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社會熱點(diǎn)1人與環(huán)境主題語境:社會熱點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵詞:RCmodelairplane語篇類型:事物介紹短文詞數(shù):324語篇難度:★★★★建議時(shí)間:23mins閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要ComputerScienceCareerOpportunitiesComputerscientistsandengineerscontinuetobeingreatdemand.Asbusinesseseverywhereuseincreasinglyaccurateandcomplexcomputertechnologyintheirdailyoperations,thereisagreaterneedfortheexpertiseofhighly-skilledprofessionals.Asaresult,withthedevelopmentofindustryandagriculture,therearemorejobscreatedintheU.S.thanaretransferredoffshore人與環(huán)境主題語境:社會熱點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵詞:RCmodelai2Infact,goodjobs-offeringahighsalary,interestingworkandbenefits-areplentifulinthecomputersciencefield.However,toobtainone,youwillneedtocompleteaminimumofaBachelor‘sdegreeinthesubjectarea.Mosttransfertothemajorityofthem.Onceyouhavecompletedyourdegreeincomputerscience,atypicalcareerpathissoftwaredevelopment.TheU.S.DepartmentoflaborlistssoftwaredevelopersamongthefastestgrowingoccupationsintheU.S.Themostrecentstudyprojectsthatsoftwaredeveloperjobswillgrowby17.0%nationallyintheten-yearperiodendingin2024.Incomparison,theaveragejobgrowthrateforalloccupationsis7.0%forthesameperiod.InCalifornia,jobsforsoftwaredevelopers,systemssoftwareareexpectedtoincreaseby25.6%,between2014and2024,farexceeding(is)theaveragerateforalloccupationsof15.1%Infact,goodjobs-offeringa3Becauseofthehighdemandforjobcandidateswithacomputersciencebackground,careersincomputersciencerelatedfieldsarewell-paid.Theaveragestartingsalaryforanewcomputersciencegraduateisover60,00peryearnationally,whilethemediansalaryforallsoftwaredevelopersandprogrammersisover$97,930annually.Incomparison,themediansalaryforalloccupationsis48,320peryear.Thus,asacomputersciencegraduate,youcanbeexpectedtomakemorethantwicethesalaryofmostoccupations.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Becauseofthehighdemandfor4語言點(diǎn)津:because與becauseofbecause是連詞,其后接從句;becauseof是復(fù)合介詞,其后接名詞,代詞,動名詞,what從句等;雖然becauseof之后可接what從句,但不能接that從句或沒有引導(dǎo)詞的從句;because所引導(dǎo)的從句除用作原因狀語外,還可用作表語。但是有時(shí)若主語是代詞(不是名詞),也可以用becauseof引出的短語作表語。語言點(diǎn)津:because與becauseofbecau5文章來源文章來源本文選自英文網(wǎng)站,原文題目為“ComputerScienceCareerOpportunities”《計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)的就業(yè)機(jī)會》,作者不詳。語篇解讀計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)技術(shù)職業(yè)就業(yè)機(jī)會多、待遇高,那么怎樣才能進(jìn)入這個(gè)行業(yè),有什么要求以及可以獲得哪些好處呢?ComputerScienceCareerOpportunitiesMoretalentsareneededincomputertechnologyRequiredqualifications-aminimumofaBachelor'sdegreeHavingaBachelor'sdegree-workingasasoftwaredeveloperSalary-morethantwicethesalaryofmostoccupations文章來源語篇解讀計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)技術(shù)職業(yè)就業(yè)機(jī)會多、待遇高,那么怎6難句解讀原文：Themostrecentstudyprojectsthatsoftwaredeveloperjobswillgrowby17.0%nationallyinthetenyearperiodendingin2024譯文:最近的一項(xiàng)研究預(yù)測,軟件開發(fā)人員的崗位截止到2024年,在十年內(nèi)將在全國范圍內(nèi)增長17.0%。分析:這是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句。動詞projects后由that引導(dǎo)的從句為賓語從句。難句解讀原文：Themostrecentstudy7筆前點(diǎn)睛★審題分析①審要求:概要寫作,本文屬于說明文;②審人稱:第二人稱和第三人稱;③審時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主;④審要點(diǎn):科學(xué)技術(shù)方面需要大量人才;這些人才需要有該領(lǐng)域本科及以上的學(xué)位;畢業(yè)后可以做軟件開發(fā)師;薪資待遇豐厚,是多數(shù)領(lǐng)域工作崗位的兩倍多。★思路點(diǎn)撥本篇原文要點(diǎn)清晰,只需要用適當(dāng)?shù)木涫綄σc(diǎn)進(jìn)行概括即可。首先確定需要表述的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,然后把握適當(dāng)句式,接著盡可能多用高級詞匯填充句式,同時(shí)注重句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系,用怡當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞連接句子,構(gòu)成一篇短文。