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Unit3Couldyoupleasetellmewheretherestroomsare?單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度路線★★☆☆☆出游計(jì)劃★★★☆☆本單元的話題圍繞“游覽”為話題,要求我們?cè)谟斡[出行時(shí),能夠得體地運(yùn)用禮貌語句指路、問路等。與此相關(guān)的寫作任務(wù)是能夠根據(jù)圖示或文字提示簡(jiǎn)單介紹去某地的路線。寫作時(shí),注意線路介紹順序要清晰,能正確運(yùn)用所學(xué)的指路句型,語言要簡(jiǎn)潔明了。命題者一般是針對(duì)假期旅行或?qū)W校組織的集體外出活動(dòng)來設(shè)計(jì)試題,要求考生對(duì)活動(dòng)的過程、所見所聞以及自身感受進(jìn)行描述。通常會(huì)涉及旅行目的、旅行地點(diǎn)、必備物品、出發(fā)時(shí)間、出行方式及旅行路線(包括問路和使用地圖)等。此類試題通常以文字、圖畫提示或者表格提示的方式來考查。體裁:應(yīng)用文(電子郵件、書信);主體部分為說明文時(shí)態(tài):用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱:第一人稱?!驹~匯積累】1.洗手間restroom/washroom2.在旁邊beside3.抱歉pardon4.浴室bathroom5.建議suggest6.中心的central7.東方的eastern8、方向direction9.地址address10.拐角corner【句式積累】【開頭句】1.暑假/寒假馬上就要到了,我們對(duì)此有一個(gè)很好的計(jì)劃Thesummer/wintervacationiscomingsoonandwe'vehadagoodplanforit2.我要去一些能讓我大開眼界的名勝古跡旅行。I'mgoingtotraveltosomeplacesofinterestwhichcanopenmyeyes.3.我們計(jì)劃去北京旅行。但去不去取決于天氣。We'replanningtogotoBeijingforatrip.Butwhethergoingthereornotdependsontheweather.4.我們的同學(xué)要去養(yǎng)老院做志愿者,在那里他們可以獲得一些照顧老人的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。Ourclassmatesaregoingtovolunteerinanursinghome,wheretheycangetsomeexperienceintakingcareoftheold.【中間句】1.旅行時(shí)你一定會(huì)體驗(yàn)到許多新事物。You'llbesuretoexperiencemanynewthingswhentraveling.2.旅行的主要原因可能是為了消遣。Themainreasonfortravelingis,perhapsforpleasure.3.你可以在旅行中欣賞美麗的風(fēng)景,放松自己。Youcanenjoythebeautifulsceneryandrelaxyourselvesbytraveling.4.旅行不僅使我們精力充沛,而且開闊了我們的視野。Travelingnotonlymakesusenergeticbutalsobroadensourhorizons.5.當(dāng)我們住在那里時(shí),我們得到了當(dāng)?shù)厝说暮芏鄮椭?。他們?duì)我們很友好。Whenwestayedthere,wegotlotsofhelpfromlocalpeople.Theywerefriendlytous.6.我時(shí)不時(shí)地幫父母做家務(wù)。Ihelpmyparentsdohouseworkfromtimetotime.7.此外,我經(jīng)常在假期讀一些書,因?yàn)樗梢蕴岣呶业膶懽魉健esides,Ioftendosomereadingduringmyvacationbecauseitcanimprovemywriting.【結(jié)尾句】1.這個(gè)假期對(duì)我來說是難忘的。Thevacationisunforgettableforme.2.我們都覺得累,但很開心。Allofusfelttiredbuthappy.3.我相信我的寒假會(huì)過得很愉快。I'msureIwillhaveagreattimeduringmywintervacation.4.總而言之,我希望我們所有人都能度過一個(gè)美好的假期。Allinall,Ihopeallofuscanhaveawonderfulvacation.5.只有這樣,你才能愉快地享受你的暑假。Onlyinthiswaycanyouenjoyyoursummervacationhappily.【萬能寫作模板】咨詢模板NowI’mwritingtoaskforsomeinformationaboutXX.①First,IwonderaboutXX.