高考總復(fù)習(xí)優(yōu)化設(shè)計二輪用書英語(新高考)滿分練15應(yīng)用文寫作+讀后續(xù)寫

高考總復(fù)習(xí)優(yōu)化設(shè)計GAOKAOZONGFUXIYOUHUASHEJI2024滿分練(十五)應(yīng)用文寫作+讀后續(xù)寫ⅠⅡ應(yīng)用文寫作(2023福建福州二模)假設(shè)你是李華,你校邀請在福建醫(yī)科大學(xué)工作的外籍眼科專家Tim教授到校開設(shè)關(guān)于如何保護眼睛的講座,作為校學(xué)生會主席,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英文寫一段歡迎稿,內(nèi)容如下:1.教授簡介;2.講座意義;3.表示歡迎。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請在相應(yīng)位置作答。ⅠⅡDearfellowstudents,Goodafternoon!IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents’Union.It’smyprivilegeonbehalfoftheschooltowelcomeprofessorTimhere,awell-knowneyespecialistworkingatFujianMedicalUniversity.We’redelightedtohaveprofessorTimdeliveralectureonhowtoprotectoureyes.Hewillcombinetheorywithpractice.Withhisexpertise,thelectureisboundtoraiseourawarenessofeyehealthcareandequipuswithpracticalstrategiestosafeguardoureyes.Prepareyourselftobeeducatedandinspired.BeforeIhandovertoMr.Tim,Iwanttosayoncemore:thankyouandwelcome.ⅠⅡ1.詞匯積累(1)代表:on

behalf

of;represent(2)著名的:well-known;celebrated(3)發(fā)表演講:deliveralecture;addressalecture(4)保護:safeguard;defend;protect2.高分句型(1)It’smyprivilegeonbehalfoftheschooltowelcomeprofessorTimhere,awell-knowneyespecialistworkingatFujianMedicalUniversity.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作定語)(2)We’redelightedtohaveprofessorTimdeliveralectureonhowtoprotectyoureyes.(運用了疑問詞+不定式作賓語)ⅠⅡ讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2023浙江寧波二模)WhenIadoptedhim,hehadbeenrescuedfromdeathinsideatightlytiedblacktrashbagabandonedrightbesideagarbagetruckontheroad.Analertgarbagemannoticedthebagmovingandusedametalrake(耙子)totearopenthebagtolookinside.Therewasmyshakingpuppydog.Therakedamagedthenervesinhisbacksohelimpedalittle,buthecouldrunasfastaslightning.ⅠⅡFormydog’sfirstbirthday,IenteredhiminafunrunsponsoredbyourlocalSocietyforthePreventionofCrueltytoAnimals(SPCA).I’mnotmuchofarunner,buttherunwasonly3kilometers,soIthoughtitwouldbefunforbothofus.Wepracticedforweeks.Onourpracticeruns,hewasalwayseagertogoandusuallydraggedmealongbehindhim.Iworkedonhisleash(拴狗鏈)mannerssothathewouldn’ttripmeonthebigday.Ifeltwewerereadyforanything.ⅠⅡThefunrunwasdowntownamongthebigbuildings,sothenoiseofbarkingdogsallaroundusrosetoadeafeningpitchatthestartoftherace.Mydogwasfrightenedwhenthestartingtonewentoff.Hehadtroublerunningintherightdirectionwithalltheconfusionaroundus.Soontherunnersbegantothinout,andmydogwasrunningstraightandfast.Wewerepassingpeopleandmakinggreattime.Iwasdreamingofagold-medalfinish.However,whenweweresixblocksfromthefinish,mydogsuddenlystoppedanddroppedtothegroundlikeasackofpotatoes.IalmostdislocatedmyshoulderfromthesuddenstopasIwaspulledbackwardbytheleash.ⅠⅡHewaslyingflatonhisbellywithhisheaddowninthemiddleofthecrossroads.AtfirstIthoughtsomethingbadhadhappenedtohim.Hewasshakingandsobbing.Ididaquickcheckandcouldn’tseeanythingwrong.Itriedtogethimup,butherefused.Thepoliceofficerdoingtrafficcontrolimpatientlysignedmetomoveawaysohecouldreleasethecars.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式作答。ⅠⅡButIcouldn’tgetmyseventy-five-pounddogtogetup.

Anotherhalf-blockofcarryinghimbroughttheanswer—amovinggarbagetruck.

ⅠⅡ[語篇解讀]文章以作者和狗狗的故事為線索展開,講述作者收養(yǎng)了一條被拋棄在路邊垃圾車邊的小狗,在狗一歲時報名參加了“快樂奔跑”比賽。比賽期間路邊垃圾車的聲音讓狗狗回憶起被拋棄時的場景造成心理恐懼而不敢前行,最終作者得知了狗狗不跑的原因,幫助狗狗一起跑向終點。ⅠⅡ[思路分析]1.段落續(xù)寫:(1)由第一段首句內(nèi)容“但我無法讓我那只七十五磅重的狗起來?！笨芍?第一段可描寫作者聽到警察的驅(qū)趕后,試圖讓狗狗從地上站起來繼續(xù)比賽,但是用盡方法都不成功。路人也開始責(zé)怪作者把狗狗逼得太緊。最終作者只能扛起狗狗,跑向終點。(2)由第二段首句內(nèi)容“在扛它走過半個街區(qū)后找到了答案——一輛正在行駛的垃圾車?！笨芍?第二段可描寫作者明白了狗狗棄賽的原因后,試圖安慰狗狗,直到它放松下來。最后作者和狗狗一起跑到了終點,雖然沒有獲得任何獎項,但是最終作者獲得了狗狗的信任。2.續(xù)寫線索:幫狗站起來——失敗——扛狗狗——知曉原因——安慰——獲得信任ⅠⅡ[參考范文]But

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up.TheharderItriedtoscoophimupfromthepavement,themorehefoughtme.Theofficeryellingandcarshonking,Ipulledhimwithallmymight,butinvain.Finally,Igotmyarmunderhimandliftedhimupinafireman’scarry,throwinghimovermyshoulder.AsIstaggeredtotheroadside,peoplearoundweretakingmydog’sside,laughingIwasrunninghimtoohard.Iwasfuming.Mydogwouldrunalldaylongandhewasn’ttheleastbittired.ⅠⅡAnother

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answer—a

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truck.Itssoundmusthavehitmydog’ssensitiveears,sohecriedlouderandclawedatmybackaswedrewclosertoit.IheldontighterandranasfastasIcouldtogetmysweetbabydogawayfromthatscarygarbagetruck.IranwithhimonmyshoulderuntilIfelthimrelaxed,andthenIsethimdown.Hewaggedhistailingratitudeforsavinghimfromthe