2025版高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)第一部分應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作第一章書(shū)信第一講邀請(qǐng)信建議信和申請(qǐng)信文體二建議信

文體(二)建議信建議信是就有關(guān)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和建議，以便讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關(guān)問(wèn)題。建議信可以寫(xiě)給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法或觀點(diǎn)；也可以寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等提出建議或忠告。具體寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)為：1．吸引眼球開(kāi)頭句①I(mǎi)amwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadvice.我寫(xiě)信給你一些建議/忠告。②Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我寫(xiě)信是要表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的看法。③Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.關(guān)于……你向我征求意見(jiàn)，在此我盡力提出一些有用的建議。④Herearesometips/suggestionsforyou.這些就是給你的建議。⑤Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowthefollowingadvice/theadvicebelow.如果你聽(tīng)從以下建議，我認(rèn)為你會(huì)做到的。2．亮點(diǎn)出彩篇中句①I(mǎi)thinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...我認(rèn)為對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)最適合的……是……②Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建議……③You'dbetter.../It'sbestto...你最好……/最好是……④AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme/Frommypointofview，itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看來(lái)，采取如下行動(dòng)是明智的。⑤Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我認(rèn)為如果你能……將會(huì)更有益。3．韻味無(wú)窮結(jié)尾句①I(mǎi)hopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful/practical/helpful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用/實(shí)用/有幫助。②Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheadviceabove.如果你遵從以上建議，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更加了解你，會(huì)愿意和你交朋友的。③Iamcertainthatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我相信，如果你聽(tīng)從我的建議，你會(huì)和同學(xué)們相處得很好。④Ibelieve,withyoureffort,youcanmanagetogetover/overcomethesedifficulties.我相信，通過(guò)你的努力，你會(huì)成功克服這些困難。⑤Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutake/follow/acceptmyadvice.如果你采納我的建議，改變這種處境是很容易的。Dear,Iamwritingtodrawyourattentiontothefactthat(具體事情)/Iamwritingtoexpressmyviews/opinionsconcerning(具體事情).Inordertosolvetheproblem,variousthingscanbedone.Tobeginwith,whynot(建議一)?Ifyoudothis,(結(jié)果)．Inaddition,youshould/can/hadbetter(建議二)．Then/Thatway,(結(jié)果)．Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbeagoodideaif(建議三)．Bydoingthis,(結(jié)果).IhopeyouwillfindtheseideasusefulandIwouldbereadyforfurtherdiscussion.Yourssincerely，(署名)(2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；2．提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearRyan，I'mLiHuafromClass3.Yourssincerely，LiHua【滿分范文】DearRyan，I'mLiHuafromClass3.Idon'tthinkitagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith，randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation，leavinglittleroomfortheotheronetoimprove.Besides，studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway，everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely，LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1．文章開(kāi)頭扼要地介紹了寫(xiě)信的目的，使用表達(dá)建議的否定前置表達(dá)(Idon'tthinkitagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.)。2．書(shū)信的主體部分提出了自己的建議，使用了過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)(Tobeginwith，Besides)、高級(jí)詞匯(unbalanced,group)、還使用了復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)(leavinglittleroomfortheotheronetoimprove)以及定語(yǔ)從句(whotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith)。(2023·北京卷，改編)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)活動(dòng)形式；(2)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，Yours，LiHua【參考范文】DearJim，Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbagec