微寫作課件高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

延遲符英語寫作專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練延遲符審題三定：定時(shí)態(tài)、定人稱、定要點(diǎn)反思：不注重句子的積累，不讀文章，所以心中無所思。

卷面臟污。

三天不練手生，一些同學(xué)在退步。延遲符

為了提高學(xué)生美化校園的意識(shí)，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生熱愛勞動(dòng)(labor)，上周五下午我校開展了主題為“BeautifulCampusStartsfromme”

的活動(dòng)。

全校學(xué)生都積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。一些學(xué)生打掃體育館，一些整理圖書管的書，另一些清理垃圾。我們的校園看起來更美了。

這次活動(dòng)讓我們理解了勞動(dòng)的意義，我們要更珍愛我們的校園環(huán)境。Toraise___________________,lastFridayafternoonourschoolheldanactivitynamed“BeautifulCampusStartsfromme”.或者Toraise___________________,anactivitynamed“BeautifulCampusStartsfromme”washeldbyourschoollastFridayafternoon.Somestudents…,some…others….Thisactivitymadeus__________________.We______________________.延遲符

為了提高學(xué)生美化校園的意識(shí)，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生熱愛勞動(dòng)(labor)，上周五下午我校開展了主題為“BeautifulCampusStartsfromme”

的活動(dòng)。

全校學(xué)生都積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。一些學(xué)生打掃體育館，一些整理圖書管的書，另一些清理垃圾。我們的校園看起來更美了。

這次活動(dòng)讓我們理解了勞動(dòng)的意義，我們要更珍愛我們的校園環(huán)境。Toraisestudents’awarenessofbeautifyingthecampusandencouragingtheirloveforlabor,lastFridayafternoonourschoolheldanactivitynamed“BeautifulCampusStartsfromme”.請(qǐng)仿寫：

為了提升學(xué)生的環(huán)保意識(shí)，上周六上午我校舉辦了主題為“Humanandnature”

的演講比賽。延遲符為了提升學(xué)生的環(huán)保意識(shí)，上周我校舉辦了主題為“Humanandnature”

的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.參加人員，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)；2.獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)設(shè)置；3.活動(dòng)意義。參考詞匯：頒發(fā)award,和諧相處liveinharmonywith注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。問題：1.時(shí)態(tài)用錯(cuò)2.a5kmcross-countryraceabasketballmatchaspeechcompetition/contest3.受學(xué)校影響，頒獎(jiǎng)時(shí)間和舉辦時(shí)間分開DearTom,董富豪I’mreallyanxioustohearthatyouareinterestedinTiktok.It’sratherbadforyourbodyandhealth.Nowletmetellyouhowtosolveit.Tiktokhasabadinfluenceonyourstudysoyoushouldputyoursmartphoneaway.InthiswayyoucanhavelessemotiononTiktok.Iadviseyoutojoininsomeactivitiesafterschool.Youcanbuildupyourconfidence.Don’talwaysstayathomewatchingshortvedios.Themoreyoudothis,theworseyourbodyis.Ihopetheadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua反思：上課困，沒聽到；課后不復(fù)習(xí)，記不住。天天上課困背后一定有原因。1.Somestudentsthinklaboureducationwillbe__________(benefit)totheirhealth.2.Theremotedesertareais________(access)onlybyhelicopter.3.IsticktotextmessagingforWeChat’sgreat__________(convenient).beneficialaccessibleconvenienceMusicnotonlymakesusfullofenergybutalsomakesushappy.任德裕Ihaveapreferenceforpopmusicbecauseitcanrelievemypressure.董富豪

Musiccanbringusenergyandhappiness.It'salsogoodforourhealth.MusiciswithmeeverydaysoIthinkwithoutmusic,thereisnofuninlife.Differentpeoplelikedifferentkindsofmusic.Forexample,Ilikecountrymusic.Listeningtoit,Icangetrelaxed.Ifthereisnomusicintheworld,ourlifewon'tbesointeresting.Musicmakesourdailylifewonderful.Let'senjoymusicinourfreetime.

