初中英語(yǔ)作文集

1.HowtoMakeFriends

It'shardtomakefriendsifyoustayaloneallthetime.It's

easiertomakefriendswhenyouhavesimilarinterests.Lookat

peopleintheeyeswhenyoutalktothem.Don'tbeafraidto

showpeoplewhatyouarereallygoodat.Talkaboutthethings

youlikeanddobest.Beagoodlistener.Letpeopletalkabout

themselvesbeforetalkingaboutyourself.Befriendlytoalotof

people.Trytohelpyourfriendswhentheyareintrouble

becausefriendinneedisafriendindeed]Thatwayyou51!

haveabiggergrouptochoosefromandhavemorechancesto

makefriends.

2.MyViewonTelevision

Televisionhasbeeninourlifeformanyyears.Wecan't

livehappilywithouttelevision.Itcangiveusthelatest

informationandnews.Itcanbpenupoureyesandenlarge

ourknowledgel.Wecangethappinessfromtheplayson

television.We'llbeboredalldayifthereisnotelevision.

Televisionprogramsareattractive.Afterawholeday'shard

work,wecansitbeforethetelevisionanddrinkacupoftea.

Howwonderfulitis!

Televisionisalsobadforpeople'shealth.Ifsnotgood

foryoutowatchTVfortoolong,especiallybadforyoureyes._

ItistruethatwatchingTVcaninfluenceourbehaviorand

achievement.However,itdependsonwhatwedo.

3.TalkaboutInternet

Today,I'lltalkaboutgoingonline.Weknowthatthere

aretoomanynet-bars（網(wǎng)吧）aroundus.TheInternetcanmake

ourlivesinterestingandenjoyable.Manyofuslikegoing

onlineverymuchbecausewecanlearnhowtousethecomputer

andgetmoreinformationfromtheInternet.Wecanlearn

English.Wecanreadsomegoodnewspapersandmagazines.It

canmakeuscleverthroughplayingcomputergames.Icansend

e-mailstoourfriendsquickly.Wecanchatonlinewithour

friends.Itcanhelpusgetintouchwith（取得聯(lián)系）people

fromallovertheworld,butunfortunatelythegovernment

doesn'tallowcommunicationwithmanypeople.

Butsomestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputer

gamesandsomestayinnetbarsalldayandallnight.Asa

result,theydoworseandworseintheirlessonsandtheydon't

studywellanymore.Ithinkweshouldn'tgoonlinewhenitis

timeforustostudy.Wecandoitinsummerorwinterholidays.

4.APicnic

Itwasasunnyday.Wedecidedtohaveapicnicoutside

thecity.Inthemorning,wetookanearlybustoNanhui.Itwas

quiteacolorfulworld.Thereweregreentrees,orangeleaves

andredpeachblossoms.Atnoon,wereachedthepicnicplace.

Wesatbytheriverbankandtookoutalotofthings,suchas

bread,orangejuice,apples,cakes,eggsandsoon.Allofthe

studentswereeating.Suddenly,itbegantorain.Unluckily,

therewasnoshelternearby.Wehadtotakeabustogoback

homeinahurry.

Whatanunforgettablepicnicitwas!

5.AnUnforgottenSummerHoliday

Howtimeflies!I'mfifteenyearsnow.Duringthatlong

time,therewasonethingthatIwillneverforget.

WhenIwas9yearsold,myfamilytookthebustomy

grandparents'.Inthebus,Ihadagoodseat.At7:30,thebus

cametoavillage.Awomangotonwithababyinherarms.At

thattime,therewasnoseat.Butshemustlookafterherbaby

carefully.Shehadtostandnexttome.Iwantedtostandupand

lethersitdown,butIwasafraidofhearingtheotherpeople

say“Thatgirlwantstobepraised."Ilookedaround.Most

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peoplewerelookingoutofthewindowsandsomewere

sleeping.Suddenly,alittleboybehindme,stoodupandmade

roomforthewoman.Shesaid:"Thankyouverymuch^^witha

bigsmile.Theboysmiled,too.WhenItoldmycousinaboutit

afterthat,hesaid:"Thatchildisagreatboy."I'mveryashamed.

