高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+小狗波比的孤單與新伴侶

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)小狗波比的孤單與新伴侶1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,

Poppy,”

saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,

huggedhis

parents,

andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions

(情緒)

getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntothe

university

wherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.

Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamily

hugged

andsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.The

boy

lifted

thelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.

“I

guess

thisis

it,”hesaid.

“I’ll

see

youbackhomeinamonth,okay?”

Hisparentsnodded,andthey

watched

ashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothe

dog,

“Okay,

Poppy,timetogobackhome.”4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthat

week,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,

oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbe

back

tovisit.Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanut

buttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusual

cheerful

self.Herownersstartedtogetworried.

“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”

askedDad.

“We’vetriedeverything.”“I

haveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”

smiledMom.

“Withoutanybodyleftinthe

housebutus,

thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”Itdidn’t

take

longbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabig

box.

Poppy

welcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox，shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging

(擺動(dòng))

eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.5段首句Paragraph1:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

Paragraph2:Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.

6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8本文是一篇記敘文，文章主要講述了家庭的主要成員之一——兒子要去上大學(xué)了，收拾好行李和父母、年邁的狗狗波比告別。雖然一個(gè)月后男孩就可以回家看望他們，但是年邁的狗狗波比是不懂這些的，她只知道自己的小主人不在家，所以她非常難過(guò)，寢食難安。男孩的父母為了安撫波比，買(mǎi)了一只小狗給她作伴。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

父親打開(kāi)盒子→新伙伴膽怯的露出腦袋→然后是爪子扒著盒子（box）→波比（Poppy）繞著盒子跑了兩圈→爸爸把小狗（dog）抱出來(lái)→兩只狗開(kāi)始在房間里跑來(lái)跑去→父母（parents）和狗狗一起快樂(lè)的（cheerful）生活→并且等待男孩回家（back）10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.

男孩回來(lái)了，和父母擁抱在一起（hugged）→波比看到男孩，欣喜萬(wàn)分→新伙伴遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)看著（watched）他們倆→一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)靠近→嗖地跑上前，也把腦袋湊到男孩身上→學(xué)著波比的樣子，搖搖尾巴→男孩和兩只小狗一起打鬧。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析續(xù)寫(xiě)線索續(xù)寫(xiě)部分是故事的結(jié)局，波比是否因?yàn)樾禄锇榈牡絹?lái)而恢復(fù)了活力，以及男孩回家時(shí)兩只狗狗的反應(yīng)。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知，波比是因?yàn)槭ツ泻⒌呐惆槎械焦陋?dú)寂寞，因此續(xù)寫(xiě)結(jié)局可以設(shè)置為波比接納了新伙伴，并且在男孩回家的時(shí)候，幫助新伙伴接受男孩。12續(xù)寫(xiě)素材1.詞匯blink

v.

眨眼睛；beloved

adj.

心愛(ài)的2.短語(yǔ)rushforward

向前沖；withdelight開(kāi)心地3.提分句式(1)Daybyday,theboy’sparentslivedacheerfullifetogetherwithtwopuppies,whilewaitingfortheirboytobeback.[分析]本句是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句。主句是“theboy’sparentslivedacheerfullife”，“Daybyday”是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，“whilewaitingfortheirboytobeback”是省略了主語(yǔ)they和系動(dòng)詞were的狀語(yǔ)從句。[譯文]一天又一天，男孩的父母一邊帶著兩只小狗快樂(lè)地生活著，一邊等待兒子回家。13Part3范文呈現(xiàn)14范文呈現(xiàn)Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

Itslowlyshoweditshead,blinkingitslittleeyes,then,twoclawspickeduptheedgeofthe

box

andstoodup.Unluckily,itfellintheboxinasecond.

Poppy

ranaroundtheboxtwice,barkingandbarking.Dadtookthe

dog

tothegroundgently.Atfirst,thedogdidn’tmove.

Poppy

pushedhisbelovedtoytothedog.Soon,thetwopuppiesranaftereachotherinthehousehappily.Daybyday,theboy’s

parents

liveda

cheerful

lifetogetherwithtwopuppies,whilewaitingfortheirboytobe

back.15范文呈現(xiàn)Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.

Assoonasheenteredthehouse,theboyandhisparents

hugged

eachother.Seeingtheboycomingback,

Poppy

rushedforwardtotheboy’sfeetwithdelight,shakingherheadandwagginghertail.Hernewpartner

watched

themsilentlyandmovedtothemalittlebit.Atlast,heswishedforward,learnedhow

Poppy

looked,andwaggedhistail,too.Finally,theboyandtwopuppieswereplayingonthesofaexcitedly.16范文譯文爸爸打開(kāi)盒子，一只可愛(ài)的小狗出現(xiàn)了。它慢慢地把頭伸出來(lái)，眨著小眼睛，然后，兩只爪子抓住盒子的邊緣站了起來(lái)。不幸的是，它在一秒鐘內(nèi)掉進(jìn)了盒子里。波比繞著箱子跑了兩圈，不停地吠叫。爸爸輕輕地把狗抱到地上。起初，狗沒(méi)有動(dòng)。波比把他心愛(ài)的玩具推給狗。不久，兩只小狗在屋里歡快地跑來(lái)跑去。日復(fù)一日，男孩的父母和兩只小狗一起過(guò)著快樂(lè)的生活，同時(shí)等待他們的男孩回來(lái)。幾