大學(xué)英語四級(jí)范文30篇

大學(xué)英語四級(jí)范文30篇

范例一

Forthispartzyouareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:AttendYourClassesRegularlyoYoushouldwriteat

least120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.現(xiàn)在大學(xué)校園里，遲到、早退、曠課是常見的現(xiàn)象

2.保證學(xué)生的出勤率對(duì)大學(xué)教育的重要性

3.作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做

AttendYourClassesRegularly

Nowadaysitisaverycommonphenomenonthatsome

universitystudentsarelatefororevenabsentfromclasses.And

stilltherearesomestudentswhoslipoutoftheclassroom

beforetheclassisover.Classattendancehasbecomeathorny

problemtoboththestudentsandteachers.

Infact,itisveryimportantforthestudentstoattendtheirclasses

regularly.First,itwillensureyoutocatchupwiththeteachersin

yourlearning.Thatisveryhelpfultoyouifyouwanttodoa

goodjobinyourstudy.Second,attendingclassesregularlyisa

wayofshowingrespecttoyourteachers,too.Yourteacherswill

feelbadifthestudentsdonotattendtheirclasses,which,inturn,

willaffecttheirteachingandbenogoodforthestudents.Third,

attendingclassesregularlywillhelptoformagoodhabitof

punctuality,whichisofgreatimportanceforthestudentstodoa

goodjobinthefuture.

Therefore,weuniversitystudentsshouldformthegoodhabitof

attendingourclassesregularlyfromnowon.Andsomedaywe'

IIbenefitfromit

點(diǎn)評(píng)：2008年元月三日，中山大學(xué)博士發(fā)帖稱遭導(dǎo)師虐待；2008年元

月四日，中國政法大學(xué)爆〃楊帆門〃事件；近幾年，中小學(xué)老師或打?qū)W

生或猥褻學(xué)生、體罰學(xué)生等各類新聞不斷曝光，進(jìn)而引發(fā)了師生關(guān)系的

大討論。本范例題為四級(jí)考試傳統(tǒng)的問題解決型的寫作，與校園生活密

切相關(guān)。

范例二

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

1

onthetopic:StudentsRatingofTheirTeachersoYoushould

writeatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese.

1.學(xué)生給老師打分已經(jīng)普遍

2.人們對(duì)其持不同態(tài)度

3.我的看法

Students1RatingofTheirTeachers

Nowadays,ithasbecomeascommonincollegesand

universitiesforstudentstogradeteachersasforteachersto

gradestudents.Insomeuniversitiesstudents'ratinghaseven

becometheonlysourceofinformationonteaching

effectiveness..

This,however,hascausedgreatcontroversy.Someareinfavor

oftheratingsystem,Theyholdthatsincestudentsattendthe

teachers'classeseveryday,theyshouldhavetheiropinion

abouttheirteachers'effectiveness.Others,onthecontrary,are

stronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatthereismuchmoreto

teachingthanwhatisshownonstudents'ratingforms.

Studentsshouldnotbeexpectedtojudgewhetherthematerials

theyuseareuptodateorhowwelltheteacherknowsaboutthe

subject.Thesejudgmentsrequireprofessionalknowledge,which

isbestleftfortheteachers'colleagues.

Ithinkstudents'ratingoftheirteachersisnecessary,butit

shouldbeconductedinawaythatcanreallyshedmeaningful

lightonteachers'performance.Insteadofratingtheteachers/

knowledgeonthesubject,studentsshouldbeaskedtoestimate

whattheyhavelearnedinacourse,andtoreportonsuchthings

asateacher7sabilitytocommunicatewithstudents,hisorher

relationshipwithstudents,andhisorherabilitytoarouse

students'interestinthesubject.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：越來越多的高校采取讓學(xué)生給老師打分的形式來了解教學(xué)反饋,

并以此作為促進(jìn)教學(xué)質(zhì)量的有效手段。對(duì)此做法，管理部門及教學(xué)雙方

褒貶不一，看法迥異。本范例題為校園生活熱議話題，值得關(guān)注。

范例三

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopicOnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife.You

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

belowinChinese:

1.宿舍生活有時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)福口諧的情況；

2.一個(gè)和諧宿舍生活的必要性；

3.如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活。

OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife

Dormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.But

sometimestheharmonyinthedormitorybedisturbedinone

wayoranother.

Asisknowntoallzaharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportantto

collegestudentsandbenefitsallthemembers.Ononehand,we

canhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.Ontheother

hand,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.

Thereareseveralwaystocreateandmaintainaharmonious

dormitorylife.Firstly,youhavetoevaluateyourlife-styleandtry

togetridofyourdirtyhabits,ifthereareany.Secondly,whenan

annoyingsituationarises,you'IIjusthavetolearntotolerate

eachotherandco-exist.Thirdly,you'IIhavetosharewitheach

otherandmakegoodfriends.

Inconclusion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmonious

dormitorylifeforthesakeofgoodstudyandgoodlife.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：〃和諧〃成為我們當(dāng)今社會(huì)詞頻概率最高用詞,就社會(huì)而言，倡

導(dǎo)建立和諧社會(huì)；就家庭而言，提倡建設(shè)和諧家庭；就校園來講，則要

建立和諧校園；和諧兩字似乎無所不在，大學(xué)生宿舍生活同樣需要和諧。

本范例題與四級(jí)考試熱點(diǎn)密切相關(guān)，又為典型的校園生活主題，值得關(guān)

注。

范例四

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteA

BriefIntroductiontotheUniversity.Youshouldwriteatleast120

wordsaccordingtothefollowingguidelines:

假設(shè)你是一名學(xué)生志愿者，要給來你們學(xué)校參觀的外國朋友介紹學(xué)校情

況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學(xué)校歷史、規(guī)模、教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀以及未來目標(biāo)等。

ABriefIntroductiontotheUniversity

Distinguishedguests,

Welcometoouruniversity.Beforeyoustarttolookaround,

allowmetogiveyouabriefaccountoftheschool.

Foundedin1927,ouruniversityisoneofthiscity'searliest

universitiesofliberalarts.Itisstaffedwithanexcellentfaculty,

andhasatotalenrollmentofover10,000students.Inthepast

years,ithasturnedoutnumerouswell-qualifiedstudentsand

founditsgraduatesactiveinprofessionsofallwalksoflife.

Sinceitsestablishment,theuniversityhasalwayssteereditself

towardtheobjectivethatitsstudentshaveanoverallhealthy

developmentNotonlydoesitprovidethestudentswithbasic

academiccourses,butitmanagestoexposethemtothe

up-to-dateknowledge.Besides,studentsarefreetoparticipate

incolorfulcampusactivitiesandsocialpractice,whichare

intendedforbroadeningtheirmindanddevelopingtheir

potentialtalent.

Currently,bothourfacultyandstudentsaremakingeveryeffort

toimprovethequalityofoureducationinthedirectionofa

first-rateuniversity.Thankyou.

點(diǎn)評(píng):近幾年，隨著我國順利加入世貿(mào)組織以及經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化步伐的加快,

許多國內(nèi)高校紛紛與國外大學(xué)合作辦學(xué)，教育走向國際化成為人們關(guān)注

的熱點(diǎn)，也是大學(xué)生門比較關(guān)心的熱點(diǎn)問題。本范例題為熱議校園生活

話題與2004年旅游景點(diǎn)介紹2006年考查的名校校園開放如出一轍。

范例五

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

lettertoafriendwhowillcometoyourcitytoseeyou.You

shouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

belowinChinese:

假設(shè)你是李明，你的一個(gè)朋友張偉準(zhǔn)備到你所在的城市來旅游，但你有

事不能接待。寫封信給他，解釋你不能接待的原因，并說明你所做的安

排。

ALettertoaFriend

DearZhangWei,

fmgladtoknowthatyouarecomingtomycityduringthe

summervacation.

