高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫八股文寫作講義

讀后續(xù)寫大部分都是圍繞conflict/problemsolution展開。大部分文章的寫作模式：八股續(xù)寫情緒：鳳頭消極情緒panicpanickedpanickingenvelopeenvelop籠罩1.獨(dú)立主格Nightapproaching,thedarknessruled/envelopedthewholeforest.Darknessfalling/nightapproaching,hefeltextremelypanicked/scaredinthelonelywilderness.Nightapproaching,aburst/waveofscarefloodedoverhim/sweptoverhim.Aburst/wave/floodofanger/panic/sorrow=grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/excitement/joy/terror=fear=scare=horror/seizing/consuming/overwhelming/floodingover=sweepingoverhim,hewasunabletomoveaninch,frozen/rootedoverthere.Ahandfulofsweetsatouchofgreentea一抹清茶acoupleofhoursarayofhope一線希望/sunlight一束陽(yáng)光2.Itwasthenthatherealized/sensedthathewastotallylost,aburstofpanicoverwhelminghim.3.Unabletocontain/holdbackhisannoyance,hestormedoutofhisroom,slammingthedoorheavilybehindhiminanger/angrily.AnnoyannoyedTiredandhungry,hewasunabletostepanyfurther/farther,aburstofterrorfloodingoverhim.4.Onhearingthenews/Atthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize,hefeltheartbroken,unabletocontainhistears/sorrow=grief/disappointment.Hisheartseemedtobetornintopieces心都要碎了teartoretornswear發(fā)誓詛咒sworeswornThemoment=instantheheardthenewsthathispuppywaskilledinthecaraccident,hisheartseemedtobetorn,unabletocontainhisgrief.5.Confused/puzzledashewas,hefollowedhisbrother’swords,openinghiscoathesitantly.hesitateAngryashewas,hedidn’tlosehistemper.Disappointedashewasattheoute,hedidn’tgiveuphisdream.二、 細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫1.Itwasheartbreakingforhertomissthevaluable/preciouschance=opportunity.很傷心HeartbrokenShestoodtheresilently,tearsstreaming/rollingdownhercheeks/face.ChecksXHestoodtheresilent,histearsswirling/wellingupinhiseyes.Itwasheartbreakingforhimnottopassthecollegeentranceexamination.Thisarticlebroughtbacksadmemoriesforme/remindedmeofthesadmemories.Eyesbegantowater.這篇文章使我想起了傷心的往事。眼睛開始流淚Hemurmured嘟囔小聲說(shuō)inalowvoice,withhiswateryeyes,“Whatiftheyteaseme?”=laughatWhatifIfailthistime?Iamatotalfailure/loserWhatifyouarerefused?Aninnervoicetoldmethatweweresupposedtoadoptthepitifulhomelessboy/dog.InnerpeaceAdopttheadviceAdapt1thenovelforafilm2=beusedto=adjustto=fitinwiththelifehereHethoughttohimself,“IfonlyIhadn’tquarreledwithmywife.”Saidtohimself,IfonlyIhadfollowed/takenhervaluabletips=suggestions=advice.Ifonlyyouwerenotaddictedtogames.5.Trembling/shakingwithfear/excitementStampedhisfeetwithangerExplodewithanger勃然大怒/laughter哄堂大笑Burstintotears=burstoutcryingBurstintolaughter=burstoutlaughingHearingthefunnyjoke,weexplodedwithlaughter.4.Dropped/lowered低下hunghang耷拉h(huán)ishead/eyesraisedhishead/eyesNodded/shakeshook/hisheadrestedhisheadon=againsthershoulder支撐依托依靠安放Herestedhischininhishands雙手托著下巴andstaredatthevastskydottedwithnumerousstars.Hisheadburiedinhishands,雙手抱頭hewasindespair,unsureofwhattodonext/atalosswhattodonext.PlacinghishandtogetherandrestingthemnearhisheadwhileclosinghiseyesmeanssleepingHepacedacrosstheroomconstantlyasifsittingonpinsandneedles.如坐針氈坐立不安pacedbackandforth來(lái)回踱步KeeppacewithsbBeforeexams,Ialwayshavebutterfliesinmystomach.考試前，我總是緊張不安。Hestoodthererestless焦躁不安，坐立不安Itrembledatthethoughtofhavingtomakeaspeech.我一想到得發(fā)表演講心理就緊張到發(fā)抖。Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.他羞得兩頰發(fā)紅。Itisapity=shameformenottodoyouafavor.Wewereallastonishedattheunexpectednews.聽到這意外的消息，我們都震驚了。The3yearoldboyunexpectedlywentviral.走紅瘋傳VirusTheshockingnewunexpectedlywentviral.Withasinkingheart,hedraggedhisheavylegsbackhome,tiredout/exhausted/wornout/精疲力盡stressedout心力交瘁Hetrippedoverabigstone,pickedhimselfup/struggledtohisfeetandlimpedawayintears.瘸Hetrippedoveralegofhisclassmate,pickedhimselfup,dustedhisjacketandmadehiswaytoanemptyseat.Theboyfell/layonhisback/onhisstomach/onhissidestoodononefoot三、轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人的努力或借助外界1.Gatheringmycourage/strength,Icouldn’twaittosaysorrytoher,=apologizetoher.makeanapologytosbWhileeveryoneelselookedon觀望fromadistance,aladywithamaskdidn’thesitatetorushtous///withouthesitationWithouthesitation毫不猶豫=Withoutthinkingtwice不假思索Withoutdelay毫不耽擱Withoutrealizing,thenightwasapproaching.