Unit 8 Detective stories-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年九年級英語上冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）（原卷版）

Unit8Detectivestories單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度推理故事偵探故事一、話題分析

本節(jié)課屬于人與社會主題下的主題群“歷史、社會與文化”,子話題為“公共秩序與法律法規(guī),個人信息安全與國家安全意識”。該板塊的活動主題是“創(chuàng)作我的推理故事”，話題是“如何編寫一則偵探小故事”。學(xué)習(xí)目標是讓學(xué)生學(xué)寫偵探故事，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生寫作的能力。教育學(xué)生遵紀守法，不做違法的事。作文要求以Millie參加寫作比賽為背景，呈現(xiàn)了Millie發(fā)揮想象力和邏輯思維能力創(chuàng)作自己的推理故事的文章。在寫作過程中要注意所寫故事的細節(jié)，如案發(fā)時間和地點、目擊者的證詞、嫌疑人的特征等。同時也要求同學(xué)們能寫出各種場合下的安全防范措施。二、教學(xué)目標通過本課時的學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)生能夠:1.通過討論分析范文，總結(jié)歸納偵探故事的文章結(jié)構(gòu)。2.正確使用所學(xué)結(jié)構(gòu)和表達編寫一則偵探故事或續(xù)寫故事的結(jié)尾。3.分析與評價自己和同伴的作品。4.感知邏輯推理能力的重要性,提升推理能力的同時感受偵探推理寫作的趣味性和嚴謹性，培養(yǎng)寫作興趣。（以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）Part1:(introduction)Introducethebackgroundandmaincharactersofthestory.Part1:(introduction)Introducethebackgroundandmaincharactersofthestory.Part2:(Mainbody)Part2:(Mainbody)1.Thetimeandlocationoftheincident;2.Informationonthevictim'sgender,age,occupation,etc;3.Caseanalysis;4.Policeupdates.DetectiveDetectivestoryPart3:(Ending)Part3:(Ending)Hopethepolicecansolvethecase.【詞匯積累】重點單詞1.stealvt.偷;竊取2.necklacen.項鏈3.diamondn.鉆石4.adiamondnecklace5.shockedadj.震驚的6.jewelleryn.珠寶;首飾7.lotsofjewellery許多珠寶二、重點短語1.getalong/onwith與......和睦相處2.getalongbadlywith與......相處不好3.dosthforalivingmakealiving做某事謀生4.beunderarrestformurder因謀殺罪被捕5.beunderarrest=bearrested被捕三、重點句型1.Brucegetsalongwithallofhisneighboursexceptthemanwholivednextdoor.布魯斯和鄰居相處和睦除了住在隔壁的那個男人。2.Nooneknowswhathedoesforaliving.沒有人知道他靠做什么為生。3.Thepolicetoldhimthatsomevaluablejewelleryhadbeenstolen警察告訴他一些價值連城的珠寶被盜了。四、偵探福爾摩斯五十句名言1.我追求精神上的興奮。Ipursuespiritualexcitement.2.許多被絞死的人死得冤枉。Manyofthehangedmanisdeadwrong.3.嫉妒是性格的奇異轉(zhuǎn)換器。Jealousyisasingularconvertercharacter.4.感情作用會影響清醒的理智。Theemotionalqualitieswillaffecttoclearreasoning.5.不用動腦筋，我就活不下去。Don'tthink,Ican'tlive.6.謙虛和驕傲都是與事實相悖而行的。Modestyandpridearebackanddonewithfacts.7.除去其他的因素，剩下的必是事實了。Togetridofotherfactors,therestmustbethetruth.8.我向來不作任何例外。定律沒有例外。Inevermakeanyexception.Lawisnoexception.9.對于裝病，我認為我有能力寫個專論。Forfakingit,IthinkIhavetheabilitytowriteamonograph.10.生活之謎是任何大腦也發(fā)明不出來的。Theriddleoflifeisbeyondthecontrivanceofanybrainalso.11.這是一個要抽足三斗煙才能解決的問題。Thisisasmokefootthreemeasurestosolvetheproblem.12.再也沒有比顯而易見的事實更虛偽的了。Nomorehypocriticalthanobviousfact.13.世上的事都是前人做過的，沒什么新鮮的。Thereispredecessorsdid,nothingnew.14.生活之謎是任何聰明的大腦也發(fā)明不了的。Anycleverbrainmysteriesoflifeisalsoinvented.15.