2024屆高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類-爸爸指導(dǎo)下第一次騎自行車講義-

讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn)：Afteraverymeaningfulconversationwithmydadabouttheolddays,wecameupwithanobjectthatwebothrememberedclearly.Itwasmyveryfirstbicycle.MymindtoldmeIgotitwhenIwasseven,whowascheatedtorideitforfiftyyardsalonethefirsttimeItried!

Mydadputtogetherallthesmallpiecesofthebicyclefromabeautifulmaterialthathecalled,“Yourowncar."OfcourseIknewhehadsomemagicalability,butIdidn'tthinkhecouldmakesuchanawesomeobject.Headdedtheseatandthepedals（踏板）sothatIwouldnothaveanyproblems.MydadrecalledthebicyclewasthesmallesthecouldfindwhileIrememberhowhugeitwas.IwassoafraidofitandtherewasnowaythatIwasgoingtocontrolthatmonster-sizedmaterial.Thebicyclewasleftinmybackyardasadecorationforamonthbecauselrefusedtorideit.Honestly,Iwasscaredtotryit.

Afteramonth,mydadgavemealecturetoteachmewhatbeingamanwasallabout.Iwasfinallydeterminedtotryit.MydadwasproudofmeandIfeltverymanly.HeandIwenttotheparktoseewhatwecoulddothere.

Theparkwasemptywhenwearrived.Ihadnodoubtthatmydadtoldeverybodynottobetherebecausewehadtouseit.Ifeltsorryforotherpeople，butIwasproudtohavesuchanomnipotent（全

能的）personasmydad.

Wefoundasmoothandopenspace.MydadwasholdingthebackpartoftheseattomakesureIdidn'tfell.HepromisedmethatIwasnotgoingtofallbecausehewouldberunningrightbehind,holdingthebicycle.注意：

1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.【前文分析】

文體為personalnarrativewriting，敘述的是個(gè)人第一次的騎行經(jīng)歷。文本較為簡(jiǎn)單。具體情節(jié)為作者我在爸爸的鼓勵(lì)和幫助下第一次學(xué)習(xí)騎自行車，在爸爸再三承諾會(huì)扶著自行車后座后我不知不覺地騎了50yards，轉(zhuǎn)頭卻發(fā)現(xiàn)爸爸早就放開了手...

【續(xù)寫框架】Para1:Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.1.HowdidIfeeloncethebicyclemoved?2.Howwoulddadrespond?3.WhywouldIturnaround?Para2:Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.1.WhatwouldhappentomewhenIturnedaround?2.WhatwouldIsaytomydad?3.Whataboutmyfirstridingexperience?DidImakeiteventually?

【優(yōu)美句子展示】1.

Contraryto

thefirsttimeIrode,Ichangedmyattitudetoitandmadeuptobebrave.

Itwasnotunexpectedthat

Ikeptmybalanceandrodesmoothlyonmyown.

Challengingthoughitwas,Ieventuallyovercomeitand

hadagoodcommandof

it.2.

Feelingalitterscaredbutconfident,Itiredmybesttocontrolthebicycleand

movedatalowpace.3.

Howevertoughitwouldbe,

thethoughtof

beingarealmanforcedmetopracticeitagain.

Withsometrialanderror,

Ifinallyhadagoodcommandofit.4.FearfulandaimlessthoughIwas,Istilltriedtobalancemyself.5.

Thefeelingofscary

tookup

mymindcompletely.6.

Bearingmydad’swordsinmymind,Iwasgraduallyfamiliarwiththebicycleandseemedto

getthehangof

it.7.

NeverhadIanticipatedthat

myfatherdidn’tholethehandleofmybicycle.8.

Iwasfrustratedthatmyfatherdidn’tkeephispromiseto

keepmeaccompanied.9.

Anxiousanddesperate,Icried

atthetopofmylungsinanattemptto

makemyselfheard

bymyfather.Then,Irechargedmyselfandgaveasecondtry.10.

Immediately,I

wasenvelopedinpanic

withmyheartbeatingviolently.11.

Notknowingwhattodonext,I

gotsuckedinthefearandfeltmykneesweakandmythroattighten.ThereisnodoubtthatIfellfromthebikeanddroppedtothefloorterribly.12.Isucceededin

conqueringmyinneranxiety

andriding.Fromthisunforgettableexperience,Ialteragreatdeal.Iamalwayswillingtotrynewthings.13.

Asenseofscare

tookholdof

me,makingmelosemybalance.14.

Instead,myfatherstaredatme

inthedistance.15.

Myfatherencouragedmetotryagain,which

boostedmymoraleandhelpedmereturntonormal.16.

Immediate,Isloweddownmypace,searchingformyfather

hereandthere,butinvain.17.

Afterseveralminute'stry,I

madeit.

Thismyfirstbicycletripwasaturningpointforme,showingthatIgrewintoabraveboy.18.

Incredible,itdidn’ttakelongbefore

Icouldcontrolmybicyclemorepractically.19.

Itwasthefirsttimethat

Ihadmangedmybicyclesfreely.【范文展示】范文

1：

Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.

Sweatwellingonmyforehead,I

triedmyutmosttokeepthebalancebycontrollingthehandle.

SortofafraidasIwas,ImademyselfcalmdownbecauseIknewmydadwouldkeepprotectingme.

WhatIneededtodowas

holdingthebarsandkeepingpedaling.

Withitmoving,Ifeltitwasn't

asdifficultas

Ihadexpectedandevenbegantospeedup.

SodelightedwasIthat

Iwantedtoyelloutandsharemyfeelingswithmydad.

Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.

Agreatsenseofshockandscareseizedmeandmymindsuddenlywentblank.

MybodybeganshakingandIfelloffthebicycle.

Lyingontheground,Ifeltgreatpainsonmylegs.ThenDadapproachedandsaid,

“Bemanly.”

Regaining

mycourage,Iclimbedontothebicycleagain.Iheldthebarstightlyandmadeeffortstobalancemybody.Myfather

commented

Iwasoneofthequickestlearnershehadeverseen.Buthedidn'trealizeitwasthealmightysenseofsecurityandtrustfromhimthatplayedthebestpart.范文

2：

Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.

“Lookstraightforwardandkeepholdofthehandletightly!”

Myfatheremphasized.

Withpalmssweatingandlegstrembling,Imadeeveryefforttokeepthebalanceandthebikewaswindingforwardslowly.

Deeplyconvincedthat

mydadwasholdingmybackseat,Iwasmuchinreliefandwobbledoffdowntheroad.Allofasudden,I

stumbledontheunev