不知不覺(jué),Ihavegrownup.…..,49daysflewby.Without=Butforyourtimelyandgeneroushelp,Iwouldn’thavemaderapidprogressinE.Icouldn’twaittoconveymyheartfelt/sincere/heartygratitude=appreciation=thankfulnesstohim.Aheartymeal豐盛的真摯的Icouldn’thelpfeelingsorry/excitedforit./crying2Shestruggledtoherfeetandgavemeaworriedlook.她憂慮地看了我一眼。jumptoone’sfeet3.Shookhandswithsbenthusiasticallyclapped/weledsbwarmlyopenedhisarmstohug/embracehertightly=firmlyembracehissetback/therulesandregulations欣然接受挫折Patted/hithimonthehead/inthefaceCatch/grasp/grabsbbythearmPetted愛(ài)撫撫摸KisshimonthecheekHereachedouttograb/catchherbythehand,onlytofinditfrozenandtrembling.Shrugged聳肩hisshouldersEncouragedbytheteacher’swords,sheraisedherhand,whispering,“Ivolunteer”.whistlewhisperedinmyearsItwaswhisperedthat據(jù)傳thewarwasover.Theteachernoddedwithsatisfactionandthumbedupathim老師滿意地點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭，朝他豎起了大拇指在這學(xué)年剩下的時(shí)間里，我全身心地投入到學(xué)習(xí)中Idevotedmyselfpletelytomystudyfortherestoftheschoolyear.她看到眼前的景象，驚呆了，嘴巴張得大大的Shewasnumbwithshockatthesight/scene,withhermouthwideopen.目瞪口呆amustvisitscenicspotamustreadbookamustseefilmamusthaveapp5母親擁抱著我，低聲安慰我Mymotherhuggedmefirmly/tightly,whisperinginmyeartofortme.他走到她面前，幫她擦去臉上的淚水Hesteppedforward/overtoherandhelpedherwipethetears/sweatoffhercheeks/facegently/softlysweet9父親拍著我的肩膀，鼓勵(lì)我永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄自己的夢(mèng)想Pattingmeontheshoulder,myfatherencouragedmenevertogiveupmydreams10聽到呼喊，鄰居們沖了出來(lái)，想知道發(fā)生了什么Hearingthecry,outrushedtheneighbors,anxioustoknowwhathadhappened.Anxiety=depression=carecarefreeAtthefootofthehilllayariver.Infrontofthebuildingstoodnumerous/countlesstrees.Closinghiseyestightly,hetrembledalloverinpanic,notdaringtolookattheresults.Butwithhisteacher’sinspiringwordsinmind,hegatheredhiscourageandmanagedtokeepthebalanceandlethisfeargo.Heopenedhiseyesslowly,onlytoseethebrandnewworld.Heyelled/exclaimedtomeexcitedly,abrightsmilespreadingacross/onhisface.Seeingthescaredandtimidkitesailing=swinging=dancinggracefullyhighintheair,theboywaswildwithjoy=overthemoon,believingthatthekitehadlearnedagoodlessonthebestwaytodefeatfearistofaceitbravelyandoptimistically.Hefeltuneasyalthoughthespringbreezeswereheartilyblowing.春風(fēng)習(xí)習(xí)Thelookinhiseyestoldmethathehadknownthetruth,Withakindsmile,theboyfortedhergentlyTheysatinsilenceforamomentThat’sok/allrightThefirstdestinationthatsprings=occurs=estomindisdefinitelyMounTaiwhichenjoysenormousreputationathomeandabroad.四、 轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰1.Iwasfilled/consumed/overwhelmedwithgratitudeformyparents.充滿了2.Thecharmingscenerywithrollinggreenhillsdottedwithnumerous/countlesssheepandcattleisatruefeastforyoureyes.Thebreathtakingsceneryisboundtobeafeastforyoureyes.令人驚嘆的景色肯定令人大飽眼福。Thefantasticconcertisboundtobeafeastforyourears.Wearingasweetsmileonhisface,hesteppedovertome.面帶笑容Abrightsmileappearedon/spreadacrosshisface.他臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。Herfacelitup/brightened/glowedwhenIhandedherthepresent.無(wú)比喜悅Ifoundhereyeslightingup/brightwithjoy.Everyonewasinagoodmood.每個(gè)人的心情都很好。Atsightofmyclosefriend，myheartisassweetashoney.我的心情像吃了蜜一樣甜Icouldn’tcontainmyjoyandjumped/skippedintothehouse.我抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅，蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了家門。SkippingropeSkipyourbreakfastItseemedthatthetroublesome=hatefuldogturnedouttobehisbraveguardianangel.AngleHeturnedouttocheatmeofmyfeeling.Heturnedouttotakethefirstplace.Heturnedouttowastethevaluabletimereadingnovels..Hopefully,youreffortswillpayoff/berewarded..Hopefully,youbothwillbeadmittedto/intokeyuniversities.Hopefully,withourjoint/tirelesseffortswewillhavemorefantastic/fascinatingworld.Inodded,witha

