Unit+1+People+of+Achievement+Using+Language+writing高中英語人教版（2019）選擇性必修第一冊

UsingLanguageIntroducesomeoneyouadmireThemanwhochangedourunderstandingoftheuniverse.Whatwordswouldyouusetodescribehim?Slightlyodd-lookingIntelligent/clever/wiseFamous/well-knownBrilliant/extraordinary/outstandingKind,gentleWarming-up1.Readandpredictwhatyouwillreadfromthetext.HisachievementsandcontributionsHisscientificdiscoveryHispersonalqualitiesHislikesanddislikesTask11.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Tips:keywords,topicsentences...Task21.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Task2Keywords:Thegreatest…thesmartest…agenius…courageous,madenumerouscontributionstotheworldpara1:Introduction(hisgreatcontributionsandpersonalities)1.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Task2para2:Hisearlylifeandeducationpara3:Hisworkexperienceandachievements1.Readandsumupthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Task2Metaphor暗喻，隱喻para4:Hismiddle-lifecrisisappearancePersonification擬人simile明喻storieshumorouspara5:Hisappearanceandstoriesshowinghispersonalities1.Whattypeofwritingisthistext?2.Howdoesthewriterdevelopthetext?ExpositionB.ArgumentationC.BiographyD.PracticalwritingOn18April1955,itwasreportedthatEinstein

hadpassedaway,andthewholeworldmournedthegreatlossofabrilliantscientist.Einstein’sdeathEuphemism[?ju?f?m?z?m]委婉Theorganizationfeature:intimeorder人物簡介是高中生基礎(chǔ)寫作任務(wù)中常見的一種話題類型。它涉及人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平經(jīng)歷、成就和評價等。ConclusionStep1Chooseapersonyou'regoingtowrite.Step2Makealistofthingsyou'regoingtowrite.Step3Finishandreviseyourdraftwithyourpartner.1.出生在一個……的家庭2.在某人十幾/二十幾/三十幾歲的時候

3.長相普通/英俊4.畢業(yè)于……5.獲得……(方面的)學(xué)位get/obtaina…degreein…bebornina…familyinone’steens/twenties/thirtiesordinary/plain-looking/handsome-lookinggraduatefrom…

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6.對……有濃厚的興趣

7.對……有天賦

8.竭盡全力做某事

9.受……尊重10.獻身于devoteoneselftohaveagift/talentfor…show(a)stronginterestin…

berespectedby…tryone’sbesttodosth.makeevery/greatefforttodosth.

11.為……樹立榜樣

12.被譽為……

13.全心全意為……服務(wù)14.高度評價

15.為……作出偉大的貢獻makegreatcontributionsto…setanexampleforsb.to…behonoredas…serve…h(huán)eartandsoulthink/speakhighlyof錢學(xué)森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一個富裕之家,他是我國航天事業(yè)的先驅(qū).QuanXuesenwasborninawealthyfamilyinHuangzhou,ZhejiangonDecember11,1911andhewasthepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.QuanXuesen,thepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry,wasbornin….QuanXuesen,whowasborn…,wasthepioneerofapioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.QuanXuesen,bornin…,wasthepioneerofapioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.2.李平從…大學(xué)畢業(yè)之后,就投身于科研事業(yè)當(dāng)中了.Aftergraduatingfrom…University/Havinggraduatedfrom…,LinPindevotedhimselftothescientificresearch.3.畢業(yè)后,他去了美國深造,并在那里獲得了博士學(xué)位.Havinggraduatedfrom…University,hewenttoAmericaforfurthereducationandgainedadoctor’sdegree.Havinggraduatedfrom…University,hewenttostudyinAmerica,wherehegainedadoctor’sdegree.4.憑著他的決心和毅力，他在兩年內(nèi)創(chuàng)下了多項世界紀錄并在田徑界獲得了高度的評價。5.他不僅獻身于志愿者工作，而且還全心全意為人民服務(wù)。Withgreatdeterminationandperseverance,hesetseveralworldrecordswithintwoyearsandwasthoughthighlyofbytheathleticcircles.Notonlydidhedevotehimselftovoluntarywork,butalsohewaswillingtoservepeopleheartandsoul.6.他是中國最偉大的小說家之一，作為一個杰出的人物他將被永遠銘記。HeisoneofthegreatestnovelistinChinaandwillbealwaysrememberedasanoutstandingman.(2020全國卷I)你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡介；2.尊敬和愛戴的原因注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。ThePersonIRespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.對社會有突出貢獻的人物：1.民族英雄/領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人物/知名人物/

