讀后續(xù)寫+情人節(jié)的特別禮物+講義 高三第一次調(diào)研考試英語(yǔ)試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenValentine’sDaywasaroundthecorner,GrandmacamedownwithaterriblecoldasshewastravellingfromColoradotomyfamily’shouseinCalifornia.Shewastooweaktogooutatall,whichwassadanddisappointing.GrandmaandGrandpahadbeenplanningtotakemylittlesisterIndiandmetothezooforValentine’sDay.Grandma,asananimallover,hadbeenespeciallylookingforwardtoit.OnValentine’sDay,IndibeggedGrandmatogotothezoowithus.ButGrandmajokinglyexplainedthatifshewentthere,shemightspreadhercoldtoothervisitors,oreventotheanimals,makingthemallstartsneezing.Iimaginedthesightthatanelephantkeptsneezing.Meanwhile,Ipretendedmyarmwasatrunkandblurtedoutafunnytrumpetingsoundthatendedwithagiganticsneeze.“Goodone,brother,”Indilaughed.“Thatelephantwouldneedahugeboxoftissues.”Grandmawasamused.Butsheinsistedthatsheshouldstayathomeandrestup.Shewishedusapleasantvisitandremindedustosendherregardstothemonkeys.Well,wedidgoandwedidhaveagreattime,butIkeptwishingGrandmacouldhavebeentherewithus.Whenwereachedthemonkeymountain,Grandpasuggestedtakingapicturewiththemonkeysandtoldustoholdstillandsay“cheese”.“Cheese,”Isaid.ButIndisaid,“HappyValentine’sDay,Grandma!”“Youweresupposedtosaycheese,”saidGrandpa.Indishrugged,“Itjustcameout.”“I’mgladitdid,”Isaid.“Becauseyou’rejustgivenmeafantasticidea.Whatifwetakepicturesofdifferentanimals,andthenturnthemintoaspecialValentinegiftforGrandma?”IndiandGrandpaagreedandwekepttakingpicturesforGrandma.Paragraph1:Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift.Paragraph2:ThenwetookthegiftupstairstoGrandma’sroom.【文本分析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以時(shí)間為線索展開，講述了圣瓦倫丁節(jié)那天，原本計(jì)劃和作者、Indi以及爺爺去動(dòng)物園的奶奶因?yàn)橹馗忻盁o(wú)法出行。奶奶是一位熱愛動(dòng)物的人，她一直期待著這一天的到來(lái)。當(dāng)天，盡管奶奶身體不適，她還是以幽默的方式與家人互動(dòng)，開玩笑說(shuō)她如果去動(dòng)物園可能會(huì)把感冒傳染給其他游客和動(dòng)物。她鼓勵(lì)家人們?nèi)?dòng)物園，并特別囑咐他們代她向猴子問好。在動(dòng)物園，爺爺提議與猴子合影，因?yàn)镮ndi無(wú)意中喊出的話，作者靈機(jī)一動(dòng)，提議為奶奶拍攝動(dòng)物園里的各種動(dòng)物，并制作成一份特別的情人節(jié)禮物，爺爺和Indi都同意了。五要素分析1.Who（誰(shuí)）：-主要人物包括敘述者（我）、小妹妹Indi、奶奶、爺爺。-故事中還提到了動(dòng)物園里的動(dòng)物們，如大象和猴子。2.What（什么）：-故事講述了奶奶因?yàn)楦忻盁o(wú)法和敘述者及Indi一起去動(dòng)物園的事件。-敘述者和Indi在動(dòng)物園游玩，并決定為奶奶制作一個(gè)特別的情人節(jié)禮物——一個(gè)包含動(dòng)物園照片和故事的相冊(cè)。3.When（何時(shí)）：-故事發(fā)生在情人節(jié)當(dāng)天，當(dāng)奶奶因?yàn)楦忻盁o(wú)法外出時(shí)。-相冊(cè)的制作和贈(zèng)送發(fā)生在從動(dòng)物園回家后。4.Where（何地）：-故事的主要地點(diǎn)是加利福尼亞的家中，特別是奶奶的房間。-動(dòng)物園是另一個(gè)重要的地點(diǎn)，敘述者和Indi在那里游玩并拍攝了照片。5.Why（為什么）：-奶奶因?yàn)楦忻岸鵁o(wú)法外出，這是故事發(fā)生的直接原因。-敘述者和Indi制作相冊(cè)是為了給奶奶一個(gè)特別的情人節(jié)禮物，讓她感受到家人的愛和關(guān)心，盡管她不能親自去動(dòng)物園。在上文中，有幾處伏筆為故事的發(fā)展和續(xù)寫提供了線索。以下是這些伏筆及其在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：1.伏筆：奶奶因?yàn)楦忻盁o(wú)法去動(dòng)物園。-回應(yīng)：這個(gè)情況激發(fā)了敘述者和Indi為奶奶制作一個(gè)特別的情人節(jié)禮物的想法，即一個(gè)包含動(dòng)物園照片和故事的相冊(cè)。2.伏筆：敘述者模仿大象打噴嚏的滑稽動(dòng)作。-回應(yīng)：這個(gè)幽默的插曲為故事增添了輕松愉快的氛圍，并且為后續(xù)制作相冊(cè)的想法提供了情感上的聯(lián)系。3.伏筆：奶奶提醒他們向猴子問好。-回應(yīng)：在動(dòng)物園時(shí)，他們?cè)诤镒由角芭恼眨⒃谂恼諘r(shí)向奶奶傳達(dá)了節(jié)日的問候，這成為了制作相冊(cè)的靈感之一。4.伏筆：Indi在拍照時(shí)說(shuō)出“HappyValentine’sDay,Grandma!”而不是“cheese”。-回應(yīng)：這個(gè)意外的表達(dá)觸發(fā)了敘述者制作相冊(cè)的靈感，使得相冊(cè)不僅是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的紀(jì)念品，而是成為了一個(gè)充滿愛意和創(chuàng)意的禮物。5.伏筆：奶奶對(duì)動(dòng)物園的期待和對(duì)動(dòng)物的熱愛。