bigsmilespreadingacross

mycheek.

我點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，臉上露出燦爛的笑容。Onarrivinghome,hebreathedasighofrelief.=hefeltrelieved.如釋重負(fù)松了一口氣Toone’srelief5.Onspottingthedog，heseemedtoseearayofhope，attemptingtomovetowardsitinstantly.Onthespot=scene6.Herheartbegantobeatwildly/fastthemoment/instantsheheardthenews.Beatbeatbeaten7.突然，她發(fā)現(xiàn)一架直升飛機(jī)朝她的方向飛來(lái)，便拼命揮舞著黃襯衫求救，希望里面的人能看到她Suddenly=allofasudden,findingahelicopterapproachingher,shewavedheryellowblousewildly=desperatelyforhelp,hopingsomeoneinitcouldspother五、失望：但是問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題1.Unluckily=unfortunately,ButinvainButwithoutsuccessButnouseHelayinbed,wonderingwhattodonext?unsureofwhattodoatalosswhattodo.Shelowered/droppedherhead,wonderinghowtohide/maskherinnerembarrassment/nervousness/guilt.不知道如何掩飾內(nèi)心的尷尬。3.Hebithislips,notknowingwheretoresthishands.他咬著嘴唇，不知道把手放在哪里。BitebitbittenShedroppedherheadandstared/peered/gazedatherfeet,hopingnobodywouldnoticehowembarrassedshewasandhavingnocouragetolookintoherteacher’seyes.GlareatPeerbeer4.cameintosight/viewThemoment/instant/minuteIarrivedhome,abrandnewcarcameintosight.glancedbackoverhisshoulder=turnedaroundandspottedhimsleepingLookingaround,withhiseyesfocused/fixedonthescreenWithhiseyesgluedtothegames,hefailedtonoticemeenterhisstudy.完全被吸引了5.Hewasnappinginthechair,narrowinghiseyeseyedhimupanddownthoughtfully若有所思/withinterest饒有興趣Looksbintheeyeslookintohiseyesforawhile六、新法：突然有了一個(gè)想法（說(shuō)明這個(gè)想法）1.Itoccurredto=cameto/hit/struckmethathehadsuchabigfamilytosupport/providefor.Agoodideaoccurred=cameto/hit/struckmethatIwouldhelp/aidmumwiththehouseworkAnideaflashedacross/intohismindthat.......他腦子里閃過(guò)一個(gè)念頭。Agoodideaformedinhismind.他腦中有了一個(gè)主意。AgoodideahitmethatIwoulddoactsofkindnessinthenursinghome療養(yǎng)院Hisprofound耐人尋味深刻speech/wordswasinspiringandIwasdeeplymoved/touched.他的發(fā)言鼓舞人心，讓我很受觸動(dòng)Profound1haveafarreachingeffecton2knowledgeableAllthosepresenttolistentohersadstoryweremovedtotears.凡在場(chǎng)聽到她悲慘經(jīng)歷的人無(wú)不感動(dòng)得流淚。HerencouragementflashedintomymindcrowdedinmymindWithhisencouragementechoing縈繞/crowdinginmymind,Ikeptinagoodstateofmindandperformedprettywellinthespeech.3.Atthatmoment,hecouldhardlyhide/maskhisinnerguilt/embarrassment.Afterhesitatingforawhile,herose/arosefromhisseatslowlyandslippedoutoftheroomsecretly,feelinghisfaceburning.內(nèi)疚behesitanttoIfyouareinneed,don’thesitatetoturntomeforhelpHehurriedtothesupermarket,onlytofinditwasclosedHehurriedtothebookingoffice,onlytobetoldtheticketshadbeensoldout.Seeingtheirtaskfinishedgavethemasense/feelingofsatisfaction.看到任務(wù)完成了，他們感到很滿意。Sheisalways

