2023年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫提分技能06 模擬題

答案第=page11頁，共=sectionpages22頁讀后續(xù)寫（新高考專用）模擬題061．（2022·福建莆田·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Backintheearly1980s,theideaofhomecomputerswascatchingon.Iwasn'tkeenongettingone.Somehow,Ievolvedandhaveownedseveralcomputersovertheyears.Somedays,Ilovedmycomputer,butmoreoftenthannot,Ihatedit.Ididn'tgrowupwiththem,andtheywereachallengetomymentalhealth.Dealingwithmoderntechnologywasmyintroductiontostress,andIknowwhotoblame:mychildren.Theyweren'tsatisfiedthattheirdadandIfinallyboughtacomputerandlearnedtosende-mails.Wewerequitehappywiththat,butnextcameacellphone.Thenjusttalkingonthephonewasnotacceptable;theyinsistedwelearntotextaswell.Wecouldn'tgetabreak.IrememberwellthenightthatFacebookbecameahouseholdwordaroundhere.Thosekidsofoursweredeterminedtosetupajointaccountforus.Ittooksomeconvincing.Wefeltnoguiltforgratingon(激怒)theirnervesconsideringthedramathey'dsometimescreatedforusduringtheirteenageyears.Alittlepaybackwouldn'thurtthosetwo.Morerecently,myhusbandandIwereforcedintogettingridofourflipphonesandgettingsmartphones.IwilladmitthatIprogressedintoappreciatingmine.IlikedspeakingtoSiriandfindingoutwhatIneededtoknowinaninstant.IenjoyedhavingInternetaccesseverywhereIwent.Ifeltasenseofaccomplishment;myhusband-notsomuch.Tothisday,hewouldhappilytakebackhisflipphone.LastChristmas,ourchildrensurpriseduswithyetanotherpopularformoftechnology-Alexa.Thegirlstookoursmartphonesinhandandgotusprogrammed.Beforewefullyunderstoodwhatwashappening,wecouldtellAlexatoturnourlamponoroff,andshewould.Tobehonest,wewereabitannoyedathavingtolearnhowtouseyetanotherdevice,butwedecidedtokeepit.Wemasteredturningthelamponandoff,andonceagainIgotthehangofitsoonerthanmyhusbanddid.IbecamehisAlexacoach.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Onenight,AlexadidnotturnonthelampwhenIgavethecommand.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Weshouldthankourchildrenandgrandchildren.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Onenight,AlexadidnotturnonthelampwhenIgavethecommand.Itriedtosay“Turnonthelight”toitcountlesstimes,butAlexadidn’twork.“Newtechnologiesarealwaysunreliable.”myhusbandcomplained.IsearchedtheInternetandimmediatelyfoundthereasonwhyAlexcouldn’twork.IjustneededtotellAlextosetthelightcolortowhiteorwhatevercolorIwanted,andthenitwouldturnonthelight.ThenAlexturnedonthelightitself.Weshouldthankourchildrenandgrandchildren.ItwasourchildrenandgrandchildrenthattaughtustousetechnologysothatIcouldfindasolutionontheInternetbymyself.Withoutthem,ourlifeisalwaysinvariableandboring.Ourchildrenandgrandchildren“force”ustoacceptandusetechnology,whichseemstoputusunderpressure.However,thefactisthatourchildrenandgrandchildrenletusreallyacceptandusetechnologytomakeourlifemoreconvenient.【解析】【分析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的孩子們?yōu)樽约汉驼煞蛲扑]了許多現(xiàn)代科技產(chǎn)品，作者從很有壓力變得喜歡上它們，有一種成就感，但是作者的丈夫不太喜歡。去年圣誕節(jié)，孩子們給作者的智能手機(jī)安裝了Alexa程序，可以打開或者關(guān)閉燈?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天晚上，當(dāng)我發(fā)出命令時(shí)，Alexa沒有開燈?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者和丈夫?qū)Υ说牟煌磻?yīng)，作者用孩子們教會(huì)的技能想到辦法解決問題。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我們應(yīng)該感謝我們的子孫?