Whycouldn'tIdothesamethingasthelittleboydid?

Fromthat,IknewthatweshoulddoourbestJohelppeople

whoneedhelp.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontohelping

others,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful!

6.Don，tWasteWater

Amaniswashinghisclothes,regardlessof（不管，不

顧）thenoticeabove“Savethewater,please.^^Aswesee,water

isthesourceoflife.Butthereisverylimitedavailable（可利」用

的）waterresourcesintheworld.

Soweshouldn'twasteit.Ofcourse,wehavetouseittodrink,

andtodocooking,washingandetc（andsoon）.Butwemust

remembernottouseitextravagantly（奢侈的，浪費(fèi)的）.Ifwe

don'tstopsuchwastefulhabits,wewouldcutoff（切開，切斷，

割掉，削除，伐除；截止；截?cái)啵﹖hedevelopmentoftheworld

andhumanlife.

7.HowDoYouGetonwithYourClassmates?

Howdoyougetonwithyourclassmates?Ithinkit'seasyto

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answerthatquestion.Ifyoumeetupwithyourfriends,youcan

say,"hello!"yourfriendsmustbehappy,theywillthinkthatyou

areapolitegirloraboy!

Ifyourfriendshavesomequestions,youshouldhelpthem.

They'llthankyouforyourhelp.Myclassmatesareveryhelpful

andpolite.Ifoneofmyclassmateshassomeproblems,my

classmateswillhelpthemsolveit.Sotheyareexcited.

Wehelpeachotherandtakecareofeachother.Ihopeyou

canbeapoliteandhelpfulchild,andIhopeyoucangetonwell

withallofyourclassmates.

8.1WantToBeA........

1.1listentomyteachercarefully.IthinkIwillbecomea

teacherwhenIgrowup.Icanhelpmanystudentslearnthings

well.Icanplaywithmystudents,too.Sowearegoodfriends.

2.1wanttobeadoctorwhenIseemanydoctorssavetheir

patients.Tobeadoctorisreallygreat.IthinkIcanbeadoctor

whenIgrowup.ThenIcanhelpmanypeopleoutofdanger.I

willbethehappiestgirlintheworld.

3.1wanttobeareporterwhenIwatchTVeveryevening.We

cangetlotsofimportantinformationfromthem.Theymakethe

worldsmallerandalsomakeushappy.

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4.IwouldliketobeareporterwhenIgrowup.AndIcan

learna10taboutChinaandtheothercountriesaroundtheworld.

Icanmeetmanysuperstarsaswell.

5.Iwanttobeascientist.Scientistshavemaderecorders,

TVsets,andsoon.Theyhavealsoinventedthecomputer.All

thesemakeourliferich,interestingandeasy.（可以用分另U用以

上1.2.3.4.5點(diǎn)再加上后邊的一段來組成不同的文章）

Ihavelotsofdreams.Ithinkmydreamscancometrue

oneday,becausethere'sanoldsaying“wherethereisawill,

thereisaway.”

9.1LoveMyFamily

IwasbomonMarch18.Myfamilyisneitherveryrichnor

verypoor.Myparentsarepeasants.Theyworkhardtosupport

thefamily.Theyencouragemetostudywell.Mychildhoodwas

happy.Ilikelearning.Ilikemusicandsports,too.Icanrun

veryfastandamthefastestrunnerinmyclass.Iamgoodat

English,PhysicsandMaths.Theydoalltheycantohelpme,so

thatIgetsomuch.IreallywanttoseeIlovemyfamily.

10.LifeintheFuture

Lifeinthefuturewillbebetterthannow.First,peoplewill

havetheirownrobotsinthehome.Sotheywillnotdotheir

homeworkbecausetherobotscandoit.Next,peoplewillliveto

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be200yearsold.Peoplewillliveundertheseainsummer

becausetheweatheristoohot.Sopeoplewillliveunderthesea.

