酷學(xué)六級寫作高分秘訣小時

六級寫作高分秘訣2小時突破主講：朱偉新東方教育科技集團十位“集團演講師”稱號獲得者。新東方上海學(xué)校教學(xué)管理中心主任、名師工作室項目負(fù)責(zé)人。新東方在線全國綜合評分最高的老師?？佳杏⒄Z寫作、考研閱讀、考研詞匯、托福寫作、托福閱讀培訓(xùn)師，暢銷網(wǎng)絡(luò)視頻課程《戀練有詞》講師斯諾克上海沃德大師賽華東地區(qū)推廣賽翻譯、新聞官。個人著作《考研英語作文考前預(yù)測必背20篇》是2013-2014年英語寫作類暢銷書；暢銷詞匯系列書籍《戀練有詞》及配套網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程兩年以來累計學(xué)員達120萬人次，銷售額突破1000萬；最新暢銷白皮書系列《四級英語作文預(yù)測白皮書》、《六級英語作文預(yù)測白皮書》是亞馬遜Kindle電子圖書英語考試類單月銷量第一名THINGSABOUTWRITING:1、sentencestructure2、paperstructure:head,body,conclusion3、modelEssay1、sentencestructure

Warm-up簡單句----復(fù)雜句話題：選擇困難、人生迷茫、猶豫不決InChina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.ItisunveiledbyarecentsurveythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.ItisunveiledbyarecentsurveythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.Itisunveiledbyarecentsurvey

initiatedbyChinaDailythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduates

investigatedfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.2、paperstructurehead,body,conclusion→what====background(chart/phenomenon)why★===mainidea+analyses(reasons/effects)+caseshow===conclusion(echothemainidea)/suggestions/future3.ModelEssays第一大類雙向話題作文（考查矛盾）TheFragranceAlwaysStaysInTheHandThatGivesTheRoseWhenamanisindifficulty,asillustratedinthepictureabove,hecanlookforhelpfromthosepeoplehehelpedinthepast.Thisremindsusoftheimportanceofahealthyconceptofgivingandtaking.Beginwithgiving.Whenpeopleseethatyouhelpothersinneed,theymaybeinspiredtohelpaswell;thatistosay,youaresettingagoodexampleforothers.Forexample,whenachildseeshisfatherbuyinggroceriesforanelderlyperson,it’sverylikelythathe/shewillimitatethisbehaviorandlearntolookforwaystobehelpfulaswell.Asfortaking,whenyouaregenerousinhelpingothers,youwillreceivetheassistanceyouneedinonewayoranother.Butweshouldn’t“give”onlysowecanlater“take.”Whenweworkforthegoodofothers—evenifwereceivenopersonalrewardlater—wefilltheworldwithhopeandmaketheworldabetterplacetolive.

Onthewhole,theworldwillbemorewonderfulwheneveryoneiswillingtohelpothers.舉一反三drawinginferencesaboutothercasesfromoneinstance

It’sthemostinterestingcartoonI’veevermetinthelatest10-yearrealexampapers.Ifthemanintherightscissorstherope,boththevictimintheleftandhimself/herselfwilllosethechancetosurvive.Actually,tohurtsomeoneisgoodtononebutworsetoyourself,asaChineseclassicsayinggoes.

Thesedays,we’veseenalotofmoraldisastersviasocialnetworks.Theunderlyingreasonforourmankindtohurteachotheristhatweareusedtolettingourownegoout.Inthebackgroundofthe“fastandfurious”economicdevelopment,everyspecificpersoncanfeelunderunspeakablepressureduetothelimitedoccupationsandpersonaloptions.Normally,thewaytofitthefiercesituationistochangeyourself.However,fewpeoplearewillingtogetoutofthewayofthemselves.

Rather,theyhaveindulgedthemselvesinegoisticimpulse,whichmayleadthemtosacrificeother’sbenefits.Forexample,it’sveryirrationaltosacrificesocialjusticeinthenameofefficiencybecausetheterminalofhappinessisequalcaretowardseveryoneratherthantherichnessofminority.Whenefficiencykillsjustice,hehimself

willdiesoon.

Forthesakeofyourself,pleasecherisheverylittledripofother’skindnessanddiscardtheDevilinside.第二大類單向話題作文

LackofTrustandHonesty

Currentsocietyisdiscussingtheproblemoflackoftrustandhonesty.Citizensaresurroundedbyfalseproductsandliesastheygothroughtheirnormaldays.Whenwemeetasupposedlydisabledmanbeggingformoneyinthestreet,weimmediatelywonderifheischeatingus.Consumerscannoteasilybelieveanythingmerchantshaveguaranteedinthebusinessworld.Thissituationneedstobeaddressedthroughtheactionofgovernmentandsociety.Theunderlyingreasonforthisphenomenonisthatbusyschedulesinlifeandworkleavepeoplewithlittletimetoreallyinvestigatethingsintheoutsideworld;consequentlypeoplecannottrustthosetheydonotknow.Trustisnotsomethingthatcanbebuiltwithquick-fixtechniques.Rather,itissomethingthatiscultivatedthroughpersonalinteractions.Anotherfactoratplayisthattherearenotenoughconsequencestodeterimmoralpeoplefromlyingandcheatingtobenefitthemselves.Thegovernmenthasnotenactedlawsstrictenough,andmustenforcealltherelevantlaws.Inviewofallthesefactors,certainmeasuresmustbetakentoimprovethissituation.Governmentshouldenactlawstopunishfraud,andthepublicshouldenhancetheircommunicationwithothersandbuilduptheirtrust.Onlythroughthesemethodscanwereturntoamoremoralenvironment.

第三大類：郵件，通知

（一)回復(fù)投訴信

（對于別人投訴的回復(fù)和安撫）投訴你負(fù)責(zé)的勤工助學(xué)中心某學(xué)生兼職表現(xiàn)糟糕Iwillnotuseyourtemporarystaffanymorefortheirdisastrousperformance.DearSir,Inresponsetoyourletterofcomplaintaboutourtemporaryadministrationassistanceyoureceivedfrommyorganization,Iwouldliketoapologize.

Wereallycareaboutourclientsandthatiswhywewilltrytogivesomeexplanationaboutwhathappened.Para.2:Actually,everycandidate

wouldobtainhisorherqualificationonlyifpassingourstrictandsystematictraining.

Ipromisetheperson

youreceivedlastweekwasnotanexception.Unfortunately,hisfamilycoincidedwithsomecatastrophicaffairsthesedayssothathehasmadealotofmisunderstandingsduetoabsenceofmind.Itisveryirrationalthatwestillsendhimtoworkforyou.Para.3:Knowingthatthiscaseisexceptional,Iwouldliketogiveyousomekindofcompensation.Nextweek,ifyouplease,Iwillsendyouanotherskilledfreeofcharge.Reallyhopeyoucanconsiderthismendation.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing，

TheDirectorofDepartment（八）報告：report(二).關(guān)于學(xué)校及宿舍文化建設(shè)的匯報通告ReportontheCulturalConstructionofOurDormitoriesandCampusReportontheCulturalConstructionofOurDormitoriesandCampus

Thisreportaimstomakeabriefretrospectabouttheculturalnurtureinourdormitoriesandcampuslastyear.

First,wehaveheldmorethan10matches,including“SanitationGotTalents”,“theKingofKaraoke”,“SpeechContest”,etc.,amiddifferentdormitoriestopromo