人教版中考英語寫作專項訓(xùn)練Better +Your+++Writing+-

BetterYourWriting寫作黃金五條1、文章分成三段。（注意審題）2、驚艷----制造亮點（尤其第一段）3、清晰----標志詞的使用（主體段）4、不用自己不懂的詞語。5、卷面保持整潔，書寫工整。八大功用句式1、描述類：閱讀經(jīng)典書籍很重要.Readingclassicsisveryimportant./Itisveryimportanttoreadclassics.Readingclassicsisplaysanextremelyimportantrole.句型1：……isofimportance.“……很重要”Readingclassicsisofgreat/utmostimportance.句型2：……playsanimportantrole.“……很重要”eg:做好個人防護對于每個人都很重要。Personalprotectionplaysanextremelyimportantroleineveryone’slife.經(jīng)典開頭句：?Itcannotbedeniedthat……不可否認的是……?Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat……人們越來越認識到……?Itgoeswithoutsayingthat……毋庸置疑的是……Itgoeswithoutsayingthatpersonalprotectionplaysanextremelyimportantroleineveryone’slife.做好個人防護對于每個人都很重要，這是毋庸置疑的。2、重視類：我們應(yīng)該重視教育/培養(yǎng)好習(xí)慣.Weshouldpayspecial/muchattentiontoeducation.Weshouldattachgreatimportancetodevelopinggoodhabits.句型：pay（much）attentionto……“重視、注意、關(guān)注”attachimportanceto……eg:作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該重視基礎(chǔ)知識。Asamiddleschoolstudent,oneshouldpaymuchattentiontobasicknowledge.Asamiddleschoolstudent,oneshouldattachgreatimportancetolearningbasicknowledge.(注意一致性問題)句型1：……capture/drawone’sattention.“……引起了某人的關(guān)注”eg:食品安全引起了大量公眾關(guān)注。Foodsafetyhascaptured/drawnagreatdealofpublicattention.句型2：muchattentionhasbeenpaidto……“……引起了關(guān)注”eg:大家都很關(guān)注如何有效利用周末假期。Muchattentionhasbeenpaidtohowtomakefulluseofweekendseffectively.3、結(jié)果類：良好的習(xí)慣對我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活產(chǎn)生了積極的影響.句型：haveaninfluenceon……“對……有影響”exertapositive（積極的）/negative（消極的）/great/huge(巨大的)impacton……eg:網(wǎng)絡(luò)對于我們的日常生活產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響，這是不可否認的。ItcannotbedeniedthattheInternethasahugeimpact/influenceonourdailylife.類似：越來越多的人意識到，環(huán)境污染對于我們的健康產(chǎn)生了很大的影響。Thereisagrowingrecognitionthatenvironmentalpollutioncanhaveahugeinfluenceonourhealth.4、使動類：網(wǎng)絡(luò)能讓/使我們更有效地溝通.TheInternetallowsustocommunicatemoreeffectively.句型：enable/allow……to……“讓……”“使……”eg:在線溝通讓我們交流更加方便。Onlineconversationallowsustocommunicateinaneasierway.補充句型：offersb.sth.=offersth.tosb.為某人提供某物providesb.withsth.=providesth.forsb. 為某人提供某物bringsb.sth=bringsth.tosb.為某人帶來某物eg:閱讀能給我們提供豐富的知識。Readingcanprovideuswithsufficient/wealthyknowledge.5、議論類：線上支付是否能取代線下支付，這個問題產(chǎn)生了很多爭議。Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhetheronlinepaymentcanreplaceofflinepayment.句型：Thereismuchcontroversyover……“……存在爭議”eg:學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)知識是否重要，這個問題引起了工作的廣泛討論。Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhetherlearningbasicskillsreallyplaysaroleinourlife.eg:是否要延遲退休，存在很多爭議。Thereismuchcontroversyoverwhethertodelayretirement.6、見證類：近幾年來，中國經(jīng)歷了經(jīng)濟的飛速發(fā)展。版本1:Inrecentyears,therehasbeenarapideconomicdevelopmentinaChina.版本2：Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessed/seenarapideconomicdevelopmentinChina.版本3：Duringthepastseveralyears,Chinahaswitnessed/seenarapideconomicdevelopment.替換：Chinahasexperiencedarapideconomicdevelopmentinrecentyears.Europehassufferedfromagreatfinanciallossinrecentyears.eg：近幾年來，中國見證了信息的爆炸。Chinahaswitnessed/seenthegreatinformationexplosion(爆炸)duringthepastseveralyears.ThepastseveralyearshaveseenthegreatinformationexplosioninChina.7、引出類：孩子的教育已經(jīng)成為最重要的社會問題之一Children’seducationhasrecentlybecomeoneofthemostimportantsocialproblems.句型1:……h(huán)asbecomeoneof……“……已經(jīng)成為……”句型2:……h(huán)asarisenasoneof……句型3:……h(huán)asemergedintoone’svision.eg:信息安全近來成為了一個熱門話題。Informationsafetyhasbecomeoneoftheheatedtopics.eg:環(huán)境問題在近幾年進入到了我們的視野中。Theissueofenvironmentalproblemhasemergedintoourvisioninrecentyears.8、趨勢類：越來越多的人開始重視如何有效利用周末假期。Agrowingnumberofpeoplearepayingmuchattentiontohowtomakefulluseofweekendseffectively.句型1：moreandmorepeople……句型2:Anincreasing/Agrowingnumberofpeople……句型3:peopleingrowingnumbers/mountingnumbers.eg：隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的出現(xiàn)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程越來越受歡迎。Withtheappearance/emergenceofInternet,onlinecoursesbecomeincreasinglypopularamongcollegestudents.eg：網(wǎng)絡(luò)在我們的日常生活中越來越重要。TheInternethasplayedanincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylife.隨著時間的推移，越來越多的人已經(jīng)意識到食品安全的重要性。Astimegoesby/on，agrowingnumberofpeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceoffoodsafety.寫作思維導(dǎo)圖(mindmap)Stage1:審體裁________________時態(tài)________________人稱________________Stage2:抓動詞短語句子結(jié)構(gòu)Stage3:擴-----擴成句子MakeuptheneededsentencesStage4:連-----連句成篇1.表示并列或遞進:and,aswellas和,both…and,notonly…butalso不僅，而且,neither…nor既不，也不;2.表示選擇:or,either…or要么，要么;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although,though,afterall畢竟,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對比:instead,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解釋:forexample,suchas,8.表示順序:firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示強調(diào):also,besides,what’smore而且,actually實際上,infact事實上,10.表示結(jié)論:altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking總的來說,ingeneral總而言之Stage5:改----注意細節(jié)謀篇布局1、“兩點”“”“三點”如何表述？?Firstly,…Secondly,…第一點…，第二點…?Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…一方面，…另一方面，…?Tobeginwith/Firstofall/Atfirst,…首先Furthermore(此外，而且),…?Inthefirstplace,…第一點Besides,…而且，并且Lastbutnotleast（最后但同樣重要的是）,…2、“順接”和“轉(zhuǎn)接”如何表述？順接：?asaresult結(jié)果/asaconsequence/consequently/therefore(因此)轉(zhuǎn)接：however然而/nevertheless(然而，不過)/nonetheless（然而）3、“總結(jié)”如何表述？總之：inconclusion,allinall,inaword，tosumup簡而言之：inshort,inbrief,如前所述：ashasbeenmentionedabove.giventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined(factor.n.因素，要素；outline.v.概述)4、“個人觀點”如何表述？asfarasIamconcerned/asfarasIknow/asfarasIcanseeinmyeyes/inmyopiniontomyknowledge/tothebestmyknowledgeasformefrommyperspective/frommypointofview萬能模板句式Withthereformandopening-upinrecentdecadesinChina,people’slivingstandardhasbeenverymuchimproved.隨著中國近幾十年的改革開放以來，中國人民的生活水平大幅度提升。Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandsociety,competitionisincreasinglyfierce.隨著經(jīng)濟和社會進步，競爭日益激烈。Itiswell-knownthatweexistinadynamicworldwithvariousdifficulties.Wecandonothingbutfacethem.Attitudeisthekeypointtotakethefirststep.眾所周知，我們生活在一個充滿很多困難的動態(tài)的世界。除了面對別無他法。態(tài)度是邁出第一步的關(guān)鍵。S