李曉雪

Ifwedon'thavemusic,lifewillhavelessandlesspleasure.李浩冉Myfavouritemusiciscountrymusic.Itletsmefeelhappyandpeaceful.

李曉慶

Nowadays,musicplaysasignificantroleinpeople’sdevelopmentandlife.Itcanmakepeoplealiveandjoyfulwhenwelistentoit.Folkmusicismyfavourite.Ilistentoiteverynightbecauseitcanmakemequiet.Finally,Iwanttosayourlifewon’thavefunwithoutmusic.

張?zhí)煊?/p>

Ishoutedloudly.Ishoutedforhelploudly.他們熱情地邀請(qǐng)我。他們熱情地邀請(qǐng)我去他們家。媽媽激動(dòng)地抱住雙胞胎。媽媽激動(dòng)地把雙胞胎抱在懷中。

續(xù)寫審題：人物，事件，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)為主，雙引號(hào)中可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來時(shí)等其他時(shí)態(tài)情節(jié)線：等待---請(qǐng)求---獲救---感謝讀懂原文很重要。只要合情合理都可以，所以要敢想敢寫。但是要做減法。ThenIheardtherewasachildlaughingnearby.我大聲呼救，那孩子被吸引過來，他詢問我發(fā)生了什么事。我告訴他我被困在了房頂下不去，請(qǐng)求他去尋求幫助，如果不能可以去告訴住在街角的那對(duì)老夫妻

。Theboywenttoaskforhelp.不久之后，那對(duì)老夫妻來到我家，并且詢問了我的情況。他們設(shè)法搬來了梯子，我慢慢爬下來?？墒俏乙廊粺o法打開門，他們熱情地邀請(qǐng)我到他們家做客。我向他們表達(dá)了真誠的感謝。從那時(shí)起，我真正理解了“遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰”?？吹揭恍┩瑢W(xué)的點(diǎn)滴進(jìn)步我很欣慰。學(xué)習(xí)如爬山，是一個(gè)緩慢的過程，所以衡水中學(xué)每年都組織學(xué)生爬泰山，旅途很累，但是“會(huì)當(dāng)凌絕頂，一覽縱山小”的感覺真的很好。學(xué)習(xí)就是補(bǔ)差補(bǔ)缺，雖然暫時(shí)分值不高，還有很多錯(cuò)處，只要我們敢于寫并且認(rèn)真訂正，相信會(huì)越來越好的，畢竟愛因斯坦的小板凳做得也不是太好！Istoodupatoncetofindthesourceofthesound.Ifoundachildriding.

劉玄燁I(lǐng)immediatelystoodupandshoutedaloudforhelp.…Istepbystepclimbeddownalongthisladder.路富強(qiáng)Theboywasattractedandaskedwhathadhappened.…Theoldcoupleleanedtheladderagainstthewall.謝文強(qiáng)IrepliedIwasstuckontheroofandIcouldn’tgetdown.柳聽強(qiáng)Irequiredhimtoturntoanoldcouplewholivedatthecorner().張燕潔IwasinreliefandwhenIstoodontheground.張穩(wěn)杰Isincerelythankedthem.齊開辰Iwasreallythankfultothemforhelpingme.李馨怡Iexpressedmysinceregratitudetothem.牛浩宇I(lǐng)twasluckyformetobetheirneighbor.李志麗

…Istoodupatonceandshoutedtohim.Heheardmyvoiceandlookedatme.Iexplained,“Iamstuckontheroof.Couldyouhelpmetotelltheoldcouplewholivesinthehouseatthecorner?”Henodded,saying“Ofcourse”andranaway.…Afterawhile,hecamebackwiththeoldcoupleandcarriedaladder.ThentheyputtheladderagainstthewallandhelditwiththeirhandstightlysothatIcouldgetdownstepbystep.FinallyIstoodonthegroundagain.Ihuggedthemexcitedlyandthankedthemsincerely.Fromthenon,Itrulyrealized“Afar-awayrelativeisnotashelpfulasanearbyneighbor.”

