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申請美國大學文書范文通用10篇5申請美國大學文書范文第一篇清晰的規(guī)劃只是第一步,決定申請文書成敗的關(guān)鍵條件是具體的執(zhí)行。首先,留學申請書開頭第一句很重要。大學招生官看過的留學申請文書千千萬,如果不能在第一句成功吸引他們的注意力,可能接下來也很難給他們留下深刻的印象了。偉大的第一句話是有力的。它可以設置懸念,描繪一個令人興奮的場景或一個不明確的結(jié)論,吸引讀者了解更多。其次,使用有個性的寫作風格。寫作是為了讓讀者感興趣。在這種情況下,讀者是一名美國大學招生官,他在你之前閱讀了數(shù)千個學生的留學申請文書,之后還會閱讀數(shù)千篇,因此絕對要努力讓大學的招生官不感到厭煩。使用有趣的描述,避免陳詞濫調(diào),多從自己的獨特角度描寫……簡單來說,使用任何讓留學申請書的內(nèi)容讀起來像你而不像任何其他人的創(chuàng)作的方法,讓留學大學的招生官喜歡。最后,是最基本,但也可能是最容易被忽略的,英語使用的正確性。要保證沒有拼寫錯誤,沒有奇怪的語法,沒有亂七八糟的標點符號,以及沒有把美國大學學校的名字弄混。如果這種精確性不是你的強項,那么可以讓父母、老師、文書老師和其他任何可能發(fā)現(xiàn)英語使用錯誤的人幫忙檢查。雖然留學申請書必須是你自己的作品,但找他人幫助潤色是完全沒有問題的~申請美國大學文書范文第二篇PromptWeknowyouleadabusylife,fullofactivities,manyofwhicharerequiredofyou.Tellusaboutsomethingyoudosimplyforthepleasureofit.Thisisn’tatrickquestion.Wewanttoseehowyoubringbalancetoyourlife.(100words)ResponseIamanenthusiasticfoodie.Isubscribetomyfavoritefoodblogs,anxiousfornewrecipes,andIresearchexoticfruitsandvegetables.Armedwithknowledgebutlittleexperience,Iexperimentinmyownkitchen.Asthesimpleingredientscombineinharmonyanddelicioussmellswaftthroughmyapartment,Iameagertotestthefinaldish.Thoughtheendresultisnotalwaysperfect,Ienjoyeverystepofpreparingfood.—學生ElaineLin’18這篇留學申請書的切入點非常獨特,同學說自己是個“干飯人”。從具體內(nèi)容上來看,申請人著重于強調(diào)自己“樂于創(chuàng)新和實驗,不害怕失敗”的特點,巧妙地通過介紹做飯的這個經(jīng)歷,突出了自己的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)~申請美國大學文書范文第三篇PromptWeknowyouleadabusylife,fullofactivities,manyofwhicharerequiredofyou.Tellusaboutsomethingyoudoforthepleasureofit.(100wordsorfewer)Response“Iforgotmypick-upline;you’rereallycute.Hi.”Ilovemeetingrandompeople.I’vefoundanunexpectedcomplimentcanmakesomeone’sday,andrandomconversationcanberejuvenatingtoanyone.IfIfeelsocialanxiety,Ifindovercomingitisexhilarating.Sometimes,I’llwalkaroundthelocalWalmartjusttosay“hi”toeveryone.I’verealizedmanypeopleareinterestingandsocial,eliminatingmyprejudices.Inoweasilyapproachpeopletodiscussideas.Atroboticscompetitions,Italktoeveryoneandlearnfromthem.Throughmeetingrandomothers,myappreciationofpeopleandtheirstorieshassurged.—學生KevinPalisoc’18申請美國大學文書范文第四篇PromptPleasetellusmoreaboutyourculturalbackgroundandidentityinthespacebelow.(100words)ResponseMygenesareover99percentidenticaltoeveryotherHomoSapiens.IliveinaprogressivemeditationcommunityinFairfield,Iowa,thatisrichineasternphilosophy.Ididnotgrowupinaparticularlyreligioushousehold,butmyparentshavebeeninterestedinNewAgephenomenaforaslongasIcanremember.Iwasnotdirectlyexposed,however,untilImovedtoFairfield.Fortunately,myskepticismwasmetwithlove,bliss,reason,anddirectexperienceofthedevelopmentofconsciousness.Adiverse,globalcommunityhasgatheredinFairfield,forthewonderfullivestheseprinciplesandmeditationcreate.PromptWeknowyouleadabusylife,fullofactivities,manyofwhicharerequiredofyou.Tellusaboutsomethingyoudosimplyforthepleasureofit.