筆前點(diǎn)睛★審題分析★思路點(diǎn)撥8高分范文Nowadays,moreandmorecomputerscientistsandengineersareneeded.(要點(diǎn)1)However,itneedsaminimumofaBachelor‘sdegree,sopeoplemustgetthedegreebygoingtouniversitywhichcanofferthem.(要點(diǎn)2)Aftertheygetthedegree,theycangetajobasasoftwaredeveloper.(要點(diǎn)3)What'smore,apersonwithacomputersciencebackgroundcangetmorethantwicethesalaryofmostjobs.(要點(diǎn)4)(60words)高分范文Nowadays,moreandmoreco9★高級語塊重要短語moreandmore(數(shù)量上)越來越多aminimumof最少;至少What'smore而且;此外morethan多于★高級句型However,itneedsaminimumofaBachelor'sdegree,sopeoplemustgetthedegreebygoingtouniversitywhichcanofferthem(連詞so連接兩個(gè)并列分句,后一分句表結(jié)果;句中which引導(dǎo)定語從句)2.Aftertheygetthedegree,theycangetajobasasoftwaredeveloper(連詞after引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)高級語塊★高級語塊重要短語高級語塊10精彩點(diǎn)評本篇范文作者引用原文詞句較少,所表述的四個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容條理清晰,并且使用句式比較復(fù)雜,如so連接并列分句,after引導(dǎo)的狀語從句,which引導(dǎo)的定語從句等;另外,作者在遣詞造句方面能夠較多地使用高級詞匯,如moreandmore、aminimumof、morethan等；在使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞方面獨(dú)具匠心，如however，what’smore等。精彩點(diǎn)評本篇范文作者引用原文詞句較少,所表述的四個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容條11語境演練IntheUnitedStates,employeestypicallyworkfivedaysaweekforeighthourseachday.However,manyemployeeswanttoworkafour-dayweekandarewillingtoacceptlesspayinordertodoso.Amandatorypolicyrequiringcompaniestooffertheiremployeestheoptionofworkingafour-dayworkweekforfour-fifths(80percent)oftheirnormalpaywouldbenefittheeconomyasawholeaswellastheindividualcompaniesandtheemployeeswhodecidedtotaketheoption.閱讀短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要語境演練IntheUnitedStates,empl12Theshortenedworkweekwouldincreasecompanyprofitsbecauseemployeeswouldfeelmorerestedandalert,andasaresult,theywouldmakefewercostlyerrorsintheirwork.Hiringmorestafftoensurethatthesameamountofworkwouldbeaccomplishedwouldnotresultinadditionalpayrollcostsbecausefour-dayemployeeswouldonlybepaid80percentofthenormalrate.Intheend,companieswouldhavefeweroverworkedanderror-proneemployeesforthesamemoney,whichwouldincreasecompanybenefitsForthecountryasawhole,oneoftheprimarybenefitsofofferingthisoptiontoemployeesisthatitwouldreduceunemploymentrate.Ifmanyfull-timeemployeesstartedworkingfewerhours,someoftheirworkloadwouldhavetobeshiftedtoothers.Thus,foreveryfouremployeeswhowentonan80percentweek,anewemployeecouldbehiredatthe80percentrateTheshortenedworkweekwouldi13Then,howtosolvetheproblem?Toalargedegree,itisthefashionproducersthatreallyhavethepowerandtheresponsibilitytoshapeourfuture.Thereareagreatmanywaystheseproducerscanreducetheirecologicalfootprint,fromswitchingtogreenenergyandreducingenergyuse,throughselectingsustainablematerialsandchoosinglocalsuppliers,torecyclingandminimizingwasteOntheotherhandasconsumerswecanallplayourpartbyselectingenvironmentallyfriendlyclothingandreducingclothingbuyingThen,howtosolvetheproblem14Finally,theoptionofafour-dayworkweekwouldbebetterforindividualemployees.Employeeswhocouldaffordalowersalaryinexchangeformorefreetimecouldimprovethequalityoftheirlivesbyspendingtheextratimewiththeirfamilies,pursuingprivateinterestsorenjoyingleisureactivities.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,theoptionofafour-15高分范文Thefour-dayworkweekwhichmeansworkingfourdayseveryweekwithfour-fifthsoftheoriginalpaywillbringgreatbenefits.Forcompanies,thereducedworkinghourswillmakeworkersmoreattentiveandmorehiredworkerswontaddsalarycosts.Forthewholecountry,itwillreducetheunemploymentrateandforindividuals,theycanleada