疫情彰顯中國力量 熱點(diǎn)04 -中考英語高分作文（江蘇專用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點(diǎn)04疫情彰顯中國力量一、電子郵件2．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Linda聽說上學(xué)期由于新冠疫情的影響，你們學(xué)校開展了線上教學(xué)，并過了一個(gè)較長的寒假，為此她發(fā)來郵件詢問情況。請閱讀以下來自Linda的郵件并回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括回復(fù)相應(yīng)問題并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｔ~數(shù)80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。From:LindaHiLiHua,How’sitgoingrecently?Ihearyoutookonlinelessonsforabout2weeksattheendoflasttermbecauseoftheCOVID-19.Whatdoyouthinkofonlinelessons?Ialsowanttoknowhowyouspentyourlongerwinterholiday?Didyouhelpyourparentsdochores?Whatdoyoudoforyourfamilyasahelper?Willyoupleaseshareyourideaswithme?Lookforwardtoyourreply!LindaTo:LindaHiLinda,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】HiLinda,I’mverygladtohearfromyou.EverythingisOKwithme.Inyourmail,youaskedabouthowIstudiedonlinebecauseoftheCOVID-19.Idohavesomethingtosharewithyou.MostofthesubjectsI’mlearningwereincludedintheonlinelessons,evenP.E.Ispentaboutfourhoursadayonline.Myteachershelpedmealot.Theynotonlygaveusclassesbutalsoansweredourquestions.Itwasreallyalongwinterholiday.Ispentmostofmytimeononlinelearning.Also,Isometimeshelpedmyparentsdosomechoresinmyfreetime,suchaswashingclothes,dosomecookingandwashingthedishes.Inmyopinion,asastudent,itwasgoodtohaveclassesathomeduringthisspecialtime,butIdon’tthinkIlearnedaswellasIdoinschool.However,asamemberinmyfamily,itwasnecessaryformetohelpmyparentstodochoreswhenIwasfree.Ihopemyreplywillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為一份郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要點(diǎn)要齊全，回復(fù)相應(yīng)問題，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，內(nèi)容要連貫，無語法錯(cuò)誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，引出話題；第二步，介紹新冠疫情期間線上教學(xué)的情況；第三步，講述我如何度過一個(gè)較長的暑假及我的感受；第四步，最后書寫結(jié)語，期望回信可以有所幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sharewith分享②beincludedin被包含在內(nèi)③spendmostofone’stimeonsth.花費(fèi)大部分時(shí)間在某事上④dosomechores做家務(wù)⑤inmyopinion依我之見[高分句型]①Theynotonlygaveusclassesbutalsoansweredourquestions.（notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……，連接兩個(gè)并列結(jié)構(gòu)）②However,asamemberinmyfamily,itwasnecessaryformetohelpmyparentstodochoreswhenIwasfree.（句型“itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.”做某事是……，it作形式主語，不定式作真正的主語）三、書信作文3．假如你是李華，剛剛度過了植樹節(jié)，而你的好朋友John在深圳，因?yàn)橐咔榉磸?fù)，深圳全市實(shí)行封閉式管理。你想給好朋友寫一封信，介紹一下自己如何度過植樹節(jié)；同時(shí)給在疫區(qū)的好朋友一些居家生活學(xué)習(xí)的意見和鼓勵(lì)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封信給John。內(nèi)容提示：1.植樹節(jié)在3月12日，自己如何度過植樹節(jié)，植樹的好處：2.疫情之下，居家建議：1)學(xué)習(xí)之余注意運(yùn)動；2)規(guī)律作息；3)（自己添加至少一條)。提示詞：植樹節(jié)TreePlantingDay疫情epidemicDearJohn,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJohn,Howareyou?IjustspenttheTreePlantingDayonMarch12th.Onthatday,myclassmatesandIwenttotheparktoplanttrees.Besidesplantingtrees,welearnedaboutdifferentplantsandflewkites.Aseveryoneknows,treescanabsorbharmfulgasesintheair,produceoxygen,fightagainstairpollutionandsoon.Therefore,weshouldstrictlyforbidcuttingdowntreesandplantmoretrees.DuringtheCOVID-19,youmustprotectourselves.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,besidesstudying,youshouldalsopayattentiontosports.Next,makesureyoukeeparegularschedule.Also,takemoreexerciseandwearamaskwhenyougooutanddon’tgather.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求我們作為李華，給好朋友John寫一封信，介紹一下自己如何度過植樹節(jié)，同時(shí)給在疫區(qū)的好朋友一些居家生活學(xué)習(xí)的意見和鼓勵(lì)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文要主要以第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。寫作可以首先描述自己在植樹節(jié)的活動，舉例說明做了些什么；其次給朋友John一些疫情期間保護(hù)自己的建議。四、講稿4．距離新型冠狀病毒感染疫情（COVID-19）爆發(fā)已經(jīng)過去三年多時(shí)間。有人說，這三年，自己的健康碼沒有黃，青春卻黃了；也有人說，這三年，讓我們懂得了生命的無常，金錢的無能和健康的無價(jià)。關(guān)于疫情這三年，你有什么難忘的經(jīng)歷和感受呢？這三年疫情讓你產(chǎn)生了什么變化呢？假如你是李華，請為班級主題班會“疫情這三年”準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，向同學(xué)們分享你在疫情期間的見聞、感受和改變。參考要點(diǎn)：1.關(guān)于疫情的難忘見聞和感受（隔離，網(wǎng)課，抗疫……）2.疫情給你帶來的改變（更健康，更自律，更珍惜……）3.……要求：1.100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Dearclassmates,IthasbeenthreeyearssincetheoutbreakofCOVID-19.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dearclassmates,IthasbeenthreeyearssincetheoutbreakofCOVID-19.Weexperiencedunforgettablelife.Duringthepandemic,peoplebegantostayathomeeveryday.Meanwhile,wehadtohaveonlineclasses.Somepeoplehadtoseparatefromothers.Somepeopleevenlosttheirlivesunluckily.AlotofdoctorsandnursesfoughtagainsttheCOVID-19bra