高中英語(yǔ)外研版必修第一冊(cè)Unit 3　Period 8　Writing-Writing about a family memory

Period8Writing—WritingaboutafamilymemoryActivity1Readforsomedetails.ReadthejournalentryonP46andchoosethebestanswer.1．Whatbroughttheauthor’slovelymemory?A．Anoldphoto. B．Abirthdaycard.C．Anegg. D．Asurprisingdish.答案A2．Whatwastheauthor’smother’sreactionafterseeingtheburnteggs?A．Shewasextremelysurprised.B．Shesmiledandatethemall.C．Shespokehighlyoftheingredients.D．Sheaskedhowtocooksuchspecialeggs.答案B3．Whywasitalovelymemoryfortheauthor?A．Ittaughttheauthorhowtocookeggs.B．Itshowsthelovebetweentheauthorandhermother.C．Ithelpedherpreparehermother’sbirthdaybetter.D．Itisimportantfora45-year-oldwoman.答案BActivity2Readforthestructure.ReadthejournalentryonP46anddothefollowingexercises.Ⅰ.Fillintheblankswithsuitablewords.OpeningIfoundanold1.photoinanotebookyesterday.AsIwaslookingatit，thelovely2.memoryofthatdaycamebacktome.MainbodyItwasmymother’s3.birthdaytenyearsago，andIdecidedtosurpriseherwithhome-madescrambledeggs，buttheeggsendedup4.burnt.Afterknowingwhathappened，mymothertastedthemandsaidtheyweren’tbad！Ending5.Loveisindeedamagicalingredient.Ⅱ.Thewritingtemplateofashortstoryinmemory.(寫作模板)AstoryofaspecialfamilymemoryOpeningBackgroundinformation：when，who，where，etc.MainbodyThedetailsofthestory:whatandhow，etc.EndingWhyisitspecialormemorable？Activity3Readforsomegoodsentences.1．Pleasefindoutthesentencesthattheauthorusedtodescribethebackgroundinformation.答案Iwastidyingmyroomyesterdayandfoundanoldphotoinanotebook.AsIwaslookingatit，thelovelymemoryofthatdaycamebacktome.2．Pleasefindoutthesentencesthattheauthorusedtodescribetheauthor’sfeelings.答案Tomysurprise，shetastedthemandsaidtheyweren’tbad!Iguessloveisindeedamagicalingredient.本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇敘事類記敘文。該類作文以敘述事件為主，通過(guò)完整的故事情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)有所感悟。寫作時(shí)要注意把記敘文的六要素(時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果)交代清楚。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)常用表達(dá)1．開頭部分常用表達(dá)Istillwellrememberthedaywhen...我仍然清楚地記得那一天……Althoughithappenedthreeyearsago，Iwillneverforgettheeveningparty.盡管這場(chǎng)晚會(huì)發(fā)生在三年前，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記它。2．主體部分常用表達(dá)Iwasreallysurprisedwhen...當(dāng)……時(shí)，我真的太吃驚了。Iwasn’tsurewhether...我不確定是否……3．結(jié)尾部分常用表達(dá)Tiredaswewere，wewereverydelighted.盡管我們很累，但是我們很高興。Ilearnedfromtheexperiencethat...我從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了……假如你是李華，你在家里的車庫(kù)里看到自己六歲生日時(shí)收到的生日禮物——一輛自行車，想起了爸爸教自己學(xué)自行車的往事，請(qǐng)把這段美好的回憶寫成一篇短文。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。第一步審題謀篇第二步遣詞造句核心詞匯(含本單元詞匯)1．假定，假設(shè)，認(rèn)為assume2．走近，靠近approach3．集中focus4．結(jié)果是，原來(lái)是turnout5．處于困境中introuble6．總結(jié)，概要summary連詞成句(含本單元句型)1．我們的車庫(kù)里有一輛舊的小自行車，我不能再騎了。Thereisasmalloldbikeinourgarage，whichIcannolongerride.2．我認(rèn)為這是我最好的生日禮物。Iassumeittobemybestbirthdaypresent.3．很多年前，收到一輛自行車作為我六歲的生日禮物讓我很興奮。Manyyearsago，receivingabikeasmysixthbirthdaygiftmademeexcited.4．我走近那輛自行車，乞求父親教我怎么騎。Iapproachedthebikeandbeggedmyfathertoteachmehowtorideit.5．父親幫我把兩只手放在車把上，把兩只腳放在踏板上。Myfatherhelpedmeputmytwohandsonthehandlebarsandmyfeetonthepedals.6．總之，騎自行車不難學(xué)。Insummary，itwasnotdifficulttolearntorideabike.第三步句式升級(jí)用“主語(yǔ)＋be＋adj.＋不定式”升級(jí)句6。Insummary，ridingabikewasnotdifficulttolearn.第四步組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。參考范文Thereisasmalloldbikeinourgarage，whichIcannolongerride.Iassumeittobemybestbirthdaypresent.Manyyearsago，receivingabikeasmysixthbirthdaygiftmademeexcited.Iapproachedthebikeandbeggedmyfathertoteachmehowtorideit.Myfatherhelpedmeputmytwohandsonthehandlebarsandmyfeetonthepedals.IfocusedonlearninganditturnedoutthatIcouldcyclearoundthegardenshortlyaftermyfirsttry.Insummary，ridingabikewasnotdifficulttolearn.Ikeptridingthebikeuntilitwastoosmallforme.Itisstilloneofmymostpreciouspossessions，becauseitremindsthatwheneverIamintrouble，myfatherwillhelpme.你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在開展“感恩父母”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，向校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．父親或母親給你印象最深刻的一件事；2．自己的感想和從中得到的啟示。參考范文ThepersonIrespectmostismymother，whomIamgratefultoforallthatshehasdoneforme.IstillwellrememberthedaywhenIfailedinanexaminmiddleschool.IwassosadandworriedthatIthoughtIhadnoonetoturntoforhelp.ThenMumbroughtmeacupofhotmilktocalmmedownandthentalkedwithmepatiently.Shetoldmenottocaretoomuchaboutgradesbuttoseethesignificanceofexperiences.Sheletmeknowthateverycoinhastwo