However,Ymafraidthere*ssomebadnews.Ymplanningto

takepartinaninternationalconferencetobeheldinanother

cityduringthetimeofyourvisit.Allthetopscientistsinmyfield

willshowupattheconference.Moreimportantly,Tmlucky

enoughtohavebeenselectedtogiveaspeechonbehalfofmy

researchteamattheConference.Ireallycan'tmissit.

IunderstandthatitIIbeyourfirsttimetothiscityandYmyour

onlyfriendhere.Fveaskedmyroommatetomeetyouatthe

airport,andyoucanstayinmyroom.Heisaveryniceperson

andhewillshowyouaroundthecity.Hopeyoutwowillgeton

wellandhaveaniceholiday!

Yours,

LiMing

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本范例題與2001年6月考查的ALettertoaSchoolmate類

似，所不同是寫作提示有所不同，2001年6月作文題是寫信對(duì)校友來

度假表示歡迎并在信中提出建議和注意事項(xiàng)，而本范例題是對(duì)朋友來訪

不能接待，同時(shí)在信中說明原因及具體安排，內(nèi)容不一，但話題相仿,

寫作思路相似，值得關(guān)注。

范例六

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:LivingaloneorLivingwithRoommates?Youshould

writeatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese.

1.有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)獨(dú)自生活

2.另一些認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)與別人同住

3.你的看法

LivingaloneorLivingwithRoommates

Nowadays,therehasappearedaheateddiscussionamongthe

collegestudentsastowhethertheyshouldlivealoneoutsidethe

campusorlivetogetherwithotherroommatesinthestudents;

dormitory.Opinionsaredividedoverthematter.

ThosewhoareinfavorofLivingalonemaintainthatitisvery

convenienttolivebythemselves.Theycanenjoyabsolute

freedominaroomoftheirown.Theycanhavetheirown

timetablewithoutdisturbingothers.Theyarealsofreetoequip

theroomwithapersonalcomputersothattheycanhaveeasy

accesstotheInternet.

Butothersarguethatlivingwithroommateshasattractionsofits

own.Withseveralstudentssharingthesameroom,eachperson'

sexperiencescanbegreatlyenriched.Theycanlearnalotfrom

talkingtooneanother.Bylearningtotoleratethedifferences

betweenindividuals,theycanbecomemoremature.

AsfarasYmconcerned,Iprefertolivewithroommatesbecause

Ilovethefeelingofbelonging.Besides,itisalotcheapertolive

inadormthantorentanapartmentoutsidethecampus.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文與校園生活密切相關(guān)，也是近年來出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象，人們對(duì)此的

看法各異，2003年后，四級(jí)作文考查加大了學(xué)校生活類題目的考查，

因?yàn)檫@類題材不存在地域的差異，不同地域的同學(xué)都有話可說。本范例

題即為校園生活類話題，與剛考完的四級(jí)作文話題類似，符合命題者出

題思路，值得引起重視。

范例七

Direction:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:CellPhones.Youshouldwritenoless

than120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline

below:

1.描述上圖所示的手機(jī)用戶數(shù)的變化情況

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因

3.對(duì)此現(xiàn)象作出評(píng)價(jià)

CellPhones

Asisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingincreasingly

popularwithinChina.In1999zthenumberofcellphonesinuse

wasonly2million/butin2002zthenumberreaches5million.

Andintheyear2005,thenumberhassuddenlysoaredto9

million.

TherearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopmentFirstly,

acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.

Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhave

funwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshort

messages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneous

improvementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforan

averagepersontomakeuseofcellphone.

Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmore

indispensableinpeople7sdailylife.Thefunctionsofthecell

phonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparate

themselvesfromtheircellphone.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：隨著我國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，人民的生活水平不斷改善，通訊業(yè)的

日新月異的發(fā)展，使得手機(jī)使用普及化，成為人們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹谋匦杵罚?/p>

對(duì)此的利弊人們看法各異。本范例題為熱點(diǎn)話題，同樣是年輕人較熟悉

和經(jīng)常討論的話題，值得關(guān)注。

范例八

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

shortessayonthetopic

Advertisement.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.廣告的作用

2.廣告的形式多樣

3.廣告的夸張性

Advertisement

Advertisementsareforcingtheirwayintopeople*slives.People

refertoadvertisementsintheirdailylivesbecausetheyare

consumers.Theadvertisersareusuallymanufacturers,retailers

andsalesmen.Theirmerchandiseneedstobeadvertisedto

bringittotheattentiontothecustomers.Thusnearlyevery

productisadvertisedinsomeway.Toalargeextent,good

advertisingleadstosuccesswhilebadadvertisingcanmean

failure.