readytohelp

othersinneedandalways

wears

shining/brightsmileonherface,

somanyclassmatesarewillingtomakefriendswith

her.她總是樂(lè)于助人并且臉上總是掛著燦爛的笑容，因此很多同學(xué)都愿意和她交朋友。She

couldn't

conceal/hide/masktheexcitement

andrushedhome

totellher

motherthegood

news.她掩飾不住興奮，急忙回家告訴母親這個(gè)好消息Theymadethedealwithanexchangeofsmiles.他們達(dá)成協(xié)議，相視一笑。Hewokeupthatmorningwith

afeelingofexcitement.他一起床就感到很興奮。Her

excitementgrew

astheholidaycamenearer.隨著節(jié)日越來(lái)越近，她越來(lái)越興奮。Everytimewementioned/referredtothefunnyincidentsofthejourney，apleasantsmilewould

spreadover/across

Mom'sface.每次提到旅途中的趣事，媽媽的臉上就會(huì)浮現(xiàn)出愉快的笑容七、 結(jié)局：過(guò)了一段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折1.Shortly=soon=Beforelong,,afterwards后來(lái)afterthatandthenSureenough果然Beforelongtheyspottedanappropriate/properbranchforawalkingstick/cane.Branchparentpany2.Hecametorealizethatitwasdifficulttopleaseeverybody.眾口難調(diào)。Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.Atotallystrangerheisatotalfailure/loser3.Muchtohissurprise/astonishment/amazement/shock=tohisgreatsatisfaction/excitement/relief/pride/disappointment,allthekidspresentwerewilling/ready/contenttogiveaway/donatesomethingusefultothessinpovertystruck=strickenareas.Earthquakestruckareasfloodstrickenareas.4.Shehurriedtothebuildingoutofbreathwhereherfatherworked,breathingasighofrelief./feelingrelieved.hurried/rushed/dashed/racedtopickupthebooksontheground.Hewaswildwithjoy/overthemoon/ontopoftheworld,singinganddancingonthetopofthehill.欣喜若狂歡天喜地beoverjoyedtogohiking//atthesuccess.Gospringouting6.Asshewasdeeplytouchedbysuchawarmscene,herheartmelted.Ultimately/Eventually，shemanagedtoreachthefinish(ing)line，exhausted/tiredout/wornout.7.Soattachedweretheytoeachotherthattheybecamegenuinepartners./Socharming=attractive=engaging=fascinatingarethegamesthattheyarepopularwithnumerous/countlessteenagers.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’tfallasleep.8.Tearsofgratitude=appreciationrollingdownhischeeks,hesaidthankfullywithwateryeyes,“Youhavesavedme.Ican’tthankyoutoomuch.Youaremyangel.”angleYoucan’tbetoocareful/carefulenoughintheexam.Youcan’tworktoohard./hardenough八、總結(jié)：點(diǎn)題，呼應(yīng)前文豹尾讀后續(xù)寫中有些為主旨升華類的文章，即續(xù)寫的兩段內(nèi)容中，第一段采用故事描寫，第二段或整段，或末句采用主旨升華句，從而點(diǎn)明文章的主旨，拔高整篇文章的立意。本專題包括：成長(zhǎng)型主旨句助人型主旨句脫險(xiǎn)型主旨句（一）成長(zhǎng)型主旨句功能：成長(zhǎng)是讀后續(xù)寫的一個(gè)重要主題，包括學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、克服困難、追逐夢(mèng)想、戰(zhàn)勝自我等子主題。相關(guān)表達(dá)積累：活到老學(xué)到老It'snevertoolatetolearn.克服困難overe/getover/conquerallthedifficulties完成目標(biāo)acplish/reach/achieveyourgoal/aim實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想realize/fulfilyourdreams追逐夢(mèng)想pursue/chaseafter/runafterone’sdreampursuit創(chuàng)造奇跡createmiracles/workwonders充分利用takeadvantageof=makefulluseof=makethemost/bestof=employ做出努力makeeveryeffort=makegreat/doubleefforts=goallout=sparenoeffort=struggle=strive只要as/solongas克服恐懼conquerfear句子練習(xí)：學(xué)習(xí)永遠(yuǎn)為時(shí)不晚。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該有權(quán)利去接受更多的挑戰(zhàn)，做更多的嘗試。It'snevertoolatetolearn.Eachindividualhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemore

attempts.只要我們敢于夢(mèng)想，不被困難所阻擋，一切皆有可能一夢(mèng)想永無(wú)止境。Aslongaswedaretodreamanddon'tletdifficultiesgetinourway,nothingisimpossibleandthere'snoend/limittoourdreams.戰(zhàn)勝恐懼和實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)需要決心和樂(lè)觀。Determinationandoptimismarewhatittakestoconqueryourfearandacplishyourgoal.Confidenceanddiligencearewhatittakestomakeitinthefuture.Facingyourproblembravelyratherthanrunningawayfromthemisthebestapproachtohandling=resolvingtheissues世界總會(huì)給有夢(mèng)想的人開路。Theworldalwaysmakeswayforthedreamer./thepeoplewithselfdiscipline5.事實(shí)上，每個(gè)人都有天賦。發(fā)現(xiàn)它的時(shí)候要勇敢，也要付出努力。最終，你會(huì)創(chuàng)造奇跡。Actually/Inreality/Asamatteroffact,everyindividualpossessestalent.Bebravewhenyoufind/spotitandalsomakegreatefforts,andyoucancreatemiracleseventually/intheend/ultimately.6.永遠(yuǎn)不要低估你的行為的力量。Neverunderestimatethepowerofyouraction.selfdisciplineselfreflection/cooperation=teamworkNeveroverestimateyourpower/ability.Youshouldbemodest.Individualstogethermakeagreatdifference.眾志成城Nothingismoreimportantthantokeep/existinharmonywithnature.Nothingismorepreciousthanhealthandwellbeing.Previous=formerNothingismoreimportantthanselfesteem/discipline,confidenceanddiligenceNothingwasmoreembarrassingthantobecaughtplayinggames.ItwasrightthenthatIresolvedtopursuemydream.PursuitItwasnotuntilthenthatIsensed/realizedwhatanimportantrolehealthplayedinourdailylife.NotuntilthendidIsense……Onlyinthisway,couldyoumakeitsoonerorlater.Onlywhenyougrowup,canyourealizehowmuchyourparentsloveyou.（二）助人型主旨句友情功能：幫助別人或受到幫助，一直以來(lái)是我們讀后續(xù)寫的一個(gè)重要主題。e.g.:Kindnessturnedouttobepassedonfromonepersontoanother.Itwastheinvaluableactsofkindnessthatmadetheworldabetterplace.Undoubtedly,itwastheinvaluablefriendshipthatmeltedourlonelinessandbrightenedourlifewheneverwewereinneed,whichwaswellworthtreasuringforgood.1.Fromthenon,Imadeupmymind/wasdeterminedtodoafavorforsomeone