張?zhí)煊?/p>

IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture,sodon'tmissthisgoodopportunitytoexperienceit.李曉雪、王佳欣I'msohappytohearthatyouaredyingtojoinintheactivitiesontheChineseCultureDay.董富豪Herearesometipsthatcanhelpyou.Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina,whichhasahistoryofmorethan1500years.李浩冉ItisgoodwishesoftheChineseandasymbolofhappiness.李曉雪Paper-cuttingisnotonlybeautifulbutalsocanimproveyourhands-onability.李昊陽

calligraphy/handwriting,porcelain/chinaDearTerry,I'mgladtohearthatyouareinterestedintheChineseCultureDay.Butyoudon'tknowwhichtochoose.Nowletmehelpyou.Istronglysuggestyoujoininthepaper-cuttingactivity.Paper-cuttinghasalonghistory.Inthehandsofartists,apieceofredorcoloredpapercanbeturnedintovariousshapes,likebirds,flowersandsoon.ThebeautifulworksareoftenusedtodecorateourhousesontraditionalChinesefestivals.IhopeyoucanhaveadeeperunderstandingofthepreciousChineseculturalheritageandhaveagoodtime.Yours,LiHua

于淑雅

Inmyopinion,paper-cuttingistrulyworthparticipatingin.

Goodmorning,everyone!IamLiHua.

Ifeelgreatlyhonouredtodelivera

speechhere,thetopicofwhichis“MusicandLife”.

Twoyearsago,Ididn'tdowellintheAcademicTestfortheJuniorHigh

SchoolStudents,forwhichIfeltrather

depressedandevenlostconfidenceinmyself.Thosedays,Ilistenedtosome

ofmyfavouritesongs,whichbrought

greathappinesstomeandmademestrongerinmind.SincethenImadeup

mymindtostudyharder.Musicplaysanimportantpartinourlife.Notonlycanithelpusfeelrelaxed,butitcanalsomakeusmoredetermined.Haveyoueverheardapieceofmusicandrememberanimportanttimeinyourlife?

That’sall!Thankyou.Myschoolclubsarecolorfulandinteresting,suchasdancingclub,singingclub,chessclubandsoon.張鈺IstronglysuggestyoujointheEnglishclub.LearningEnglishisnotonlyuseful,butalsobroadensyourhorizons.韋樂萍suchas永遠(yuǎn)小寫，其后跟名詞或Ving。joinintakepartinparticipateinjoin

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let'sRideBicycles”的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2.騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。參考詞匯：低碳生活low-carbonlife;節(jié)能energysaving美食美景不可辜負(fù)我想去遠(yuǎn)方，可遠(yuǎn)方太遠(yuǎn)我想伏地生活，但心有不安。我在迷霧中穿行，我不知道我會(huì)成為什么人，但我知道我不能成為什么人。星火英語每天限時(shí)練3篇，做完對(duì)答案查詞積累It’sscheduledtostartat3pmandendat5pmnextSundayinourschool.

喬瑩瑩TheshowincludesChinesetraditionalpaper-cut,potteryanddrawingmadebyteachersandstudents.馬淑珍IammorethandelightedtosincerelyinviteyoutoattendtheTraditionalCultureArtShowheldbyourschool.Iwillsharewithyouthedetailsasfollows.Firstly,theactivity,intendedtolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takesplaceat3:00pmonnextSunday.Onthatday,wewillshowstudentsandteachersexhibitsincludingpaper-cut,drawingandpottery.李雨晴DearPeter,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutotheartexhibitionthatwillbeheldat3pmnextSunday,intheGreatHallofourschool.Theexhibitionincludesavarietyofartforms,suchastraditionalChinesepaper-cutandpotteryworks,aswellasexcellenthandwritingworksandpaintings.Theseitemsareallcreatedbythestudentsandteachersofourschool.Theyhavebeenchosenfromhundredsofartpieces.Iknowyou’reinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture,sodon’tmissthisgoodopportunity.Youcanalsodiscusstheworkswiththeircreators.Ibelievethatnotonlycanyouwatchawonderfulartexhibition,butyoucanenjoyandfeeltherealChinesetraditionalculture.LookingforwardtoseeingyounextSunday!Yours,LiHua1.Themeetinghurriedfinishedwithoutasingleagreement_____(reach).2.Withmorepeople______(take)partinthevoting,theresultwillbemoreobjectiveandreliable.3.____excitesmeisthatmydaughteriswillingtotakeexercisethreetimeseveryweek.4.Hehasmade___clearthattheconferencewillnotbepostponed.

