance.

First,let'smakeitateighto'clockinschoollibrary.Wecanconsultedanumberofbooksaboutthesubjectthere.Second,thenextthemeisaboutChinesecultureespeciallytheTangpoemsthatarefullofhistoryandact.Ibelieveyouwillbeattractiveonceyouputyourheart.ThirdIneedyoutoperparesomework.TheTangpoemsarebasedontheTangdynasty

soyoushouldtolookthroughthehistoryandgreathappening.

Asthesayinggoesnopains,nogains.Chineseissobeautifulanddifficultthatyouneedbeinvolvedsincerely.Iamlookingforwardtostartingourstudy.

Yours，

LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)掩蓋較全面，文章結(jié)構(gòu)較清楚，有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用，長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用較合理;同時(shí)恰當(dāng)使用了肯定的常用句式及諺語(yǔ)，如asthesayinggoes，nopains，nogains等。

建議：1文章要點(diǎn)方面，建議時(shí)間更精確些，比如詳細(xì)是哪一周哪一天的8點(diǎn);2語(yǔ)法方面，留意細(xì)節(jié)語(yǔ)法的錯(cuò)誤，如canconsulted改成canconsult等;3規(guī)律方面，留意詞和詞之間的單配規(guī)律，如youwillbeattractiveonceyou…規(guī)律上不是很通順;4單詞拼寫上，留意拼寫的精確?????性，如perpare改成prepare等。

同學(xué)實(shí)例3分?jǐn)?shù)：22日照一中

DearLeslie,

How'sitgoing?HaveyouabsorbedalltheknowledgeItaughtyoulasttime?Nowletmetellyoutheinformationofnextlesson.

IwillgivethelessononnextSaturdaymorning,from8:00a.m.to11:30a.m.at101Roomintheteachingbuildinginourschool.

WearegoingtolearnaboutTangpoetry,whichisanextremelyimportantpartofnotonlyChineselanguagebutalsoChineseculture.WhatyouneedtodoinadvanceistoknowbrieflyaboutthehistoryofTangDynasty.YoucanconsulttheInternetorthebooksIgaveyou.Besides,don'tforgettoreviewwhatyouhavelearnedbefore.

Iamlookingforwardtoourmeeting.Seeyounextweek!

Yours,

LiHua.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)掩蓋全面，行文流暢，有額外的細(xì)節(jié)添加，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚緊湊，