讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-環(huán)湖賽講評(píng) 課件 高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

續(xù)寫(xiě)之環(huán)湖賽跑續(xù)寫(xiě)中的學(xué)、思、辨、達(dá)讀原文，學(xué)內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言01PART011.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors（輔導(dǎo)員）andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice.2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!”5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled.6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.”7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill.10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.Paragraph1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.____________________________________________Paragraph2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline._____________________________________________A.學(xué)內(nèi)容(Getthemainidea)WhenplacetimepeopleeventFred(I),Barry(counselor),Bill(bestfriend)thetwo-mileracearoundthelakeatcampBarryaskedmetoparticipateinthetwo-mileracearoundthelakewithBill.Theracebeganbutunfortunately,wewerebehindandBilltrippedoveratreeroot..B.學(xué)語(yǔ)言(learnthelanguage)1.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors(輔導(dǎo)員)andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice.2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”ablueribbon優(yōu)秀wintheday獲勝tensev.(limbs)becometightandstiff緊繃定語(yǔ)從句3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!”5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled.6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.”7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”givesbapush推了某人一把thestartingline起跑線pleadv.乞求throwone’sheadback身體向前傾theguncracked.槍響了staycloseonone’sheels跟緊某人的腳步非謂語(yǔ)B.學(xué)語(yǔ)言(learnthelanguage)B.學(xué)語(yǔ)言(learnthelanguage)9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill.10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.woodedtrailtrailcoveredwithtrees樹(shù)木繁茂的小路tripover(trippedtripped)絆倒讀原文、首句、畫(huà)線詞，思情節(jié)和情感02PART02beginningclimaxending1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______A.Billgotupandrestarted.B.Icrossedthefinishline.C.BarryaskedmetojointherunnersandfollowBill.D.TheracestartedbutBilltrippedover.E.Atwo-mileracearoundthelakewastobeheld.F.Ourcampneededafourthrunner.6.______EFCDABBeforethegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________unconfident

Notme;toolittleto...tooskinnyto...;noone’sfirstchoice;hid;tensed;trembledDuringthegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________tiredstayedcloseonBill’sheels;keptmyeyesonBill;passed;tiring;widening;Afterthegame:Ifelt_______________clues_______________??讀情節(jié)、情感變化，

辨主題、續(xù)文方向03PART03How?BeforethegameDuringthegameAfterthegameunconfidenttiredconfidentthemelovefriendshipchangeofmyattitudefiercecompetition構(gòu)思語(yǔ)言，傳情達(dá)意04PART04Para.1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.

Para.2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline.Howwashiscondition?HowdidIfeelatthesightofBill’spersistence?WhatdidIdo?Bill帶傷跑步--我受到激勵(lì)--我?jiàn)^起直追WhatdidIdoandhowdidIfeelafterreachingthefinishline?WhatdidBarryandBillsay?WhatdidIthinkoftheexperience?

（我)到達(dá)--(別人)祝賀--(我)感悟比賽中受激勵(lì)l來(lái)自比爾的感動(dòng)1.一看到比爾跌跌撞撞地前行著，膝蓋仍在流血，我無(wú)比動(dòng)容。

（on+doing一...就...）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.

盡管我能從他極其蒼白的臉看出巨大的疼痛，Bill還是沒(méi)有停下來(lái)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________3.正是他鋼鐵般的堅(jiān)持和堅(jiān)定的決心給了我額外的能量。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句)OnseeingBillstumbleforwardwithhiskneesstillbleeding,Iwasdeeplymoved.Itwashisironpersistenceandresolutedeterminationthatgavemeanextraburstofenergy.

DespitethehugepainIcouldtellfromhisextremelypaleface,Billdidn’tstop.比賽中受激勵(lì)l來(lái)自巴里的提醒、激勵(lì)

我突然想起巴里的話。

ThenBarry’swords______________________.(閃過(guò)我腦袋)

_______________________.(在我腦袋回響)flashedthroughtmyhead.

echoedinmyhead.?

加速1.快速跑v._________________比賽中堅(jiān)持和努力raceeg.Iraced

forward.快速移動(dòng)eg.Irushedforward.