(100wordsorfewer)ResponseWell,lastnightIwentsleddingwithabunchoffriendsthenwecamebacktomyhousetwothirdsfrozenandjumpedinmyhottubandlistenedtomusic.Thenwejumpedouthalf-nakedandmadesnowangelsbeforesprintingbacktothewarmthofthewater.Funnight.Ialsoreallylovemeditation.ThedailyexperiencesIhaveareunlikeanythingelseinmylife.Theyvarywidely,soit’salwaysinterestingandfun,yettheyareconsistentlyblissfulandrejuvenating.Mymeditationallowsmetoenteractivitywithvigorandjoyforlife!PromptTellusaboutthemostsignificantchallengeyou’vefacedorsomethingimportantthatdidn’tgoaccordingtoplan.Howdidyoumanagethesituation?(200-250words)ResponseChoosingbetweencontinuingmytraditionalhighschooleducationanddivergingfromthebeatenpathtopursuewhatIthoughtwouldbringgreaterknowledge,skill,andblisswasprobablythemostdifficultchoiceIhaveevermade.TheconflictbetweenwhatIfeltandrationallyknewtoberight,andwhatsocietywastellingmetodo,wasenormous.Manypeoplethoughtmyjudgmentwaspoor,andIattimeshaddoubts.IfeltlikeIwasthrowingawayeverythingIhadworkedhardforsinceIwasakindergartener,bybreakingthesystem.Ihaveyettobeadmittedtoanycolleges,soIstilldonotknowthefullconsequencesofmyactions,butIdoknowthatregardless,choosingtoleaveisoneofthebestdecisionsIhaveevermade.IfIhadnotbrokenofftogaintheknowledgeandexperienceIneeded,IwouldnotbethepersonIamtoday,andIfeelfantastic.Igainedsomuchsoquickly,thatIsoonknewthatIhadmadetherightchoice.BeforeIleftmyschool,however,Iwasstillcarryingthedogmaofandattachmenttoaneducationalsystemthatwasnotservingmeorhumanity.Marchingtothebeatofadifferentdrummerisnoteasyforanyone,especiallysomeonewhohasinvestmentsinthecurrentsong.Fortunately,easternphilosophyandmeditationassistedmeinlettinggo,andassoonasIdidfollowmyheart,greatthingshappened.—學生LaserNite’18這三篇留學申請文書的范文題目都很常規(guī),申請人也沒有選擇特別另類的切入點,但是他的故事都很個人且充滿細節(jié),這是非常值得學習的地方!申請美國大學文書范文第五篇為了讓大家更好的了解美國大學申請,我們?yōu)榇蠹覝蕚淞薚D申請干貨合集!包括美國大學夏校地圖、美國大學地圖、美國文書題目和范文等實用的申請干貨材料。你想知道的關(guān)于申請的資料這里統(tǒng)統(tǒng)都有!想要獲取干貨資料的同學,添加下方小馬甲并回復關(guān)鍵詞「干貨群」進入TD申請干貨分享群,即可免費領取申請干貨資料~如果你想了解TD全程/夏校/轉(zhuǎn)學申請服務,或期待TD在文書、選校和選專業(yè)、面試、科研項目等方面給予支持,可以掃描二維碼添加TD小馬甲進行咨詢。如果已經(jīng)有馬甲好友則無需重復添加,直接咨詢即可。申請美國大學文書范文第六篇大學申請書中的申論題應該選擇什么主題?以及事前該做什么準備?下列是幾個我們認為非常重要、有用,并且能幫助您做決定的注意事項。1.英文書寫能力對大部分亞洲學生而言,每天說的、寫的語言顯然不會是英文。想當然爾,準備申請書最困難的部分也就是用英文寫這些申論題。所以,您必須事先做好萬全準備,才能從容面對這個挑戰(zhàn)。在動筆寫申論題前,您必須先有二、三個月的時間做準備。這段時間內(nèi)英文書報讀得越多越好。特別注意這些文章的組織與架構(gòu),以及句子的結(jié)構(gòu)。您一旦看到可以用來描述自己的單字,務必記得抄在另外準備的筆記本上,并且將其組句方式記下來。在讀過大量不同的英文文章以后,練習寫一些描寫自己的句子。一開始,先寫二、三個簡單描述自己的句子。這些句子的結(jié)構(gòu)不必很復雜,只要用您習慣的結(jié)構(gòu)就可以。