書面表達16篇(北京名校真題)-2024年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞(北京專用)

2024年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞(北京專用)第四期專題06書面表達16篇1．（2024·北京東城·一模）假設你是李華，在學生會負責今年體育節(jié)吉祥物(mascot)的設計征集活動。你校交換生Peter對該活動很感興趣，他給你發(fā)來郵件，詢問吉祥物設計的具體要求及提交(submit)的時間和方式。請你用英語回復一封郵件，介紹你所知道的相關內容。提示詞語：creative,culture,colourful,draw,email提示問題：●Whatarethedesignrequirementsforthemascot?●WhenandhowshouldPetersubmithisdesign?DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinthemascotdesignforourschool’sSportsFestival.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluckwithyourdesign!Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinthemascotdesignforourschool’sSportsFestival.Thedesignisexpectedtobecreative.Itshouldshowthesportsmanshipandourschoolculture.Colourfulandattractivedesignsarehighlypreferred.Youcancreateyourdesignindifferentways.Bothhanddrawingandcomputerdrawingareacceptable.YouneedtosubmityourdesignbynextFriday,June15th.Justemailittomascotdesign@.Pleasemakesureyouincludeyourfullnameandclassintheemail.Goodluckwithyourdesign!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。引出有關體育節(jié)吉祥物設計事宜；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從創(chuàng)新、文化和顏色等方面詳細介紹了吉祥物的設計思路；第三步，表達希望設計方案能被選上的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①indifferentways以不同的方式②both…and…不但……而且……③needtodosth.需要做某事[高分句型]①Thedesignisexpectedtobecreative.(一般現在時的被動語態(tài))②Pleasemakesureyouincludeyourfullnameandclassintheemail.(祈使句)2．（2024·北京西城·一模）初中三年，一定有很多課給你留下了深刻的印象。假設你是李華。你校英文公眾號正在開展以“MyMostMemorableClass”為主題的征文活動，請用英文寫一篇文章投稿，介紹你最難忘的一節(jié)課，并談談這節(jié)課為什么令你難忘。提示詞語：science,music,experiment,sing,interesting提示問題：●Whatwasyourmostmemorableclass?●Whywastheclassmemorable?MyMostMemorableClass________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyMostMemorableClassWehavehadthousandsoflessonsinmiddleschool.Someofthemhaveleftadeepimpressiononme.Amongthem,themostmemorableoneisaphysicsclassIhadlastterm.Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.Liubroughtsomematerialsandaskedustousethemtodoanexperiment.IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,becauseIhadworkedoutalloftheexperimenthomeworkproblems.Iofferedtoperformtheexperimentinfrontofthewholeclass.However,Ijustcouldn’tputwhatIhadlearntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.Asyoucanimagine,Iwassoembarrassed!ThephysicsclasswasreallymemorablebecauseIlearnedanimportantlifelessonfromitsrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.Ialsolearnedtobemodestandprudent,whichwillpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，不要遺漏要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己最難忘的課；第二步，闡述難忘的原因；第三步，總結說明從難忘的課程中學到了什么。[亮點詞匯]①leftadeepimpression留下深刻印象②performtheexperiment做實驗[高分句型]①However,Ijustcouldn’tputwhatIhadlearntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.(what引導賓語從句)②ThephysicsclasswasreallymemorablebecauseIlearnedanimportantlifelessonfromitsrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.(because引導原因狀語從句)3．（2024·北京通州·一模）某英文網站青少年板塊正在開展以“學會和父母相處”為主題的征文活動。假設你是李華。請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，分享你和父母之間發(fā)生的一個沖突，你是如何恰當地處理的，以及你從中得到的啟示。提示詞語：disagreement,spend,cellphone,shout,communicate提示問題：·Whatwastheproblembetweenyourparentsandyou?·Howdidyoudealwithit?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?Problemsareoftenaroundus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Problemsareoftenaroundus.Ilovemyparentsandtheylovemeaswell,butwealsohavedisagreementsandsometimeswemakeeachotherunhappy.Oneday,Ispenttoomuchtimeonmycellphonebecauseoftalkingabouttheschoolprojectwithmyclassmates.MymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.IknewsheworriedaboutmesoIdidn’tclosemydoorthistime.IexplainedthereasonandtoldherthatIunderstoodherworries.Shesaidsorrytomebecauseofhermisunderstanding.