讀后續(xù)寫+小小英雄：希爾的緊急救援+講義 高三上學(xué)期9月月考英語試題

第1頁/共10頁閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。6-year-oldQuinnHillbecameherfamily’sherowhenshetookimmediateactionduringanemergencythatsavedhermother’slifewiththehelpofherneighbor,Mrs.Smith.Jennifer,a39-year-oldsinglemother,beganthedaybysendingherchild,Hill,toschool.Havingnoideawhatwouldhappen,Jenniferwasfilledwithanxiety.Afterall,itwasthefirstdayofanewschoolyearforHill,afreshstart!OnthewaytoschoolsherepeatedlyremindedHilltosolveproblemspositivelyandfitin.Thoughworried,Jenniferhadtowavegoodbyetoherdaughter,watchinghertowardstheschoolgate.Thewholedaywaspackedwithhousework.Jennifertidiedthehouse,washedclothes,andpreparedfortheeveningmeal.Astheschoolbellrang,signalingtheendoftheday,JenniferpickedHillupfromschool.OnseeingJennifer,Hillcouldn’twaittohugher,sharingtheschoolexperiences.Chattingandlaughingaccompaniedthemalltheway.HillsinnocentlaughterwaslikeJennifer’srayofsunshine.Approachinghome,theyencounteredMrs.Smith,amostkindandthoughtfulhousewifelivingintheirneighborhoodformanyyears.Mrs.SmithofteninvitedJenniferandHilltoherhomeandsharedherhomemadedessertsandcookies.ThetwofamiliesdevelopedacloserelationshipandHilllikedtostaywithMrs.Smith,whoalwaysbrightenedherdayswithwillingnessandtimelyhelp.Afterexchanginggreetings,theywentbacktotheirownhomes.Onarrivinghome,Jennifersetouttopreparedinner.Asthesunbegantoset,thehousewasfullofapleasantsmellofcookingfood.JenniferandHillsatatthekitchentablewhenJennifersuddenlyhadachestpain.Shewassittinginachair,lookingupattheceilingandexperiencingabnormalbreathing.Shethenfelloutofthechairontoherleftside,herhandsballedintofists,andherbodywasshakingviolently.Hereyeswereopen,andHillkeptcalling“Mommy,Mommy”,butshefaintedandcouldnotrespond.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jenniferfinallywokeupandfoundherselfinthehospital.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：這篇文章講述了6歲的QuinnHill如何在緊急情況下迅速采取行動(dòng)，救了她母親Jennifer的命。Jennifer是一位39歲的單身母親，她的女兒Hill在新學(xué)年的第一天去上學(xué)，Jennifer整天忙于家務(wù)。接女兒放學(xué)后，她們遇到了鄰居Mrs.Smith，她是一個(gè)善良且樂于助人的主婦?；丶液?，Jennifer在準(zhǔn)備晚餐時(shí)突然胸痛并暈倒。Hill意識到情況嚴(yán)重，跑出去尋求幫助。文章的續(xù)寫部分描述了Hill如何尋求Mrs.Smith的幫助以及Jennifer在醫(yī)院醒來的情景。幾處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：1.伏筆：Jennifer整天忙于家務(wù)，可能暗示她身體疲勞?；貞?yīng)：Hill在Jennifer暈倒后尋求幫助，體現(xiàn)了緊急情況下的快速反應(yīng)。2.伏筆：Mrs.Smith與Jennifer和Hill關(guān)系密切，經(jīng)常邀請她們到她家。回應(yīng)：Hill在緊急情況下首先想到尋求Mrs.Smith的幫助，展現(xiàn)了鄰里之間的緊密聯(lián)系。3.伏筆：Hill被提醒要積極解決問題并適應(yīng)新環(huán)境?；貞?yīng)：Hill在母親暈倒時(shí)展現(xiàn)出的冷靜和行動(dòng)力，體現(xiàn)了她適應(yīng)能力和解決問題的能力。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（分兩段）：1.描述Hill如何迅速反應(yīng)并尋求Mrs.Smith的幫助，包括她如何清楚地解釋情況并帶領(lǐng)Mrs.Smith回家。2.描述Jennifer在醫(yī)院醒來的情景，她對發(fā)生的事情感到困惑，但感激Hill和Mrs.Smith的及時(shí)救助。主旨升華句：1.Intimesofcrisis,itisthecourageandquickthinkingofouryoungestfamilymembersthatcanmakeallthedifference.2.Thebondofcommunityisnotjustaboutsharingjoybutalsoaboutlendingahelpinghandintimesofneed.3.Achild'sinnocenceandintuitioncanbeapowerfulforceinthefaceofadversity.4.Thestrengthofaneighborhoodismeasurednotjustbythewarmthofitswelcomebutbythespeedofitsresponseinanemergency.5.Ittakesavillagetoraiseachild,andsometimes,ittakesachildtoremindusofthevillage'sstrength.三篇寫作范文：范文一：Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.Panickingbutdetermined,shedashedtoMrs.Smith'shouseandpoundedonthedoor."Mymomneedshelp!"shecried.Mrs.Smith,withouthesitation,followedHilltoJennifer'sside.Assessingthesituationquickly,shecalledforanambulanceandstayedwithJennifer,comfortingHillandwaitingformedicalhelptoarrive.Jenniferfinallywokeupandfoundherselfinthehospital.Disorientedatfirst,shegraduallyrememberedtheeventsleadinguptohercollapse.AsthedoctorsexplainedthatshehadsufferedaheartattackandthatHill'sswiftactionhadsavedherlife,Jenniferfeltasurgeofgratitude.SheheldHillclose,tearsofthankfulnessinhereyes,knowingshehadraisedabraveandresourcefuldaughter.范文二：Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.HersmalllegscarriedherasfastastheycouldtoMrs.Smith'shouse.Gaspingforbreath,shemanagedtoexplain,"Mymom...she'snotwakingup!"Mrs.Smith,acomposedwomaninemergencies,tookcharge.Shecalled911andrushedtoJennifer'sside,makingsureHillwassafeandstayingwiththemuntiltheparamedicsarrived.Jenniferfinallywokeupandfoundherselfinthehospital.Thesterilesmellandthebeepingofmonitorswereunfamiliar,butthesightofHill'sworriedfacebroughtherbacktoreality.AsshelearnedhowherdaughterandMrs.Smithhadcollaboratedtosaveher,awaveofloveandpridewashedoverher.Inthatmoment,sheknewherfamily'sbondwasunbreakable.范文三：Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.Withfeargrippingher,sheracedtoMrs.Smith,whowasjuststeppingoutofherhouse."Please,Mrs.Smith!Mymomishurt!"shepleaded.Mrs.Sm