Peoplewilltakecarslessthantodaybecausethepollution

producedisverydangerous.Peoplewillgotothemoonfor

vacations.Whatdoyouthink?

11.MyChineseTeacher

MissLiismyChineseteacher.Sheisaboutthirtyyearsold.

Sheisveryprettyandyoung.Herhairisbrownandcurly（卷縮

的）.MissLialwayswearsabluecoat.Ithinkherfavoritecolor

isblue.MissLiisveryfriendlyandkind.Herclassesarevery

interesting,weallliketohaveChineseclass.Shealwayssmiles

whenshespeaktous.Sometimessheisverystrictwithus,

whenwemakeamistake,sheoftenmakesusstandup.MissLi

oftenstickstoherlessons（堅(jiān)持上課）whensheisill,shelooks

weak,butstillbeautiful.

MissLilovesusverymuch,sheteachesussocarefully.I

thinksheisagoodteacher.Weallloveher,too.Ithink

teachersarelikecandles,givingofflightforothersby

burningthemselves.

12.MyDream

Everybodyhasadream.DoyouwanttoknowwhatIwantto

beinthefuture?

Well,Iwanttobeasinger,becauseIlovesingingverymuch.

AndIthinkthatIcansingonthestage（舞臺(tái)）.Iwillmoveto

NewYorkandbeasingerthere.AndIwillsingmyfavorite

Englishsongsthere.Althoughitisatiringjob,Iloveit.Because

whenI'msad,IcansingsongstobehappyandIwillbecome

verypopular.That5ssointerestingandexciting.Formydream,I

willsingeverydayandsingwell.Ihopethatdaycomesquickly,

Ican'twait!Howaboutyou?What'syourdream?

13.MyFamily

Ihaveahappyfamily.Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.

Theyaremyparents,mygrandparents,mysister,andI.My

fatherandmotherarebusinessmen.Andmygrandparentsare

farmers.I'mamiddleschoolstudent.Mysisterisfouryearsold.

Sheislovely.Ilovemyfamily.（可適當(dāng)再增加）

14.MyFavoriteSport

Everyoneinthisworldhastheirownfavoritesport,sodoI.

Myfavoritesportisfootball.Ioftenplayfootballwithmy

friends.Ilikefootballbecauseitisexcitingandchallenging.I

beganplayingfootballwhenIwas5yearsold.Itisjustsofun!

Therearemanyworldwideinternationalfootballcompetitions.

ThestarIadmirethemostinfootballisEdsonArantesdo

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NascimentowhoisaformerBrazilianfootballplayerand

thoughtbymanytobethefinestplayerofalltime.Well,there

aremanyreasonswhyfootballismyfavoritesport.Iwishto

becomeaprofessionalfootballplayer.Ilearntdiscipline移己律）

andteamworkthroughplayingfootball.

15.MyHomeTown

Myhometownisabeautifulplace.Itstandsbesideawide

riverandisrichinfishandrice.Butintheolddaysitwasa

poorandbackward（落后town.Manypeoplehadnowork.

Theylivedahardlife.

In1949myhometownwasliberated.Sincethengreat

changeshavetakenplacethere.Thestreetshavebeenwidened.

Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemasandtheatreshavesprung

uponeafteranother.Thelifeofthepeopleisgreatlyimproved.

Ilovemyhometown.AllthemoreIloveitspeople.Theyare

workinghardsoastomakeitstillricherandmorebeautiful.

16.Myself

MynameisLiLing,IcomefromKunmingandIamin

gradeseven.IliketostudymathsandEnglish.Theyaremy

favoritesubjects.Maybeitisdifficultforustolearnwell,butI

likethem.Ibelieveifyoudoyourbest,youcandoeverything

well.Ialsolikesports,suchasping-pong,itismylove.Iwell

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helpanyoneiftheyneed.Ifyouneedhelp,pleasefindme,I

hopewecanbecomegoodfriends.Thisisme!