有影響力的人物2.偉大的/勇敢的/成功的/杰出的3.被認為是4.被授予...的頭銜5.樂于助人6.深受他的思想影響nationalhero/leadingfigure/famousfigure/influentialfigureagreat/brave/successful/remarkable/anoutstanding...beconsidered/regarded/recognizedasbeawardedthetitleofbereadytohelpothersbegreatlyinfluencedbyhisthoughts對社會突出貢獻的人物7.享有聲譽8.為...樹立好的榜樣9.對...做出巨大貢獻10.致力于，獻身于自己的事業(yè)11.有影響，有重要作用12.全心全意為人民服務(wù)13.起重要作用have/enjoyagoodreputationsetagoodexamplefor/tomakegreatcontributionstodevoteoneselftoone'scareermakeadifferencetoservethepeopleheartandsoulplayanimportantrole/partin句子：1.我很欽佩MrSun,我的英語老師，一個不多言語的中年男人。IhavegreatadmirationforMr.Sun,myEnglishteacher,amiddle-agedmanoffewwords.2.他的友善和責(zé)任感使我欽佩他。ItisbecauseofhisfriendlinessandthesenseofresponsibilitythatIshowgreatadmirationforhim.3每當(dāng)我考試不及格和情緒低落時，他總是給我及時的鼓勵和耐心的指導(dǎo)。WheneverIfailintheexamandaminlowspirits,healwaysgivesmetimelyencouragementandpatientguidance.WheneverIfeelcastdownbecauseofmypooracademicperformance,....4.有了他的經(jīng)常的鼓勵和無條件的信任，我重拾信心然后繼續(xù)追求我的夢想。Withhisconstantencouragementandunconditionaltrust,Iregainmyconfidenceandcontinuetopursuemydream.5.如果沒有他，我也不可能被理想的大學(xué)錄取。Haditnotbeenforhim,Icouldn'tbeadmittedtomyidealuniversitynow.6.給我們學(xué)生樹立了一個好榜樣，他很值得我們的尊敬。Havingsetagreatexampletousstudents,hefullydeservesmyrespect.7.我最尊敬的人是我的阿姨，一個中年護士，在新冠肺炎期間與病毒做斗爭。TheoneIrespectmostismyaunt,amiddle-agednurse,whofoughtagainsttheCOVID-19duringthetoughtimesoftheepidemic.

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8.我最尊敬的人是MissHuang,我的班主任和英語老師，她的教學(xué)對我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活有很大的影響。TheoneIrespectmostisMissHuang,myheadteacherandEnglishteacher,whoseteachinghasmadeagreatdifferencetomystudyandlife.開頭：(點出最尊敬的人是誰，是某個人)強調(diào)句：Itis...thatIrespectmost.1.TheoneIrespectmostismyneighbor,UncleLi.2.Asforme,mymathteacher,Mr.KongisthepersonIrespectmost.3.ThepersonIloveandrespectmostismymom,anordinarymiddle-agedwoman(同位語)whohasaprofoundinfluenceonmylife.(定語從句)4.Amongthem,thepersonIrespectmostisZhongNanshan,whohasbecomeahouseholdnameforhiscontributionstodefeatingvirus.(定語從句:整體

概述成就)Para2:1.人物簡介

2.尊敬和愛戴的原因HeisavolunteerwhoworksasagateguardinourcommunityduringtheepidemicofCOVID-19,andhismaindutyistomeasurebodytemperatureandcheckresidentsforexitandentry.(人物簡介)Regardlessoftheriskofgettinginfected,UncleLiisresponsibleandfullydevotedtohisjob.Eveninfreezingweather,hestillstickstohispostandleavesnooneunchecked.Thankstohiseffortsinepidemicpreventionandcontrol,ourneighborhoodhasbeeninagoodstate.(尊敬和愛戴的原因)Para2:1.人物簡介