探案過程中，我是最后的最高的上訴法庭。Thecrimeintheprocess,Iisthehighestcourtofappealinthefinal.16.我決定站在犯人這一邊，不站在死者那一邊。Idecidedtostandintheprisoner'sside,notonthesideofthedead.17.即使是最好的女人，也決不能完全信賴她們。Eventhebestwoman,neverentirelytrustthem.18.探案過程中，我是最后的，最高的上訴法庭。Thecrimeintheprocess,Iamthelast,thehighestcourtofappeal.19.對于偉大的心靈來說，世界上沒有微小的事情。Forgreatminds,thereisnosmallthingintheworld.20.不論案件如何復(fù)雜，人們總能尋求出一個解釋。Nomatterhowcomplexcases,peoplecanalwaysseekoutanexplanation.21.奇怪的是，打字機也像手寫一般能表現(xiàn)出一個人的性格。Oddly,typewriterisalsolikeahandwritingcanshowaperson'spersonality.22、我好動不好靜，一遇無事可做的時候，我就會心緒不寧起來。Ican'tactivestatic,oncehadnothingtodo,Iwillberestless.23.只要你懂得怎樣使用報紙，華生，報紙便是非常寶貴的工具。Ifyouknowhowtousenewspaper,Watson,newspaperisaveryvaluabletool.24.世界上最危險的一種人，福爾摩斯說，就是漂泊孤獨的女人。Oneofthemostdangerousmanintheworld,SherlockHolmessaid,iswanderinglonelywoman.25.我向來不猜想。猜想是很不好的習(xí)慣，它有害于作邏輯的推理。Ineverguess.Guessisabadhabit,itisbadforlogicalreasoning.26.你有保持緘默的了不起的天賦，華生，有你做伙伴真是太難得了。Youhavegreattalents,toremainsilentWatson,haveyourpartnerisreallybad.27.不論多么天衣無縫的犯罪，只要是人做的，就沒有解不開的道理。Nomatterhowperfectthecrime,aslongaspeopledo,thereisnosolutiondon'topen.28.自從莫里亞蒂教授新近死了以后，句子大全倫敦變成了一座極度乏味的城市。SinceprofessorMoriartydiedrecentlybecameanextremelyboringcityofLondon.29.華生，這不屬于你的職業(yè)范圍，不是生理上的問題，而是心理上的。Watson,thisdoesnotfallwithinthescopeofyourcareer,notphysical,butpsychological.30.我決定永遠不要有任何偏見，事實指向哪里，我就會乖乖地跟到哪里。Idecidedtonevertohaveanyprejudice,factspointtowhere,whereIwouldobedientlyfollow.31.她本身無害，而且往往是很有用的人，但卻總是引起別人犯罪的因素。Sheitselfisharmless,andtendtobeveryuseful,butitalwayscausesotherstocommitacrime.32.一個醫(yī)生誤入歧途，他就是一流的罪犯，因為他既有膽識，又有知識。Ledastraybyadoctor,heisafirst-classcriminals,becausehehavecourage,andknowledge.33.不要讓一個人的外表影響你的判斷力，這是最重要的。感情會影響理智的。Don'tletaperson'sappearanceaffectyourjudgment,thisisthemostimportant.Feelingswillaffecttherational.34.除非兩臺打字機下載文檔都相當新，否則沒有哪兩臺打字機打出的字一鍵下載全文是一模一樣的。Unlesstwotypewritersarenew,notwotypewriterstypewordsarethesame.35.生活枯燥乏味。大膽和浪漫似乎在這個充滿邪惡的世界里消失了。Lifedull,boringpaper.Boldandromanceseemstohavevanishedinthisfullofevilintheworld.36.一個為藝術(shù)而藝術(shù)的人，常常從最不重要和最平凡的形象中獲得最大的樂趣。Amanofartforart'ssake,oftenfromtheleastimportantandthemostordinaryintheimageofthegreatestpleasure.37.命運知識難以捉摸啊，如果來世沒有報應(yīng)，那么這個世界就是一場殘酷的玩笑。Fateelusiveknowledgeah,andiftheworldshouldnot,thentheworldisacrueljoke.38.人不要在說明事實的理論上打圈圈，應(yīng)該配合理論的說明，慢慢解開事實的真相。Peopledon'ttellyouthefactonthetheoryofcircle,shouldcoordinatetheoryshowsthatslowlyunravelthetruth.39.在沒有得到任何證據(jù)的情況下是不能進行推理的，那樣的話，只能是誤入歧途。Undertheconditionofwithoutanyevidenceisnotreasoning,inthatcase,onlyismisguided.40.教育是沒有止境的，華生。課程一門接一門，精益求精，這件案子很有啟發(fā)性。