17.SportsKeepUsHealthy

Sportskeepusfitandfresh.Everybodylikestodoonekind

oranother.Butnotallpeopleknowhowtodothemcorrectly

andsometimestheadvicewegetmaybewrong.Fmlucky,for

sincemyfirstdayatschoolIhavealwayshadagoodteacherof

physicaleducation.Ihavealwaysbeenverystrong.Igo

swimmingalmosteverydayallyearround,butofcourseIlike

manyothersportstoo.Iamthinkingoftakingpartinafew

itemsattheschoolsportsmeetingthisautumn.

18.AGift

Ihavereceivedsomanygiftsonmybirthdays.ButIlovethe

booknamed"BeautifulEnglish5best.Itwasgiventomebymy

motherlastyear.Iliketoreaditinmysparetime.Fromthe

book,Ihavelearnedthattheworldisfullofloveandbeauty.I

alsoknowpeopleshouldhelpeachother,understandeachother

andloveeachother.IthinkI'llgrowupwiththebookbecauseit

isnotonlyabookbutalsomymother'sdeeplove.

19.MyDay

Ihadawonderfulholidayatspringfestival.Iwenttothe

parkwithmyfriends.Wemetateighto'clockattheschoolgate.

Wewenttotheparkbybike.Itwasabeautifulday.Wesat

underabigtreeandchattedwitheachother.Wetalkedabout

somemoviesandsomefunthings.Wehadlunchthere.Wehad

hamburgersandsomedrinks,butIknowtheyarenothealthy

andnotgoodforus.Thenweplayedsomegames.

Weallfelttired,butwewereveryhappy!Itwasgreatfun!

20.Thanksgiving

Howeverweare,howevertheworldis,wearelivinginthe

sameworld.Maybesomearerich,othersarepoor,someare

healthy,othersareunhealthy,butthereisanonlywarmheart

aroundus...Thanksgiving.Asastudent,I'llleavemymother

school.Therearesomanyfeelingsinmyheart,becauseso

manypeoplegivemesomuch.Iwasbominapoorfamily.

WhenIhadproblemswiththecostofliving,unknownpeople

raisedmoneytopayformycosts.WhenIcouldn'tgotoschool

forillness,myteachershelpedmewithsubjectsintheirfree

time;WhenIfelldowninexams,myteachersalwaysbrought

mewarmwordsandencouragedmetogetoverdifferences.

NowI'vebecomeoneofthetopstudents,butIthinkmy

successdependsonthepeoplewhoalwaysloveandcareforme

withoutretum.Finally,IthinkIshould[aveathankfulheartto

helpothers,andgivemylovetothepeopleintroublearoundme,

givemylovetomysociety,givemylovetomyparents.

21.IfsOurDutytoSaveWater

Asweknown,waterisveryimportanttohumans,wecan't

livewithoutwater.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletouse

istheminimum.Butsomepeopledon'tcareaboutit.They

wastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.Evenworse,theypour

dirtywaterintorivers.Theythrowrubbishintorivers,too.

Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbe

donetostopthepollution.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.

Ifwedon'tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-drop

ofours.

22.MyBestFriend

Ihaveonefriend.HernameisSunny.Sheisveryhealthy.

Sheexerciseseveryday.Andhereatinghabitsaregood.Shedoes

notlikemilk,butshedrinksiteveryday.Hermothersaysthatit

isgoodforherhealth.Shelikesjunkfood,too.Butshetriesnot

toeatjunkfood.Andshesleepsninehourseverynight.So,sheis

prettyhealthy.

Ihaveanotherfriend.HisnameisMike.Heisdifferent

fromSunny.Heisunhealthy.Hehardlyeverexercises.Andhe

lovesjunkfood,heeatsitthreeorfourtimesaweek.Soheis

unhealthy.BothSunnyandMikearemyfriends,althoughthey

aredifferent.