Therearemanywaystoadvertiseand'ads'comeindifferent

forms.Newspaperscarryadvertisements.Someproductsare

publicizedonTVandradiowhichbringthemintonoticeofa

wideaudience.Billboardsalsocarryadvertising.Advertisingisa

bigindustrynowandmanyagencieshavebeensetuptofurnish

avarietyofforms..

However,advertisingisnotalwaystruthful.Aproductisoften

misrepresented.Theadvertiserexaggeratesthebenefitsofthe

merchandisehewantstosell.Thus,hemisrepresentsthetruth.

Theconsumerfallsvictimtosuchadvertising.Millionsofpeople

haveboughtadvertisedproductsandhavebeendissatisfied

withthemo

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇說明文，用說明的表達(dá)方式來解說事物，闡明事理。寫

好說明文，不僅要抓住特征，注意條理，而且要巧妙運(yùn)用說明方法，像

下定義、舉例子、作比較、分類別、列數(shù)字、打比方等

范例九

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:ALettertothePresidentofthe

UniversityaboutImprovingtheSportsFacilitiesonCampus.You

shouldwritenomorethan120words,andbaseyour

compositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

假設(shè)你是李明，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給校長，建議改善本校體育設(shè)施狀況，內(nèi)

容應(yīng)涉及體育設(shè)施對(duì)大學(xué)生的重要性，對(duì)目前學(xué)校體育設(shè)施的狀況可以

表揚(yáng)，可以提出批評(píng)建議，也可以兼而有之。

ALettertothePresidentoftheUniversity

DearMr.President,

Iamwritingthislettertoyoutoexpressmyconcernaboutthe

sportsfacilitiesoncampus.Ihavenoticedthatouruniversityhas

verylimitedresourcesintermsofopportunitiestoparticipatein

sports,especiallygiventhatthenumberofstudentsoncampus

isincreasingeveryyear.

Aswebothknow,sportsareveryimportantforthesound

growthofyoungpeople.Iftheyhaveaccesstoqualitysports

facilities,youngpeopleareabletochooseahealthierlifestyle,to

boostself-esteemandconfidence,andtobuildapositive

outlookandsenseofachievement.

Myproposalistobuildanewsportsarea.Itshouldbedesigned

withsoccerplayers,basketballplayers,andping-pongplayersin

mind.Itshouldhaveadifferentsectionforeachactivityandbe

availabletostudentsallyearround.Ibelievesuchfacilitieswill

meetoursportingneeds.

Thankyouforyourreadingthisletter.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiMing

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本范例題仿真度頗高，為校園生活話題，與在校大學(xué)生日常生活

密切相關(guān)，是最近幾年側(cè)重考查的題材。2002年1月考查了就本校食

堂狀況給校長寫一封信.

Holidays

Asisclearlyshowninthetablethattherewasadramaticchange

inthewaypeoplespenttheirholidaysbetween1990and2000.

Especially,in1990,63%ofpeoplespenttheirholidaysathome,

whilethefiguredecreasedconsiderablyto24%in2000.There

arethreereasonsforthisphenomenon.

Tobeginwith,withthedevelopmentofmarket-oriented

economy,peopleearnbyfarmoremoneythantheyusedto,

makingitpossibleforthemtoaffordtravelingexpenses.In

addition,peoplerealizetheimportanceofgettingwell-informed

abouttheoutsideworldinthismoderneratodeveloptheir

potential.Forexample；atravellermayencounterortalkwith

someoneofadifferentculturalbackgroundsoastobroadenhis

vision.Lastbutnotleast,bytravelingoutside,peopleareclose

tonature,whichisnotonlybeneficialtoboththeirhealthand

peaceofmind.Inshort,moreandmorepeopletakethe

occasionofholidaytotraveloutsideandrelaxthemselves.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iprefertogotravelinginsteadof

stayingathomeduringholidays.Ontheonehand,Ilove

meetingdifferentpeopleandtakeinsomefreshideas.Onthe

otherhand,itisagreedthattheworldisbecomingaglobal

village.Noonecouldconfinehimselfwithinhissmallcircleof

familiesorrelatives.Inbrief,Ihavebenefitedalotandwill

benefitmorefromtravelingduringtheholidays.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：該篇作文屬圖表作文，命題思路與四級(jí)真題圖表作文一致，仿真

度高。本范例題關(guān)于人們旅游度假方式的變化，也是社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，

2006年1月就考過名校校園該不該成為旅游景點(diǎn)話題；2004年6月

也是關(guān)于旅游景點(diǎn)的介紹。

范例十七

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:SocialPractice.Youshouldwriteat

Ieastl20wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChinese.

a）社會(huì)實(shí)踐的作用

b）可能產(chǎn)生的問題

c）提出建議

SocialPractice

Socialpracticehasbeenmoreandmorepopularinuniversities

andcolleges.Studentsareaskedtoentersocietyandgetsome

ideaofit.Surelysocialpracticehasmanyadvantages.Firstly,

socialpracticecanofferstudentsachancetocontactsocietyand

meetdifferentkindsofpeople.Inthiswaystudentscangain

somevaluablesocialexperience,whichwillbeusefultotheir

futurecareer.Secondly,studentscanapplywhattheyhave

learnedinclasstopracticalwork,thusknowingthemselvesmore

clearly.Thirdly,socialpracticecanbringthemsomefinancial

rewardandmakethemmoreindependentoftheirfamily.

However,someproblemsmayariseifnocorrectguidanceis

made.Forexample,somestudentsgetoverlyinterestedinsocial

practiceandwanttoworkfull-timeandearnmoney,thus

neglectingtheirstudies.Andsomestudentsarelikelytogetin

touchwiththedarksideofsociety,whichwillaffecttheirfuture

studies.

Inordertocarryoutsocialpracticesmoothly,studentsshould

firstknowitsobjective.Theyshouldputtheirstudiesinthefirst

placeandseesocialpracticejustasausefulsupplement,sothey

oughttotrytostrikeabalancebetweensocialpracticeandtheir

studies.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本篇文章屬于解釋性說明文。就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)要求大學(xué)生具有豐

富的社會(huì)實(shí)踐，才能適應(yīng)就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，所以現(xiàn)在在校大學(xué)生參與社

會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)頻繁，但如何處理好學(xué)業(yè)和社會(huì)實(shí)踐的關(guān)系成為人們關(guān)注的

話題。本范例題與大學(xué)生生活密切相關(guān)，也是四級(jí)作文關(guān)注的重要話題。

范例十七

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:SocialPractice.Youshouldwriteat

Ieastl20wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChinese.

a）社會(huì)實(shí)踐的作用

b）可能產(chǎn)生的問題

c）提出建議

SocialPractice

Socialpracticehasbeenmoreandmorepopularinuniversities

andcolleges.Sttudentsareaskedtoentersocietyandgetsome

ideaofitSurelysocialpracticehasmanyadvantages.Firstly,

socialpracticecanofferstudentsachancetocontactsocietyand

meetdifferentkindsofpeople.Inthiswaystudentscangain

somevaluablesocialexperience,whichwillbeusefultotheir

futurecareer.Secondly,studentscanapplywhattheyhave

learnedinclasstopracticalwork,thusknowingthemselvesmore

clearly.Thirdly,socialpracticecanbringthemsomefinancial

rewardandmakethemmoreindependentoftheirfamily.