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者感受到孩子們教會(huì)的科技是有用處的，感謝孩子們。2.續(xù)寫線索：Alexa不工作——丈夫抱怨——作者想辦法——Alexa被修好——感謝孩子們——科技的用處3.詞匯激活行為類①打開：turnon/switchon②教：teach/instruct③找到：find/seekout情緒類①感謝：thank/appreciate②壓力：pressure/stress【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IsearchedtheInternetandimmediatelyfoundthereasonwhyAlexcouldn’twork.（由關(guān)系副詞why引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】However,thefactisthatourchildrenandgrandchildrenletusreallyacceptandusetechnologytomakeourlifemoreconvenient.（由連接詞that引導(dǎo)表語從句）2．（2022·遼寧·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Oneofmymostmemorabletripstookplaceduringthesummervacationaboutthreeyearsago,whenmysister,myauntandItookatriptoSpainbecauseweweremoving.Onthedayofthetrip,IlayinbedthinkingaboutmyfriendswhomIwasgoingtoleavebehindandthoughtswerefloodingin.Whenwearrivedatthehirestation,weseemedtohavesomeproblemswithourluggagebecauseitwastoomuchforataxi,sowehadtobookavan(廂式送貨車)totakeourluggagetotheairport.Wewaitedforalongperiodtofindaperfectvanthatwouldfitourluggage.Beforeleaving,IfeltverybadbecauseIwasgoingtoadifferentcountryandwasgoingtomissallmyfriendsandfamily.Iwasnotcomfortableandcried.Thejourneywasalmostperfectatthebeginning,butsoonitbegantorain.Becauseoftherain,thedriverscouldnotseefaraway,whichcausedahugetrafficjam.IwassittingbythewindowwithacanofCokethatIhadboughtinthestoreearlier.Myauntandsisterfellasleep,andduringthistime.Ifeltboredandthoughtaboutotherthingsthatbotheredme.Myeyesturnedtothemountaininfrontofus.Abussuddenlyappearedinthepicture.Itwasveryclosetous.Carsspedpastuswithoutanyspeedlimit.Besidemewasaverydeeplake:Iwonderedtomyselfwhatifsomethingorsomeonefellinsideit.Suddenly,abusinfrontofourvanstopped,andbecauseitwasrainingheavilyandthevanwasgoingfast,noonecouldseewhatwasgoingtohappen.Then,bang,webumpedintoeachother.Ourvanoverturned,butluckily,itdidn’tfallintothelake.Peoplecametohelpusgetoutofthevanbecausewewereblockedandthedriverwashalf-dead.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Westruggledtogetoutofthevanandeverythingwehadwasgone._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwaslosingalotofbloodandthentheemergencyaidcame._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Westruggledtogetoutofthevanandeverythingwehadwasgone.Everythingwasverystrange.Ihadneverhadthatkindofexperiencebefore.Itwaslikewatchingahorrormovie.Somepeoplewhowerealsointheaccidentstartedcrying,lookingfortheirchildren,tearsbeginningtoincrease.Mylegwasbadlyinjured.Myauntwascallingtoseeksomehelp,andmysisterwasfullofinjury.Italmostseemedthatthetragedywasnevergoingtoend.Iwaslosingalotofbloodandthentheemergencyaidcame.Theytookustohospitalwhereweweretreated.Wehadtopayforsomefees,butwehadnomoney.Thedoctorsandnurseswhowerepresentlearnedofourconditionandpaidforus.Althoughwehadexperiencedabadaccident,wewereallluckytohavereceivedhelpfromthosewarm-heartedpeople.Afterthatwewentonwithourjourneyandreachedourdestinationsuccessfullyatlast.【解析】【分析】本文以人物為線索開展故事，作者講述了三年前去西班牙度暑假時(shí)，在去飛機(jī)場(chǎng)的路上，遭遇車禍的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們掙扎著從廂式送貨車?yán)锱莱鰜?，發(fā)現(xiàn)我們的一切東西都不見了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者目睹遭遇車禍后的慘狀。