《課時(shí)把關(guān)練》英語選擇性必修第三冊(cè)RJUNIT 4 Part IV Writing 寫作專練含答案

UNIT4ADVERSITYANDCOURAGE第課時(shí)把關(guān)練PartIVWriting妙筆生花——讀后續(xù)寫讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。OneweekendinJuly，Janeandherhusband，Tom，haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately，onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake，JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom，“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp，”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow，Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace，sheturnedaround，hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise，shesawnothingbuttheforestand，farbeyond，asnow-cappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving，butthefarthershewalked，themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall，Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark，JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday，hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy，shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow，Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeditwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream，Janeheardahelicopter.“Isthatforme?”Unfortunately，thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater，anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse，thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemdowniftheycamebackagain.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點(diǎn)很關(guān)鍵前文概要審語篇類型：記敘文審時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)審前文大意以及要點(diǎn)第一段：露營(yíng)的路上夫妻吵架，簡(jiǎn)出走；第二段：簡(jiǎn)迷路；第三段：簡(jiǎn)自救，思念湯姆；第四段：簡(jiǎn)尋找出路；第五段：簡(jiǎn)聽到直升機(jī)的聲音。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)①續(xù)寫第一段所給首句：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.上文提到簡(jiǎn)迷路，在野外待了一夜，第二天聽到了直升機(jī)的聲音，她試圖吸引直升機(jī)的注意。根據(jù)第一段的首句提示可知，再?zèng)]有直升機(jī)飛過來，而且夜幕再次降臨。本段續(xù)寫時(shí)，要注意描寫簡(jiǎn)繼續(xù)自救的過程。例如如何度過寒冷的夜晚、簡(jiǎn)當(dāng)時(shí)的心理感受等。②續(xù)寫第二段所給首句：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.本段應(yīng)該描寫簡(jiǎn)繼續(xù)自救和最終獲救的過程。續(xù)寫時(shí)要注意前面提到的直升機(jī)以及她是如何引起直升機(jī)上人員的注意的。步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動(dòng)描述情節(jié)話題激活詞匯環(huán)境：forest，stream，rock，berry，valley，steep，cave，lake，waterfall困難：hunger，starve，thirsty，injure，broken，blood，panic，shelter，survive（survival），suffer，cold，severe活動(dòng)：walk，climb，fall，crawl，taste，attempt，struggletoone’sfeet，makeone’swayto，pickup??情緒：tired，breakdown救援：rescueteam，doctor，searchfor意志品質(zhì)：calm，courage，will評(píng)價(jià)：amazing，makeit句式翻譯1.晚上的溫度比白天更低了，簡(jiǎn)穿上了她的黃色上衣。__________________________________________________________________________________________2.她感到身心疲憊。（both...and連接兩個(gè)狀語）___________________________________________________________________________________________3.她繼續(xù)向前走，因?yàn)樗娴暮芟氡M快見到湯姆。（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）__________________________________________________________________________________________4.簡(jiǎn)沿著小溪走了大約兩個(gè)小時(shí)，覺得很累，所以她找到了一個(gè)平坦的地面來度過漫長(zhǎng)而艱難的夜晚。（so連接并列分句）___________________________________________________________________________________________5.她正沿著溪邊走。（主謂狀）___________________________________________________________________________________________6.她聽到直升機(jī)從頭頂上飛過。（主謂賓賓補(bǔ)）___________________________________________________________________________________________7.直升機(jī)發(fā)現(xiàn)了她，把她帶到了她丈夫那里。（and連接并列成分）___________________________________________________________________________________________8.他給了她曾經(jīng)收到過的最溫暖的擁抱。（定語從句）___________________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達(dá)——潤(rùn)色注重細(xì)節(jié)，句式再造升級(jí)1.將句1升級(jí)為so連接的并列句___________________________________________________________________________________________2.把句2、3升級(jí)為含although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句的復(fù)合句___________________________________________________________________________________________3.用動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語升級(jí)句4___________________________________________________________________________________________4.用bedoing...when升級(jí)句5、6___________________________________________________________________________________________5.把句7、8升級(jí)為含who引導(dǎo)的定語從句的復(fù)合句___________________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，認(rèn)真謄寫并仔細(xì)檢查Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課時(shí)把關(guān)練PartIVWriting參考答案步驟三1.Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime.Janeputonheryellowblouse.2.Shefeltexhaustedbothphysicallyandemotionally.3.ShecontinuedwalkingforwardbecauseshereallywantedtomeetTomassoonaspossible.4.Janefollowedthestreamforabouttwohoursandfelttired，soshefoundaflatgroundtospendthelongandhardnight.5.Shewaswalkingalongthestream.6.Sheheardahelicopterflyingoverhead.7.Thehelicopterfoundherandtookhertoherhusband.8.Hegaveherthewarmesthugshehadeverreceived.步驟四1.Thetemperaturegotloweratnightthaninthedaytime，soJaneputonheryellowblouse.2.Althoughshefeltexhaustedbothphysicallyandemotionally，shecontinuedwalkingforwardbecauseshereallywantedtomeetTomassoonaspossible.3.Followingthestreamforabouttwohours，Janefelttired，soshefoundaflatgroundtospendthelongandhardnight.4.Shewaswalkingalongthestreamwhensheheardahelicopterflyingoverhead.5.Thehelicopterfoundherandtookhertoher