新高考英語二輪復習題型專練29 讀后續(xù)寫故事接續(xù)策略(原卷版)

高考英語二輪復習題型專練（新高考）29讀后續(xù)寫故事接續(xù)策略在讀后續(xù)寫中，一個好的故事開頭就好比是一堂成功的課的導入，能夠迅速抓住學生和老師們的興趣，并且愿意聽下去，跟著授課老師的思路走。一個好的故事開頭就好比是一個帶著香味十足的誘餌，誘使讀者上鉤并且饒有趣味地看完。而一個拙劣的故事開頭，定會讓讀者大倒胃口，懨懨欲睡?！皐ellbegunishalfdone！”可見，寫好一個好故事的好開頭是多么的重要。那么在時間緊迫的考場上的英語讀后續(xù)寫的過程中，如何寫出靚麗的接續(xù)開頭呢？我們可以從語法手段和寫作涉及的內(nèi)容來具體涉及故事的接續(xù)。1.開端布局思維1：副詞突顯動作等

【典例賞析】Carefully,

hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass.

Joyfully

heskippedupthestreet.

【真題再現(xiàn)】Para1：

(2016.10浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.

（時間副詞銜接+環(huán)境描寫）

2.開端布局思維2：形容詞短語表明心態(tài)【典例賞析】Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.

Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.

【真題再現(xiàn)】

(2016.10浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para1:

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Desperateandhopeless,

Jane

kneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.

（并列情緒形容詞）

(2016.10浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para2:

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingfor

assistance.

（狀態(tài)形容詞+as/though引導的倒裝句）

(2018.06浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para1:

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.

(情緒形容詞+從句)

(2018.06浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.

3.開端布局思維3：非謂語動詞的烘托【典例賞析】Looking

aroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.

Exhausted,hewasgladtheracewasfinallyover.

【真題再現(xiàn)】(2016.10浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Feelingdisappointed,

Jane

hadtostayaloneforanothernight.

（現(xiàn)在分詞+情緒形容詞）

(2016.10浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para2:

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Feelingrefreshed,

shecontinuedtowalkalongthe

stream

tofindthewayout.（現(xiàn)在分詞+狀態(tài)形容詞）4.開端布局思維4：使用從句【典例賞析】Ashewalked,hewhistled

Althoughhewasafraid,hejumpedrightin.

5.開端布局思維5：使用介詞短語【典例賞析】Attheendofthelane

hesuddenlystopped.

Atthesightofthesnake,thelittlegirlscreamedatthetopofhervoice.

6.開端布局思維6：對話或獨白【典例賞析】“Let’sseewhogetstherefirst!”

Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.

“Holdontight!”

Myfatheryelled.Wejustfinishedbuckinginasthecoasterjerkedintomotion.Thiswasmyfirstrollercoasterride.

【真題再現(xiàn)】(2017.06浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para1:

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.

"Getintothecar."

PaulshoutedatMac.

7.開端布局思維7：介紹人物身份【典例賞析】Markisastudiousboywholovesreading.HisclassmatesoftenteasehimforbeingtoohardworkingandtheycallhimMr.Smart.Oneafternoon,whilestudyingathome…

8.開端布局思維8：情緒烘托【典例賞析】ThemomentshesawhowshedidforherSciencetest,

tearsstartedwellingupinTina’seyesandfallingdownhercheeks.9.開端布局思維9：背景烘托【典例賞析】I

closedmyeyestoenjoythegentlebreezeandthesoundsoftheclashingwaves.

Gentlyopeningmyeyes,Isawmyparentstaking

arelaxingstrollalongthebeach.Thecavewasdarkandeverythingwassilent.Icouldn’tevenseemyhandinfrontofmyface.

IknewthisadventurewasgoingtobesomethingthatIwouldneverforget.【真題再現(xiàn)】(2017.11浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para2:

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.

（視覺+環(huán)境描寫+擬人）10.開端布局思維10：人物動作特寫【典例賞析】Furry

startedwagginghistailandrunningaroundincircles

whenhesawhismastertakingaleashoutfromthedrawer.Furrywasallreadyforhiseveningwalk.【真題再現(xiàn)】(2017.11浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫范文摘錄)Para1:

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

Dad

exchangedaglancewithme.Whynotcamptosatisfy

Mom?