23.MyFavoriteSubject

MynameisSally.I'mtwelveyearsold.Istudyin

Xindongmiddleschool.Qfallthesubjects,IlikeEnglishbest.

Englishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourlives.

LearningEnglishwellcanhelpyou.Ihavesomegood

ideasforlearningEnglish:1.ReadandpractiseEnglishevery

day.2.WatchtheEnglishChanel.3.Listentoradio

programmesinEnglish.4.ConcentratehardinEnglishlessons.

24.SafetyofTransportation

Withthedevelopmentofmoderntechnology,the

privatecarisnolongeraluxurious（奢侈）thingforordinary

people.Moreandmorepeopledrivetoworkinsteadofgoingby

bus.Thepopularisationoftheprivatecarhasmanyadvantages.

Firstly,itisveryconvenientandtime-saving.Youcandrive

yourowncartotheworkplaceinsteadofwaitingforthe

crowdedbusandbeingafraidofbeinglateforwork.

Secondly>itcanalsoimprovethetrafficstructure,andhelp

tomitigatethestressofthetraffic.

Thirdly,thepopularisationoftheprivatecarcanhelpto

promote（促進(jìn)）thecarindustryandanyotherinterrelated（相

關(guān)）industries.Ibelievethatinthefuturetheprivatecarwill

becomethemostimportantvehicle（車輛）andwecan'tlive

withoutit.

25.FaceFailureBravely

Asweallknow,“Failureisthemotherofsuccess."But

fewpeoplecanunderstandwhatthesayingreallymeans.

Whoeveryouare,youaresuretomeetwithallkindsof

failureinyourlife.Infact,failureisnottobefeared.Themost

importantthingishowtofaceitcorrectlyandbravely.Facing

failure,youmustnevertakeyourfatelyingdown（不甘屈月艮）.

Instead,youmusttryyourbesttoworkharderuntilatlastyou

succeed.Ifyouareafraidoffailure,youwillhavenochanceof

enjoyingthepleasureofsuccess.Wheneveryouareintrouble,

pleaseremember:"Failureisthemotherofsuccess.”

26.NeverGiveup

Ofcourse,thereisalwayssomethingdisappointinginour

lives,butwecan'tloseourhope.Wearesupposedtomakean

efforttomakethefuturebrighter.Weshouldbelievein

ourselvesbecausethereisplentyoflovefromourparents,

friendsandteachersaroundus.Nevergiveupyourlife,your

grades,andyourfuture.

Nothingcanstopusfrombeingsuccessful.

27.SunshineinMyLife

Everyonehasdifferentideasaboutlife.Somesaylifeis

happy,butothersfeellifeisunhappy.Inmyopinion,|lifeis

beautifulandfullofsunshine.

Severalweeksago,oneofmyclassmateswasbadlyill.He

hadtobeinhospitalforalongtime.Buthisfamilywastoo

poortocollectmoneyforhim.Everyoneinourclasstookout

ourpocketmoney.Then,wewenttothestreetonSundayto

collectmoneyfromothers.Whenwesentallthemoneytohim,

heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.

Maybesometimeswefeelunhappy,butweshouldbelieve:

Lifeisbeautiful.Helpandlovewillbearoundusforevei.

28.HighsAndLowsInMyLife

Wehaveallexperiencedhighsandlowsinourlives.Iwill

neverforgettheexperiencewhenIbegantolearnEnglish.I

likedEnglishbutIcouldn'tgettherightmethodofleaning.

ThemoreIwantedtoremember,theharderIfounditwas.Iwas

inlowspirits.Ialmostgaveup.

Luckily,myEnglishteacherencouragedmeandhelpedme

findagoodway.Byandby,IrealisedEnglishwasnotsucha

terriblething.Ibecamebraveenoughtoopenmymouthto

speakEnglish.|HowexcitedaboutEnglishIwas!My

confidencecamebacktome.Believeitornot,Iwonthefirst

prizeinSpokenEnglishCompetition（競(jìng)賽）inourschool.It

wasthefirsttimeIexperiencedsuchahighinmylife!

29.OneThingIcan*tForget

Ilikedplayingcomputergames,butmydaddywasnot

happybecausehethoughtitwasnotgoodformystudy.

SometimesIfeltIwasnotafreeboywhenmydaddywasso

strictwithme.SoItriedtotalktomydaddy,andhesaidhe

washappybecauseItalkedtohim,andnowheletsmeplay

gamesifIstudywell.Fromthis,Iunderstand|afriendlytalkcan

helppeoplegetalongwell.

30.EarlyRising

Earlyrisingisagoodhabitforeveryone|.Itisgoodforu

sinmanyways.

Firstly,ithelpstokeepushealthy.Wecanbreathethefreshair

inthemorning.It'sfunforustoawalkalongthestreet.

Secondly,earlyrisinghelpsuswithourstudies.Whenwe

getupveryearlyinthemorning,everythingaroundusisquiet.

Inthemorningwelearnmorequicklyandmemorisewhatwele

ameasily.

Thirdly,earlyrisinggivesusenoughtimetogetready

forourwork,suchastowashourhandandfacesandeat

breakfastproperly.

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英語(yǔ)作文經(jīng)典開頭方式

Typel引述他人觀點(diǎn)(為提出自己觀點(diǎn)鋪墊)

[1]Itiswidely(commonly)accepted(hold)+THAT

[2]Awidelyaccepted(commonly)holdidea(pointof

view,viewpoint,opinion,assumption)is+THAT/NP

[3]A/Thedominant(prevalent,prevailing)idea(see[2])is

NP/toDO

[4]Itistakenforgranted+THAT(or:Weoften/frequently

takeitforgrantedTHAT)

[5]People(Themajority)seemtogetaccustomedtothe

idea(see[2]),withoutquestioning,THAT)

[6]PeoplearewillingtoregardNP1asNP2/ADJ

[7]PeoplearewillingtoDO,whilereluctanttoDO

Type2提出異議

[1]However(But),...

[2]Suchidea(see[l-2]),ifnotentirelyADJl,issomewhat

ADJ2andneedscarefulconsideration.

ADJI=unreasonable,unacceptable,

inappropriate,improper,undesirable,

etc;

ADJ2=misleading,doubtrul,etc

[3]Infact(Asamatteroffact),...(follow[2])

[4]However,itisnot(quite,necessarily)thecase.(

[5]This(It)isnot(quite,necessarily)thecaseandneedsto

bofrutherconsidered/discussed.(or:further

consideration/discussion)

Type3論述的展開:說明原因和理由，層進(jìn)，舉例，轉(zhuǎn)折

[1]Thereasonliesinseveralaspects,(

[2]Thereasonwhy+clause+[l,underlined](

[3]Thereareseveralremarkablereasons.(

[4]層進(jìn)inaddition,besides,fruthermore,what'smore,on

theotherhand,meanwhile,foronething...foranother;finally,

aboveall,inshort.

[5]舉例forexample,forinstance,such(generalterm)as

(specificterms),atypical(striking)exampleisthat,acasein

point

[6]轉(zhuǎn)折however,but,nevertheless,onthecontrary

[7]條件if,providedthat,unless,aslongas,etc

Type4就…而言;關(guān)于

[1]asfaras...is/areconcerned:Asfarascurrentsituation

isconcerned

[2]asttheproblemastoNP有關(guān)…的問題

Type5問題

[1]Althoughmuchefforthasbeenmade,thesituationisfar

fromsatisfactory(or:theproblemremainsunsolved,little

improvementhasbeenachieved)

[2]Thereisatendency,asrecentstudy(investigation)has

pointedout(shown,revealed,indicated),+THAT

[3]Thereisgrowingconcernabout+NP

[4]Itwillinevitably(islikelyto)resultin(leadto)

unwanted(serious)consequence(orNP)

[5]Unfortunately,...

