BEC中級寫作強化課

劍橋BEC中級

強化課程

Vincent魏琛TIMEPOSITIONACTIVITYCLIENT2016.1交替?zhèn)髯g武漢中英醫(yī)療圓桌會議

2015.10陪同口譯廈門國際茶產(chǎn)業(yè)博覽會美國Bellocq公司及英國LeafAffair公司2015.5陪同口譯廈門國際石材展意大利公司Porphyry公司2014.11陪同口譯廈門大學(xué)孔子學(xué)院交流項目廈門大學(xué)新西蘭中小學(xué)校長團隊2013.10陪同口譯華中師范大學(xué)110周年校慶美國雅禮協(xié)會會長2013.9陪同口譯武漢申辦2015亞洲田徑錦標賽籌備組亞田聯(lián)理事會議副主席2013.8現(xiàn)場英文播音世界女排大獎賽武漢站

2013.8陪同口譯世界女排大獎賽武漢站管理委員會主席2013.8陪同口譯世界現(xiàn)代五項青年錦標賽

2013.5講座交傳；分組討論耳語同傳、陪同口譯華中師范大學(xué)首屆世界農(nóng)村與農(nóng)民學(xué)論壇Working

ExperienceEnglishSkills&Certificates專業(yè)八級證書專業(yè)四級證書BEC高級證書上海中高級口譯證書CATTI二級口譯證書廈門大學(xué)三級口譯證書英語四六級口語考試最高等級“A+”英語四級617英語六級606強化寫作寫作目的與要求1.

Canmakenotesthatareusefultobothhim/herselfandtocolleagues.2.Canwritemostlettershe/sheislikelytobeaskedtodo;sucherrorsasoccurwillnotpreventunderstandingofthemessage.3.Canwriteasimplereport.測試范圍與選材1、身份介紹(PersonalIdentification)2、工作環(huán)境與日常事務(wù)(Theoffice，generalbusiness，environmentandroutine)3、接待與閑暇活動(Entertainmentofclients，freetime，relationshipswithcolleaguesandclients)4、商務(wù)旅行(Travel)5、健康(Health)6、購置與銷售(Buyingandselling)7、公司結(jié)構(gòu)、系統(tǒng)及程序(Companystructures，systems，processes)8、產(chǎn)品與效勞(Productsandservices)9、成果與成就(Resultsandachievements)

寫作評分四個方面：

1content2language3structure&vocabulary4organization寫作技巧分析1.防止冗長的表達方式和不必要的重復(fù)原句：Theproblemwasthatthecarwouldnotstart修改：Thecarwouldnotstart2.少用陳詞濫調(diào)3.多使用主動語態(tài)的句子結(jié)構(gòu)以明確表達意思原句：PaymentoftheiraccountswillbemadebyJohnsonsnextweek．修改：Johnsonswillpaytheiraccountsnextweek．

寫作技巧分析1.具體(Concreteness)盡可能地提供明確、具體的信息原句：Thesebrakescanstopacarwithinashortdistance.修改：TheseGoodsonpowerbrakescanstopa2-toncarwithin24feet.寫作技巧分析1.具體(Concreteness)使用具體地道詞匯原句：Duetotheunusualnatureoftherequest,…修改：Astherequestisunusual,…寫作技巧分析2.完整(Completeness)

自查：誰(Who)?什么(What)?

什么時候(When)?在哪里(Where)?為什么(Why)?怎么樣(How)?寫作技巧分析：禮貌(Courtesy)DearMrs.Walters,Becauseyoudelayedsolonginyourresponse,ModelGSFisoffstock.Ifyouareinterested,wehavesomesimilarmodelsonhandYourstruly,DearMrs.WaltersIfIhadknownyourneedsbeforeMay20,IcouldhaveshippedModelGSPimmediately.However,thespringsaledrainedourstock.TheModelGSK,asimilarinstrument,isinstock,andyoucouldhaveitatthesamepriceastheGSF.Itnormallysellsfor$10,000more.wewillshipitassoonasyougiveustheword.Yourssincerely寫作技巧分析：禮貌(Courtesy)使用禮貌友好的詞匯體諒對方的寫作態(tài)度(You-Attitude)例句：Writeremphasis:WeareshippingyourorderonFriday.Readeremphasis:YouwillreceiveyourorderbyMonday,October10.措辭得體(AppropriateWording)防止采用消極性的詞匯或句式例句：NegativeWording:TheofficeisclosedafterfourO'clock,PositiveWording: TheofficeisopenuntilfourO'clock.防止使用有性別歧視之嫌的詞語用“person”代替第三人稱單數(shù)。例如:Insteadof: Pleasesharethisreportwithyoursupervisor.Hewillfinditinteresting.Say: Pleasesharethisreportwithyoursupervisor,whowillfinditinteresting.連貫(coherence)常見連接詞有：1表示羅列增加First,second,third,First,then/next,afterthat/next,finallyForonething…foranother…,On(the)onehand…ontheotherhand,Besides/what’smore/inaddition/furthermore/moreover/another/also,Especially/Inparticular,2表示時間順序

now,atpresent,recently,after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,inafewdays,atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,later,next,finally,immediately,soon,suddenly,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,themomentformnowon,fromthenon,atthesametime,meanwhile,till,not…until,before,after,when,while,asduring,

3表示解釋說明now,inaddition,forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,moreoverfurthermore,infact,actually4表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but,however,while,though,or,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,incontrast,despite,inspiteof,eventhough,except(for),instead,ofcourse,afterall,5表示強調(diào)indeed,infact,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,aboveall,6表示概括歸納inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,asfarasIknow,Asweallknow,ashasbeenstated,asIhaveshown,finally,atlast,insummary,inconclusion,

商務(wù)報告與建議書的語言常用的概括圖表信息的詞組和表達方式上升趨勢toincrease/anincreasetogouptogrow/agrowthtojump/ajumptoleap/aleaptoreachapeak/apeaktosoar/asoartorise/arisetoupsurge/anupsurgetoupswing/anupswing下降趨勢tocollapse/acollapsetodecline/adeclinetodrop/adroptodecrease/adecreasetofall/afalltogodowntoreachalowpoint/alowpointtoreduce/areduction升降程度較大

agreatdeal/big/alotapparent/apparentlyclear/dearlyconsiderable/considerablyimportant/importantlydramatic/dramaticallygreat/greatlydrastic/drasticallymarked/markedlymuchobvious/obviouslyfast/remarkable/remar