（動作描寫+問句銜接）11.開端布局思維11：聲音效果傳情【典例賞析】BOOM,CRASH!

Thewindwashowlingoutsideofmyhouse.Wewerehavingaterriblethunderstorm.Iwasveryscared.12.開端布局思維12：設問激發(fā)思考【典例賞析】Haveyoueverbeenonaself-drivingtrip?

Letmetellyouanexcitingtripmyfamilytookthissummer.Whydoestroublealwaysfollowmearound?DoIhavea"kickme"signonmybackorsomething?fascination.

（視覺+環(huán)境描寫+擬人）

【真題再現(xiàn)】【2020年7月·浙江卷】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Onefall，mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”-thetownofChurchillinManitoba，Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimals-shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear，Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes，thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner，ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed，andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp，whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified，ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear，hitpotshard，andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway，butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇)，Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes，butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand，throughthefence，sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫)，thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp._____________________________Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._______________________________________【參考范文】【寫作思路】本文主要講述了人與熊對抗，之后成功脫險的故事。主人公的感情線變化為：興奮渴望→驚恐→放松。劇情線以主人公如何與北極熊周旋并成功擺脫它展開。由第一段的段首提示句可知：幾分鐘后，熊又回到營地。接下來可通過場景渲染，描寫當時令人顫栗驚恐的畫面，例如“Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.”這不僅合理地描寫了熊的反應，也描繪出讓人戰(zhàn)栗的場景。由第二段的段首提示句可知：此時，直升機到了。如果想要進行續(xù)寫兩段的合理銜接，第一段的結尾可描寫成“Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,thebeartrottedforwardafewsteps.”這樣可以營造出危急的場景?！拔覀儭笨吹街鄙龣C的到來，感到絕處逢生的喜悅，可以以人物心理描寫作為第二段的開頭，重點描寫喜極而泣的狀態(tài)，例如“MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.”最后，結尾部分需要迅速收束，并說明成功逃脫的結局。關于畫線詞：Elli作為女主人公，是續(xù)寫內(nèi)容中應該出現(xiàn)的畫線詞，noises,pictures,fence,spray與熊有關，也在兩段續(xù)寫內(nèi)容中出現(xiàn)。最終，兩人回歸安全狀態(tài)，因此畫線詞safe也可自然而然地出現(xiàn)在續(xù)寫內(nèi)容中。由此劃分畫線詞，可迅速鎖定需使用的畫線詞范圍，輔助構思?！緟⒖挤段摹緼fewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.ThenoisesturnedElliandIpalewithhorror.Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwholefence.Heroaredrepeatedly,shatteringwhatwasleftofthesilence.Elliseizedthisopportunitytotakesomepicturesofthebear.Theanimal’snoisesechoedallaroundus.Webetrayedourfeelingsbyhuddlingtogether,shiveringwithfear.Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,hetrottedforwardafewsteps.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.Elliusedpeppersprayagaintobuyusenoughtime.Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert.Heregardeduswiththemercilessnecessityofhunger,sowethrowallthefoodwehave.Hethenturnedawayandstarteddevouring.Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder,Elliprayedlikethousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeingsafeandsound.【題型演練】1閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Twothingschangedmylife:mymotherandawhiteplasticbikebasket.Ihavethoughtlongandhardaboutitandit'strue.Iwouldbeadifferentpersonifmymomhadn'tturnedasillybicyclebasketintoalifelessonIcarrywithmetoday.Managingthefamilybudget（預算）musthavebeenaveryhardtask，butmymothermadeitlookeasy.Ifwecomplainedaboutnothavingwhatanotherkiddid,we'dhearsomethinglike,"Idon'tcarewhatso-and-sogotforhisbirthday;youarenotgettingaTVinyourroom,acarforyourbirthdayoranexpensivebirthdayparty."Wehadtoearnourpocketmoneybydoingthehousework.Icanstillrememberhowlongittooktoshine（擦亮）thelegsofourcoffeetable.Mybrotherscannodoubtrememberhoursspentcleaningthehouse.Wemadeourownbeds(nooneleftthehouseuntilthatwasdone）.Wehadtokeeptrackofourbelongings（物品），andifsomethingwaslost，itwasnotreplaced.Itwassummerand,oneday,mymotherdrovemetothebikeshoptogetatirefixed—andthereitwasinthewindow.White,shiny,plasticanddecorated（裝飾）withflowers，thebasketwinked（眨眼）atmeandIknew—Iknew—Ihadtohaveit."It'sbeautiful,"mymothersaidwhenIpointeditouttoher."Whatanicebasket."Iplayeditcoolforashortwhile.ButthenIguessIcouldn'tstanditanylonger:"Mom,pleasecanIplease,pleasegetit?I’lldoextrachoresforaslongasyousay.I'lldoanything,butIneedthatbasket.Ilovethatbasket.Please,Mom.Please?""Youknow,"shesaid，gentlyrubbingmybackwhilewebothstaredat（注視）whatIbelievedwasthecoolestthingever,"Ifyousaveupyoucouldbuythisyourself.""BythetimeImakeenoughit'llbegone!""MaybeRogerherecouldholditforyou,"shesmiledatRoger,thebikestoreOwner."Hecan'tholditforthatlong,Mom.Someoneelsewillbuyit.Please,Mom,please?""Theremightbeanotherway,"shesaid.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para.1:Andsoourpayingplanbegan._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Dayslater,aneighborhoodgirlappearedwiththeexactsamebasketfixedtohershiny,newbike.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Peter,a5-year-oldboy,showedsuchgreatinterestinseashellsthathewouldrushtopickthemupwithhis3-year-oldsister,Shirley.TheyscreamedouttheirjoyasPetercollectedhistreasureintohispockets.ForPeter,seashellslayshinningonthepeacefulbeach,waitingforhim,justlikestarstwinkling（閃爍）inthesky.Aswavestouchedthem,theyseemedtobeflowersblooming（綻放）ingentlewind.Oneday,PeterwaswanderingthroughmarketwithShirley,withsomeshellsinhispocket.SuddenlyPeterfoundhisyoungersisterwaslagging（落后）behind.Hestoppedandlookedback,findingShirleywasstandinginfrontofatoyshopandwasstaringatsomethingwithgreatinterest.Theboywentbacktoherandasked,"Whatdoyouwant?"Shirleypointedatthedoll,wearingasmileonherinnocentface.Peterheldhisyoungersister'stinyhand,walkingintotheshop.Hetiptoed（踮起腳尖）toreachforthedoll,andlikearesponsibleelderbrother,gavethepreciousdolltoShirley.Holdingtightlythedoll,thesisterwasveryveryhappy.Theshopkeeperwaswatchingeverythingandgettingamusedtoseethematured（成熟的）behaviouroftheboy.Nowtheboycametothecounterandaskedtheshopkeeper,"Howmuchdoesthisdollcost,Sir?”Theshopkeeperwasacoolman,whohadsufferedfromsomethinginhislife.Soheaskedtheboywithloveandaffection,"Well,whatcanyoupay?"Peterreachedintohisclothesformoneythatwasintendedforthesetwolittleguys'breakfast.Havingcountedthemoney,Peterputitcarefullyonthecounter,askingagain,6'Sir,isitenoughformylittlesister'sdoll?"Theamusingscenejustinfrontoftheshopkeepereventuallybroughtasmileonhisface.Shakinghisheadslightly,hereplied,"Myboy,Iamafraiditseemsnottobeenough."注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。WithhiseyesfixedonPeter'spocket,hewonderedwhatPeterwoulddo.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SeeingPeterleavinghappilywithhissisterholdingthedolltightly,anassistantinthatshopgotsurprised.