[6]Wewillnotbeabletoaffordtheriskofoverlooking

theseriousnessofthematter.

[7]Theprocess,onceinitiated,ismostlikelyirreversible.

[8]Weareconstantly(frequently)facedwithNP(

TYPE6重要與必要;(應(yīng))注意與重視

[1]NP1isofgreatimportance(necessity,value)inNP2

(or:NPisofenormoussignificance)(

[2]Theimportance(necessity)ofNP(todosth.)liesin

(thefact)that...

[3]NP1plays,asisknown,anirreplaceablyimportant

roleinNP2

[4]TheirreplaceablyimportantroleNP1playsinNP2is

significant(obvous)

[5]NP1isanindispensablepartofNP2)

[6]Itisimportant(necessary)toDO(or:THAT)

[7]Specialattentionshouldbepayto...(or:Weshould

payspecialattentionto...)

[8]Whatweshouldtakeintoconsiderationis+NP

Type7行動(dòng)(

[l](immediate,emergent,effective)Measuresarebeing

taken(hasbeentaken,shouldbetaken)toDO

[3]Wehavemademucheffort,thereisstillmoreweneed

tomake(cf.Wehavelearntalot,thereismuchmoreweneedto

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英語(yǔ)作文的結(jié)尾方式示例

文章結(jié)尾的作用是概括全文內(nèi)容，進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)或肯定文章的

中心思想，使文章意義表達(dá)得更加深刻。

文章結(jié)尾的形式也是多種多樣的,常見的有以下幾種：

1、首尾呼應(yīng)，畫龍點(diǎn)睛

在文章的結(jié)尾，把含義較深的話放在末尾，以點(diǎn)明主題，深

化主題，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。如“ICannotForgetHer^^（我忘

不了她）的結(jié)尾：

Afterherdeath,!feltasifsomethingweremissinginmy

life.Iwassadoverherpassingaway,butIknewshewouldnot

havehadanyregretsathavinggivenherlifeforthebenefitof

thepeople.

2、重復(fù)主題句

結(jié)尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)

的效果。如“ILoveMyHomeTown”（我愛家鄉(xiāng)）的結(jié)尾：

Ilovemyhometown,andIloveitspeople.Theytoohave

changed.Theyaregoingallouttodomoreforthegoodofour

motherland.

3、自然結(jié)尾

隨著文章的結(jié)束，文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Fishing”（釣魚）

的結(jié)尾：

Icaughtasmanyastwentyfishintwohours,butmy

brothercaughtmanymore.Tiredfromfishing,welaydownon

theriverbank,bathinginthesun.Wereturnedhomeverylate.

4、含蓄性的結(jié)尾

用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點(diǎn)明作者的看法，而是讓讀者

自己去領(lǐng)會(huì)和思考o(jì)如“ADayofHarvesting”（收割的日子）的

結(jié)尾：

Eveningcamebeforewerealizedit.Weputdownour

sicklesandlookedateachother.Ourclotheswerewetwith

sweat,butoneveryfacetherewasasmile.

5、用反問結(jié)尾

雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，并具有特別的強(qiáng)調(diào)

磨

作用，引起讀者深思。如“ShouldWeLearntoDo

Housework?”（我們要不要學(xué)做家務(wù)?）的結(jié)尾。

Everyoneshouldlearntodohousework.Don'tyou

agree,boysandgirls?

6、指明方向，激勵(lì)讀者

結(jié)尾表示對(duì)將來的展望，或期待讀者投入行動(dòng)。如"Let's

GoinforSports”（讓我們參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)）的結(jié)尾：

Aswehavesaidabove,sportscanbeofgreatvalue.They

notonlymakepeoplelivehappilybutalsohelppeopletolearn

virtuesanddotheirworkbettter.Asoundmindisinasound

body.Let'sgoinforsports.