Educationisanever-ending,Watson.Coursedoorafterdoor,excellence,thecaseisinstructive.41.不尋常的現(xiàn)象總能給人提供一些線索，而沒有什么特征的案子卻是難以偵破的。Unusualphenomenonalwayscanprovidecluestotheperson,andnocaseisdifficulttosolve.42.所謂事件，只要沒有解決方案，就很容易解決。看起來沒有犯罪的普通特征真的很棘手。Theso-calledevent,aslongasthereisnosolution,itiseasytosolve.Lookordinarycharacteristicsofnocrimewasreallytricky.43.我完全沒有虛度此生，如果我生命的旅程到今夜為止，我也可以問心無愧地欣然接受。Ihavenoworth-while,ifthejourneyofmylifeuntiltonight,Ialsocanhaveaclearconsciencetoembrace.44.一般來說，越是好奇的事情，越是熟悉的真相，越是平常和那些很平常的情況，令人困惑。Generallyspeaking,themorecuriousthings,afterthetruth,familiarwiththemoreusualandthoseveryordinarycaseisconfusing.45.我的體質(zhì)非常特別。工作的時候一點兒也不覺得累，如果閑著無事反而會使我委頓不堪了。Mybodyisveryspecial.WorkIdon'tfeeltired,ifidlenothingwouldmakemefaint.46.生活很枯燥。我的生活就是不要在平庸中消磨時間。讓我祝福這些小箱子。Lifeisverydull.Mylifeistodon'tidleawayourtimeinmediocrity.Letmethewishestheselittlecases.47.她無依無靠，到處為家。她有足夠的錢供她從一個國家到另一個國家，從一家旅館到另一個旅館。Herhelpless,forthehomeeverywhere.Shehasenoughmoneyforherfromonecountrytoanother,fromonehoteltoanotherhotel.48.我們必須深入生活，只有如此才能獲得新奇的效果和非同尋常的配合，而這本身比任何想象都有刺激性。Wemustdeepintolife,onlythencanobtaintheeffectofthenovelandextraordinary,andthisitselfstimulatingthananyimagined.49.有一句老格言說道，當你排除了不可能的情況后，其余的情況，不管是如何的不可能，卻必定是真實的。Thereisanoldadagesays,whenyoueliminatetheimpossible,therestofthesituation,nomatterhowimpossible,butitmustbetrue.50.由于我的存在，倫敦的空氣得以清新。在我辦的一千多件案子里，我相信，我從未把握的力量用錯地方。BecauseofI,inLondontofreshair.Inholdingmorethanonethousandcases,IbelievethatI'mneversure.五、通用開頭1.MrWangwasanoldman.Helivedaloneandwenttotheparkeverydaytopractiset'aichi.2.I'mwritingtoreportarobberytoyou.3.Ataboutninelastnight,IwasonthewaybackhomefromthecinemawhensuddenlyIheardsomeonecryingforhelpfrombehind.4.Someonefoundadeadbodyinafactorythismorning.Thevictimwasamanwhowasanengineerandhewas40yearsold.5.Lastnight,amurdertookplacebetweenelevenandtwelveonRenminRoad.六、通用中間段1.MrandMrsZhangcalledthepolice.DetectiveLi

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formurder.3.Iturnedaroundandfoundatallmanwithapairofdarkglassesandashortmanrobbingayoungwomanatthestreetcornernearthecinema.Thewomanworeagoldnecklaceandagoldwatch.Sheputupagoodfightwiththem．七、通用結(jié)尾1.Ihopetheinformationwillhelpyoucatchtherobbers．2.Yes,that'strue.Itwasthenecklacethatmyauntlost.Myauntwasverythankful.Shetoldhernewneighbourthattheycouldbegoodfriendslater.3.Thepoliceareofferingarewardof100,000yuanforanycluethatleadstothearrestofthemurderer.【寫作模板】模板①DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoreportarobberytoyou.Ataboutninelastnight,Iwasonthewaybackhomefromthe______whensuddenlyIheardsomeonecryingforhelpfrombehind．