However,someproblemsmayariseifnocorrectguidanceis

made.Forexample,somestudentsgetoverlyinterestedinsocial

practiceandwanttoworkfull-timeandearnmoney,thus

neglectingtheirstudies.Andsomestudentsarelikelytogetin

touchwiththedarksideofsociety,whichwillaffecttheirfuture

studies.

Inordertocarryoutsocialpracticesmoothly,studentsshould

firstknowitsobjective.Theyshouldputtheirstudiesinthefirst

placeandseesocialpracticejustasausefulsupplement,sothey

oughttotrytostrikeabalancebetweensocialpracticeandtheir

studies.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本篇文章屬于解釋性說明文。就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)要求大學(xué)生具有豐

富的社會(huì)實(shí)踐，才能適應(yīng)就業(yè)市場(chǎng)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，所以現(xiàn)在在校大學(xué)生參與社

會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)頻繁，但如何處理好學(xué)業(yè)和社會(huì)實(shí)踐的關(guān)系成為人們關(guān)注的

話題。本范例題與大學(xué)生生活密切相關(guān)，也是四級(jí)作文關(guān)注的重要話題

范例十八

Directions:

1.上圖所示為我國吸毒者年齡分布情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化

2.請(qǐng)說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因

3.這T化對(duì)社會(huì)和個(gè)人的影響

Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,therehavebeensharpchanges

intheagedistributionofdrugaddicts.Tobeconcrete,the

teenageaddictsonlymadeup10percentofallthedragstersin

1982whiletheratioroseupto65in2002.

Thecausesforthemarenothardtofind.First,teenagers/

fearlesscuriosityabouteverythingnewhasledsomeofthem

intothismarsh.Second,manyoftheyoungaddictsturnedfor

thefirsttimetodrugsforescapeeitherfromtheirfailureinthe

nationalentranceexamsorfromtheirparents'breakup.And

aboveall,oureducationintheharmfulnessofdrugshasbeenfar

fromadequatetobuildteenagers'soundresistancetodrugs.

Tosumup,thecausesmentionedabovemustcallformoreof

ourconcern,andeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentocheck

thetrend.

Obviouslythedrasticchangewillexertgreatimpacton

individualsandthewholesociety.

Foronething,drug-takingdoesgreatdamagetothehealthof

drugusers..Foranother,somedruguserscommitrobberyor

evenmurdertheirparentsandrelativestogetmoneytobuy

drugs,whichposesagreatthreattothesocialsecurityandthe

socialstability.Therefore,itishightimewedidsomethingtoput

anendtothistrend.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：該范例題為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，四級(jí)考試命題作文?？碱}材。本文屬

于圖表作文的寫作。根據(jù)四級(jí)圖表作文命題規(guī)律，第一段文章描述了圖

表中所反映的我國吸毒者年齡的分布最近二十年的變化情況，；第二段

說明了產(chǎn)生這種變化的原因；最后一段陳述了吸毒無論是7寸個(gè)人的身體

健康和社會(huì)的安全和穩(wěn)定都構(gòu)成了巨大的威脅，呼吁全社會(huì)共同努力消

除這種不良現(xiàn)象。

范例十九

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Youshould

writeatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese.

1,心理健康問題往往是導(dǎo)致疾病的原因

2.分析人們產(chǎn)生心理健康問題的原因（可從失業(yè)、壓力過重、缺乏支

持、缺乏人際交往能力等方面分析）

3.你認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)如何保持心理健康

HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?

Oneinfourpeoplewillexperiencesomekindofmentalproblem

inthecourseofayear.Whenyoufailtomanagetheseproblems,

theyarelikelytocausevariousmentalillnesses.

Thecauseofmentalhealthproblemsoftenvaryalotfromone

casetoanother.Intoday'ssociety,agoodnumberofpeopleare

sufferingfromheavypressure.Otherslackcommunicationskills.

Inaddition,alotofpeopleareignorantofpsychological

knowledgeabouthowtokeepmentallyfit.

Therearealotofwaystocurbmentalhealthproblemsandkeep

psychologicallyhealthy.Firstly,findtherealcauseofyourmental

healthproblemandseewhetheryoucandosomethingaboutit.