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofcommunicatingandunderstanding.Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.Inaddition,takingresponsibilityformyactionsandshowingtrustworthinesscanhelpmebuildabetterrelationshipwithmyparents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：一般過去時、一般現在時；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示信息，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹自己與父母之間發(fā)生的一個沖突及自己的處理方式；第三步，闡述自己從這次沖突中懂得的道理。[亮點詞匯]①talkingabout...with...與……談論……②worriedabout擔心③saidsorryto向……道歉④takingresponsibilityfor對……負責⑤buildabetterrelationshipwith建立更好的關系[高分句型]①MymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.（because引導原因狀語從句）②Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.（that引導賓語從句，動詞ing作主語）4．（2024·北京大興·一模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom向你發(fā)來電子郵件，想了解你在生活中有哪些處理廢舊物品的做法。請你給他回復一封英文電子郵件，介紹你的相應做法及理由。提示詞語：waste,decorate(裝飾),protect,environment提示問題：Howdoyoudealwiththewaste?Whatisyourreason?DearTom,I’mgladtointroducemyways...___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouhaveanyothergoodideas,writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearTom,I’mgladtointroducemywaystodealwiththewaste.Ioftencutawastebottleinhalf,andthenIcangetaspecialcontainerwhichIcanputmypensandotherthingsin.Besides,Ialsotrytomakethemintoartpiecestodecoratemyroom.Intheseways,InotonlyimprovemyDIYskillsbutalsohelpprotecttheenvironment.ThemostimportantisthatIturnthesewastethingsintousefulthingsandgivethemnewlives.Ifyouhaveanyothergoodideas,writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，適當添加細節(jié)并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，介紹是如何處理廢品的；第三步，書寫結語，表達期待。[亮點詞匯]①cutsth.inhalf把某物切成兩半②notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Ioftencutawastebottleinhalf,andthenIcangetaspecialcontainerwhichIcanputmypensandotherthingsin.（定語從句）②ThemostimportantisthatIturnthesewastethingsintousefulthingsandgivethemnewlives.（表語從句）5．（2024·北京海淀·一模）學而致知，行而致遠。假設你是李華。某英文網站正在開展以“學以致用”為主題的征文活動。請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，分享一次你運用所學解決實際問題的經歷，并談談你的收獲。提示詞語：skill,makeuseof,connect,improve,meaningful提示問題：●Whatexperiencecanyoushareaboutputtingwhatyou'velearnedintopractice?●Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.Lastsummerholiday,IlearnedsomefirstaidknowledgesuchasCPRandHeimlichManeuver.Oneday,mylittersisterwaschokedbyacandyandcouldn’tbreathe.Seeingthis,IthoughtofwhatIlearntlastsummerholidayshortly.Then,Istoodbehindmysisterandappliedpressuretoherabdomen.Fortunately,thecandyinherthroatwasspitout.Atlast,Icalled120forfurthercheck.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；③提示：根據所給提示問題完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹自己學以致用的一次經歷；第三步，闡述自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①suchas比如②applysthtosth將……運用……③thinkof想起[高分句型]Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.(定語從句)6．（2024·北京海淀·一模）假設你是李華。你的好朋友Peter正在參與籌備他們學校的“校園勞動日”活動，他寫信向你征求創(chuàng)意。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，提供一些活動創(chuàng)意并說明理由。提示詞語：cleanup,repair,garden,fun,responsibility提示問題：●Whatactivitieswouldyouliketosuggest?●Whydoyousuggestso?DearPeter,I’mexcitedtohearthatyou’reorganizingactivitiesforSchoolServiceDay.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpful.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearPeter,

I’mexcitedtohearthatyou’reorganizingactivitiesforSchoolServiceDay.AndI’dliketosharesomeideaswithyou.First,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoorganizeclean-upactivities.Forexample,studentscancleantheclassroomandplayground,whichcanmaketheschoolmuchcleanerandmorebeautiful.What’smore,youcanaskstudentstorepairthebrokendesksandchairs.Itwillbegreatfun.Moreover,youcanarrangeforstudentstowaterthegarden.Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitytobeautifytheschool.Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpful.

Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時態(tài)：一般現在時、一般將來時；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示信息，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“我想和你分享一些想法”來引出重點介紹的內容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“清潔活動、修理活動、給花園澆水活動等”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結語。表達“希望建議能有所幫助”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①share...with...和……分享……②What’smore另外③arrangeforstudentsto...安排學生……④waterthegarden給花園澆水⑤feelastrongsenseofresponsibility有強烈的責任感⑥beautifytheschool美化學校[高分句型]①First,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoorganizeclean-upactivities.（that引導賓語從句，that省略；it固定句式）②Forexample,studentscancleantheclassroomandplayground,whichcanmaketheschoolmuchcleanerandmorebeautiful.（which引導非限制性定語從句）③Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitytobeautifytheschool.（動詞不定式作定語）7．（23-24九年級上·北京·期末）假如你是李華，你和你的英國筆友Peter都熱心參與志愿服務，他給你發(fā)來郵件詢問你參與志愿服務的情況。請你用英語回復一封郵件，介紹你所參加過的一次志愿者活動，并談談你的感受。不少于50詞。文中已給出內容不計入總詞數。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語：Children’sHome,tellstories,teach,tired,happy提示問題：●Wheredidyoudothevolunteerwork?●Whatdidyoudothere?●Howdidyoufeel?DearPeter,I’mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】范文：DearPeter,I’mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.Lastsummer,IgotanopportunitytovolunteerataChildren’sHomeinthecommunity.Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.Theywereveryfriendly.TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.Ididlotsofthingswiththem.Itoldstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.Itwasawonderfulday.Iwashappytobeabletodosomethingforlittlekids.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”。③提示：文章為第一人稱，向別人介紹自己的志愿服務經歷和感受。問題回答完整，提示詞運用在文章中去，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出地點在哪里做的志愿服務；第二步，具體介紹自己做了哪些事情；第三步，談談自己對于這次志愿服務活動的感受。[亮點詞匯]①takecareof照顧②wasgoodat擅長③washappyto高興做某事④beableto能、會⑤opportunity機會[高分句型]①TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.（時間狀語從句）②Ireadstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.（限制性定語從句）③Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.（動詞不定式作表語）8．（23-24九年級上·北京·期末）好的習慣有著無窮的力量，它如同種子在日復一日的堅持中生根發(fā)芽，茁壯成長。學校英文網站開展“好習慣伴我成長”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，談談你的一個好習慣是什么，你是如何保持的以及它帶給你的收獲。不少于50詞；文中已給出內容不計入總詞數；所給提示詞語僅供選用；請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語：reading,keepdoing,freetime,improve,knowledge提示問題：●Whatisyourgoodhabit?●Howdoyoukeepyourgoodhabit?●Whatcanyougetfromyourgoodhabit?Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.Oneofmygoodhabitsistakingnotesinclass.Inclass,Itakedownwhatmyteacherswriteontheblackboardandotherimportantpointsaboutmylessons.Ikeepmynoteswell-organizedandtidysothatIcanfindinformationeasilylater.BeforeIdomyhomeworkandtakeexams,Ireviewmynotescarefully.Thehabitoftakingnoteshelpsmebecomeasuccessfulstudent.Itnotonlyimprovesmylearningabilities,butalsohelpsmegetgoodgrades.Agoodhabitreallyhelpsmeinmystudyanddailylife.I’llkeepitlifelong.【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現在時”；③提示：文章應該包括三個問題要點，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。［寫作步驟］第一步，開門見山，介紹的好習慣是什么；第二步，介紹你是如何保持你的好習慣的；第三步，介紹你從這個好習慣中得到了什么；第四步，書寫總結。［亮點詞匯］①takedown記錄，記下②getgoodgrades取得好成績［高分句型］①Ikeepmynoteswell-organizedandtidysothatIcanfindinformationeasilylater.(sothat引導目的狀語從句)②Itnotonlyimprovesmylearningabilities,butalsohelpsmegetgoodgrades.(notonly…butalso…引導并列句)9．（23-24九年級上·北京順義·期末）假如你是李華，你校英語社團的公眾號計劃做以“MyFavoriteBook”為主題的系列推送。請你用英語給社團公眾號留言，推薦你最喜歡的一本書，談談你喜歡的理由及收獲。提示詞語：writer，interesting，encourage提示問題：·Whatisyourfavoritebook?·Whydoyoulikeit?·Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromit?Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.IlikereadingnovelsbestbecauseIcanlearninterestingstoriesofdifferentpeople.MyfavoritebookisJaneEyrewrittenbyCharlotteBronte.First,IammovedbyJane’sexperienceandtraits.Janeissmallinbodybutstronginheart.Asapoororphan,shesufferedalotofdifficultiesbutshenevergaveup.Asawoman,shepursuedjustice,freedomandrespectinherlife.What’smore,thelanguageisrichandbeautiful,whichishelpfulforEnglishlearners.Ibenefitalotfromreadingit.Itnotonlybroadensmyvisionbutalsohelpsmebuildmycharacters.SoIwillkeepreadingasalastinghabit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：本文應使用“一般現在時”與為主。③提示：寫作要點應注意題干給出的“推薦最喜歡的一本書，談談喜歡的理由及收獲?！辈⑦m當補充，使文章內容充實，行文應使用第一人稱。[寫作步驟]第一步，說明閱讀的重要性，以及自己最喜歡的書。第二步，介紹喜歡這本書的原因。第三步，分享這本書帶給自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①gaveup放棄②benefitfrom從……中收益[高分句型]①IlikereadingnovelsbestbecauseIcanlearninterestingstoriesofdifferentpeople.（because引導的原因狀語從句）②What’smore,thelanguageisrichandbeautiful,whichishelpfulforEnglishlearners.（定語從句）10．（23-24九年級上·北京順義·期末）某英文網站正在開展以“榜樣”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談誰是你心中的榜樣，你的理由，以及他/她對你的影響。提示詞語:helpful,care,workhard,overcome(克服)提示問題:Whoisyourrolemodel?Whyishe/sheyourrolemodel?Whatinfluencehashe/shehadonyou?Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel.ThepersonIadmiremostismyfather.Inmyeyes,myfatherishard-workingandresponsibleforeverythinghedoes.Asadoctor,hespendsmostofhistimeandenergyonhiswork.Heiswillingtohelpandcareallthepatients.What’smore,hegivesmesupporttohelpmethroughhardtimes.Forexample,whenIfailedanexamlastyear,hehelpedmefindthesolutionsandencouragedmetoovercomethedifficulties.