②Then,couldyoupleasetellmeXX③Next,I’dliketoknowwhereXX④Last,IwonderXXIwouldliketothankyouforyourhelp.Writeapolitelettertotheschoolaskingfortheinformationyouwanttoknow.Useyournotesin3a.Inyourletter,youshould:﹡introduceyourself﹡saywhenyouarecoming﹡politelyaskforinformation﹡thankthepersonforhelpingyou________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】DearSir/Madam,MynameisZhangTingandI’mfromBeijing,China.I’llbecomingtoyourschoolforatwo-weekstudyvacationthissummer.NowI’mwritingtoaskforsomeinformationaboutthisstudyvacation.First,Iwonderaboutthewholeplanforthisstudyvacation.Then,couldyoupleasetellmewhatcoursesI’lltakeandhowlongeachcoursewilllast?Next,I’dliketoknowwheretoeatandlive.Last,IwonderwhatactivitiesIcandotolearnmoreaboutyourculture.Iwouldliketothankyouforyourhelp.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,ZhangTing一、漢譯英:?jiǎn)卧~/短語默寫下列短語。1.快點(diǎn)兒2.首先;最初3.當(dāng)然4.路過;經(jīng)過5.抱歉,對(duì)不起;什么,請(qǐng)?jiān)僬f一遍6.求助7.停車場(chǎng);停車區(qū)8.郵箱地址9.導(dǎo)入10.盼望;期待11.醒來;叫醒12.按時(shí)【答案】1.comeon2.a(chǎn)tfirst3.ofcourse4.passby5.pardonme6.a(chǎn)skforhelp7.parkinglot8.e-mailaddress9.leadinto10.lookforwardto11.wakeup12.ontime【解析】1.快點(diǎn)兒:comeon,固定短語,故填comeon。2.首先;最初:atfirst,固定短語,故填atfirst。3.當(dāng)然:ofcourse,固定短語,故填ofcourse。4.路過;經(jīng)過:passby,固定短語,故填passby。5.抱歉,對(duì)不起:pardonme,固定短語,故填pardonme。6.求助:askforhelp,固定短語,故填askforhelp。7.停車場(chǎng):parkinglot,故填parkinglot。8.郵箱地址:e-mailaddress,故填e-mailaddress。9.導(dǎo)入:leadinto,固定短語,故填leadinto。10.盼望:lookforwardto,固定短語,故填lookforwardto。11.醒來:wakeup,固定短語,故填wakeup。12.按時(shí):ontime,固定短語,故填ontime。二、句子/對(duì)話改錯(cuò)請(qǐng)從A、B、C中選出錯(cuò)誤選項(xiàng)填在括號(hào)內(nèi),并將正確答案填寫在橫線上。13.Could,Ayoupleasetell,Bmewhereisthehospital,C?14.It'salwaysbusy,so,Acomelittle,Bearliertoget,Catable.15.Don't,Aaskhim,Bquestionssodirect,C.It'srude.16.Theteacherasked,Ahimwhy,Bheis,Clateagain.17.Excuseme,A,wouldyoupleasetell,Bmewherebuying,Cadigitalcamera?【答案】13.Cwherethehospitalis14.Balittle15.Cdirectly16.Cwas17.Cwheretobuy【解析】13.句意:你能告訴我醫(yī)院在哪里嗎?句中where引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)賓語從句,做動(dòng)詞tell的賓語,賓語從句中應(yīng)該用陳述語序,原句is在主語thehospital的前面,是疑問語序,所以不對(duì),應(yīng)將is挪到主語thehospital的后面。14.句意:它那里總是很忙,所以早一點(diǎn)來才能有桌子。little少的,小的,是形容詞。根據(jù)句意可知,這里應(yīng)該是修飾后面的比較級(jí)earlier的,故應(yīng)該用alittle。15.句意:不要這么直接地問他問題,那是粗魯?shù)?。direct直接的,是形容詞。根據(jù)句意可知,這個(gè)詞是修飾謂語動(dòng)詞ask的,應(yīng)該用副詞形式,故改為directly。16.句意:老師問他為什么又遲到了。這句話中why引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)賓語從句,在含有賓語從句的復(fù)合句中,主句中的謂語動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí),從句要用過去范圍內(nèi)的某種時(shí)態(tài),故應(yīng)將is改為was。