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我正在流血，救護(hù)車來了。”可知，第二段可描寫醫(yī)生和護(hù)士搶救我們的經(jīng)過。2.續(xù)寫線索：爬出運(yùn)貨車——目睹慘狀——絕望——救護(hù)車到達(dá)——醫(yī)院救助——醫(yī)護(hù)人員籌錢——感動(dòng)3.詞匯激活行為類①尋找：lookfor/searchfor②結(jié)束：gotoend/cometoastop③照顧：treat/takecareof情緒類①哭泣：startcrying/burstoutcrying②糟糕的：bad/terrible【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Somepeoplewhowerealsointheaccidentstartedcrying,lookingfortheirchildren,tearsbeginningtoincrease.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語從句以及現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）[高分句型2].Theytookustohospitalwhereweweretreated.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句）3．（2022·福建福建·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ANewAdditiontotheFamilyFortheinitialtenyearsofhislife,Victorwastheprinceofthehousehold.Ashewasanonlychild,hisparentspettedhimandshoweredalltheirloveandattentiononhim.Whatevertoyshisparentsbought,theywerealwaysmeantforhim.Whateverfoodwasintherefrigerator,therewasnoonetocompetewithhimtopolishitofffirst.Victorcouldleavehistoysorbooksaroundthehousewithcompleteeaseofmind,knowingthattherewasnoonewhowouldgettheirhandsonhisbelongingsandcauseanydamage.However,allthatwastochangeovernightwhenVictor’sparentsbroughtbackhisnewbabysister,Lina,fromthehospital.Withherrosycheeks,wideopeneyesandangelicsmile,Linacaughttheheartsofherparents,grandparentsandrelatives.Everyonefocusedtheirattentiononthecutebunchofjoy.Whenevershecried,hermotherorfatherwouldrushtoherbed.Shesimplycriedbecauseshewantedtobecarried.TherewaslittletimeleftforVictor.NowthatVictor’smotherhadhisbabysistertotakecareof,sheexpectedVictorhimselftodomostofthechoreshecando.Victorwasaskedtocleanhisownroom,ironhisownschooluniformandcleanhisownshoes.BeforeLina’sarrival,hehadneverliftedafingertohelpoutwiththesetasks.ThewholefamilyalsowentoutlessbecauseitwasunhealthytoexposeLinatothebacteria(細(xì)菌)beingintheoutsideworldtoooften.Victorfeltneglectedbyhisparents.HefeltthattheylovedLinamorethanhim.Asaresult,hetriedtoattracthisparents’attentionbybecomingresistant.Oneevening,Victor’sparentswerecalledupbyhisteacherbecauseVictorhadgotintoafightatschool.HisteacherhadnoticedVictor’sbehaviourandworkattitudechangingdownwardsinthepasttwomonths.Beforethat,hehadbeenamodelstudent.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。Uponhearingtheteacher’sfeedback,Victor’sparentsgotlostinthought.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Victorrealizedthathisparentsstillcaredforhim.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考作案：Uponhearingtheteacher’sfeedback,Victor’sparentsgotlostinthought.SincetheirsecondchildLindawasborn,theyhavedevotedalltheirattentiontoher.Tosomedegree,theyneglectedvictor’sfeelings.Afterall,hewantedtosharethelovefromparentswithLinda.Sotheymadeadecisionthattheyshouldtreatthetwochildrenequally.Gradually,somethingchangedinthefamily.AfterschoolVictoroftenfoundsomedeliciousfoodandnewtoysonhisdesk.Whenhedidhishomework,hisfathercametohisroomandsatbesidehim,readingabookquietly,whichmadehimcomfortableandwarm.Atthattime,hismotherwastakingcareofhissisterLinda.Afterhefinishedhishomework,hismotheraskedhimtoplaywithLinda.Seeinghersweetsmile,hefeltsohappy.