2.尊敬和愛戴的原因Mr.Liuisateacherwhoshowsgreatenthusiasmandloveforteachingandhisstudents.(人物簡介)Icanwellrememberhowhisencouragementhasspurreduson.Itishishelpfulnessandkindnessthatwinhimgreatpopularityandagoodreputationamongus.Whateverdifficultieswecomeacross,hedoesn'thesitatetocometoouraid.Insomesense,heisvirtuallyabeaconofhope,urgingusnevertogiveup.Ontopofthat,hisrichexperienceanddevotiontoteachingnotonlygiveuseasyaccesstoprofessionalknowledgebutmostimportantlyshapeourcharacter.(尊敬和愛戴的原因)Para2:1.人物簡介

2.尊敬和愛戴的原因ZhongNanshan,amedicalscientist,isaleadingfigureinthebattlesagainstSARSin2003andCOVIDin2020,winninghimtheworldwiderespect.(人物簡介)EverytimeIseethepicturesinwhichheisfightingtosavepeople'slives,Icannothelpbeingmovedbyhim.Whatimpressesmemostisthataged84,herushedtothefrontlineoftheepidemicarea

withouthesitation.ZhongNanshanandhisworkmatesworkedtogetherdayandnighttotreatthepatientsinfectedwithCOVID19.Withtheirjointefforts,remarkableresultswereachievedandCOVID19wasfinallyundercontrol.(尊敬和愛戴的原因)Para3回扣主題1.Actually,therearemanyselflesspeoplelikeUncleLiaroundus,whowelldeserveourrespect.2.SuchisMr.Li,adedicated(富有獻身精神的)teacherIhavethehighestrespectfor.3.Hisdedicationtoworkisadmirable,whichtrulyinspiresmetobecomearespectedmanlikehiminthefuture.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.TheoneIrespectmostismyneighbor,UncleLi.HeisavolunteerwhoworksasagateguardinourcommunityduringtheepidemicofCOVID-19,andhismaindutyistomeasurebodytemperatureandcheckthepassersforexitandentry.Regardlessoftheriskofgettinginfected,UncleLiisresponsibleanddevotedtohisjob.Eveninterribleweather,hestillstickstohispostandleavesnooneunchecked.Thankstohiseffortsinepidemicpreventionandcontrol,ourneighborhoodhasbeeninagoodstate.Actually,therearemanyselflesspeoplelikeUncleLiaroundus,whowelldeserveourrespect.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunthingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.InmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Mymom,anordinarymiddle-agedwoman,is

thepersonIloveandrespectmost.Bornintoapoorfamily,shehasalwaysbeenindependentandcherishedwhatshehashad.Nowsheisateacher,workswellintomidnightbutseldomcomplains.ThereasonwhyIshowrespectforheristhatsheneverlosestemples,butinsteadalwaysencouragesus.MythoughtsflashedbacktothedayswhenIfeltcastdownonaccountofmypooracademicperformance.Awareofmylowspirits,shetoldmefirmlythataslongasItriedmybest,shewouldtakeprideinmewhatevertheresultwouldbe.Inthemeanwhile,shesecretlystucksomefamoussayingsuchaswherethereisawillthereisawayonmytable,remindingmetokeepapositiveattitudetowardlife.withherconstantencouragementandunconditionaltrust,Iregainedmyconfidenceandcontinuedtopursuemydream.Wereitnotforher,IcouldnotbewhatIamnow.Suchismybelovedmom,asimpleyetgreatwomanlikeabeamofsunshine,brighteningmywayahead.ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.IhavegreatadmirationforMr.Sun,myEnglishteacher,amiddle-agedmanoffewwords.First,hishelpfulnessandkindnesswinhimgreatpopularityandagoodreputationamongus.Whateverdifficultieswecomeacross,hedoesn'thesitatetocometoouraid.Insomesense,heisvirtuallyabeaconofhope,encouragingusnevertogiveup.Ontopofthat,itishisrichexperienceanddevotiontoteachingthatnotonlygiveuseasyaccesstoprofessionalknowledgebutmostimportantlyshapeourcharacter.SuchisMr.SunthatIhavethehighestrespectforhim.

Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Amongthem,thepersonIrespectmostisZhongNanshan,whohasbecomeahousholdnameforhiscontributionstodefeatingvirus.(點出最尊敬的人是誰，是某個人)ZhongNanshan,amedicalscientist,isaleadingfigureinthebattlesagainstSARSin2003andCOVIDin2020,winninghimtheworldwiderespect.EverytimeIseethepicturesinwhichheisfightingtosavepeople'slives,Icannothelpbeingmovedbyhim.Whatimpres