17.句意:打擾一下,請(qǐng)你告訴我在哪里能買到數(shù)碼相機(jī)好嗎?where是疑問詞,在哪里,后面跟動(dòng)詞不定式形式,在句中做tell的賓語。故將buying改為tobuy。點(diǎn)睛:這個(gè)題目考查了英語中一些詞匯和句型的用法,其中第1小題和第4小題考查的是賓語從句的用法,賓語從句是很重要的一類從句,通常放在動(dòng)詞、介詞的后面,需要注意三個(gè)方面的問題,第一是要使用正確的引導(dǎo)詞。賓語從句的引導(dǎo)詞分詞三類:連接代詞,如what,which,who等,他們?cè)趶木渲凶鲋髡Z或者賓語;第二類是連接副詞,如where,when,why,how等,他們?cè)趶木渲凶鰻钫Z;最后一類是連詞,如that,whether等,他們?cè)趶木渲胁蛔龀煞?。第二要注意的是賓語從句中的時(shí)態(tài),要與主句的時(shí)態(tài)對(duì)應(yīng),如果主句是現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),從句中可以使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜魏螘r(shí)態(tài);如果主句是過去時(shí)態(tài),那么從句只能從過去范圍內(nèi)的時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行選擇。第三要注意賓語從句中的語序,應(yīng)該用陳述語序。三、將所給單詞連成句子18.we,learn,need,be,to,how,polite,to.【答案】Weneedtolearnhowtobepolite【詳解】根據(jù)所給標(biāo)點(diǎn)可知應(yīng)為陳述句句式,分析所給單詞,we作主語;need作謂語,needtodosth.“需要做某事”,動(dòng)詞不定式tolearn作賓語;“疑問詞+不定式”howtobepolite作動(dòng)詞learn的賓語。故填Weneedtolearnhowtobepolite“我們需要學(xué)習(xí)如何有禮貌”。19.I,should,wonder,we,if,go,there.【答案】Iwonderifweshouldgothere【詳解】根據(jù)所給標(biāo)點(diǎn)及單詞可知,此處應(yīng)用if引導(dǎo)賓語從句;I作主句主語,wonder作主句謂語;we作從句主語,should情態(tài)動(dòng)詞,go作從句謂語;there作狀語。故填I(lǐng)wonderifweshouldgothere“我想知道我們是否應(yīng)該去那里”。20.polite,wait,is,in,it,line,to?【答案】Isitpolitetowaitinline【詳解】根據(jù)所給單詞及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)可知,本句為be單詞開頭的一般疑問句。is是,be動(dòng)詞,第三人稱單數(shù);it人稱代詞,它,本句作形式主語;polite形容詞,禮貌的,在句中作表語;waitinline排隊(duì)等候;towaitinline在句中作真正的主語。故答案為:Isitpolitetowaitinline。21.WherecanIbuyabike?Canyoutellme?22.Whendoesthepartybegin?Iwonder.23.HowdoeshelearnEnglish?Doyouknow?24.Whatarethegirlsdoingthere?Pleasetellme.25.WhichcarbelongstoBob?Idon’tknow.26.Howmanybirdsarethereinthetree?Kateasked.27.Whyareyouoftenlateforschool?Couldyoupleasetellme?【答案】21.CanyoutellmewhereIcanbuyabike?22.Iwonderwhenthepartybegins.23.DoyouknowhowhelearnsEnglish?24.Pleasetellmewhatthegirlsaredoingthere.25.Idon’tknowwhichcarbelongstoBob.26.Kateaskedhowmanybirdstherewereinthetree27.Couldyoupleasetellmewhyyouareoftenlateforschool?【解析】21.根據(jù)題意是改為賓語從句,這里是where引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,注意從句用陳述語序,其結(jié)構(gòu)是主語+謂語的結(jié)構(gòu),根據(jù)題意,故填CanyoutellmewhereIcanbuyabike?22.這里式改為when引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,注意用陳述語序,其結(jié)構(gòu)是when+主語+謂語,主語是第三人稱單數(shù),謂語動(dòng)詞要變第三人稱單數(shù),根據(jù)題意,故填I(lǐng)wonderwhenthepartybegins.