Victorrealizedthathisparentsstillcaredforhim.Sohewasdeterminedtohelphisparentstakegoodcareofhissister.Havingfinishedhishomework,helearnedtocleantheirroomsanddoallthechoresthathecould.Whilehismotherwascooking,heplayedwithhissisterhappily.Hecametorealizethatheshouldtakeresponsibilityforthefamilybecausehegrewup.【解析】【分析】本文以一個(gè)小男孩Victor的感受為線索展開，講述了在Victor的妹妹Linda出生以后，父母將全部的注意力集中到她身上，這讓他感到被忽略，因此他用對(duì)抗來引起父母的注意。最后父母也意識(shí)到這一點(diǎn)，就做出改變，讓Victor重新感受到父母的愛。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“聽到老師的反饋，父母陷入沉思”可知，第一段可描寫父母對(duì)自己行為的反省。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Victor意識(shí)到父母仍舊關(guān)愛他”可知，第二段可描寫Victor感受到父母仍舊愛他后的積極行動(dòng)。2.續(xù)寫線索：沉思——反省——改變——陪孩子——感受到愛——回報(bào)3.詞匯激活行為類①全身心投入：devoteallone’sattentionto/putone’sheartinto②決定：makeadecision/makeupone’smind③.照看：takecareof/lookafter情緒類①感到高興：feelhappy/feelpleased②幸福地：happily/merrily【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Sotheymadeadecisionthattheyshouldtreatthetwochildrenequally.(運(yùn)用同位語從句）[高分句型2].Havingfinishedhishomework,helearnedtocleantheirroomsanddoallthechoresthathecould.(運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語以及定語從句）4．（2022·重慶·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Myfatherisapracticalman.Hecan’texplaincalculus(微積分)，buthecantellyouhowmuchpressureaboilerneeds.Hecan’tdrawanarchitect’splan,buthecantellyouifthepipesandwiringwillsustainthestructure.Heputhimselfthroughnightschooltobecomeanengineer,butthatwasonlyafterheworkedaslumber,anelectrician,andamechanic.Onedaywewalkedbyatoystorewindow.Sittinginthecomerwasthemostunusualdoll-houseI’deverseen.Itwasshapedlikedanupturnedlog（原木）.Littleovalwindowsdecoratedwithnicecurtainsandframedbytinybalconieswerecutintoit.“Oh,Daddy,”Isaid,“isn’titbeautiful?DoyouthinkSantaClauswillbringittome?”Dadlookedatthe$100pricetag,silent—that’saratherbigfigureinthosedays.“IthinkevenSantacouldn’taffordthishouse,”hejoked,liftinguphisbeltasheoftendoeswhenhe’snervous.“Maybeoneday,sweetheart.”O(jiān)nChristmasmorning,Iawokeearlyandraceddownstairs.Inthedimlight,Imadeoutalotofwrappedboxesunderthetree—butnonelargeenoughtocontainmydollhouse.DadcouldseemydisappointmentHepulledmeontohislapandgentlytoldmehow,asaboy,hehadwantedaredwagon,buthisfathercouldn’taffordone.Hesaidhemadehisownfromwoodandoldwheelshefound.“I’llmakeoneforyou,”Dadassuredme.AndrightafterChristmas,despitealltheunfinishedprojectsathome,hestartedit.Inaively（幼稚地）thoughtitwasaneasytoytomake,buteverystepofthelongprocesswasconsiderablymorecomplexthanIhadanticipated.Nightafternight,Dadwouldcomehomefromhisjobdeadtired,yethe’dalwaysfindtimetoworkontheloghouse.Inthedarkyellowelectriclight,Dadwasalwaysbusycreatingmydollhouse.要求：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ihesitated,wonderingifIshouldhelpmyfather.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inall,ittookusonemonthofhardwork._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________