高考英語(yǔ)作文講解

高考英語(yǔ)作文常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤剖析及寫(xiě)作2024/4/121.學(xué)生英語(yǔ)作文中10種常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤剖析

1、漢語(yǔ)式思維Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.2、謂語(yǔ)缺失

Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.3、Therebe句型出錯(cuò)Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.(Seeing)(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.)werewasFive2024/4/122.6、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞出錯(cuò)Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.學(xué)生英語(yǔ)作文中10種常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤剖析

4、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用法出錯(cuò)Hedressedinanewcoat.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.5、詞性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.isin(studying)isAsheisseriouslyill,(Seen)2024/4/123.學(xué)生英語(yǔ)作文中10種常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤剖析

7、分?jǐn)?shù)與百分?jǐn)?shù)作主語(yǔ)Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.8、定語(yǔ)從句錯(cuò)誤Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.I’llneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.9、連詞出錯(cuò)Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldn’tkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.10、形容詞、副詞混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.oftheofthewhothatthatnervoushard2024/4/124.DearSue,I’mLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.It’salmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest,LiHua作文修改

whatusual-edwelltoand2024/4/125.實(shí)例寫(xiě)作

(2010全國(guó)Ⅱ)假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Peter曾表示希望來(lái)中國(guó)教書(shū)。你校現(xiàn)需招聘外教，請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封信，告訴招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括：1．教授課程：英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作、今日美國(guó)、今日英國(guó)等2．授課對(duì)象：高中生（至少三年英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)）3．工作量：—每周12學(xué)時(shí)，任選三門(mén)課—擔(dān)任學(xué)生英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部或英語(yǔ)校報(bào)顧問(wèn)（advisor）注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，請(qǐng)將完整的回信寫(xiě)出來(lái)。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.________________________________________________________

Best,Lihua2024/4/126.寫(xiě)作技巧點(diǎn)撥

1、提綱式作文為半開(kāi)放型寫(xiě)作。2、要點(diǎn)均為4—5個(gè)（多為4+1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），要點(diǎn)提示比較簡(jiǎn)潔，考生111有發(fā)散思維的空間；3、英語(yǔ)作文多為三段式：

1para.——Topicsentence(mainidea,writer’sattitude)2ndpara.——Body(differentpoints)3rdpara.——Ending(writer’sownidea)4、盡量避免第一印象詞匯出現(xiàn)5、好的連詞與表達(dá)法的使用。2024/4/127.提煉文章要點(diǎn)理解每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的含義，然后討論每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的正確表達(dá)方式。形成文章。2024/4/128.范文DearPeter,

IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.①Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.

②Ifyou’dliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.③ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.

④Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.

⑤Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyot