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讀后續(xù)寫北斗星盟讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。WhenIwas19,IspentpartofmysummeratanadventurecamponVancouverIsland,supervising(照料)agroupof10yearoldgirls.Towardstheendofthefirstweek,Itookthemonacamping.Bysixintheevening,we'dclimbedasmallmountain.Thepeakhadtreesononesideandbaldrockontheother.IletthegirlsplayinthewoodedareawhileIarrangedthingsfordinner.Whenthescreamingstarted,Iwasn'ttooalarmedIcouldseemygrouptearingthroughthebushandthoughtthey'djustdisturbedabees'nest.Asthefirstgirlappeared,Iaskedwhatwasgoingon."Wildcat!"shegasped.Theimageinmyheadwasofahousecatgonewild,butwithhernextbreathsheadded,"It'sattackingAlyson."Itoldthegirlstoclimbontotherocksandthenrantowherethey'dbeenplaying.Alysonwaslyingbybush.Shewasonherback,eyeswide,staringatahugecatbesideher.Thecatwaswatchingme.Anyonefamiliarwithwesternswillhaveseenacougar(美洲獅)themountainlionthatspringsfromtherockfaceontothepasserby.We'dbeentoldhowtodealwithbears:"Keepstill,backup,makeyourselflookbig."Butwehadn'tcoveredcougars.Igrabbedastickandswungitintotheanimal'sface.Startled,ittookoffintothebushes.SeeingthatAlysonwashurt,Isetoffforthefirstaidbox,buthadn'tgonefourstepswhenIheardamoan.Turningback,Isawthecougarcrouched(蹲伏)byAlyson'shead.Itappearedtobeeatingher.ThistimeIusedabiggerstick,hitharderandheldon.Onceagain,itdisappeared.andIkneltbyAlyson."There'snowaysomeonecanlivethroughthis,"Ithought.Thecathadtorndeepintoherneck.Shehadlongcutsonherface."AmIgoingtodie?"sheasked.Herheartbeatwasracingbutweak,thesignofahearttremblingfromshock.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好:4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:"You'renotgoingtodie,"Isaid.___________________________________Paragraph2FrommybranchIcouldseesomepeoplemovingonanearbymountain.___________情節(jié)構(gòu)思:第一段:Alyson安慰后的反應(yīng)+我的解決或急救方法+發(fā)現(xiàn)方法行不通+聽到遠(yuǎn)處別人聲音第二段:陌生人的幫忙+直升機(jī)的到來+我們下山+最后對(duì)這件事的反思本文內(nèi)容是典型的遇到挫折困難之后解決挫折困難,總體思路都是差不多的。1.遇到問題(環(huán)境描寫/情境描寫、情緒描寫:恐懼、絕望、鼓起勇氣)2.自我解決問題(動(dòng)作描寫:施救動(dòng)作、掙扎努力)3.自救失敗(一般自救都會(huì)失敗。情緒描寫、動(dòng)作描寫)4.出現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)(求救與被救過程。對(duì)話描寫、動(dòng)作描寫)5.被救之后的反應(yīng)(內(nèi)心反思和對(duì)施救人的反應(yīng)和感激等)6.主旨呼應(yīng)升華參考范文:Paragraph1:"You'renotgoingtodie,"Isaid.ItookoffmyTshirtandgotAlysontoholditagainstherneck,thenranforthefirstaidkitandasleepingbag.Theothergirlsstaredfromtheirrock."Everything'sfine!"Iyelled.ThenIrealisedIcouldn'tleavetogethelp,orrisksendinganyoneelse.Iwasterrified;Iwantedsobadlytorunaway,butknewthatwasn'tanoption.Instead,Iclimbedatree,wonderingwhetherIcouldbeluckyenoughtoseekhelpanywhere.(81字)Paragraph2:FrommybranchIcouldseesomepeoplemovingonanearbymountain.Theywereanothergroupofcampers.Icriedout,"Help!Cougarattack!"Helpeventuallyarrived.Anothercounsellor,John,hadsenthisboystoraisethealarmwhileherantous.Asdarknessfell,ahelicopterarrivedtoliftAlysonoffthemountain,andtherestofuswereacpanieddownhilltoawaitingtruck.Alysonrecoveredslowly.Allthatmademechoose"fight"over"flight"wasthethoughtofAlysonbeingeatenalive.(74字)下水文:Paragraph1"You'renotgoingtodie,"Isaid.Afaintsmiletuggedatthecornerofhermouth,yetherskinghastlypaleandwaxy.Staringatbloodoozingfromherwound,Iendeavoredtoreasonoffthenervousnessthatovertookmeandcollectmyselftothinkofafeasibleplan.Worriedthatthecougarwouldreturn,Itriedtocarryherinmyarmstoheadforthefirstaidsite,which,however,deterioratedthedeepcuts.Itwasatmywit’sendthatIheardavoiceingfromsomewherenotdistant.Paragraph2FrommybranchIcouldseesomepeoplemovingonanearbymountain.Igaveablastonthewhistleandshouted,“Help!Help!Cougarattack!”NosoonerhadtheyarrivedthantheybandagedAlyson’sneckwoundwithgauzefromtheirfirstaidkit.Oneofthemmadeanemergencycall.Notlongafterthat,achopperroaredoverheadandAlysonwaseventuallyflownbythehe
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