迅速移動(dòng)rushdarteg.Idartedtowardsthefinishline.飛奔zoomeg.Izoomed

passedBill.

快速移動(dòng)whizeg.BarrycheeredasI

whizzed

by.

嗖嗖地快

速移動(dòng)?

加速1.快速跑v._________________

比賽中堅(jiān)持和努力eg.Ichargedoff,headingstraightforthefinishline.猛沖eg.Izipped

across

thewoodedtrail.

呼嘯而過(guò)zipsprintshootchargeeg.Isprinted

forthefinishingline.沖刺Itookadeepbreathandshot

forward.沖?

加速2.加速____________(vt)____________(短語(yǔ))

3.我全速往前沖。

Idashedforward___________________.

4.我以驚人的速度向終點(diǎn)沖去。Ichargedtowardsthefinishline________________.5.我以閃電般的速度向終點(diǎn)沖去。(比喻)Idartedtowardthefinishline___________________.

I...________________(像箭般)

I..._________________________(像正在加速的火車般)6.Iranasfastasmylegscouldcarryme.__________________________________比賽中堅(jiān)持和努力acceleratespeedup/pickupspeedattop/fullspeedatanamazingspeedinlightningspeed

likeanarrow

likeaspeedingtrain

我飛快地跑著。比賽中堅(jiān)持和努力?

堅(jiān)持與努力1.咬緊牙關(guān)___________________(短語(yǔ))2.拼盡全力___________________(短語(yǔ))3.鼓起勇氣___________________(短語(yǔ))4.不遺余力做__________________(短語(yǔ))5.Mythroatwasdry,chestwasburning,andIwas

____________

(喘氣)butIdidn'tstop.6.Tough__________________(氣喘吁吁),Ipushedon.(非謂語(yǔ))7.Thelastfewmileswasablur.But____________(倒裝)

最后幾公里我感覺(jué)一片模糊，但我一直跑著。8.我深吸一口氣，大喊一聲，往前沖去。(三連動(dòng))I______________,_____________and_______________.puffingandpantingworkupmycourage/summonupmycourage/pluckupmycourage/musterupmycourage/gather...withallone’smightgritone’steeth(-tt)sparenoefforttodosthonIrangaspingforbreathtookadeepbreathletoutashoutsprintedforward9.環(huán)境+身體的阻力也沒(méi)使我放棄Thescorchingsun(炙熱的太陽(yáng))_________myface,andbeadsofsweats__________myvision,Iwasnearly_______________,yetIploughedon.ploughon:tocontinuedoingsththatisdifficultorboring.堅(jiān)持做某事；苦撐bakingblurredsuffocated比賽中堅(jiān)持和努力比賽后的如釋重負(fù)1.我如釋重負(fù)地舒了一口氣。

_______________________________________

Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverme.welledupinsideme._______________________________________

（無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)）

Iletoutadeepsigh./Iheavedasighofrelief./Ifeltrelievedandsighed.heave:tomakeasoundslowly緩慢發(fā)出(聲音)比賽后的喜悅鼓掌v.__________n.__________拍肩膀_____________________(短語(yǔ))Thewholeteamwas_____________(非常高興),especiallyBill.Thewholeplace__________________.(爆發(fā)出掌聲和歡呼聲)Thefield

_____________________________.(爆發(fā)出難以置信的歡呼)ThencameBill,whoslightlyquivered____________(高興地),tookunsteadystepsforwardand______________________(熱情地?fù)肀?wildwithjoyburstoutclappingandcheeringexplodedwith

yellsofdisbeliefinexcitementhuggedmewarmly/gavemeawarmhugpatone’sshoulder(-tt)clap(-pp)/applaudapplause(U)比賽后內(nèi)心反思我從沒(méi)有想到我還能作為賽跑運(yùn)動(dòng)員完成全程。（倒裝句）____________________________________________________________————————————————————————要不是比爾我不可能完成兩公里的繞湖賽并且找到我的勇氣的。(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________突然意識(shí)到_________________________________thatthereisalwaysstrengthandconfidenceinsideus,andaslongaswepersevere,maintainhopeandpushforward,wecanfinallyreachthem.

NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIeverexpect

myselftocompletethewholeraceasarunner.Hadn’titbeenforBill/ButforBill,Iwouldn’thavemadet