文章的結(jié)尾沒有一定的模式，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)主題的需要靈

活創(chuàng)造。一般的習(xí)慣是，一些記敘文和描寫文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)

尾的方法;但說理性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)的說明文和議論文則往往

都有結(jié)束語(yǔ),以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

英語(yǔ)作文記敘文寫作技巧

記敘文是記人敘事的文章，它主要是用于說明事件的時(shí)間、背

景、起因、過程及結(jié)果，即我們通常所說的五個(gè)”W”(what,

who,when,where,why)和一個(gè)"H"(how)。記敘文的重點(diǎn)在

于“述說“和“描寫”，因此一篇好的記敘文要敘述條理清楚，描

寫生動(dòng)形象。下面就談?wù)動(dòng)⒄Z(yǔ)記敘文的特點(diǎn)和寫好記敘文的

基本要領(lǐng)。

一、記敘文的特點(diǎn)

1.敘述的人稱

英語(yǔ)的記敘文一般是以第一或第三人稱的角度來敘述

的。用第一稱表示的是由敘述者親眼所見、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷。

它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于能把故事的情節(jié)通過“我”來傳達(dá)給讀者，使人

讀后感到真實(shí)可信,如身臨其境。如：

Theotherday,Iwasdrivingalongthestreet.Suddenly,a

carlostitscontrolandrandirectlytowardsmefast.Iwasso

frightenedthatIquicklyturnedtotheleftside.Butitwastoo

late.ThecarhitmybikeandIfelloffit.

用第三人稱敘述,優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于敘述者不受“我”活動(dòng)范圍以

內(nèi)的人和事物的限制，而是通過作者與讀者之外的第三者，直

接把故事中的情節(jié)展現(xiàn)在讀者面前，文章的客觀性很強(qiáng)。如：

LittleTomwasgoingtoschoolwithanumbrella,forit

wasraininghard.Ontheway,hesawanoldwomanwalkingin

therainwithnothingtocover.Tomwentuptotheoldwoman

andwantedtosharetheumbrellawithher,buthewastooshort.

Whatcouldhedo?Thenhehadagoodidea.

2.動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)

在記敘文中，記和敘都離不開動(dòng)詞。所以動(dòng)詞出現(xiàn)率最

高,且富于變化。記敘文中用得最多的是動(dòng)詞的過去的，這是

英語(yǔ)記敘文區(qū)別于漢語(yǔ)記敘文的關(guān)鍵之處。英語(yǔ)寫作的優(yōu)美

之處就在于這些動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的變化，正是這一點(diǎn)才使得所記、所

敘有鮮活的動(dòng)態(tài)感、鮮明的層次感和立體感。

3.敘述的順序

記敘一件事要有一定的順序。無論是順敘、倒敘、插敘

還是補(bǔ)敘,都要讓讀者能弄清事情的來龍去脈。順敘最容易操

作，較容易給讀者提供有關(guān)事情的空間和時(shí)間線索。但這種方

法也容易使文章顯得平鋪直敘，讀起來平淡乏味。倒敘、插敘、

補(bǔ)敘等敘述方法能有效地提高文章的結(jié)構(gòu)效果，讓所敘之事

跌宕起伏，使讀者在閱讀時(shí)思維產(chǎn)生較大的跳躍，從而為文章

所吸引，深入其中。但這些方法如果使用不當(dāng)，則容易弄巧成

拙，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)散亂，頭緒不清，讓讀者不知所云。

4.敘述的過渡

過渡在上下文中起著承上啟下、融會(huì)貫通的作用。過渡

往往用在地點(diǎn)轉(zhuǎn)移或時(shí)間、事件轉(zhuǎn)換以及由概括說明到具體

敘述時(shí)。如：

Inmysummerholidays,Ididalotofthings.Apartform

doingmyhomework,readinganEnglishnovel,watchingTV

anddoingsomehousework,IwentonatriptoQingdao.Itis

rea