I’mmorethandelightedtosincerelyinviteyoutotakepartintheopeningceremony.Iwillsharewithyouthedetailsasfollows.Theactivityisscheduledtostartat8:00amonApril22nd.Uponenteringtheplayground,youwillbeattractedbythepaintingsshownaroundandballoonsofvariouscolors,whichisafeastofsight.(周翔)Notonlywillalltheteachersandstudentsattendtheceremony,butafewsingerswillperformtheirpreparedprograms.(莊玉飛）Sodon’tmissthisgoodopportunity.Youwillsurelyhaveagoodtime.

延遲符

很高興誠摯地邀請(qǐng)你參加這次開幕式，細(xì)節(jié)如下。

活動(dòng)按計(jì)劃定于4月22日上午8點(diǎn)開始。一進(jìn)入操場，你就會(huì)被周圍展覽的畫作和各種顏色的氣球所吸引。除了全校師生出席這次開幕式，還會(huì)有數(shù)名歌手表演節(jié)目，因此不要錯(cuò)過這次機(jī)會(huì)，你一定會(huì)玩的開心的。延遲符1.他在課堂上表現(xiàn)得如此好以至于老師表揚(yáng)了他。2.她問那位女士的名字和地址以便于能報(bào)答她。3.Wereyoutogiveapresentationwithnofacialexpressionandnobodylanguage,whatdoyouthinkthereactionofyouraudiencewouldbe?4.Theguestspresentatthemeetingwereallscientists.5.Theauthorpresentssomefactsaboutfoodsafetyinthearticle.6.OurpresentEnglishteacherisstrict.7.Atpresent,thesituationbetweenthetwocountriesistense.8.Thelittlegirlreceivedmanypresentsatherbirthdayparty.

2022年全國乙卷

學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondthe

Classroom為題的討論。請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)狀況描述：2.簡單評(píng)論;

3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。05延遲符現(xiàn)在，隨著電腦和智能手機(jī)的流行，很多學(xué)生選擇在課外以不同的方式學(xué)習(xí)英語。正如表格所示，……。

在我看來，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)最有利的是閱讀英語書籍，因?yàn)橐恍W(xué)生缺乏自律（self-discipline），他們很容易對(duì)游戲或短視頻上癮……。延遲符

Nowadays,withthepopularityofcomputersandsmartphones,agreatmanystudentschoosetostudyEnglishindifferentwaysbeyondtheclassroom.