23.根據(jù)題意,這里是改為how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,主語從句用陳述語序,主語是he,這里的謂語動(dòng)詞learn要變第三人稱單數(shù)。根據(jù)題意,故填DoyouknowhowhelearnsEnglish?

24.這里是改為賓語從句,主句是祈使句,從句用what引導(dǎo),從句主語是thegirls;時(shí)態(tài)是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。根據(jù)題意,故填Pleasetellmewhatthegirlsaredoingthere.

25.這里是改為which引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,belongtosb.表示屬于某人;主語是whichcar,謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)。故填I(lǐng)don’tknowwhichcarbelongstoBob.

26.這里是改為howmany引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,注意用陳述語序;howmany+可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù);therebe句型用陳述語序。主句是一般過去時(shí)態(tài),從句用一般過去時(shí)態(tài),故填Kateaskedhowmanybirdstherewereinthetree.

27.這里是改為why引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,短語belateforschool表示上學(xué)遲到;從句用陳述語序。根據(jù)題意,故填Couldyoupleasetellmewhyyouareoftenlateforschool?四、漢譯英:整句28.我很抱歉麻煩你。.【答案】I’msorrytotroubleyou【詳解】我I;抱歉sorry;麻煩trouble;你you。根據(jù)句式besorrytodosth可知主語是“I”,be動(dòng)詞用am;故填I(lǐng)’msorrytotroubleyou。29.你能告訴我哪里是吃東西的好地方嗎?【答案】Couldyoutellmewherethegoodplaceforeatingis?【詳解】couldyou...?表示“你能……?”是一種委婉表達(dá);tellme“告訴我”;后加賓語從句,從句用陳述語序。where“在哪里”作連接詞;thegoodplaceforeating“吃東西的好地方”,作主語;is作謂語。故填Couldyoutellmewherethegoodplaceforeatingis?30.那家銀行就在郵局和超市之間?!敬鸢浮縏hebankisbetweenthepostofficeandthesupermarket.【詳解】thebank那家銀行,特指用the,主語;between...and在……之間;thepostoffice郵局;thesupermarket超市。主語thebank為第三人稱單數(shù),且根據(jù)漢語意思可知是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),因此謂語動(dòng)詞是is。故填Thebankisbetweenthepostofficeandthesupermarket.31.先去五樓,然后向左拐?!敬鸢浮縂otothefifthfloorfirst,thenturnleft.【詳解】根據(jù)句意可知兩個(gè)句子都是祈使句,動(dòng)詞用原形。first首先,放句子后面,thefifthfloor意為“五樓”,then然后,turnleft意為“左轉(zhuǎn)”,故答案為Gotothefifthfloorfirst,thenturnleft.32.你知道書店在哪里嗎??【答案】Doyouknowwherethebookstoreis【詳解】你:you;知道:know;哪里:where;書店:thebookstore。根據(jù)句意可知,此題為復(fù)合句;結(jié)合語境可知,主從句均為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),主句的助動(dòng)詞用do,構(gòu)成一般疑問句;賓語從句用where引導(dǎo),且語序應(yīng)用陳述語序,故填Doyouknowwherethebookstoreis。33.請(qǐng)你告訴我怎樣去機(jī)場(chǎng)好嗎??【答案】Could/Canyou(please)tellmehowtogettotheairport【詳解】根據(jù)句意和語境可知這是一個(gè)問路句型,一般用Could/Canyou(please)tellmehowto...?提問,getto意為“去或到達(dá)”,airport機(jī)場(chǎng),故答案為Could/Canyou(please)tellmehowtogettotheairport。34.我們不必太匆忙?!敬鸢浮縒edon’tneedtorush.【詳解】根據(jù)句意和語境可知為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),we意為“我們”,don’tneedto意為“不必”,這里主語為第一人稱,因此need的否定用don’tneed,rush意為“匆忙”,是動(dòng)詞,todo不定式后用動(dòng)詞原形,故答案為Wedon’tneedtorush.35.在許多國(guó)家,第一次去別人家空手是不禮貌的?!敬鸢浮縄nmanycountries,itisimpolitetogotosomeone’shomewithoutanythingforthefirsttime.【詳解】在許多國(guó)家inmanycountries;第一次forthefirsttime;去別人家gotosomeone’shome;空手withoutanything;……是不禮貌的Itisimpoliteto…,使用it作形式主語。故填I(lǐng)nmanycountries,itisimpolitetogotosomeone’shomewithoutanythingforthefirsttime.36.你能告訴我在哪里能買到雜志嗎?【答案】CouldyoutellmewhereIcangetsomemagazines?【詳解】根據(jù)語境可知,該句是where“哪里”引導(dǎo)的賓語從句;主語是一般疑問句,用couldyoutellme...“你能告訴我……嗎”表示委婉地請(qǐng)求;能:can,情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后跟動(dòng)詞原形;買到雜志:getsomemagazines。故填CouldyoutellmewhereIcangetsomemagazines?37.在許多國(guó)家,當(dāng)你第一次遇見某人時(shí),問很直接的問題通常是不禮貌的?!敬鸢浮縄nmanycountries,itisoftennotpolitetoaskverydirectquestionswhenyoumeetsomeoneforthefirsttime.【詳解】在許多國(guó)家:inmanycountries;做某事是……:itis+形容詞+todosth;禮貌的:polite;問很直接的問題:askverydirectquestions;當(dāng)你第一次遇見某人時(shí):whenyoumeetsomeoneforthefirsttime,句子是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),故填I(lǐng)nmanycountries,itisoftennotpolitetoaskverydirectquestionswhenyoumeetsomeoneforthefirsttime.1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列漢語提示寫一篇日記,記錄5月1日,周五,你和父母去參觀科學(xué)博物館。天氣:晴朗;距離:5000米,乘公交車去;早晨8:00出發(fā)。10:30離開博物館,看到很多照片實(shí)物、模型等。

要求:運(yùn)用日記格式,詞數(shù)80詞以上。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[思路解讀]①題材:本文是一篇日記;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步,介紹今天去的目的地;第二步,講述今天和父母的所見所聞。[滿分作文]May1stFriday

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Todaymyparentsdidn’tgotoworkandIdidn’tgotoschool,sowewenttovisitScienceMuseuminourcity.It’saboutfivekilometersawayfrommyhome.Wedecidedtogotherebybus.Wesetoffateighto’clockinthemorning.Atthemuseum,wesawmanyphotos,modelsandotheroldbutinterestingthings.WelearnedalotandknewmoreaboutChinesesciencehistory.Isawalotofchildrenwiththeirparents,studentswiththeirteachersandsomeforeigners.Attenthirtyweleftthemuseumforhome.WehadawonderfuldayandImadeupmymindtostudyhard.Iwanttobescientistinthefuture.[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①decidetodosth決定做某事②setoff出發(fā)③makeupone’smindtodosth下定決心做某事[高分句型]①Wedecidedtogotherebybus.(動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語)②Iwanttobescientistinthefuture.(動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語)2.假如你是Tom,你將去一所新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)兩年。請(qǐng)有禮貌地詢問一些問題。你怎樣去;在那里你能做什么;住在哪里。要求:語句通順,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。80詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Tom[思路解讀]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:根據(jù)提示問題進(jìn)行寫作,注意語句通順,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步,引出“我可以問你一些問題嗎”這一話題;第二步,具體闡述需要咨詢的問題;第三步,書寫結(jié)語,表達(dá)期待對(duì)方的回復(fù)。[滿分作文]DearSirorMadam,IamTom.IcomefromLondon.Iwillstudyatyourschoolfortwoyearsfromnextmonth.SomayIasksomequestions?CouldyoupleasetellmehowIcangothere?I’malsowonderingwhatIshouldtake.CouldyoupleasetellmewhatIcandothere?AndcouldyoutellmewhereIwilllive?Iwillappreciateitifyoucanhelpme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Tom[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①nextmonth下個(gè)月②comefrom來自③appreciate感激[高分句型]①CouldyoupleasetellmehowIcangothere?