再來,列出您的專長才能、興趣,還有您喜歡的電影。簡單寫幾個段落來描述一些對您有影響的人、事、物。在整個寫作練習過程中,請專注在「什么人、什么事、什么東西」上,而不要太過注意細節(jié)。做這個練習的目的是讓您以自己為主題,先熟悉寫一些簡單的英文句子,然后再慢慢進步到能用這些句子組成完整的段落。幾個月后,您可以累積很多描述自己的單字與句子了。萬事起頭難,但慢慢的,您就會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己進步很多。而所收集這些關(guān)于自己的英文信息,在正式寫申論題的時候,就可以派上用場了。請記住評審委員要求您這些申論題的用意。他們想藉由這些申論題來認識您本人。當然,他們絕對有能力檢閱您的考試成績和解讀里頭的數(shù)字。但是他們更希望能從申論題中了解您是什么樣的人。所以藉由這些寫作前的練習,您會逐漸熟悉要如何以英文來描述自己。2.選定主題每篇送到評審委員的申論題都必須要有一個主題。有些學校會要求學生針對特定的問題作答;但有的學??梢宰屇芜x主題。不管怎樣,申論題的第一段必須要能清楚點出您的主題,而且整篇文章都必須根據(jù)這個主題發(fā)揮。主題是一篇文章能不能吸引讀者注意力的關(guān)鍵。如果沒有主題,讀者不但無從得知這篇申論題的目的,最糟的狀況是他很快會覺得乏味。如此一來,要怎么強求您的讀者有耐心地去探討您這篇申論題的重點呢?申請美國大學文書范文第七篇PromptWeknowyouleadabusylife,fullofactivities,manyofwhicharerequiredofyou.Tellusaboutsomethingyoudoforthepleasureofit.(100words)ResponseThankfully,Idon’thavetheattentionspanorthetolerancetoinvesttimeintoanundertakingthatIdon’tfindworthwhileandfun.WhileIaminvolvedinnumerousactivitiesrangingfromviolintodebate,Ineverexpectedtolookforwardtomyfour-hourshiftsasawaitressataretirementhome.Ihaveacommunityofgrandparentswhorecognizemeas“SmileyJudy”andafamilyofcoworkerswhorelishthefoodwithmeafterSundaybrunch.Alongwiththefast-pacedtablejuggling,thesillyandseriousinteractionsIhaveatmyworkplacearemyultimatesourceofpleasure.PromptAlthoughyoumaynotyetknowwhatyouwanttomajorin,whichdepartmentorprogramatMITappealstoyouandwhy?(100words)ResponseSomeofmyhardestdecisionstakeplaceintheboothofarestaurant,sochoosingamajorhasbeenanabsolutelyagonizingprocessforme.IfanciedsubjectareasfromEnglishtochemistry,butIfinally(hesitantly)decidedondoublemajoringinmathematicsandeconomicsandminoringinFrench.Mymostconcreteinterest,mathematics,originatesfrommyintroductiontocalculusandtherealizationthatthebreadthanddepthofthemathematicalworldextendbeyondstraightnumericalcalculations.IbelievethatMIT’ssuperiormathematicsprogramwilladdunimaginablynewdimensionstothismagicalrealmthatIhaveonlyjustdiscovered.PromptWhatattributeofyourpersonalityareyoumostproudof,andhowhasitimpactedyourlifesofar?Thiscouldbeyourcreativity,effectiveleadership,senseofhumor,integrity,oranythingelseyou’dliketotellusabout.(200-250)ResponseMyloveforpeopleisthebestpartaboutmyself.ThereisnobetterfeelingthanthehappinessIfindinmeetingnewpeopleandcreatingconnectionswiththem.Myextrovertedpersonalityistherootofmuchofmysuccessinleadership,presentations,andnetworking.Inaturallyreachouttopeople,andasaresult,IamabletoaccomplishprojectslikeestablishingamentoringprogramfortheFrenchHonorSocietyandathreefoldincreaseinmembershipfortheAsianAmericanClub.However,myoutgoingpersonalitymadethemostmemorableimpactatthe“ConversationwithMichelleObama,”aneventforwhichIwasnominatedtoattend.ThroughGoogleHangout,severalAmericancitieswereabletoconnecttoMichelleObamainSouthAfrica.WhentheKansasCitygroupwasaskedabouttechnologyintegrationineducation,thestudentsallfrozeunderneaththelimelight.Inaburstofcourage,Iblurtedacoupleofwordsandconsequentlyreceivedthemicrophonetocontinue.Atthatmoment,itdidn’tmatterthattherewerethousandsofpeoplearoundtheworldincludingMichelleObamalistening;itwasjustmeandmystringofthoughts.IwastheonlypersoninKansasCitytospeakthatday.Idistinguishmyselfwithmyenthusiasm,andIeasilyseemyselfthrivingasapartofthetight-knitcommunity,therisk-takinghackingculture,andthepassionatelynerdystudentpopulationofMIT.Afterall,Istillkeepintouchwithmylime-greencardedtourguide.—學生JudyWang’19申請美國大學文書范文第八篇PromptWeknowyouleadabusylife,fullofactivities,manyofwhicharerequiredofyou.Tellusaboutsomethingyoudoforthepleasureofit.(100wordsorfewer)ResponseIloveputtingonmakeup.ThereissomethingextraordinarilysatisfyingaboutchoosingdifferentcolorsandtexturestoputonmyfaceexactlyhowIplease.Inadditiontodailyswoopsofeyeliner,Ialsoenjoytechnicalspecialeffectsmakeup.Forthehorror-themeddressupdayduringhomecominglastyear,Iwokeupat5.toputona“creepydoll”makeuplookofmyowndesign,createdentirelyoutofliquidlatex,toiletpaper,eyeshadow,andfakeblood.Whetherterrifyingornot,makeupisarelaxingandcreativewayformetoexpressmyself.PromptAtMIT,weseektodevelopineachmemberofourcommunitytheabilityandpassiontoworkcollaborativelyforthebettermentofhumankind.Howhaveyouimprovedthelivesofothersinyourcommunity?(Thiscouldbeonepersonormany,atschoolorathome,inyourneighborhoodoryourstate,etc.)(200-250words)ResponseMatsuyowrappedheragedhandsaroundmine.Shehadbeenuncommunicativeandunabletofeedherselfforsometime.Slowly,shebeganmouthingalongasIsang“Aki-no-yuuhi,”atraditionalJapanesemelody.Thissimplesongaboutfoliageinthesettingsunhadfinallybrokenthroughthefogofherdementia.Thecaremanagerstoldmethat,fromthenon,Matsuyobecamemorealertandbeganfeedingherselfagain.IamsothankfulthatIcouldbreakdownthisbarrierwithmyJapaneseandmusicabilities.MatsuyoisoneoftheresidentslivingatSunriseSeniorLiving:Ihavespentover400hoursvolunteeringthere.MyresponsibilitiesatSunriseincludespendingone-on-onetimewithresidentsandleadinggroupactivitiessuchasexercise,currentevents,meditation,flowerarrangement,sing-alongs,baking,andgardening.Ialsobeganaweekly“SummerArtsandCraftswithGrace”activityandtaughtcrocheting,sculpting,painting,andjewelrymaking.Isometimesgiveviolinconcertsaswell.TheresidentsandstaffatSunrisegottoknowmesowellthatSunriseofferedmeajob(whichI,unfortunately,couldnottake),andoneoftheresidents,MamaT,referstomeashergranddaughter.Volunteeringhasmademeappreciatethatmembersofmycommunityareindeedmyfamily,andfamilymemberslookoutforandsupporteachother.NotonlywasIgiventheopportunitytoenrichtheseresidents’lives,buttheyalsointurngreatlyenrichedmine,intheinfinitelyrewardingmomentsinvolvingsomethingassimpleasaJapanesemelody.PromptTellusaboutthemostsignificantchallengeyou’vefacedorsomethingimportantthatdidn’tgoaccordingtoplan.Howdidyoumanagethesituation?