Secondly,learntorelaxyourselfandtakeexercisestoreleasethe

pressure.Lastly,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartneror

friendaboutyourproblem,orseeksupportandadviceforma

psychologicalconsultant

點(diǎn)評(píng)：據(jù)報(bào)道北京高校100多萬名在校大學(xué)生中，已經(jīng)有14名自殺身

亡。而去年全年，北京自殺死亡的學(xué)生為19人。社會(huì)對(duì)于大學(xué)生心理

健康問題越來越關(guān)注，如何保持心理健康成為社會(huì)關(guān)注話題。本范例題

與校園生活聯(lián)系緊密，是四級(jí)考試關(guān)注度較高的話題，值得重視。

范例二十

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

composi-tiononthetopicAidEducationinChina.Youshould

writeatleast120wordsf-ollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowin

Chinese:

1.每年，高校許多大學(xué)生受到鼓舞去貧困地區(qū)支教。

2.支教活動(dòng)的意義。

3.我的看法。

AidEducationinChina

Eachyear,collegestudents,encouragedtoaidstudentsinthe

poverty-strickenareas,volunteerthemselvesinpoorvillagesfor

ayearandtrytoimproveeducationinpoorareas.

Aid-educationhasbeenbeneficialintwoaspects.Ontheone

hand,collegevolunteersarereallydevotedtothecause.They

haveopenedtheeyesofstudentsinunderdevelopedregionsto

theoutsideworldbybringingthemnewknowledgeand

thoughts.Asaresult,theyareextremelywell-receivedbythe

childrenthere.Ontheotherhand,collegestudentshave

receivedarigoroustrainingbyadaptingtotheharshliving

conditions.Theyareenjoyingtheappreciationandno-distance

friendshipfromthechildren.What'smore,theyaregreatly

inspiredbythemovingandtirelessspiritofthechildren.

Inmyopinion,China'seducationaldevelopmentcan'tbe

isolatedfromeachindividualandwecollegestudentsshould

taketheleadinresponsetotheappealforofferingaidto

childreninpoorareas.

范例二十一

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

shortessay.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingthe

outlinegivenbelow:

1.現(xiàn)在某些高校校園禁止車輛駛?cè)耄?/p>

2.這種規(guī)定的考慮，

3.談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

ShouldcarsbeallowedintoCollegeCampus?

Withtherapiddevelopmentofournationaleconomy,private

carshavebecomeinlargenumber;ofcourse,quiteafewcars

areheavilydrivenintoCollegeCampus.

Inasignificantway,thesecarsdonottakeupstudents7places

forstudy,butactuallyaffecttheirdailylifeandstudy—for

instance,thiscrowdofcarsmaymakenoiseandemitfilthygas

tochokeustodeath.Andthecampusisjammedwithlinesof

carsandseemstobeparkinglotinsteadofanacademicinstitute.

SocarshavebeenstrictlyprohibitedintomanyCollege

Campuses.Itseemsthatthisisnotconveniencetosomepersons,

indeed,butthisisforthesakeofoursafety.Thuswhensomeone

enjoysconveniencefrommoderntools,don'tforgetthatitis

dangeroustothestudentsintheCollegeCampus.Therefore,I

agreethatcarsarenotallowedintoCollegeCampus.

Byandlarge,withthepriceofcarsfallingsignificantly,carswill

enteraveragefamilies,andmostChinesewillenjoyaluxurious

lifestyleintheirlife.However,theyarestillprohibitedtodrive

theircarsintoCollegeCampus,which,Ithink,isahardtruthin

theeyesofmostpeople.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：隨著人們物質(zhì)生活的提高，私家車發(fā)展迅猛，越來越多的私家車

停放在校園，由此產(chǎn)生了一些問題，如空間被占、噪音污染、環(huán)境污染

等，為此許多學(xué)校禁止車輛駛?cè)胄@，本范例題與2006年1月名校校

園是否對(duì)夕聽放相仿，值得關(guān)注。

范例二十二

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:InformationSecurity.Youshouldwriteatleast120

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.信息安全問題日益重要

2.信息安全事故可能導(dǎo)致的危害

3.如何做到信息安全

InformationSecurity

Thehumanbeingsaresteppingintotheinformationsociety.The

informationindustrydevelopsveryrapidly,sodothehackers,

trick-playingteens,exploringchildren,fraudsters,andserious

white-collarcriminals.Thus,informationsecuritybecomesan

impendingimportantissue.