Withhisguidanceandinfluence,Istudyhardatschoolandtrytohelpmyclassmateswiththeirhomework.IhopeIcandoaswellashiminthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，介紹自己心中的榜樣；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，描述自己的理由以及榜樣對自己的影響；第三步，表達個人觀點，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事②what’smore此外③forexample例如[高分句型]①Forexample,whenIfailedanexamlastyear,hehelpedmefindthesolutionsandencouragedmetoovercomethedifficulties.（when引導的時間狀語從句）②IhopeIcandoaswellashiminthefuture.（省略that的賓語從句）11．（23-24九年級上·北京門頭溝·期末）2023年7月末，我們的家鄉(xiāng)門頭溝區(qū)出現了災害性特大暴雨天氣，受損嚴重。家鄉(xiāng)人民眾志成城，積極抗洪救災。假如你是李華，你的筆友Peter非常關心你和你的家鄉(xiāng)，想了解一下這次災情的情況。請你用英文回復郵件，簡述家鄉(xiāng)受災的基本情況，談談令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。提示詞語：flood(洪災),damage,seriously,neighbour,inspiring提示問題：●Whatwasyourhometownlikeduringtheflood?●Whoorwhatimpressedyou?●Howdidyoufeel?DearPeter，Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,

Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns.DisastrousheavyrainsoccurredinourhometownMentougouDistrict,causingseriousdamagein2023July.Manylow-lyingcommunitiesfloodedagain.Itwasfullofmuddywater.

ThePLAmenarrivedimmediatelytorescuethevillagersofthefloodedareas.Andtheydidtheirbesttofightagainsttheflood.Theysuppliedthevillagerswithfreshvegetablesandfood.Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.

Afteralongtime,everythingwentonverywell.Andthatwasasignofvictory.Iwasdeeplymovedbythesepeople.

Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：本文時態(tài)一般過去時為主；③提示：本文要點以問題形式給出，注意要點銜接自然。[寫作步驟]第一步，感謝好友的關心；第二步，描寫洪水中家鄉(xiāng)的樣子，誰或什么事情給你留下了深刻的印象；第三步，結束語，感覺如何。[亮點詞匯]①wasfullof充滿；②immediately立即地③fightagainst與……戰(zhàn)斗[高分句型]Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.（目的狀語從句）12．（23-24九年級上·北京門頭溝·期末）現實中，總會有這樣一個人。他（她）有一種獨特的人格魅力。這種魅力是令人欽佩的性格、品質、行為……。他（她）散發(fā)出的令人欽佩的氣質一直吸引著你，伴隨你的成長。某英文網站正在開展以“令我欽佩的人”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，介紹一下誰是你敬佩的人，你為什么欽佩他（她），以及你從他（她）身上學到了什么。提示詞語：help,enjoy,friendly,workhard,takeaction提示問題：●Whoisthepersonyouadmire?●Whydoyouadmirehimorher?●Whathaveyoulearntfromhimorher?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Iadmiremymotherverymuch.Sheishelpfulandcareful.Everydayshegetsupveryearlyandgoestobedlate.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofourfamily.What’smore,sheisveryhelpfultoothers.Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she’salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.Allthepeoplelikeher.I’mluckytohavesuchagoodmother.IloveherandIhavelearnedalotfromher.Ihaveknowntheimportanceofresponsibilityandhelpingothers.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中詢問的三個主要問題，并適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“我最敬佩的人”來引出下文中對三個問題的回答；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“我最敬佩的人是誰、原因和值得學習的地方”三方面入手，重點介紹我的母親；③第三步，書寫結語。表達對母親的愛。[亮點詞匯]①getsup起床②notonly...butalso...不但……而且……③bebusywithsth忙于某事④takecareof照顧⑤what’smore此外⑥introuble有困難⑦tryone’sbesttodosth某人盡全力做某事[高分句型]①Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she’salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.（when引導的時間狀語從句）13．（23-24九年級上·北京石景山·期末）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom與你交流如何安排課余生活，請你用英語回復一封郵件。提示詞語：enjoy,sports,relax提示問題：Howdoyouspendyoursparetime？Explainyourreasons.DearTom,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmysparetime._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________