Iturnedaroundandfounda_____manwithapairof_______andashortmanrobbinga______womanatthestreetcornernearthe______.Thewomanworea_______necklaceanda_____watch．Sheputupagoodfightwiththem．IrantowardsthembutwhenIarrived,thetworobbershadriddentheirbikesaway．Theyrobbedthewomanofher_____watch,butluckily，thewomanwasn'thurt．Ihopetheinformationwillhelpyoucatchtherobbers．YoursfaithfullyLiHua．模板②Lastnight,amurdertookplacebetween_______on______Road.Adriverwasmurdered.Hewasinhis______.Atthetimeofthecrime,someoneheardhimshoutingforhelp.Thevictimwasattackedwitha______and______asaresult.Sofar,thepolicehaveofferedarewardof______yuanforimportantclues.Ifyouhaveanyinformation,pleasecall/contactthepoliceon110.寫作要求:Tips●

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Howthedetectivefindsthecriminal一、完成句子1．結(jié)果是那個嫌疑犯與本次謀殺案無關(guān)。Itturnedoutthatthesuspectthemurder.2．前幾天有人闖入他們房子，所以他們得防范任何危險。Theirhousebysomeonetheotherday,sotheyhavetoanydanger.3．事實證明，杰克是在外面被刀所傷，回家后失血過多死亡。ItthatJackwaswoundedwithaknifeoutsideandafterhegotbackhome.4．他寧可被誤認為是兇手，也不愿意說出真相。Hewouldrather.5．湯姆相信星座與性格的形成無關(guān)。Tombelievesstarsignstheformationofpersonalities.6．電腦系統(tǒng)將再不會被輕易闖入。Computersystems.7．安迪急于回到工作崗位，把手機的事情拋諸腦后。Andygetbacktoworkthatheforgotabouthismobilephone.8．我昨天看見彼得時，他正匆忙地趕地鐵。PeterwastocatchthesubwaywhenIsawhimyesterday.9．警方證實這對夫婦的獨子已失蹤超過一個月。Thepoliceconfirmthatthecouple’sonlysonforoveramonth.10．事實證明，受害者是在外面某個地方受傷，回家后失血過多死亡。Itthatthevictimwaswoundedsomewhereoutsideandafterhegotbackhome.補全對話7選5W:Nick,DidyouhearaboutthemurderinJuneinNanjing?M:No,Ididn’t.1．,Nancy?W:Oneevening,amankilledhiswife,anoldmanandanotherman.M:Oh,dear!Hemustbecrazy.2．?W:Yes,hewasarrestedinAnhuiProvinceamonthlater.M:3．.Themurderwastooterrible.W:4．.Butthemanhasa13-year-oldsoninamiddleschool.M:5．!Theboyhasnoparentsanylonger.What’sitaboutDoeshehaveacriminalrecordYouarerightHashebeenarrestedIdon’tthinksoWhatapityHemustbechargedtodeath（一）（2018上·江蘇·九年級統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你叫李華，昨天晚上你看完電影在回家途中目擊了一起搶劫案．請就以下信息，以李華的名義寫一份給警方的書面材料，要求詞數(shù)100左右．材料的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．案發(fā)時間昨天晚上大約九點案發(fā)地點電影院附近的一條街道拐角處作案人情況兩個男子，一個戴著墨鏡的高個子，一個矮個子受害人情況一位年輕的女士，戴著一條金項鏈和一塊金手表案發(fā)經(jīng)過你正在街道上走著，突然聽到身后有人呼救．你看到兩個男子正搶劫一名女子．女子和他們進行了激烈的搏斗．當你趕到時，兩個劫匪已各自騎著自行車逃跑．女子的金表被搶走了，但幸運的是女子沒有受傷．DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoreportarobberytoyou．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetheinformationwillhelpyoucatchtherobbers．YoursfaithfullyLiHua．(二)（2018·九年級單元測試）根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，描述一起謀殺案件。1.昨晚11點到12點之間，人民路上發(fā)生