喬瑩瑩RatherthanwatchEnglishmovies,65%ofthestudentsprefertolistentoEnglishsongs.任云迪ThepercentageofstudentswhochoosetolistentoEnglishsongsandwatchEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.李雨晴Inmyview,whatbenefitsstudymostisreadingEnglishbooks.韓慧鑫Someofthemareeasilyaddictedtogamesandshortvideosbecauseoflackofself-discipline.張明慧Thereasonwhyanumberofstudentslackself-disciplineisthattheyareeasytobeaddictedtocomputergamesandshortvideos.杜靈第二節(jié)(滿分25分)67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________解析：本文以賽跑為線索展開。作者是一名特殊教育教師，在大型越野賽跑那天，發(fā)現(xiàn)患有大腦疾病的大衛(wèi)獨(dú)自站在一旁。作者問其原因，他說準(zhǔn)備放棄比賽。從教練口中得知，因?yàn)閾?dān)心同學(xué)們會(huì)嘲笑大衛(wèi)，所以教練想讓大衛(wèi)自己去決定是否參加賽跑。作者讓大衛(wèi)追尋自己的內(nèi)心，不理會(huì)別人的看法，大衛(wèi)最終參賽，盡管遇到困難，他戰(zhàn)勝了自己，這已經(jīng)無關(guān)名次，而是他的勇敢和堅(jiān)定讓這一切成為可能。1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我們挨著坐著，但大衛(wèi)不愿看我一眼。”和第二段首句內(nèi)容”我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者鼓勵(lì)大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)完成比賽，大衛(wèi)經(jīng)過強(qiáng)烈的心理斗爭，最終決定參加比賽。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我看著大衛(wèi)和其他選手一起走到起跑線上?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫大衛(wèi)開始參賽，雖然中途遇到困難，仍然堅(jiān)持到最后，完成比賽。2.續(xù)寫線索：鼓勵(lì)大衛(wèi)——心理變化——決定參賽——克服困難——加油助威——完成比賽延遲符Para.1我主動(dòng)和David打招呼，并且問“你為什么不參加比賽呢？”他說“我很想?yún)⒓拥?，但是我怕被嘲笑?！蔽夜膭?lì)他，他決定參加。Para.2發(fā)令槍一響(thestartinggunsounded)，所有的孩子都跑出去了。雖然落后了，但是David堅(jiān)持奔跑。抵達(dá)終點(diǎn)線時(shí)，現(xiàn)場的人為他歡呼，我也為他感到驕傲。他開懷的笑容再次出現(xiàn)了。問題：1.時(shí)態(tài)（雙引號(hào)中的時(shí)態(tài)？全文的時(shí)態(tài)？）2.發(fā)令槍一響(thestartinggunsounded)，所有的孩子都跑出去了。此句幾對(duì)主謂關(guān)系？有無連詞？3.beafraidtodo和beafraidof區(qū)別4.細(xì)節(jié)描寫不是聊天，應(yīng)該關(guān)注肢體語言?！伴e言碎語”太多，導(dǎo)致篇幅過長，考試時(shí)間有限、答題卡空間有限。延遲符

“Youshouldbelieveinyourselfandyouwillmakeit!”Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedthathehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.…Slowashewas,hestillinsistedonrunning.徐淑慧Hewhispered“Ireallywanttoparticipate…”唐晨雨Hedidallhecantoruntotheend,evenifhewasthelast.任云迪Themomentthestartinggunsounded,allkidsranforward.韓慧鑫Hearingmywordshiseyeslitupandhedecidedtorun.…Onhisarrivalatthefinishingline,everyonecheeredloudlyforhim.馬淑珍延遲符

…Ididn’tsayanythingatfirstandjustpattedhimontheshoulder.Iknewhewaskindofsensitiveduetohisillness.Hewasafraidofthegazefromtheotherchildrenandalwaysworriedaboutbeinglaughedat.Wejustsattheresilentlyandpeacefully.Realizinghisstateisgood,Isaidtohim,“Youareabraveboy.Ibelievenothingcandefeatyou.”Hearingthis,hisfacelitupandhedecidedtoattendtheevent.…Iwavedtohimandsaid,“Comeon,mybraveboy.”Henoddedwithdetermination.Iknewmyencouragementworked.Someminuteslater,thematchbegan.Iwaswatchinghimallthetime.Hegraduallyfellbehindtheothers,sweatyandtired,buthisdeterminedexpressionmademeknowhewouldn’tgiveup.Somechildrenhadreachedthefinishingline.However,Davidkeptrunningevenifhewasthelastone.Audiencepresentallcheeredforhim.Eventually,hemadeit.Wewereproudofhim.延遲符

…整個(gè)教室寂靜無聲。Birkway先生溫和地說“好吧，一切由你決定”轉(zhuǎn)身時(shí)又補(bǔ)充說“無論何時(shí)你需要一個(gè)聽眾，我都愿意?！盡ary感激地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭。毫無疑問，我們被老師對(duì)學(xué)生的尊重打動(dòng)了?！冉箲]又難過，我向

Birkway先生解釋我是一個(gè)新生，不知道日記的事。讓我驚訝的是，他微笑著說“沒關(guān)系，日記就是記錄你的感受和經(jīng)歷的。期待以后見到你的作品?！笨紤]到我的情況，他建議我做一個(gè)簡短的自我介紹

并且歡迎我的加入。我是多么幸運(yùn)呀能成為他的學(xué)生。延遲符

這次音樂會(huì)形式新穎獨(dú)特，極具創(chuàng)造力和美感。音樂會(huì)中學(xué)生們唱著動(dòng)聽的流行歌曲，展示著精心編排的舞蹈。還有不少蘊(yùn)含著中國傳統(tǒng)文化的表演使我非常自豪。（除此之外，它還有一些中國傳統(tǒng)戲曲的表演，這讓我感到驚喜。孫曉笛）各種音樂形式的展示增強(qiáng)了我對(duì)音樂的熱情。

我希望明年能再次看到這種表演。(這次音樂會(huì)加強(qiáng)了兩校之間的交流，有助于我們建立深厚的友誼。我建議大家積極參與到這樣的活動(dòng)中來。任云迪)張雅婷延遲符

Ifeltasenseofpridearisingspontaneouslywhenseeingsuchascene.李夢君

Thisconcertwaspresentedinauniqueandnovelform,whichwasfullofasenseofbeautyandcreativity.Performerssangtunefulpopsongsandshoweddancesdesignedbythemselves.Moreover,whatamazedmewasthatthisactivitycontainedsomeshowsaboutChinesetraditionalplays.Displayofvariousmusicformsmademestrengthenpassionformusic.Thisonlineconcertnotonlyincreasestheconnectionbetweentwoschoolsbutalsobuildsupdeepfriendship.Isuggesteveryone（should）participateinsuchactivitiesandthatthisformwillbecontinued.杜靈

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I’mgladthatyou’vewonfirstprizeattheNewYeargalaheldbyourschool.Congratulations!Yourperformanceatthegalaisindeedagreatsuccess.Alltheteachersandstudentswereamazedbyyourbeautifulvoiceandemotionalsinging.Manyrosetoapplaudyouthemomentyoufinishedyoursong,meincluded.Throughyourperformance,IfeltthebeautyofAmericancountrymusicandgotclosertoAmericanculturetosomedegree.Youmusthaveputalotofeffortintoperfectingyourperformance.Thankyouforgivingusawonderfulandmemorableexperience.Isincerelyhopeyoucanbringusmoresurprisesinthefuture.

根據(jù)六要素和自己的想象，借助文本資源，創(chuàng)設(shè)續(xù)寫兩段故事的情節(jié)，創(chuàng)設(shè)畫面要有動(dòng)作、情緒、心理、環(huán)境等描寫。Paragraph1：她過去也逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)。[故事發(fā)展]轉(zhuǎn)變契機(jī)→創(chuàng)設(shè)自己的人生經(jīng)歷→言語鼓勵(lì)。Paragraph2：三、借助文本資源，創(chuàng)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)延遲符

……我難以置信“你這么完美，怎么會(huì)也逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)，你就像電影中的主角一樣?！彼龂@息著說：“正是因?yàn)槲冶葎e人更優(yōu)秀，所以有太多的人關(guān)注我，讓我比普通人更有壓力?！蔽揖o緊握住她的手。又見她笑著說：“后來我看到小婦人這本書，深受觸動(dòng)。書中的四姐妹也面臨種種困擾，卻用于面對(duì)，保持真我。勇敢些，你也可以?！薄彝ㄟ^運(yùn)動(dòng)釋放自身壓力，積極參與到學(xué)校舉辦的活動(dòng)中并且和同學(xué)交流。慢慢地，我的成績也開始提升，一切都向好的方向發(fā)展。那個(gè)外向友好的女孩又回來了。如果沒有Sarah，我不會(huì)成為自己人生電影的主角，體會(huì)到生活的美好。1.檢查主謂，大小寫，短語定語后置。2.盡量用自己腦海中的詞匯，慎用英漢字典，網(wǎng)上翻譯。延遲符

……Incredibly,Isaid,“Youareperfectjustlikethemaincharacterinthemovies.Whydoyoualsoescapefromreality?”Shesighed,“It’sbecauseIammoreoutstandingthanothersthattoomanypeoplefocusonme,whichgetsmetoundertakemorestress.”Iheldherhandstightly.Thenshesaidwithasmile“Later,Iwasdeeplytouchedbythebook---TheLittleWomen.Fourgirlsinthebook,althoughtheymeetwithvariousdifficulties,bravelyfacethetroubleandkeeptheirpersonalities.Beingbrave,youcanmakeitaswell.”……Fromthenon,Ireleasedmystressbytakingexercise.NotonlydidIactivelyparticipateinschoolactivities,butalsoIcommunicatedwithstudents.Gradually,mygradesstartedtoimprove.Itseemdthateverythingwasgoingbetter.Thatoutgoingandfriendlygirlcameback.WithoutSarah,Iwouldn’thavebecomethestarofmyownmovieand(wouldn’thave)feltthebeautyoflife.

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模板化1.I’mmorethandelightedtoinviteyoutotakepartinsthheldbyourschool.或者ThereasonwhyI’mwritingtoyouistoinviteyoutoparticipateinsthheldbyourschool.2.Theactivity/coursewillstartat8:00amandendat10:00amonSunday.

或者Theactivity/courseisscheduledtolasttwohoursfrom8:00amto10:00amonSunday.3.Anyonewhoisinterestedcanapplytosb(forit)before…….或者Whoeverisinterestedcanapplytosb(forit)before…….4.Idohopeyoucanparticipateinthemeaningfulactivity,whichcanmakeyouexperiencethecharmofsth.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.5.Withoutsb./sth.,sb.wouldnothavedonesth.延遲符

我非常樂意邀請(qǐng)你參加我們學(xué)校舉辦的乒乓球（tabletennis）培訓(xùn)班。細(xì)節(jié)如下(Herearethedetails)。

這個(gè)培訓(xùn)班會(huì)持續(xù)一個(gè)學(xué)期。（張明慧

）課程每周一和周五下午3點(diǎn)開始5點(diǎn)結(jié)束。（徐淑慧）這個(gè)課程包括入門學(xué)習(xí)，中等生培訓(xùn)，和自由練習(xí)（孫曉笛）。總之，這個(gè)課程適合不同水平的學(xué)生，任何感興趣的人都可以在2月10之前向體育老師申請(qǐng)（鐘勤）。不要錯(cuò)過截止日期（張明慧

）。

我希望你能來并且體驗(yàn)球類運(yùn)動(dòng)的魅力。期待你的回復(fù)。Thiscourseincludesbeginnerlearning,mid-leveltrainingandfreepractice.Insummary,itissuitableforthestudentsofdifferentlevels.AnyonewhoisinterestedcanapplytoyourPEteacherforitbeforeFebruary10th.Don’tmissthedeadline.延遲符

我非常樂意邀請(qǐng)你參加我們學(xué)校舉辦的乒乓球（tabletennis）培訓(xùn)班。細(xì)節(jié)如下(Herearethedetails)。

這個(gè)培訓(xùn)班會(huì)持續(xù)一個(gè)學(xué)期。（張明慧

）課程每周一和周五下午3點(diǎn)開始5點(diǎn)結(jié)束。（徐淑慧）這個(gè)課程包括入門學(xué)習(xí)，中等生培訓(xùn)，和自由練習(xí)（孫曉笛）。總之，這個(gè)課程適合不同水平的學(xué)生，任何感興趣的人都可以在2月10之前向體育老師申請(qǐng)（鐘勤）。不要錯(cuò)過截止日期（張明慧

）。

我希望你能來并且體驗(yàn)球類運(yùn)動(dòng)的魅力。期待你的回復(fù)。Thiscourseincludesbeginnerlearning,mid-leveltrainingandfreepractice.Insummary,itissuitableforthestudentsofdifferentlevels.AnyonewhoisinterestedcanapplytoyourPEteacherforitbeforeFebruary10th.Don’tmissthedeadline.延遲符

Oneday,Bruce’smotheropenedtheirstudydoorandtoldthemtopack.AfloodofsadnessstruckBruceandAlice.Aliceevenwept.Bruceaskedhismotherthereasonformovingashewaspacking.Theirmothercomforted“Don’tbesad.Yourfatherhasfoundajobwithahighersalaryin