Incaseofinformationbreach,thevictims----government

department,anorganizationoraninstitution,oracompanywill

inevitablysuffergreatorsmallloss.Governmentmaybe

threatenedwithnationalsecurity.Companiesmaylose

opportunitiestodevelopnewprojects.Andthepublic*sand

users'confidencewillbedamaged.

Thenhowtodealwiththisissue?Technologyisonlyapartial

solutiontoinformationsecurity.Whatsmoreimportantisthat

organizationsandcompaniesshouldpromotetheawarenesson

informationsecuritytoitsstaff.However,sincenosystemcan

everbe100percentsecure,aprevention-onlyapproachto

informationsecuritymanagementisnotenough.Companies

andorganizationsshouldadoptadualapproachtoinformation

securitymanagementbycombingpreventionanddetection

techniques.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：隨著我們步入信息社會(huì)和計(jì)算機(jī)應(yīng)用的普及，利用計(jì)算機(jī)犯罪案

件不斷上升，信息安全事故頻繁發(fā)生，媒體也不時(shí)有大量相關(guān)報(bào)道，如

何保護(hù)信息安全成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，本范例題為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，值得關(guān)注。

范例二十三

Directions:SupposeyouwereLiMing.Youwanttoapplyfora

jobasapersonalsecretarytotheGeneralManagerofatrading

company.WritealettertotheHumanResourcesDepartmentof

thecompany.Youshouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline

giveninChinesebelow.

1.簡要介紹自己并說明應(yīng)征該職位

2.告知公司為什么對(duì)此感興趣

3.簡述你為何是合適人選

AnApplicationLetter

DearSirorMadam,

IamLiMing,awould-begraduatefromNinjingUniversity.My

majorisEnglish.ThroughthejobadvertisementIhavelearned

thatyouarehuntingaqualifiedindividualforapersonal

secretarytotheGeneralManagerofyouresteemedcompany.I

amfullyconvincedthatIamtherightpersonforthejob.

Irealizethatmyfuturebossisextremelybusy.However,itis

exactlythechallengeofmyprospectivepositionthatattractsme.

Iamsurethatmyhonesty,carefulness,patience,expertise,

commitmentandextensiveknowledgewillproduceanexcellent

jobperformance.

Nextmonth,IamgoingtograduatefromtheEnglish

DepartmentofNanjingUniversity,andIhaveovertwoyearsof

secretarialexperience.Ihaveenclosedthedetailsofmy

academicrecord,skills,andlanguageabilities.Thankyoufor

yourtimeinconsideringmyapplication.

YoursSincerely,

LiMing

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書信體應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封求職信。找工作是四級(jí)命題

作文關(guān)注的話題之一,2001年1月和1995年6月都考查了求職面試

的話題，本范例題要求寫一封求職信，既與求職話題相關(guān)，又是書信體

作文，符合四級(jí)作文命題思路和考查重點(diǎn)。

范例二十四

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:Nopains,nogainsYoushouldwriteat

leastl20wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelowinChinese.

1.為什么說〃不勞就無獲〃

2.試舉例說明

Nopains,nogains

Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb

〃Nopains,nogains."Itmeansthatnothingcanbegained

withoutpainstakingeffortsandthatnoknowledgeorskillcanbe

acquiredwithoutsweatortoil.

Youdonzthavetolookveryfartooprovethetruthofthe

proverb.Darwin'sgreatdiscoverywasnottheVi/orkofa

momentbutwasprecededbyyearsofpatient,arduous

observation.Mozartwasnotanaccomplishedpianistattheage

ofeightastheresultofwatchingcountlesshoursofTV.Nordid

Edisonmakehimselfthegre