-回應(yīng)：這個(gè)特點(diǎn)被用來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)奶奶對(duì)動(dòng)物園的向往，以及為什么一個(gè)包含動(dòng)物園動(dòng)物照片的相冊(cè)會(huì)是一個(gè)特別的禮物。6.伏筆：奶奶的感冒讓她不得不留在家里。-回應(yīng)：這個(gè)情況促使敘述者和Indi想要以某種方式將動(dòng)物園的體驗(yàn)帶給奶奶，最終通過制作相冊(cè)實(shí)現(xiàn)了這一點(diǎn)。通過這些伏筆和回應(yīng)，故事在情感上形成了連貫性，并且增強(qiáng)了故事的深度和復(fù)雜性。續(xù)寫部分通過回應(yīng)這些伏筆，為讀者提供了一個(gè)滿意的結(jié)局，同時(shí)也強(qiáng)化了故事的主題——即使在困難和挑戰(zhàn)面前，愛和創(chuàng)造性的表達(dá)可以帶來(lái)溫暖和快樂?！敬鸢浮縊nepossibleversion:Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift.Weprintedoutthephotoswehadtakenatthezoo,eachonecapturingadifferentanimalintheirplayfulormajesticmoments.IndiandIcarefullyselectedthebestshots,makingsuretoincludethemonkeysasperGrandma’srequest.Wethentookoutabeautifulphotoalbumandlovinglyarrangedthepicturesinside,addinglittlenotesabouteachanimalandthememoriestheybroughtback.Itwasalaboroflove,andwewereexcitedtoseeGrandma’sreaction.

ThenwetookthegiftupstairstoGrandma’sroom.Wetiptoedin,tryingnottodisturbher,buthereyeslitupassoonasshesawthewrappedphotoalbuminourhands.“What’sthis?”sheasked.Wehandedherthegift,andassheflippedthroughthepages,herfacebrokeintoawidesmile.“Oh,thisisthebestValentine’sDaygiftever,”sheexclaimed.“Thankyou,mydarlings.Thismeanssomuchtome.”Wesatwithher,sharingstoriesaboutthedayandwatchingherdelightassherevisitedthezoothroughourpictures.Itwasamomentofpurehappiness,andweknewthateventhoughshewasn’tphysicallywithusatthezoo,shewasverymuchapartofouradventure.下水文1Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift.Wegatheredallthepictureswehadtakenatthezooandspreadthemoutonthediningtable.IndiandIworkedtogethertochoosethebestshots,whileGrandpahelpedusfindabeautifulphotoalbum.Wecarefullyarrangedthephotosinthealbum,ensuringthateachpagetoldastoryofourdayatthezoo.Weaddedlittlenotesandstickers,makingsuretoincludethenamesoftheanimalsandanyfunnyorinterestingfactswehadlearned.WewantedtocapturetheessenceofouradventureandshareitwithGrandma,soshecouldfeellikeshewastherewithus,experiencingthejoyoftheday.ThenwetookthegiftupstairstoGrandma’sroom.Wetiptoedin,notwantingtodisturbherrest,butshewasawakeandsittingupinbed,awarmsmileonherface.Wepresentedherwiththephotoalbum,andhereyeslitupwithdelightassheflippedthroughthepages.Shelaughedatthefunnynotesandadmiredthepictures,andwecouldseethehappinessinhereyes.Itwasasifshehadbeentransportedtothezoowithus,andwecouldtellthatourgifthadbroughtabitofthezoo'smagictoher.Aswesattherewithher,sharingstoriesandmemories,werealizedthatValentine’sDaywasn'tjustaboutbeingtogetherinperson—itwasabouttheloveandthoughtfulnessweshared,evenfromadistance.下水文2Whenwegothome,wesetaboutmakingthegift.Wedecidedtocreateascrapbookfilledwithourzoomemories,whichwouldserveasaheartwarmingsurpriseforGrandma.Wechoseascrapbookwithasoft,pinkcoverthatremindedusofherfavoritecolor.Carefully,wegluedthephotosontothepages,arrangingtheminawaythatdepictedourjourneythroughthezoo.Eachphotowasaccompaniedbyasmallanecdoteoranoteaboutwhatwewerefeelingatthatmoment.Weevenincludedafewofourowndrawings,depictingtheanimalsandthefunwehad.Thescrapbookwasmorethanjustacollectionofpictures;itwasatestamenttotheloveandconnectionweshared,despiteGrandma'sabsence.ThenwetookthegiftupstairstoGrandma’sroom.Thehallwaywasquiet,andwecouldhearthesof