(how引導(dǎo)賓語從句)②Iwillappreciateitifyoucanhelpme.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)3.根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示,寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。詞數(shù):60~70左右。提示:1.昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步;2.在路上我們遇見了一個(gè)外國(guó)人;3.他向我詢問如何去溫泉酒店(theHotSpringHotel);4.我告訴他沿路往前走,在第三個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)彎處向左拐就能看見酒店;5.他非常感謝我,我也為能幫他而高興。提示詞語:gooutforawalk,ontheroad,thewayto,walkalong,ontheleft,thanksb.forsth.,behappythat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[思路解讀]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí);③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏相關(guān)要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,表明寫作意圖。表明昨晚外出遇到外國(guó)人問路一事;第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“時(shí)間、如何指路、感受”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹此次經(jīng)歷的細(xì)節(jié);第三步,書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己從中收到的感悟。

[滿分作文]

Lastnight,mymotherandIwentoutforawalk.OnthewaybackwemetaforeignerwhoaskedusthewaytotheHotSpringHotel.Itoldhimthatheshouldwalkalongthestreetandthenturnleftatthethirdcorner,andthenhewillseethehotel.Hethankedmealot.AndmymotheralsopraisedmethatIwasagoodboy.Forme,Ifeltveryhappyforhelpinghim.Besides,Irealizedthathelpingotherswasareallygoodthing.Itcannotonlyhelpothersoutofemergenciesbutalsomakeourselvesfeelhappy.[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wentoutforawalk散步②ontheway在路上③walkalong沿著[高分句型]①Itoldhimthatheshouldwalkalongthestreetandthenturnleftatthethirdcorner,andthenhewillseethehotel.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)②OnthewaybackwemetaforeignerwhoaskedusthewaytotheHotSpringHotel.(who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)4.假如你們班級(jí)新來了一位同學(xué),她打算周末步行去中央公園(CentralPark),請(qǐng)你為她指路。提示:出校園沿著MainStreet一直走,到第一個(gè)路口右轉(zhuǎn),沿著OakStreet走大概10分鐘,看到一家銀行向左轉(zhuǎn),再經(jīng)過一家大超市,中央公園就在超市的對(duì)面。要求:字跡工整,信息齊全,40詞左右;開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。CentralParkisnotfarfromhere.Itiseasytogetthere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[思路解讀]①題材:本文是一篇說明文,為材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已部分給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“內(nèi)容提示”中的地點(diǎn)和方位等。[寫作步驟]第一步,介紹中央公園的大概位置;第二步,具體描述如何到中央公園的路線;[滿分作文]:CentralParkisnotfarfromhere.Itiseasytogetthere.Whenyougetoutofschool,youjustgostraight.Andthenturnrightatthefirstcrossing.AfterthatwalkalongOakStreetforabout10minutesandturnleftwhenyouseeabank.Thenpassabigsupermarket.CentralParkisacrossfromthesupermarket.[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①farfrom遠(yuǎn)離②atthefirstcrossing在第一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)角③acrossfrom在……對(duì)面[高分句型]①Whenyougetoutofschool,youjustgostraight.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)②Itiseasytogetthere.(“itis+adj+todosth”句型)5.假如你是卡爾(Carl),你的筆友莉薩(Lisa)要來你所在的城市游學(xué),你邀請(qǐng)她來你家里做客。根據(jù)下圖寫信告訴她如何從公共汽車站到你家。詞數(shù):80左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[思路解讀]①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。②時(shí)態(tài):本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③提示:考生應(yīng)注意仔細(xì)觀察所給地圖,描述好路線,并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]①第一步,表明得知要來的信息,并點(diǎn)名主題:告訴你路線。②第二步,詳細(xì)描述如何從公共汽車站到家里的路線。③第三步,總結(jié)全文,祝福她旅行愉快。[滿分作文]DearLisa,IknowyouarearrivingherenextFriday.Nowletmetellyouthewaytomyhouse.Takeataxifromthebusstation.GodownGardenStreet.Whenyouseeapostofficeonyourleft,turnrighttoCenterStreet.GostraightdownCenterStreet.Youpassahotelandabankonyourright.Whenyoupassaschoolonyourleft,turnleftandyoucanseemyhouseattheendofthestreet.Ihopeyou’llhaveagoodtrip.Yours,Carl[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thewayto到……的路②attheendof在……的盡頭/結(jié)尾③haveagoodtrip旅行愉快[高分句型]①Whenyouseeapostofficeonyourleft,turnrighttoCenterStreet.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)②Ihopeyou’llhaveagoodtrip.(省略that的賓語從句)(2022·遼寧丹東·統(tǒng)考中考真題)在動(dòng)物園里,你遇見了一個(gè)外國(guó)老爺爺,他想去看熊貓,根據(jù)圖示,請(qǐng)你為他指出去熊貓館的路,文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名,校名,地名,詞數(shù)30詞左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[思路解讀]本文是一篇看圖作文。要求根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容,介紹去熊貓館的路。注意要點(diǎn)齊全,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]寫作時(shí)要以第二人稱來行文,時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要介紹清楚圖片中的路線,可使用祈使句指路。要保證語言連貫,無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。[滿分作文]YoucanwalkalongtheMainStreetandturnrightattheEastRoad.Youcanseeashoponyourleft.ThePandaHouseisbehindtheshop.Youwon’tmissit.(2012·重慶·中考真題)假如你校有幾位來自美國(guó)的交換生,他們打算周末步行去翠湖公園。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示為他們寫出前往的路線,并簡(jiǎn)介公園情況。①路線(見下圖)②公園環(huán)境優(yōu)美、涼爽,還可以游泳、野餐等;要求:①詞數(shù):80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。②文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。CuihuParkisnotfarfromhere.It'seasytogetthere.Justgostraight[思路解讀]本篇作文考查體裁為說明文,要求寫出去翠湖公園的路線,并簡(jiǎn)介公園情況。時(shí)態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。[寫作步驟]列舉寫作要點(diǎn)1.去翠湖公園的路線2.簡(jiǎn)介公園情況。公園環(huán)境優(yōu)美、涼爽,還可游泳、野餐等;3.表達(dá)祝福的心愿。列出重點(diǎn)短語及句型farfrom,Itiseasytodosth.gostraight,turnleft,atthefirstcorner,onyourright,acrossfrom,havefun,playgames,haveapicnic,enjoyyourselves【滿分作文】:CuihuParkisnotfarfromhere.It'seasytogetthere.Justgostraightandturnrightatthefirstcorner.Walkalongtheroadandturnleftwhenyoufindahospital.CuihuParkisdownthestreetonyourright.Acrossfromtheparki

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