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Mydaysalwaysstartedwithatwo-tofour-milerunonanearbygreenway.Forabouttwoyears,Ihadaveryfaithfulrunningpartner.Thisgiant,orangetabbycatwasprobablythegentlestcatIhadeverencountered.Hewouldseemeclimbingthehillandjoinin,runningalongsidemeforaboutaquartermileuntilhemeowedenoughtogetmetostopandpethim.Afewminuteslater,whenIattemptedtorestartmyrun,hewouldwindaroundmyanklestokeepmelonger.Althoughhewasaratherfatfellow,Ialwaysbroughthimsomecatfood.Onfair-weatherafternoons,Iwouldpickupmyfour-year-oldgranddaughterfrompre-schoolandwewouldvisitthetabbycattogether.Shewouldinsistonbringinghimanafternoontreat.Beforelong,hestartedwindingaroundherlittleanklesaswell.Oneday,whilemygranddaughterwaspouringouttheplasticbaggiefullofcatchowmixedwithleftoverchicken,shebroughtupagoodpoint.Shecriedout,“We'vegottocallthemsomething!”Mygranddaughtersteppedbackand,deepinthought,studiedthecatcarefullyasheenjoyedtheremainsofherHappyMeal.Thensheannounced,“I'vegotit!TomTom!”Alltheregularrunners,walkers,bikersandvisitorstothegreenwaysooncametoknowthebig,friendlyorangetabbyas"TomTom".Mygranddaughterlovedthecat.ShelookedforwardtoourgreenwaywalksandvisitingTomTom,somethingsimplethatthetwoofusdidtogether.Withherbirthdayapproaching,Iwantedtodosomethingextraspecial.Icooperatedwithalocalcollegeartstudentandproducedaself-publishedchildren'sbookformygranddaughteraboutourgreenwayfriend.Myonlyrealintentwastoprintacopyortwoforherbirthday,soIwaspleasantlysurprisedwhenseveralcopiesweresold!Soon,TomTombecamethemostfamouscatintown!注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。OnaFridayinJanuary,theforecastwascallingforasnowstorm.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TomTomhasbeenpartofourfamilyforthepastthreeyears.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)界和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。ThecomebackLuariesatquietlyintheemptydressingroomattheice-skatingrink(溜冰場).Shehadnotbeenskatinginanycompetitionsinceherleftkneewasbadlyinjuredinanaccidentsixmonthsago.Asshewaitedforherturntoskate,Lauriewasverynervous,withherlegstrembling.Sheknewthattodaywasaveryimportantday,inhercomeback.“IfIcanwintoday,”shethought,“IcanskateintheWorldCupnextyearandthenmaybeIcanmakeittotheOlympics.”Lauriewasjusttoldthatshehadatoughcompetitionthisyear,agirlfromConnecticutnamedJinnyJordanwhowasreallystrongineverything.“Sheistheoneyouhavetobeatthisyear.”thecoachsaid.Minuteslater,thedooropenedandLauriesawayoungwomanwhowasaboutherwonage.Theyoungwomanputsomeofherbelongingsontoachair.However,thebagfelltothefloor.LaurieglaredatJinny,“Sothisismycompetition,”thoughtLaurie.“Becauseofher,Imaylosetonight.”“Thiscostumewasmymom’sidea,”Jinnystartedtheconversation,lookingdownatherred,white,andblueskatingdress.“Ilooklikeaflag.”Lauriecouldn'tkeepfromsmiling.ShepointedtoJinny’sskatingbag.“Somestufffelloutofyourbag.”Lauriesaid.Jinnylookedattheclothingandequipmentthatlayscatteredonthefloor.Asshebegantogatherherbelongings,thedooropened.“Jinny,”calledsomeone,“You’dbettergivethetapeofyourmusictothesoundengineerrightaway.”“IthoughtIgavehimmymusictapehalfanhourago,”saidJinny.“Tellhimit’sthegreenboxwithmyinitialswritteninwhiteintheright-handcorner.”“Heclaimsyounevergaveittohim,andheisgettingangry.”“ThenIdon'tknowwhatIdidwithit,”saidJinny,hurryingout.Laurieknewthatmusicwasnearlyasimportanttotheprogramasskatingitself.Ifshelosthermusictape,shemightaswellforgetaboutskating.Lauriestoodupandwalkedtothechairtodoafewmorekneebends.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Feelingrelieved,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。My11-year-olddaughter,Elizabeth,startedtotalkaboutquittingswimming,whichbrokemyheartbecauseshelovesswimming.Sowhentheswimseasonbegan,Icutade