(200-250words)ResponseTheatergoerswatchingmyhighschool’sspringmusical“AnythingGoes”mayhavenoticedoneeagerandaptly-namedAngelGracesmilingfromunderherblonde30swigandtapdancingherwaythroughtheentireshow.However,theywereoblivioustothephysicalandmentalexhaustionthisenergeticperformerenduredtoachievethatplaceonstage.Iwasbornwithhyperpronatedankleswhichcauseschronicfootpain.Afterfruitlessphysicaltherapysessions,mydoctorsrecommendedsurgery.Notonetomissanyschool,Ielectedtohavebothsurgeriesthesummerbeforemyjunioryear,onlyfourteendaysapart.Thus,Ispentmyentiresummeronthecouch,nauseous,frustrated,andelevatingbothanklesaboveheartlevelatalltimes.Whenschoolstarted,Iwasjuststartingtousecrutchestomovearoundclumsily.Afewweeksafterthebeginningofschool,ourchoreographerstartedweeklyafter-schooltapworkshopsinpreparationfor“AnythingGoes”inthespring.Immediately,Imadeupmymindtogo.Whileeveryoneclickedouttheirtimestepsandshuffleofftobuffaloes,Isatinachairinmyacebandagesandorthopedicshoes,frustrated,humiliated,andtryingtomimictheirmovements.Iwasacompletenovice,butslowly,slowly,Ilearnedhowtotap.Afteranentiresemesterofhardwork,the“AnythingGoes”castlistwasposted,andIreceivedafeaturedtaprole.Throughouttheshow,AngelGrace’sheelsclickedthestagewithwell-practicedprecision,herupturnedfaceglowingwithelationandtriumph.—學生GraceKuffner’20申請美國大學文書范文第九篇PromptDescribetheworldyoucomefrom;forexample,yourfamily,clubs,school,community,city,ortown.Howhasthatworldshapedyourdreamsandaspirations?(200-250words)ResponseIamcompletelyChinese.MyparentsareChineseandIwasborninChina.However,asfirst-generationimmigrants,myfamilyandIhavebeenimmersedintheFrench-CanadiancultureofMontrealandtheAmericancultureofKansasCity.IspentameaslyfivemonthsinChinaaftermybirth,aseeminglyshorteightyearsinMontreal,andanevenshorternineyearsinOverlandPark.Atheart,IamChineselikemybackground,butmychildhoodiscoloredbyFrenchinfluencesandmyadolescenceiscompletelypaintedwiththeexuberantAmericancharacter.Asaresult,alotofmylifehasbeencategorizedbymythreecountriesandcultures:thelanguagesIspeak,thehabitsIhave,andtheaspirationsIdream.Mycollegetrack,asofrightnow,istodoublemajorineconomicsandmathematicswhilealsominoringinFrench,butmyultimategoalistomakeapositiveandmemorableimpactontheworld.Everysubjectfieldhasadirectlineationtomydifferentcultures,andthemostobviousismyinterestinFrench.Whileitmaysoundsilly,Ifeelbeautifulwhenspeakingsuchabeautifullanguage,andIaimtofurtherdevelopmylinguisticfoundationthroughaminorandstudyingabroad.MyloveformathematicsismostprimarilyrootedinmyChineseculture,asmyfather’senthusiasmaboutlittlemathematicaltricksiscontagious.Finally,theopportunitiesandtheboldnessIfindinAmericanculturearebestepitomizedinitseconomiclandmark:WallStreet.PromptTellusaboutthemostsignificantchallengeyou’vefacedorsomethingimportantthatdidn’tgoaccordingtoplan.Howdidyoumanagethesituation?(200-250words)ResponseMathhadalwaysbeentheeasy,simplesubjectformeuntilcalculussuddenlyturnedmathintoaterriblyfascinatingnewworldformetoexplore.Myparadigmregardingtheseeminglyrigiddisciplineshiftedfromindifferencetoadesiretolearnhowthepuzzlepiecesoftheworldclickedandfittedtogether.IhopedtospreadthatsentimentbyestablishingMuAlphaThetaatmyschool,acharteringprocessthatIexpectedtolastatmosttwomonths.Thatpreconceivednotioncouldnothavebeenfurtherfromthetruth.Afteranarduousmonthinvolvinghoursofresearch,severalphonecalls,andadmittedly,somepestering,Igainedapprovaltostartthecharteringprocessinthesecondsemesterofmyjunioryear.Immediately,Iwrotethecharterapplication,bylaws,supplementarymaterials,andstudentapplicationforthemathdepartmenttoreview.Unfortunately,aseacherrorwastradedinwithanother,Irealizedthatmypredictedtimeframewasanover-optimisticdream.Thelagwasattributedtothelackofcohesivecommunicationandinitiative;Ikeptpushingmyresponsibilitiestothenextweekuntiltherewasnomoretimeleft.Consequently,Itookgreatermeasurestoaccomplishmygoalsbysettingharddeadlinesformyselfandapproachingthemathteachersmorefrequentlyforfeedback.Aftersevenmonths,themathdepartmentandIhavejustfinishedtheapplicationprocessandarereviewingthecandidates.Seeingmypassionmanifestintoatangibleorganizationexcitesme,andIhopethatitdoesthesameformyschool’scommunity.—學生JudyWang’19在第一篇留學申請書中,同學非常巧妙地將自己的成長經(jīng)歷和身份認同與學術(shù)興趣結(jié)合了起來。在第二篇留學申請文書范文中,申請人也通過寫學習數(shù)學的經(jīng)歷這種方式,成功將一個“爛大街”的題目,回答得生動有趣。申請美國大學文書范文第十篇AHomeDestroyedIwassevenyearsoldwhenIsawtheoceanforthefirsttime.MygrandmotherhadinvitedmetovisithernearOkinawa,Japan.Iwillneverforgetthatencounter—theintensesun,theendlesshorizon,theinfiniteshadesofbluethatdissolvedanyboundarybetweenskyandwaves.Andmostofall,thesecretofthewater.Swimminginthosewaterswaslikedivingintoakaleidoscope,deceptivelyplainontheoutside,butashowofcolorsontheinside,waitingtodazzleme,mesmerizeme.Thosecolors!Coralreefs—pink,green,red,purple—coveredtheseafloor;streaksofsunlightilluminatedthem,theswayingwatercreatingadanceofhues.Andweavinginandoutofthecontoursofcoralswambrilliantfishthatsynchronizedeverymo

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