寫作Lesson10求助信答案

Lesson10求助信課前檢測(cè)一.簡(jiǎn)答1.最近生活和學(xué)習(xí)怎么樣呢？我寫信來(lái)請(qǐng)你幫個(gè)忙。2.七月份我會(huì)去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽，我在資料搜集、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難，請(qǐng)你幫我解決。3.我打算賽后去看你，盼回復(fù)。二.翻譯1.Iamwritingtoseekyourassistance.2.IwilltakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestinBeijinginJuly.3.Ihavedifficultyinsearchinginformationandusinglanguage.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestions.課中講解一．掌握謀篇布局思路求助信框架結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：寫信目的—自我介紹（或問(wèn)候）+請(qǐng)求對(duì)方幫助第二段：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)—說(shuō)清楚遇到的困難（背景）及原因，再說(shuō)出求助的具體細(xì)節(jié)第三段：表達(dá)感謝—感謝對(duì)方的幫助，盼回復(fù)（盼相見(jiàn)）二．能夠正確遣詞造句1.開頭【思路句】我叫李華，來(lái)自你上學(xué)期寫作課。我寫信的目的是要向你求助?！厩苍~】seekyourassistance【句型】Iamwritingtoseekyourassistance.【造句】I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance.【升級(jí)1】中文：我叫李華，你上學(xué)期寫作課的一名學(xué)生。我寫信的目的是要向你求助，希望你可以對(duì)我這個(gè)暑假的求職申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷提點(diǎn)修改的意見(jiàn)。英文：I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.【過(guò)關(guān)檢測(cè)】1.填空seekyourassistance2.翻譯句子I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.2.正文（1）【思路句】我正在申請(qǐng)一份外資公司的暑假兼職?！厩苍~】applyfor;parttimejob;foreignpany;summervacation【造句】I’mapplyingforaparttimejobataforeignpanyduringthesummervacation.【升級(jí)】中文：暑假快到了，我想在一家外資公司申請(qǐng)一份兼職的工作，我覺(jué)得這會(huì)是一個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)的黃金機(jī)會(huì)。句型：With…aroundthecorner,Iintendtodosth.,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.英文：Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinacertainforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.（2）【思路句】我已經(jīng)寫好了申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷?！厩苍~】plete;applicationletter;resume【造句】Ihavejustpletedmyapplicationletterandresume.【升級(jí)】中文：我已經(jīng)寫好了申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷,它們就在附件里。句型：Ihavedonesth.,which….英文：Ihavejustpletedmyapplicationletterandresume,whichhasbeenattachedtothisletter.（3）【思路句】我不確定自己用語(yǔ)和格式對(duì)不對(duì)?！厩苍~】sure;language;format【造句】IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandformatI’veused.【升級(jí)1】中文：我害怕我寫的申請(qǐng)材料會(huì)因?yàn)槟刚Z(yǔ)的干擾而不盡如人意，語(yǔ)法和用詞不夠地道。句型：I’mafraidthat…mayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultof….英文：I’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.【升級(jí)2】中文：考慮到這是我第一次寫這種正式的文章，用語(yǔ)和格式上可能會(huì)有錯(cuò)誤。句型：There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwith…consideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthis….英文：There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththelanguageandformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.（4）【思路句】如果你能騰出時(shí)間幫我修改附件的文件，我會(huì)十分感激?！厩苍~】grateful;sparesometime;revise;document;attach【句型】Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsparesometimetodosth..【造句】Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsparesometimetorevisethedocumentsattached.【升級(jí)1】中文：如果你可以抽點(diǎn)時(shí)間幫我檢查一下我附上的申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷并做一些必要的修改，我會(huì)非常感激。英文：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparesometimetogothroughtheapplicationletterandresumeattachedandmakenecessaryrevisions.【升級(jí)2】中文：我想知道你可不可以在下周五前騰出一點(diǎn)時(shí)間幫我檢查一下我的求職材料，對(duì)我的用語(yǔ)和格式提一些寶貴的建議。句型：Iamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimeto…beforenextFriday(時(shí)間),offeringvaluablementson….英文：IamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimetocheckmymaterialsbeforenextFriday,offeringvaluablementsonmyuseofwordsandformat.【過(guò)關(guān)檢測(cè)】1.填空（1）havepleted;hasbeenattachedto;（2）asaresultof2.翻譯句子（1）Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinacertainforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.（2）IamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimetocheckmymaterialsbeforenextFriday,offeringvaluablementsonmyuseofwordsandformat.3.結(jié)尾【思路句】感謝你的好意。期待你的答復(fù)?！厩苍~】kindness;lookforwardto;reply【造句】Thankyouforyourkindness.Lookingforwardtoyourreply【升級(jí)1】中文：感謝你的好意。期待你在方便的時(shí)候能給我回信。英文：Thankyouforyourkindness!Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.【升級(jí)2】中文：謝謝你的關(guān)注，我期待著你的早日答復(fù)。英文：Thankyouforyourdueattention,andIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.【過(guò)關(guān)檢測(cè)】1.填空（1）kindness;Lookingforwardto;（2）atyourconvenience2.翻譯句子Thankyouforyourdueattention,andIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.三．能夠正確使用語(yǔ)篇銜接詞1.范文【基礎(chǔ)版范文】DearMs.Jenkins,I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoaskforyourassistance.I’mapplyingforaparttimejobataforeignpanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustpletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandformatI’veused.Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparesometimetorevisethedocumentsattached.Thankyouforyourkindness!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【升級(jí)版范文】DearMsJenkins,I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourEnglishwritingclass.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistanceinthehopethatyoucankindlyoffermesometipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinaforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.YetI’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.Furthermore,there’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththeformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparethetimetorevisethedocumentsattached.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua課后練習(xí)補(bǔ)救練習(xí)一.補(bǔ)全句子1.aroundthecorner;agoldenopportunity;personalgrowth2.Intendingto;havewritten3.appreciateit;sparesometime;attached4.atyourconvenience二.翻譯1.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.2.Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinacertainforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.3.I’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.4.There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththelanguageandformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.5.IamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimetocheckmymaterialsbeforenextFriday,offeringvaluablementsonmyuseofwordsandformat.鞏固練習(xí)1.填空DearMsJenkins,I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourEnglishwritingclass.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistanceinthehopethatyoucankindlyoffermesometipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinaforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.YetI’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.Furthermore,there’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththeformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparethetimetorevisethedocumentsattached.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua2.完成作文（1）寫出中文思路●問(wèn)候并表明需要求助●介紹自己制作的中國(guó)結(jié)（外觀、象征意義和價(jià)格）并提出具體求助內(nèi)容●表示感謝，盼回復(fù)（2）根據(jù)中文思路，完成篇章寫作。DearTom,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance.I’mmakingsomeChineseknotswithsilkthreads,clothandothermaterials.Andtheylookreallybeautifulintheshapeofadiamond,about5incheslongand4incheswide.InChina,theseknotsstandforfriendship,loveandgoodluck.Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftstofriendsorhangthemintheircarsorhouses.Theyareonly4.99USdollarseach.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulds