Unit3-寫作課-公開課課件（一）

Unit3AhealthylifeSpeaking&WritingHehasbecomeaddictedtosmoking!Hehasbecomeaddictedtosmoking!StressedUnhealthyAtrulyhealthypersonissomeonewhoishealthyinbothbody

and

mind.5

TheimportanceofhealthHewhohashealthhashope,andhewhohashopehaseverything.Goodhealthisoverwealth.Whatshouldwedotokeephealthy?

1.Keepabalanceddiet

2.Proper

activities

3.Developsomegoodhabits

(don't

smokeanddon'tdrinkalcohol)

4.Keepingagoodmind

drink

alcoholtakedrugssmokecigaretteaddictedtocomputergames

Smoking__________,drinking_______ortakingother_______producemanyharmfuleffectsandhavenorealbenefits.what'stheworse,onceyougetintothehabitsandyoumaybecome_addictedtothem.Itwillthenbedifficulttoquitthehabit.thebestwaytodealwiththesedrugsisnottostartinthefirstplace.cigarettesalcoholdrugsHehasbecomeaddictedtosmoking!Smokingmeanscommittingprogressivesuicide抽煙相當于慢性自殺DearteacherCanyouhelpmeplease?Mybestfriendshasjuststartedsmoking.IdonotlikeitandItoldhimwhatIthought.helaughtedatmeandsaidthatitisfashionabletosmokeandhefeelsrelaxedaftersmoking.ThenheofferedmeacigaretteandIfeltsoembarrassedandawkward.Idonotknowhowtopersuadehimtoquitsmoking.Pleasehelpme.Idon'twanttostartsmokingandIameagertoknowsomeadviceonquittingsmoking.Yourssincerely,LiHua

ReadthisletterandhelpmefigureoutthekeypointsIshouldgivemystudenttodealswithhisproblem.

Harmfuleffects

Adviceonquittingsmoking

HarmfuleffectsBrainstormingwastemoneycausefireairpollutiondamagelungandheartdifficultyin

pregnancyterriblesmellaffectnon-smokers

notenjoysports

Suggestionsonstopingsmoking

ideasreasons1.2.3.

4.

GroupworkTheoutlineofALetterforAdvice

ThepurposeAdviceandreasonsWishesAreplyDearLihuaIamsorryyouhavetroubleinstoppingyourfriendsmoking.inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetohaveagoodtalkwithher.youshouldtellyourbestfriendsomeharmfuleffectsofsmokingandgivehersuggestionsforquittingsmoking.Infact,therearemanyharmfuleffectsforsmoking.Firstofall,.Meanwhile,____________.Besides,_________________.Itwouldbewisetotakethefollowing

suggestionstoquitsmoking.Firstly,_____________.Secondly,__________.Then,__________Besides,_______________.What’smore,__________.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely.DearLihua

Iamsorryyouhavetroubleinstoppingyourfriendsmoking.inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetohaveagoodtalkwithher.youshouldtellyourbestfriendsomeharmfuleffectsofsmokingandgivehersuggestionsforquittingsmoking.

Infact,therearemanyharmfuleffectsforsmoking.Firstofall,smokingisabadhabit.

It

cancausealotofdiseasesandpolluteenvironment.Meanwhile,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.Besides,smokingisharmfulanditisnotonlybadforsmokersthemselves,butalsobadfornon-smokers.Itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingsuggestionstoquitsmoking.Firstly,bedeterminedanddon’tgiveup.Themoreoftenyoutry,themore.Secondly,it’shelpfultomakeaplantoquit.Fixadateanddoitstepbystep.Finally,Itisagoodideatodosomethingelsesuchaslisteningtomusic,dosomewalking,etc.Neverreachforacigarette.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely.HomeworkPolishyourwritingafterclass！

Appreciatethesamplewriting!ListeningThelisteningisaconversationbetweenTinaandSaraaboutgoingtoadisco.Let’spredict:WhatkindofadvisewillTinagivetoSara?1TickthethingsSaraisworriedab